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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 4/30/04 6:26am Subject: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX - Date Edited: 5/10/04 2:34pm (2 edits total) Edited By: red_rose_knight
	The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX April, 2004 Page I: Newsletter News: As editor of the Fan Fiction Newsletter, I'd like to extend my sincere congratulations to our newest Fan Fiction moderator, red_rose_knight. She's stepped in to fill Amidala_Skywalker's shoes, and thus far has given us absolutely no cause for complaint. Here's to a successful mod-ship! Because of the success of last month's contest, we have a new one in store for you. Just scroll down to page II and check out the April Writing Trivia for a chance to have your poetry in the newsletter! This is my last month of editing, and I'm looking for someone to take up the reins. If you're motivated, dedicated, willing to work with people here on the boards, able to leap grammatical errors in a single bound, and willing to give up much of your sleep at the end of the month, please contact me. Send a short PM with a few sentences about why you'd like to edit the newsletter, and I'd be more than happy to give you more information. As always, if you're interested in reviewing, finding stories for us to review, writing an article, conducting an interview, or if you just want to make a suggestion or comment, please PM FF_Newsletter_Editor or Xaara. Your help would be much appreciated. —The Editor Recommended Reading: Before the Saga: Invisible Enemy by Jane Jinn and Mistress_Renata Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent Comments: This story cleverly draws you in. It starts simply enough when the major players at the Jedi Chapter House are introduced. There are a few hints of trouble but, for the most part, the characters seem to be enjoying their stay. However, just as the reader begins to get comfortable, the first victims of the deadly plague inundate the medical facilities. As the Jedi struggle to find a cure, the morgue fills up with bodies from the deadly disease. But that is only the beginning. The plot thickens with startling twists and turns as the reader is drawn ever deeper into the fic. Jane and Renata use clear, straightforward language to weave an intriguing, surprising, multi-threaded story but it is their OCs that are the real stars of this fic. The authors have added a richness and depth to the characters, making them living, realistic, flawed individuals. It is also clear that the authors have done their research with plagues and medical advances but it is their realistic settings, their action sequences and their character interactions that truly make this a story a memorable read. Well done. Quote: “Have faith in yourself,” the man urged. “Let the Force flow through you and see for yourself what happens. Use your strengths.” Hearing the emphasis that he’d put on the word “see,” Kiu gave the older man a questioning look. To her surprise, he reached out for her hand with both of his and smiled down at her. “This is your destiny.” Then he let go and made a shooing motion. Obedient to age and wisdom, Kiu nodded once, then ran forward into the smoke and dust. Use your strengths, the master had said. At that moment, she could only remember one of them, and closed her eyes to pretend that this was her favourite training exercise. She could not only distinguish between the bright warmth of the other Jedi and the dim glow of the Batangans, she could also feel the Force moving around inanimate objects as well, like water flowing around boulders in a stream. Then there were the bright flashes of weaponry – once she’d identified all of that, she was ready to surrender herself to the Force and plunge into the fight. ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Very Good Comments: Strong writing, clear characterizations, and a wonderful sense of both drama and humor made this story a joy to read. The suspense throughout, as one never knows who the next victim of the "invisible enemy" will be, is gripping and convincing. The original characters in this story are excellent. They're rounded people with strengths and weaknesses, and they fit into the Star Wars universe seamlessly. They have unique personalities, speech patterns, and thoughts, and are as distinct one from the other as the canon characters we already know. All in all, an enjoyable, entertaining, exciting read. Quote: It was a simple bite. He'd had a few of his own like that from children in the Temple, and it was easy enough to call the Force to soothe the bruised flesh and close the tiny wounds in a matter of seconds. There was a touch of something that could later turn into an infection; he used the Force to incincerate it without affecting the healthy cells. Dr. Trem retrieved his hand and stared at it in amazement, turning it over and over as though expecting to see the bite mark come back again. "That's amazing! How did you do that?" "I used the Force," An-Paj explained. At the Batangan's quizzical look, he added, "I am a Jedi Healer." "And he's come to ask what you can do to help deliver Princess Rallan's baby," Hachas put in. "A man who can do this --" Dr. Trem indicated his hand -- "comes to me for help?" But he was already ushering them into Room Two. "At last!" the Princess muttered as they went in. "I thought I was going to have to deliver it right there on the floor." Deprived by Bellyup Reviewer 1: Rating: Good Comments: This is a fairly simple story of a young boy. His dream of becoming a doctor is not acceptable to his father who wants greater things for his son. Bellyup uses clear language and a straightforward style to get across the plot and flesh out the characters. The main character, Raneely, is particularly endearing, risking all to try and learn medicine, but the secondary characters are also intriguing. It could do with a bit more background. The first few posts are mostly dialog but additional postings show more description and character development. Hopefully, the author will reappear to continue the story in the near future. Quote: He turned back to Raneely and his voice was strained, as if trying to keep his emotions from getting the better of him. “Now Raneely, you know that you are going to go into politics when you grow older.” He was falsely cheerful. “Why, tomorrow you will be attending classes and you’ll be learning the ways of a politician. That is our present for you today, isn’t it Holia?” Holia gave a small nod. “Yes, you will be with all the other brilliant children of Theed and surrounding areas, and famous men will come teach you all there is to know about decrees and passing bills and—“ “But why?” “What?” Lomar stepped back involuntarily at Raneely’s unexpected interruption. “Why can’t I be a doctor?” ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Very Good Comments: This story is mostly based on dialog, at least until a few posts into the story when some description comes into play. The main characters are all OCs, and the protagonist is very realistic. He wants to be a doctor, but his father wants him to be a politician, so he has to take quite a few chances to get what he wants. This story is interesting and fun to read, so I would definitely recommend it to anyone who likes reading about OCs. Quote: “Why can’t I be a doctor?” “Raneely has a point, you know.” Samlod put in. His arms were crossed over his chest, annoyed at the money he had apparently wasted. “It’s his life not yours.” “I’ll thank you to mind your own business.” Lomar almost snarled. “You’ve done enough damage already.” “Lomar.” Holia worriedly placed a hand on her husband’s arm, and he seemed to realize what he was doing. He pulled a comb from out of his pocket and ran it through his hair, something he did to calm himself. “I-I’m…sorry, Samlod. I was being…hasty.” The Saga: Sleight of Hand by color=royalblue]kayladie97[/color] Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent Comments: Kayladie's story is an intriguing OT AU in which Mara and Leia have - sort of - switched places. Mara is a Commander in the Rebellion, close friends with Han, Chewie and Wedge, secretly in love with Luke. Leia, presumed dead, is serving as the Emperor's Hand. The language is crisp and clear, and her characterisations are right on the money. Han and Mara's spats leap off the page, and the dialogue she gives Chewbacca is very much what I would imagine those grunts and howls to be. She also manages to give well-known characters a slight shift as a result of them knowing Mara instead of Leia. In other words, they are still the characters we know and love, just slightly different. I'm not completely sure how kayladie pulled that off, but it words magnificently. The real pleasure of this story, in my opinion, is how she manages to rewrite the OT into something completely different. It's a wonderful reworking of the story, and it's like watching ESB a second time. Truly amazing work, Kayladie! Quote: Han, Mara, and Wedge walked swiftly behind the stretcher carrying their companion towards the medbay. In their distress, they never noticed the pair of eyes that watched them intently. Arica Alie, as she was known to these people, let a cold smile play at the corners of her mouth. So sentimental, these rebels. If a member of her team was stupid enough to let himself get lost in a huge blizzard, she would have left him to rot, and said good riddance to an obviously incompetent comrade. Even as this thought ran through her mind, something tingled at the back of her consciousness, a fleeting dread at the idea of Skywalker dying. But it was so quickly gone that she didn’t have time to focus on it and it was swiftly forgotten. She made her way towards the medbay, at a much slower pace than the ones she was following. She wanted to be there when Skywalker woke up. This assignment from her Master had so far proven to be quite more difficult than she had at first anticipated. Of course, this was the first time he’d wanted her to bring him a live prisoner instead of proof of an execution. Still, she wouldn’t have imagined that the task would be so frustrating, especially for someone with her skills. The Emperor wanted Skywalker alive and relatively unharmed. Why, she didn’t know, but then that was not Arica’s business. Her business was to fulfill her Master’s command. Normally, she would use her body and her looks to get to Skywalker. For some reason, though, she had felt an immediate distaste for that idea. And she had observed him with the redhead, so it might not have worked anyway. That was the real problem. The blasted redhead, that infuriating smuggler and the annoying pilot. Skywalker was always with one or more of them! She had been trying for three weeks now to get the bastard alone and had been unsuccessful thus far. She wouldn’t be surprised if one of them went to the ‘fresher with him! She had done a little discreet questioning of the other rebels and had surmised that the three had been like that ever since Skywalker had fired the shot that destroyed the Death Star. ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Excellent Comments: This was a wonderful story so far. The author took the canon that we all know and love and put her own twist to it. I will not spoil for you anything in the story, but I will tell you this is a what if story on how things may have turned out if certain things had taken place. Quote: She gasped as she felt what seemed to be a wet blanket smothering her senses, even though there was nothing actually touching her. Then she cried out in fear as she felt him inside her head. It was the worst thing she’d ever felt in her young life. It was as though she could feel his fingers clawing through her mind, searching out her every secret. Instinctively, she tried to block him, but he waved her attempts aside as though swatting away an annoying insect. After a moment that had seemed to last an eternity, he released her chin and she crumpled to the floor, strangely feeling like she needed to take a bath. That cackling laughter washed over her again and she felt tears rolling down her face. Tatooine Incident: Healing by leia_naberrie Reviewer 1: Rating: Very Good Comments: An intriguing exploration of Anakin and Padmé's time on Tatooine during AOTC. The story looks at the events that took place there from the perspective of the Lars family. The author brings them to life in a way that wasn't done in the movie, providing them with depth and complexity. The story has a gritty, realistic feel that is just wonderful. The characters, as stated above, are complex and fully three-dimensional, acting in ways that real people would if thrown into unbelievable circumstances. The family relationships are finely drawn. A remarkable story, overall. Quote: “I missed a whole day’s work today,” Owen declared suddenly, staring down at his hands. There was no escaping the mundane facts of their existence even with the reopened wound of Mother Shmi’s loss still fresh. Beru reached over and took one of his hands. Father grunted again. “You need a break, Owen,” he said firmly. “I go over the schedule every morning. You and Beru have been doing the work of four men for close to a month and we’ve barely fallen behind last year’s produce since harvest season started. That doesn’t seem natural to me. You’re doing a fine job, and don’t you forget it.” Beru gasped. Owen’s jaw dropped. Direct compliments from the taciturn Cliegg Lars were few and far between. Each one was treasured and buried in Owen’s memory like a precious stone. He could feel his face turning red and an embarrassed lump rose up in his throat. Father carefully placed his tray on his lap and propelled his chair from the table. “Father Cliegg?” asked Beru in surprise. “I’m going to my room,” he said gruffly before the hoverchair zoomed out of the room. Beru looked after him, concern written all over her face. ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Good Comments: This is a good start to a fic overall. There were some small things in the story line that seemed to rub me the wrong way. But I do love the way the author is trying to get everyone's feelings in play on different things. But at times the writer seems to make Owen a hateful person and Padmé a bit whiny. But I think given time and once the story is completed that all will work out. Quote: The two humans and the two droids making their way across the sand. An oddly mismatched quartet. Tall and short. Angular and cylindrical. Black and white. Rust and chrome. Sand and water? A few moments later, from where the Lars stood they could see the ship, sleek and glinting like some rare and exotic bird, rise up in the shimmering air as it entered the atmosphere. And then it was gone. Perhaps it was best they had left the way they did, Owen decided. A no-nonsense parting. No awkward, prolonged goodbyes. No tears. Beyond the Saga: Caught in the Rain by Trickster_Jaina_Fel Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent Comments: The author thoughtfully provides a complete list of characters which helps in this complex story. I would advise the reader to take their time and savor this work as well, because in this case complex is a good thing! While it is not listed as humorous, there are enough hilarious moments to lighten the tightly woven, dramatic plot. These moments fly up and catch the reader without warning, much like real life, and that makes them even funnier. The dialogue is witty and extremely well-paced. While it would provide an even more meaningful experience to have read the prequel to this work, it is not necessary to appreciate the story. I’ll be happily waiting for the completion of this work because I want to see how it will all work out. I assume nothing when reading this one, and I like that. The main character is Jaina Solo, and she is portrayed in all her conflicted glory. I won’t give away the plot by telling you what those conflicts are, but they are not your standard Light vs. Dark conflicts and thus their resolutions will be more complex as well. Zekk from the Young Jedi Knights books is also here, a welcome addition because he’s a character we don’t get to see enough of in either EU or fan fiction. Other characters include Han and Leia Solo, who are adroitly portrayed as the concerned parents of a daughter who has come back to them from an unimaginable place. Jaina is accompanied by Zekk, who has his own issues to deal with upon their return, not the least of which is Jaina’s family. “Don’t be a pessimist, Jaina instructed, feeling his doubt, but the quaver in her voice gave her own anxiety away. “I’ll protect you from the big bad Solo family.” This isn’t a short story, but believe me it is worth the time invested in it. Overall I would have to rate this story excellent and that is hard to admit since I don’t even know how it ends yet! Definitely check it out! ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Excellent Comments: I could sit here and write something along the lines of "the characterizations are wonderful, the plot is intriguing, the dialogue is alternately amusing and thought-provoking, and the writing is clean and fresh – go read it without delay." And although that wouldn't give you much information about the story, it would be the absolute truth. This story, one of the longest that's held my interest in a while, was truly a pleasure to read. Jaina and Zekk, for once, are portrayed as thinking humans who understand and accept their choices. Their characterizations are vivid; many of the professional versions of their characters are not nearly as complex. The original characters are believable as well. The pacing is well-done, and leaves moments of intense emotion balanced with more lighthearted moments of humor. So, I repeat, go read it without delay. Quote: The being sat up, and its red eyes blazed into the vid-screen. Devnos moved as if to put a protective arm around Sanar, but he, too, negated the instinct. Around them, a few key members of the New Empire shifted in trepidation. “Find him,” the emperor hissed, literally shaking with hatred. “Find the one who called himself Lord Onyx and bring him to me! I won’t rest until I have his head!” Sanar couldn’t watch anymore. The idea of someone actually living off of their hatred – resurrecting in a medical miracle, that could not even remotely be classed as a miracle – and revelling in it, was too much. She ran out of the viewing room and emptied her dinner into a wastebasket. She doubted she was the only one. Moments Like These by A-Windsor Reviewer 1: Rating: Excellent Comments: My overall impression is that this set of five vignettes is incredibly touching and likely to induce tears in some readers (I plead the fifth). The portrayal of family dynamics is both vibrant and realistic. This picture of a happy family is all the more touching when one considers the troubles and trials facing the Solo family in the years ahead. While not all of the vignettes show us the Solo family during a happy time, the family itself it still a happy one. The author does justice to the Solo family with the very first vignette. We get a happy glimpse into a special morning in their lives and for the first time see them interacting with each other. Each of the children is portrayed realistically and both Leia and Han are loving parents who haven’t lost their sense of humor. The author does a great job weaving together moments that are both funny and touching. They are now exploring their new toys in the living room, as quietly as three year old Jedi twins ever can be, especially when they are Solos and it is Salu San. The reader almost feels as if he or she is peeking in a window and observing the Solo clan without their knowledge. Each of the characters seems three-dimensional and while they do nothing OUT of character, we are treated to a more in-depth view of family interaction than we are normally given in the EU. The dialogue is witty and nicely paced. “They’re Skywalker-Solos; they’re genetically destined to be a handful,” I grin gently as I wrap my arms around my princess’s waist from behind. and kiss the top of her head. “Good thing they’re cute like their parents." It is in the second vignette that the author gives the reader a wonderful insight into Leia as a mother. Too often in the EU she is portrayed as an absent-minded mother at best, a neglectful one at worst. Here, the author gives us a much more sympathetic, and I believe realistic, picture. His cheeks flush brighter red and he looks down at his little toes. I know he won’t give me a straight answer, as cute as he is, and so I level a gaze at his big sister and dad, the dynamic duo of trouble. The author is also obviously familiar with the EU, which merely enriches this set of vignettes. The portrayal of all members of the family is both sympathetic and well rounded. Moments like this, when I love Han more than I ever though possible, are why Han wanted a family; he is a wonderful father. The interaction between the Solo siblings is very well done and extremely realistic. Han as a father is a revelation! The scoundrel has grown up (but not too much) and has grown into his role as a father and husband. “I know,” he continues to smirk, leaning in to capture my lips. “Aw, yuck!” our children cry in perfectly practiced unison. How do they think they got here? We also get to see that everyone notices the very special bond between Leia and her youngest son. Knowing his ultimate fate makes these moments even more poignant. The theme of Leia and Anakin is woven throughout the vignettes and provides a touching picture as young Anakin is seen at different ages, interacting with his beloved mother. I especially like the idea of Anakin and Leia just “getting each other” since it does seem to be true in real life that one parent or the other will understand a particular child more than the other parent. It is the wonderful way the relationship between Leia and Anakin is described that is perhaps the best part of these stories, although I really couldn’t find a worst point. Except perhaps that they ended, and it was so nice to see the Solo family in happier times. What I really appreciated is that all of the characters were basically themselves; no one acted out of character. But the author did a great job of making them come to life in a way that allowed the reader to see them more as people existing within a family and working within those relationships. ———— Reviewer 2: Rating: Very Good Comments: These are the Solos we know and love. This is the Smuggler and his Princess, the Twins, the Little Brat/Chosen-ish one. But the most important thing to point out about these vignettes is not that they show the Solos individually, but that they are about the Solo family. Family is a theme central to all the vignettes in the series, and this family is one I could love without any trouble at all. Even though I know that there are horrible things in the future for them, the security of their present is enough to give me hope for their continued closeness. A highly recommended story. Quote: “What about you, Uncle Luke? Can you see Jaina and Jacen’s fangs and claws? They’re monsters.” Luke, who has just entered the disaster area, puts on his very best solemn face. “Yes, I’m afraid I can see them. This is very serious…” “Unca Luke!” they scream, leaping up and scrambling over to throw themselves at his waist. Anakin fusses to finally be put down and totters over to wait his turn impatiently. “They’re Skywalker-Solos; they’re genetically destined to be a handful,” I grin gently as I wrap my arms around my princess’s waist from behind and kiss the top of her head. “Good thing they’re cute like their parents.” Classic Fan Fiction: Deconstructing Jaina by LadyMairead This month's Classic Fan Fiction recommendation is by a member of the community whose scathing wit and ear for humor has resulted in this series of vignettes about the ill-fated love lives of one Jaina Solo. The everlasting question – Jag or Kyp? – is of course explored, as is Jaina's complete inability to decide anything for herself. Laugh-out-loud funny, and a joy for a depressing day. -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 4/30/04 6:29am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Page II: Vignette Recommendation: by NarundiJedi Dear Valin by Lorax I really enjoyed this witty and cute vignette. I think it has enough detail about the Horn/Halcyon family history in it so someone who wasn't a fan of these particular characters could still enjoy it. I also liked the nature of Valin's letter to his grandfather. The voice in it is very typical of a pre-teen trying to understand the way the universe works, and I think you nailed it. His grandfather came across as mischievous, fun, and caring, which I think you probably also intended. In all, it was a heart-warming story and it made me smile. Good job! Rating: 8/10 Special Recommendation: by Rogue_of-Peace Dark Mirror by Gandalf the Grey Twenty years have passed since the battle of Endor. It was a battle in which Princess Leia Organa, the last of the Jedi knights, was slain by Emperor Luke Skywalker. It was a battle in which the Imperial fleet, led by Grand Admiral Solo, crushed the Rebel fleet. The Empire has since conquered the whole of the galaxy, and even the farthest reaches of the Unknown Regions have fallen under Imperial dominion. The Empire, needing to expand in order to remain stable, sets its sights further. They invade another reality, another dimension. One in which it was the Rebellion who won at Endor, Han Solo and Leia Organa are married, Luke Skywalker has reestablished the Jedi Order and married Mara Jade, and in which the Empire is at peace with the Republic. Now the hero’s, villains and rogues of the two galaxies face their most resourceful and dangerous enemies yet – Themselves. This is a really awesome AU. That's all I have to say about it, and this should get some spotlight for all the new readers out there. Bunnies Up for Adoption into Good Word Processors: 1. Droids are the ultimate scapegoats, messengers, and unobtrusive hunks of junk who always seem to pull our heroes out of huge messes. What might have happened without Artoo to carry Princess Leia's message? What about without Threepio to help rescue Han from Jabba? The answer…it's up to you. 2. Craftsmen (and women) have always been central to the advancement of civilization. What might the artisans in the Star Wars universe be making now? How do their crafts fit into the scheme of things? How might a jeweler think in times of rebellion, or how might a toy maker think in times of poverty? April Writing Tips: We've all been to beautiful places. Alaska in the springtime, perhaps, or maybe the Amalfi Coast in the summer. We've all seen contortionists and been fascinated by the way they move and the way they seem to defy all the rules of kinesthetics. And undoubtedly we've all tried to describe these things and found our ease with language strangely lacking. This month, Ray Terr and Questa Nanser rejoin us for a discussion of description replete with all its joys and frustrations. 1. Never use a vague word when a more specific one is appropriate "Hello," said Questa, waving at the attentive audience. "I'm delighted to see all of you out there, listening to me. In today's discussion of our description, I'm going to begin by telling you exactly how my partner Ray walks from one side of the stage to the other. "Look at him now. You see how his shoulders are bent, how he slowly places one foot in front of the other, how his arms hang loose at his sides? That's trudging. He's trudging. "Or now, how he's almost dancing on the tips of his toes, his body tense like he's about to take flight at the slightest provocation? That could be mincing, or maybe even tiptoeing. Perhaps sneaking. "Did you notice one thing, though? He's never just walking. Each of those individual words told you that he was walking, but they also included other information that's essential in order to visualize the scene." 2. Be aware of connotations "What exactly is a connotation, Ray?" "Well, that's a good question, Questa. A connotation is a meaning or set of meanings that is unofficially associated with a word. Almost all words have vague connotations in that they bring to mind certain images." "Can you give me an example?" "No problem. Here, let's take a look at this one. "Do you see that kid playing hopscotch? She's skipping, right? Sure – that's an entirely appropriate word to use in this scenario. Children skip; skipping is associated with childhood, games, and happiness. Unless your scene was meant to be funny, you probably wouldn't have Admiral Ackbar skipping along the bridge of the Home One "But what if you used the word 'prancing' instead of 'skipping?' Then the image called to mind is that of an animal, a horse in particular, without a strong influence of a trainer. Completely different from skipping." 3. Good words don't need support "I don't often praise lavishly," said Questa. "It just seems redundant to me. If I praise something, my words are just that: praise. They don't need to be qualified." "I'm unique," said Ray. "In more ways than I can count," Questa muttered. Ignoring her, Ray continued, "But I’m not entirely unique or very unique or even mostly unique. Unique means unique – you can't qualify it. If you find the word that means exactly what you want to say, then you won't have to qualify with adverbs. When you find yourself using more than one adverb per sentence, or more than two or three in a paragraph, go back and find words which specify what you're trying to say." 4. Longer is just that – longer "Ten-dollar (or eight-Euro, or 1,100-Yen) words might be expensive, but that doesn't make them specific." "Right you are, Questa. Calling a lie a 'terminological inexactitude' doesn't make it any less of a lie. And it sure is easier to read 'I told a lie' than 'I mistakenly expressed a terminological inexactitude.'" 5. Write what you see "Ray, have you ever heard an artist tell you that he just draws what he sees?" "Sure – artists paint beautiful pictures of me all the time and tell me that they couldn't possibly create a painting of such magnificence without my face to urge them in the right direction." "How much do you pay them to say that?" Questa asked, rolling her eyes. "But that's not the point. The point is that you have to know what you're describing before you begin to describe it. You want an example, you say? Okay, here we go: "Describe a 1989 Ford Taurus station wagon." "What is that, Questa?" "Good question. And a question that proves my point. Unless you're looking at a 1989 Ford Taurus station wagon, you're not going to have a clear idea of what it looks like. You're going to have difficulty describing it." "Ah. That still doesn't explain what it is." "It's a car, Ray. Primitive thing, really, that humans used to use to get around. It has wheels." "Wheels?" "Wheels." "Wow." "Yes, Ray. But anyhow, it's just as important to have a clear picture of your characters in your head before you attempt to describe them." "And that's all you need to write description that will have your readers green with envy." "Joining you from the GFFA newsroom, this is Questa Nanser." "And Ray Terr." "Thanking you for joining us on the latest edition of The Wonderful Wide World of Words." April Writing Trivia: This month – at least if you're living in the United States – is dedicated to poets and poetry. Yes, April is National Poetry Month, the time when elementary school teachers force their students to write haikus and couplets, when libraries set out anthologies of famous poets, and when the phrases "rhyme scheme," and "iambic pentameter" are on everyone's lips. You're down here for the contest, aren't you? Well, here we go: 1. Write a poem about writing. It can be up to twenty lines long, and it can be any sort of poem, any sort of theme, and any sort of idea (as long as it's appropriate for the JC.) 2. Send it to FF_Newsletter_Editor, who will look at it, read it over a few times, and send you a confirmation of its arrival. 3. Wait to see it published in next month's newsletter. 4. We'll publish a review of one of your stories (or if you don't have a fic, a review of a story of your choice) in exchange for the right to post your poem. 5. You'll have bragging rights, at least until we think up a new contest. Sound good? Then start writing! -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 4/30/04 6:33am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Page III: Interviews: In honour of the US National Poetry Month of April, the spotlight shines on one of our talented fan poets on the JC. She is a prolific artist who, as well as an anthology of poetry inspired by the Anakin/Tahiri romance, has also written poems on Jag/Jaina, Mara Jade and the saga characters. Throw roses for... _Jedi_of_Destiny_! @}~~~ @}~~~ @}~~~ What was your first Star Wars experience? Well, I've had many Star Wars experiences without them being the "experience." I watched the movies and thought they were cool but that was as far as it went. My Sister was the Star Wars nut and my brothers and I teased her endlessly about it. (Sorry sis. ) Then one day I walked into her room for something to read and picked up a Star Wars book. I think it may have been a JJK book. Looking back I remembered that I must have been bored to the extreme. I would never read a SW book and risk being pestered by my younger brothers! But I read it in an hour and loved it. So I began reading the next one and the next one...and that's my story. How did you find the JC Community? What is the story behind your user name? I found the JC by typing Star Wars on AOL keyword and I haven't stopped going there since. Simple as that! I chose Jedi_of_Destiny when I couldn't log on to my old user name Wraith-One. I thought JoD sounded cool but now that I think about it I want to change it to Dark Lady Destiny. I always wanted to be a darksider. They have so much more fun. How long have you been writing poetry? Interestingly I didn't get really into poetry until I discovered SW. Their so much material to draw upon in the SW universe and I just dived in from there. Tell us about the poetry writing process. How do you get your inspiration? The writing process for me is pretty simple. I sit down and write. Whether it churns out something of worth is the problem and why every time I post I feel like a scared little newbie wondering if people will like it. Many times I will find inspiration in what other people around me talk about, what's on the news, even what I'm feeling. When I first started writing SW poetry I thought I only could write when I was angry. I don't know why. I'd get irritated with someone and instead of taking it out on them I'd write. Many of my poems came about that way. Now it seems that I can only write "angsty" poems. You have written several beautiful poems about the love story of Anakin Solo and Tahiri Veila on your Anakin/Tahiri poetry thread. What is it about this relationship that appeals so compellingly to you? Young, pure, innocent love. They were childhood best friends for years and it became more. What's more appealing than a first love? It's romantic and that's why I like their relationship. They had all the witty comments and confusing moments of Han and Leia and pull off all the crazy stunts that Luke and Mara did. That was until Myrkyr and Anakin died. It was so tragic. I couldn't believe they killed off my favorite character. See, I didn't get into the NJO until Rebirth and SBS was the first book I ever had to wait for and they killed Anakin! I was so disappointed. I like to write about what could have been if he hadn't died and Tahiri's emotional turmoil after. Tell us about the inspiration behind 'Destined to Fall' and why this is your most memorable poem. Destined to Fall didn't start out as an Anakin poem. At least not an Anakin Solo poem. It was going to be a Darth Vader going all out evil poem but I left it alone for months and picked it up one time and it turned out completely different. It reflects on Anakin's [fears about] becoming his grandfather. The JC fan poets community seems to be a mostly silent one on the boards. Can you tell us a little bit about it? Frankly, I don't know that much about it. There was a poetry anthology thread in The Saga forum. It was fun getting to know some fellow SW poets. I had a lot of fun. Do you feel that the present Board environment provides adequate support to fan poets? Do you mean I wish there was more support? Definitely. A thread dedicated to aspiring poets would be so great. I'd definitely support that! What are your favourite poems? I don't really have any favorite poems, not that I can think of right now. I can't help it I like them all... okay not all of them. Do you plan on going professional and publishing your poems or will poetry remain a private, personal endeavour for you? Yes, I would love to do that someday. It would be such a thrill to have a book published. Thanks for taking the time to tell us about yourself. We look forward to more of your wonderful contributions to this community. It's been nice collaborating with you. Catch up on your poetry, JC-ites! Anakin/Tahiri Poetry Thread The Awakening: J/J vignette Trust: Mara Jade poem ———— Inventive, funny, entertaining and obviously quick on the draw – or word , our Author of the month, and the winner of the last Newsletter contest, is renowned for having the character of Jacen Solo down to a science. Rogue_of-Peace, proud Kiwi, congratulations on winning the contest and please take a seat… the Hot Seat. \| \|_ \| \| \| \| Before we begin the interview proper, the fan fiction community is agog with curiosity... However were you able to solve the puzzle so quickly? Combination of Luck (or perhaps the Force) and Google. I found myself lucky to be reading the main Writer’s Resource page when the newsletter appeared. I then copy-pasted the first page where all the hidden letters were onto Appleworks, which made finding the green letters easier. And since the letters themselves were ordered, the sentence was easily structured then placed in the search engine. Perhaps next time the letters should be placed in random order. I’ve always had a thing for search games: in one of the Christmas/Halloween search word games I found the word in about the same length of time as I found this. And on to business! Who is Rogue_of-Peace ? Please give us some background information on yourself. [face_cheeky] Okay, my name is Tony, I live in one of the greatest countries, New Zealand ( ), am currently 17, and working hard on my last year of school before university. Tell us about your love affair with Star Wars. Was it love at first sight or did you have to learn to love? “Love affair?” I don’t fully remember actually. I remember getting various Galaxy of Fear and Glove of Darth Vader (::shudders::) books from my school library, but my first real movie experience of Star Wars that I cared about came from the Star Wars Special Edition trilogy when it came out in theatres. So in my opinion, Han always shoots second ( to the others). My first proper EU book that I chose to read was “I, Jedi” which I found to be an absolutely great book. Next followed the X-Wing series, then all sorts of Star Wars books. How long have you been writing? Besides school set essays, nothing much until I hit Return of Empathy. What drew you to fanfiction, and particularly to Star Wars fan fiction? With reading fanfiction, it was either for good original stories, good humour or for characters that hardly got any air time. With writing, aside from the now embarassing self-insertion based fics, that never made it onto print, it would be because I frankly didn’t think that’s the way the story should have gone. To quote a Crichton book Airframe: “That’s not the story, that’s not the story!” In the case of Return of Empathy, I thought Jacen in Destiny’s Way was just atrocious, and while several people still did a very nice story, I just could never see the story going the way they wrote it. So over several days, I planned the story in my head, then started writing. And then discovered I really enjoyed it. And after more than a year of writing, I’ve decided to keep doing it, within my busy schedule of course. What was the inspiration behind The Symbol of My Love ? Well, I wanted to write something new with the situation on Jacen and Tenel Ka, knowing that it wouldn’t happen in my other fic for quite some time. I knew that I really didn’t want to write anything romantic, cause romance, is simply one thing I don’t read. I concentrated on Love instead (there’s a difference, I swear), and thought of what Jacen and TK wanted for themselves. I believed they wanted a life of their own together. And I knew that would never happen while TK was Queen, and wondered how they would get around that. It was then, I realised, that with the war over she knew her people were safe, and so would abdicate in favour of a suitable heiress. But then I thought, in a twist of tragic irony: what if she were murdered for the throne before she was able to abdicate? And I imagined Jacen’s reactions, especially to her last words, and I wrote it down. And I discovered I had written what I wanted: a Love story without Romance (or at least, the mushy kind ). Return to Empathy has been a WIP for over a year. Can you give any of your fellow writers tips on how to scale the hurdles a writer faces with a long story? Well, it’s pretty traditional, but always keep writing! If you can handle it, writing while travelling with someone else driving is an excellent way of spending time. If you seem to be writing very slowly and it’s been ages since you’ve posted, I recommend you just post what you’ve got, and hopefully the replies you get will inspire you more. You were part of the writing team of YJK Continuation along with LadyMairead, NaboosPrincess, Jaina_Fel_06 and Trickster_Jaina_Fel. What do you think about the co-writing experience, its benefits and faults? Would you be willing to try it again? I think it was a great experience. It allowed me to try a different approach and different character. The main problem we had was that we were just too busy! If I only had more time in a day, I would give another group work to go, but there’s simply too much work. How do you feel about abandoning a story? I’m really sorry that our readers were unable to read anymore of the YJK crew. If I had the time and creativeness to write the other characters and the rest of the story, I would but... ::tries to net the sun (bonus points for knowing the reference!) :: One of your stronger points as a writer is your ability to come up with original storylines. However are you able to keep from recycling old plot bunnies? Uhh....... I really don’t know! I have read quite a variety of reading material but... I really can’t answer that! Sorry. Jacen Solo is easily your favourite personality to write. Why is this so? What is your opinion about what the NJO have done with his character? I’ve always enjoyed reading about Jacen: in the YJK I really liked his empathy with animals and his behaviour, and in the NJO I agreed with his thoughts and ideas. What I really hated after Traitor he didn’t really do anything. He learnt to “Choose, and act” but he did nothing except follow along with everyone else. So, I’ve changed that part of the story. Tell us about life in the community. How did you find the JC and why did you stay? Who are your closest friends here? Heh, I went from GameFAQs.com to theForce.net to here, and I stayed here because of all the interesting topics and information people were discussing. And when I found the Fanfic section, there were plenty of good fics to read (many I’ve forgotten about now unfortunately). Among my closest friends, first among equals would be my fellow New Zealander Tahi, who’s been helpful to me many times and has always given a post a good word. The YJK crew: TJF, LM, JF06 and NP. And of course my readers. Finally, what do you see in your writing future? In the near future: another story. In the distant future: another post to Return of Empathy. In the far future: a sequel. Wishing you the best, Rogue_of-Peace , and once again, congratulations! Thank you very much, it’s been a pleasure. Interested? Return of Empathy YJK Continuation The Symbol of My Love -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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FF_Newsletter_Editor Registered: Jan '04	Date Posted: 4/30/04 6:37am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Page IV: Forum News: I am taking over for Amidala_Skywalker as update moderator. I don’t think I will be able to fill those boots as well, but I’ll do my best. Amidala has officially stepped down to tackle RL, and we wish her all the best. We replaced her with the intrepid red_rose_knight, so everyone please make the new mod feel welcome! (And check out her stories, she is an extremely gifted author). Winners of the Valentine’s Day FanFiction Challenge are finally announced (with apologies to everyone for the delay): Before the Saga: Reihla, Shaindl and Happy_Hobbit_Padawan The Saga: JediNemesis, kayladie97 and MissPadme Beyond the Saga: -Tenel-Ka-, Jade_Solo and Jags_Scoundrel Congratulations! We’ve got a new team working on the “Author’s Interview” thread… Miana Kenobi, RogueSticks, solojones, and Sara_Kenobi have all agreed to help out, so we can all enjoy learning about our writers with their help. Thank you everyone! Do feel free to check out the latest Writer’s Challenge – Action scenes. A lot of people find action scenes intimidating, but they add a lot to a story. The challenges are vignettes, so this is a good chance to try something new. And finally… your mods want your feedback. On the boards… on the threads… problems, difficulties… we’re here to help, as much as we are able. —Renata Advertisement: Have you been suckered into a situation that's just not good for your ship? To all those pesky little critters out there: you may now begin to scatter in fear, because we've come up with the very first ~ ~ ~ Mynocks B Gone ~ ~ ~ Easy as 1-2-3. Guaranteed. 1. Spray the exterior of your ship with our patented slip 'n' shine. 2. Fly into a dark cave or the belly of a space slug. 3. Watch the creatures try without success to latch onto your ship, and relax in the knowledge that they won't damage your hyperdrive. A testament from a satisfied customer, General Han Solo: "Sure, I've had mynock problems. Those little things chewed my shield wiring to bits once and almost left me stranded on a hostile planet another time. So I tried Mynocks B Gone, and it worked like a charm. You don't need any committee to tell you that this is the way to go – I wouldn't fly without it!" Just remember these three little words: Mynocks B Gone Located on convenient asteroids within munching distance of space slugs so you can test your product right away. Call us at 1-800-mynocks and ask about our special introductory offer. Or you can login to gww.mynocks-b-gone.com. Brought to you by The Asteroid Alliance Past Newsletters: Newsletter I, March 2003 Newsletter II, April 2003 Newsletter III, May 2003 Newsletter IV, October 2003 Newsletter V, November 2003 Newsletter VI, January 2004 Newsletter VII, February 2004 Newsletter VIII, March 2004 Credits: Reviewers: Dianethx Flyboy_7 Padawan_Travina Shaindl Ty-gon Jinn VaderLVR64 Vignette Recommendation: NarundiJedi Special Recommendation: Rogue_of-Peace Interviews: leia_naberrie Forum News: Mistress_Renata Editor/Organizer: Xaara -----signature----- 'Twas as if the combination in one city of too many printing presses; a bloody and perpetual atmosphere of Party Malice; and an infinite supply of coffee had combined...to engender...an unstanchable wound that bled Ink and would never heal.
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_Derisa_Ollamhin_ Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 4/30/04 9:28am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Great newsletter, guys! Love the writing tips section! Thanks for doing this for us all: we all reap the benefits of your hard work and dedication! Derisa -----signature----- In memoriam: Talon Squad Leader . When you can't run anymore, you crawl and when you can't do that...well, you know the rest. . Clear skies, General. You will be missed.
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Jane Jinn Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 4/30/04 9:39am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Another wonderful newsletter, guys! Has it really been three months already, Xaara? I'm sad to see that you'll be stepping down, but interested to see who will fill your shoes. Thanks for the review! What a surprise, especially the high opinions of both reviewers. I really enjoyed the writing tips with Ray and Questa, too. I'm going to miss them if they don't show up in the next issue. I just can't stop snickering at "Mynocks B Gone." Was that Diane again? Good job! -----signature----- Mostly retired now Just making the occasional guest appearance
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dianethx Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 4/30/04 9:58am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Nope, not me this time. I'd not felt funny for a while so some other person - brilliantly I might add, took over. Good job, whoever you are! -----signature----- Betrayal - http://boards.theforce.net/s/b1/10935143 updated 9/22/09 jedidas3's Master Merlin - Diplomatic Immunity - http://boards.theforce.net/nswff/b10808/30459852
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Shaindl Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 4/30/04 10:11am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Lovely job, all! I especially love the writing tips - a funny and informative way to present them. Like Jane, I'll miss them if they don't show up next time. Thanks for all your hard work, Xaara -you'll be missed. Shaindl -----signature----- Halfway Moment - Qui, Obi, Anakin AU - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20110461/?0 - UPDATED JULY 3!
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red_rose_knight Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 4/30/04 10:41am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Very nice! The writing tips this month couldn’t have landed at a better time. Good use of description is something I really need to work on. Mynocks B Gone Oh, that was just funny! Thank you to everyone who reviewed and wrote the various articles. Your work is very much appreciated and enjoyed, even if I had to sidestep the plot bunny cages. Sorry to see you step down, Xaara, you did a great job putting this together. -----signature----- The beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. – Robert Cromier
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Padawan_Travina Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 4/30/04 10:56am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Great job on the news letter once again. I too will be sorry to see you, but look forward to see who takes your place and see what they can do. Love the little add...funny once again...:) Great job on the reviews and look forward to sitting down and reading a few of these. Can not wait until next month..and WELCOME TO OUR NEW MOD!!!! -----signature----- Padawan to Cliffhanger Master-CalaisKenobi Twin Padawan to DOT
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Layren Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 4/30/04 11:22am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Lololol Mynocks B Gone.. that was great...Jane, my first suspect was Diane too...Yes welcome new mod!!! Glad things are working out so well for you ... -----signature----- Proud Master to Ara-gon The Triad Chronicles http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/25934993/p1/?177 (OC's) Into Another Day http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27926050/p1/?0 2008 Dear Diary Challenge I am Jinngerbread.
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JediNemesis Registered: Mar '03	Date Posted: 4/30/04 11:24am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Great job on the newsletter everyone. Ads hilarious, writing tips nearly as funny. Waiting for next one Nem -----signature----- BeTS Best Author '08 NEW Bad Dreams - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b1/29893091 Eleven Summers - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b1/29657584 Into The Shining Day - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b1/29224914
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_JM_ Registered: Jun '01	Date Posted: 4/30/04 4:20pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	As always the writing tips are very useful, though whether a character would say they lied or say they expressed a terminological inexactitude depends on the character and the situation. Reviews are useful as there is so much good work it is easy to miss older or even slightly older stories. And I think Mynocks-B-Gone would be very useful. -----signature----- Seeming unable to just say "Nice post, I enjoyed it" Sometimes amazed at how "I'll reply tomorrow" becomes "I should have replied last week" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Return of a Jedi. http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23421597
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bobilll Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 4/30/04 4:25pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	HAHAHAA Love the Mynocks be gone part! Great job with the newsletter, guys! -----signature----- You'll have to buy him a sweater.
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kayladie97 Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 5/1/04 7:45am Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Wow, thanks for the review and y'all said such nice things! I am so flattered. Gee, guess I better work on getting that next chapter up, huh? Do you think Mynocks B Gone could also handle Darth Real Life? -----signature----- My new philosophy of life (borrowed from Elvis Presley) "The sun's down and the moon is pretty. It's time to ramble."
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Xaara Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 5/2/04 6:03pm Subject: RE: The Fan Fiction Newsletter, Edition IX
	Thank you all for your kind comments. I truly couldn't have done any of this without the dedication, support, and enthusiasm of the staff, all of whom spent their time and energy reviewing, interviewing, and just helping out with some much-needed supporting PMs. It was an incredible amount of fun. I wrote the ad as a spur-of-the-moment idea - I'm glad you all liked it. And I'm almost positive Ray and Questa will continue making appearances in the upcoming editions of the newsletter. They like their jobs. I'm still looking for someone to take over editing responsibilities - PM me if you're interested! -----signature----- My Ramblings: http://www.livejournal.com/users/xaara/ My lil bro/sis: Flyboy_7/Wyn_Fel Wyomé, Handmaiden of the Crest
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