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My Prequels...
FallenKnight88
Registered:
May '05
Date Posted:
5/28/05 11:57pm
Subject:
My Prequels...
Some input would be most welcome:
EP1: Same only Qui-Gon Survives and becomes Anakins Master as Obi-wan becomes a Jedi knight and goes on his own solo missions.
EP2: Qui-Gon and Anakin have a good father/son relationship who decide to protect Padme. Qui-gon enlists Obi-wan's help (who's used to solo missions) to help him track down the mystery assassin ("Gen. Grevious"...Jango would not exist in my version thus retaining the mystery of Boba Fett's origin and the clone troopers) who tried to kill Padme. While Qui-gon decides to confer w/ his old master Dooku about the transpiring events at the Jedi Temple, Anakin takes charge as the main protector of Padme and things go as they do in the movie. Obi-wan checks up on the two occassionally via hologram, like an older brother checking on the younger brother(in this version, Obi-wan has more of a supporting role). Eventually Qui-gon is killed under mysterious circumstances after discovering the truth about the Sith on Courosant (his killer is revealed to be Dooku who then travels to Genosis. During this, Anakin, Obi-wan and Padme are on Genosis doing their thing (note that the convo between Dooku and Obi-wan is done with Qui-gon on Courosant instead, with Dooku reluctantly killing Qui-gon in reaction of Qui-gon's refusal to join the dark side). As a result, Obi-wan who has since become buddies w/ Anakin decides to take the now Master-less padawan under his wing despite the fact that he is much too young to have a padawan (This would immediately establish their friendship).
EP3: Same only during the Dooku/Anakin Duel, what sets off Anakin to kill Dooku is the relevation that Dooku murdered Qui-Gon when Qui-Gon refused to join his crusade to destroy the Sith. This scene would be similar to how Luke was set off in ROTJ about Leia however unlike the results in ROTS, Anakin feels no remorse over killing Dooku. Also, I know its cliche but, have "General Grevoius" be revealed to be Darth Maul so that the two can have a rematch. In the end, have Shmi be there when the Lars take Luke as I really find it hard to consider the Lars "family" when they only met Anakin and Padme once in their lives. Having the grandmother there would have made more sense.
As you can see, I really wanted to alter EP2 the most becasue I believe that had Qui-gon survived, it would not only have made Anakin a nicer, more likeable guy, but also make his banter w/ obi-wan more realistic like to brothers bickering. Plus, I belive that having Qui-gon killed would have as much of an emotional impact on Anakin as the death of his mother (which in my version doesn't happen).
On a side note, I know I'm not the almighty George Lucas and I love every single SW movie to date. I'm just curious about how my versions would stand up to the overall fanbase. Feel free to offer your opinons and input. Thanks for your time and please be kind
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DarthIshtar
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Former CR
Registered:
Mar '01
Date Posted:
5/29/05 12:13am
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RE: My Prequels...
Interesting, like the idea of Obi-Wan on solo missions, since he seems to do well on those.
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SilSolo
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Mar '04
Date Posted:
5/29/05 5:18pm
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RE: My Prequels...
Interesting. Just fill in all the details that need to be there.
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