Author Topic: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 08/26/08
Jaina_and_Jag 
Registered: Apr '03
23040_R2-D2 Blueprint
Date Posted: 5/6 4:09pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 04/22/08
My fic has been started, but due to finals I haven't had a chance to finish it yet. Hopefully I'll be able to complete it this week and get it posted...

 

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FirstSentence 
Registered: Dec '07
41732_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 5/6 6:03pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 04/22/08
It's that time again! I'm delving into one of my favored writers for this particular first sentence, hope you all enjoy, and provide me for fanfic to read wink



The explanation, like all good propaganda, is stirring and stilted, and not particularly accurate, and gummy as the hook from a top-40 song, sticky in your mind in the sleep-deprived noontime when the world takes on a hallucinatory hypperreal clarity. - Eastern Standard Tribe, Cory Doctorow

 

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Takianna 
Registered: Apr '05
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Date Posted: 5/7 8:46am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
WOW!!!! That is some sentence!

 

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Kidan 
Title: TFN EU Staff
Registered: Jul '03
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Date Posted: 5/7 11:25am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
Takianna posted:
WOW!!!! That is some sentence!

Ain't it though?

 

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Takianna 
Registered: Apr '05
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Date Posted: 5/9 1:00pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08 - Date Edited: 5/9 1:00pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Takianna
I was inspired.....

Study Break

 

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Mereel's perfect white smile never faltered. He took a short rod from his belt, an electroprod of the type farmers used to herd nerfs.
"Hi, Mama," he said. "Your little boy's back."
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VaderLVR64 
Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots
Registered: Feb '04
24058_Anakin
Date Posted: 5/11 9:12am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
An entry! grin

Over the Dunes

 

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Trepidation 
Registered: Aug '05
6241_R2-D2
Date Posted: 5/11 11:38am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
Hey...check it out; the shortest response to a First Sentence Challenge ever:

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“The explanation, like all good propaganda, is stirring and stilted, and not particularly accurate, and gummy as the hook from a top-40 song, sticky in your mind in the sleep-deprived noontime when the world takes on a hallucinatory hypperreal clarity.”

"Shut up, Goldenrod." Han turned to Leia, annoyance still written on his face. "Get Mr. Hallucinatory hypperreal clarity out of here before I forget my manners, skip the propaganda and get right to the sabotage."

"Oh dear."

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Takianna 
Registered: Apr '05
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Date Posted: 5/13 10:10am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
Trepidation posted:
Hey...check it out; the shortest response to a First Sentence Challenge ever:

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“The explanation, like all good propaganda, is stirring and stilted, and not particularly accurate, and gummy as the hook from a top-40 song, sticky in your mind in the sleep-deprived noontime when the world takes on a hallucinatory hypperreal clarity.”

"Shut up, Goldenrod." Han turned to Leia, annoyance still written on his face. "Get Mr. Hallucinatory hypperreal clarity out of here before I forget my manners, skip the propaganda and get right to the sabotage."

"Oh dear."

(end scene) tongue




That's funny! Great work!

 

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"Hi, Mama," he said. "Your little boy's back."
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Jade_Pilot 
Registered: Dec '05
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Date Posted: 5/14 7:48am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
That first sentence is awesome! Off to read the stories...

 

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Lola64 
Registered: Mar '05
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Date Posted: 5/18 1:23pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
Trepidation posted:
Hey...check it out; the shortest response to a First Sentence Challenge ever:

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“The explanation, like all good propaganda, is stirring and stilted, and not particularly accurate, and gummy as the hook from a top-40 song, sticky in your mind in the sleep-deprived noontime when the world takes on a hallucinatory hypperreal clarity.”

"Shut up, Goldenrod." Han turned to Leia, annoyance still written on his face. "Get Mr. Hallucinatory hypperreal clarity out of here before I forget my manners, skip the propaganda and get right to the sabotage."

"Oh dear."

(end scene) tongue




laugh laugh


Ok, so I'm catching up on the entries and replies are coming, but first I just wanted to say Happy 4 Years Running First Sentence Challenge and thank everyone who has contributed and helped keep this challenge here.

 

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JadeSolo 
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Registered: Sep '02
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Date Posted: 5/18 2:26pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/06/08
Trepidation: That is so damn funny. I can actually see Han's reaction. laugh laugh

 

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FirstSentence 
Registered: Dec '07
41732_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 5/20 8:02pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
Salutations!! It's time for another First Sentence!!!!!!! I've (Kidan) have just recently finished LotF, as such, I'm utterly depressed and saddened. So, I'm providing what I see as a fundamentally, fun sentence; which I hope to get some great things to read from you--the fearless fanficcers who thrive on these sentences. So, without further ado...


“Is that a lightsaber in you pocket—or are you just happy to see me?”



 

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Jaina_and_Jag 
Registered: Apr '03
23040_R2-D2 Blueprint
Date Posted: 5/20 8:58pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
I've got two plot bunnies for this one! shock We'll have to see what I can come up with... mischief

 

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moosemousse 
Title: CR - FF:UK South
Registered: Oct '04
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Date Posted: 5/21 2:55am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
I still haven't gotten around to post a previous sentence's fic. sad

 

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Jaina_and_Jag 
Registered: Apr '03
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Date Posted: 5/23 3:18pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
My response. grin

Conceding the point

I have another one in the works. tongue

 

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