Author Topic: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Thrawn McEwok 
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Date Posted: 9/2/06 3:28am Subject: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge] - Date Edited: 6/19 8:51am (1 edits total) Edited By: Thrawn McEwok
Anyone else out there still old enough to remember "How Zahn Could Fix This Mess"?

It was a movement in the mid-late '90s, in reaction against the direction the franchise storyline was heading under Bantam - not so much Samidzat as agit-prop. The basic idea was how Timothy Zahn and his characters - properly characterized - could put right the bad things that had happened to the GFFA since the end of The Last Command...

Initially, Sean Fallesen posted a short 'fic to RASSM under the title "How Zahn Could Fix This Mess". He was soon followed by another poster (v.2.0), and a few months later, a revised version of the original (v.1.2) was produced.

Versions of both 'fics ended up at the ClubJade archive, along with several others on more-or-less similar themes - and there are plenty more 'fics from those years around the internet that owe at least a nodding acquaintance to the concept. You could even say that Specter of the Past was the apotheosis of the idea...

The way Zahn did fix the mess is part of the reason SotP is still one of my favourite Star Wars novels, though I'm told it stands up well to reading straight on from the end of The Last Command as well. As to 'fic, a particular favourite of mine is Canon or Cannon, which seems to be available currently only in the Wayback cache, but I should also mention a fashion for literal character-assassination, which saw lots of characters gruesomely removed from the stage - amongt them Anakin Solo himself...

Anyway... that's enough ancient history: the point of this thread is to reapply the same concept to the current situation, with Anakin Solo rather than Zahn as the mechanism for fixing things.

The 'fic can be any genre, any length, any style; the "fix" can be in the form of retconn, redemption, or ruthless killing-spree. The more meditative among you might use this as an opportunity to think about what the problem is, why, and how to put it right - but I'm sure that some people can right great 'fic without indulging those concepts.

The only real parameters are these:

1.) It has to involve Anakin Solo in a pivotal role.
2.) It has to resolve the 'messy' post-NJO situation.

Please post a link in this thread when your 'fic goes up...

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CeiranHarmony 
Registered: May '04
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Date Posted: 9/2/06 3:49am Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
soon I will post mine

 

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Healer_Leona 
Registered: Jul '00
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Date Posted: 9/2/06 6:24pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Interesting challenge. I'm unaware of the "How Zahn XCould Fix This Mess", or many of the bad things in the EU.

I still look forward to seeing what comes of this.

 

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rebel_cheese 
Registered: Jul '06
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Date Posted: 9/3/06 10:06am Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge] - Date Edited: 9/3/06 10:48am (1 edits total) Edited By: rebel_cheese
I actually have a plot bunny about this sort of thing but I don't know when it'll see the light of day. It could be as late as 2008 before it's even written . . .

 

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YodaKenobi 
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Registered: May '03
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Date Posted: 9/4/06 1:37pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Can we submit stuff from three years ago? tongue

Seriously, I really like this challenge and can't wait to see what other people come up with for it grin

 

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Thrawn McEwok 
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Date Posted: 6/19 8:53am Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
rebel_cheese posted:
I actually have a plot bunny about this sort of thing but I don't know when it'll see the light of day. It could be as late as 2008 before it's even written . . .


Well, it's 2008 now. Done yet? grin

YodaKenobi posted:
Can we submit stuff from three years ago? tongue

Seriously, I really like this challenge and can't wait to see what other people come up with for it grin


Yeah, if it's not been posted before. Five years ago, even. grin

This thread is now the last, best hope for Star Wars. I suggest we use it! grin

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Idrelle_Miocovani 
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Date Posted: 6/19 5:18pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Oooh! Mesa likens this. tongue My muse has been inspired. I'll see what I can do. grin

 

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YodaKenobi 
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Date Posted: 6/19 5:49pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
I still really like this two years later tongue

Looking forward to seeing what people come up with grin



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Jedi-Ant 
Registered: Jan '07
Date Posted: 6/19 6:24pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
thinking mischief chicken

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This looks like a neat idea.. I might have to throw some ideas around..



 

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Thrawn McEwok 
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Date Posted: 6/20 5:48am Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Idrelle_Miocovani posted:
Oooh! Mesa likens this. tongue My muse has been inspired. I'll see what I can do. grin


Glad to hear it... cool

But, uhh... does it involve Gungans? tongue

Whatever it is, I'm looking forward to this! grin

YodaKenobi posted:
I still really like this two years later tongue


dancing

Still got that old 'fic? tongue

YodaKenobi posted:
Looking forward to seeing what people come up with grin


Me too!!

Jedi-Ant posted:
thinking mischief chicken

tongue

This looks like a neat idea.. I might have to throw some ideas around..


Do you need someone to catch them? grin batting

But wait! There's a chicken in there... Vergere?! shock

Thanks for the response, guys! grin hugs cool

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Idrelle_Miocovani 
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Date Posted: 6/20 8:20am Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Thrawn McEwok posted:
Idrelle_Miocovani posted:
Oooh! Mesa likens this. tongue My muse has been inspired. I'll see what I can do. grin


Glad to hear it... cool

But, uhh... does it involve Gungans? tongue

Whatever it is, I'm looking forward to this! grin


Now, what gave you that impression? mischief

No, it doesn't involve Gungans. I was practicing Gungan impersonation to be misleading. peace whistling The fic is a secret! shhh

 

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Tahi 
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Date Posted: 6/20 4:08pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
This is an evil and cunning plan - a plan so cunning, you could could put a tail on it and call it a weasel. grin

No, there will be no weasels in the story. wink But Gungans . . . . hmmmmmm wink

 

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Thrawn McEwok 
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Date Posted: 6/20 7:47pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Idrelle_Miocovani posted:
Now, what gave you that impression? mischief


I can't believe anyone would just talk like Jar-Jar for no reason? tongue

Idrelle_Miocovani posted:
No, it doesn't involve Gungans. I was practicing Gungan impersonation to be misleading. peace whistling The fic is a secret! shhh


So, there are Gungans in it? Sneaky! shock silly tongue

Tahi posted:
This is an evil and cunning plan - a plan so cunning, you could could put a tail on it and call it a weasel. grin

No, there will be no weasels in the story. wink But Gungans . . . . hmmmmmm wink


Does this mean we get a 'fic? Involving A/T and Gungans? Naboo? thinking

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brodiew 
Registered: Oct '05
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Date Posted: 6/26 8:28am Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Just a thought about Anakin alive in LOTF. I think the climactic duel would have been much more intense and emotional had Anakin faced Jacen rather than Jaina. She is so damaged and apathetic, that killing her brother really meant nothing to her.

Anakin always had such passsion. I could see his intensity, as was Luke's when he faced Vader, burning brightly in such a duel.

 

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Trepidation 
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Date Posted: 6/26 1:14pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
brodiew posted:
Just a thought about Anakin alive in LOTF. I think the climactic duel would have been much more intense and emotional had Anakin faced Jacen rather than Jaina. She is so damaged and apathetic, that killing her brother really meant nothing to her.

Anakin always had such passsion. I could see his intensity, as was Luke's when he faced Vader, burning brightly in such a duel.


I've thought about this as well. It would have made for a more emotional investment in the reader. One of the most memorable scenes from NJO was Jacen and Anakin sparring with lightsabers (or perhaps a bit more than that) inside the Millennium Falcon while Jaina scowled and looked on. It wasn't a big deal or a scene of importance...but the fact that I recall it out of such a huge series says something about the pairing.

 

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Thrawn McEwok 
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Date Posted: 6/28 1:30pm Subject: RE: "How Anakin Could Fix This Mess" [ByTS post-NJO Fan Fiction Challenge]
Trepidation posted:
brodiew posted:
Just a thought about Anakin alive in LOTF. I think the climactic duel would have been much more intense and emotional had Anakin faced Jacen rather than Jaina. She is so damaged and apathetic, that killing her brother really meant nothing to her.

Anakin always had such passsion. I could see his intensity, as was Luke's when he faced Vader, burning brightly in such a duel.


I've thought about this as well. It would have made for a more emotional investment in the reader. One of the most memorable scenes from NJO was Jacen and Anakin sparring with lightsabers (or perhaps a bit more than that) inside the Millennium Falcon while Jaina scowled and looked on. It wasn't a big deal or a scene of importance...but the fact that I recall it out of such a huge series says something about the pairing.


I think that psychologically, they thought quite hard about the Jacen-vs.-Jaina duel. The problem was, there simply wasn't the action setup. In the OT, we saw Luke witness the Vader/Kenobi duel - the first time he met his father - and then he faced him in the trench run (saved by Han - one step removed again); the plot of ESB was the setup for his duel with Vader - which he rushed into and got wasted. That knowledge them provided the drive for his character's direction in the next movie... which culminated in the single most awesome piece of swordfighting in the saga.

For my money, Luke powering down Vader with that music is still the sock-rocking moment of Star Wars.

But what did we have in the NJO and "Legacy of the Force"? We were told that there was a Yuuzhan Vong fetishism with twins fighting. We were told that Jaina resented Jacen as he took control of the Galaxy. In between, they bitched at each other through their Force Bond through the attack on Thrago. In hindsight, Denning gave us some very good characterization moments, where Jaina yelled at Jacen.

But there wasn't the sense it was going to come to lightsabers. It didn't push into the story enough. If we had Jaina whupped in a fight by Jacen in Invincible or something, that might have made it work.

It's quite telling that Anakin's duel with Jacen WAY back in Vector Prime still stamps itself more powerfully on the characterization and the readers than three whole series' worth of buildup and psychological complexity before the Jacen/Jaina rumble.

But I agree. Anakin and Jacen have always been more natural antagonists than Jacen and Jaina, I think. It took a lot of pushing to get those two opposed, and for some reason, the narrative held back from doing it effectively. Then again, the natural conflict here is Anakin against Luke, I'm starting to think - Jacen was just a more perfect Luke Skywalker all along.

mischief

Look at it this way: Anakin/Tahiri represented "something new", but while Luke's allowed married Jedi, he seems increasingly ambivalent, and he takes their kids away and brainwashes them. Heck, the Jedi themselves are acting like brainwashed drones.

Something's gotta give.

Something's gotta give.

Something's gotta give.

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