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DarthIshtar 
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Date Posted: 2/12 11:00pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
It can involve the person and her friends, but the story just keeps jumping back to her as if she's all that matters and no one's going along with that style, really. So let's try and keep things on one scene at a time. Remember, this is supposed to read like an actual story by the end, not haphazard RPG.

 

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PHGS_Weyr 
Registered: Apr '06
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Date Posted: 2/13 10:54am Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
I think we need to conclude the current arc around Kadiea and Cadeous then move on, i feel as we are now on part two we need to move on to new characters, they may meet up with our current set of characters further on but some new faces that we can get to know would be nice.

 

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DarthIshtar 
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Date Posted: 2/13 11:59am Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
It would be nice if we could somehow define what the arc is, since it seems to just be going in a non-concrete direction.

 

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PHGS_Weyr 
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Date Posted: 2/14 8:12am Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
we have discussed this before, at the time we were going for a more evolutionary approach and trying to let the scenes change as they would, this has at times made the story somewhat disjointed in places, maybe a more set out plotline is in order with an appropriate announcement to check in here for an update on where the story is heading?

 

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Abeja 
Registered: Apr '07
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Date Posted: 2/16 2:14pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
I am a bit confused now, I have to admit. But PHGS_Weyr's idea is good, in my opinion, we should really see a bit more where this story is headed instead of just posting things.
Btw, what about Falleen_Fan_No_1? Has someone heard of him?

 

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DarthIshtar 
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Date Posted: 2/16 2:18pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
I completely agree. The story seemed to BE heading in a specific direction until individual posts rebounded between scenes and planets. In order for this to work, the post has to either conclude the previous post or continue it, no exceptions acceptable.

 

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Abeja 
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Date Posted: 3/21 3:25pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
Hello? Anyone still here? worried sad

 

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Ceillean 
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Date Posted: 3/21 4:04pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
I am. *waves vigoriously*

 

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Abeja 
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Date Posted: 3/22 11:03am Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
That's great happy !

 

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Abeja 
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Date Posted: 5/26 12:37pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
So...I thought we could get this thread up again. Is anyone still here? worried

 

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Ceillean 
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Date Posted: 5/26 2:10pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
I'm still here. But I think the Round Robin thing is officially dead. Unless we start from the very beginning but then I'd suggest a bit more planning to begin with.
Because this really was a great idea.

 

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Abeja 
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Date Posted: 5/27 12:07pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
I agree with the better planning thing. It's apity that the Round Robin is probably, as you've put it, dead. sad

 

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PHGS_Weyr 
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Date Posted: 5/28 6:27pm Subject: RE: Help Write a Star Wars Story Discussion Board
i'm still here as well we could start from scratch....

 

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