Author Topic: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 08/26/08
earlybird-obi-wan 
Registered: Aug '06
6130_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 5/23 11:50pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
I have one in for this “Is that a lightsaber in you pocket—or are you just happy to see me?”
and it is set during AOTC

This weapon is your life

 

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Jaina_and_Jag 
Registered: Apr '03
23040_R2-D2 Blueprint
Date Posted: 5/27 11:26am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
Here's my response from the sentence a couple weeks ago.


Stranded

 

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BaronCoop 
Registered: Mar '06
Date Posted: 5/27 6:50pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
OK, it's between diaper changes and feedings, so I am going to sit and muse on tis challenge HARDCORE. There are a couple of easy jokes here, and I am SO not above using them. flag

 

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BaronCoop 
Registered: Mar '06
Date Posted: 5/27 8:22pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
I am as good as my word. Here is my entry:

Pocket Pants

Written in like an hour, it is truly a masterpiece of cobbled together crud. Enjoy!

 

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Valairy_Scot 
Title: PT Rewrite Winner
Registered: Sep '05
19543_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 5/28 9:22pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
At the risk of total and complete blush embarrassment I present potentially one of the shortest responses yet:



“Is that a lightsaber in you pocket—or are you just happy to see me?”

If there was anything to lift Obi-Wan’s spirits after dying on the Death Star, it was this greeting from Siri in the netherworld of the Force.

His eyes followed hers – and he gulped. Where was a good cloak when he needed one.

On the other hand – things were really looking up after nineteen lonely years. He should have died years ago.


(I am so going to hide now and never post again talk_hand - oh, that's right, I am the author of 2 Shifts at the Ladies Only Bar in Mos Eisely )

 

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brodiew 
Registered: Oct '05
6593_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 5/29 2:18pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08 - Date Edited: 5/29 2:19pm (1 edits total) Edited By: brodiew
I've been away for a couple of months and this sentence seemed to be the perfect execize to aid my return.

“Is that a lightsaber in you pocket—or are you just happy to see me?”

My OCs, Jedi apprentices Lens Eli and Kayla Bix are in Burning Love.

Enjoy.

 

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earlybird-obi-wan 
Registered: Aug '06
6130_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/2 8:15am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 05/20/08
Not ready to remember MMM and first sentence is a vignette for two challenges, this and MMM.

I have taken The best time for luck to show up is when all hope is lost.

 

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FirstSentence 
Registered: Dec '07
41732_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 6/3 10:17pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/3/08
I chose this sentence in honor of my cat Tigger. This is the stupid animal that disappeared on us a few weeks ago for an entire week. A week I spent in misery as my wife wasn't happy. This week included me walking the neighborhood nightly, as well as traipsing through the woods just north of our subdivision (where I managed to twist my ankle). Anyways, she's home now, but I've got to say that:

Little fuzzy animals bother me.

 

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ShadowofLures 
Registered: Jul '05
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Date Posted: 6/4 1:19am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/3/08
ShadowofLures posted:
Okay, so, at long last, I've completed my fan fic that includes ALL the sentences that Twich has handed out from 2005-2006.

HOWEVER, I've got three very trusted editors working on it, so as soon as they're done helping me fix it, it should be post-worthy. Please note I'm not VaderLVR64 and that it will be seen as a piece of bantha poo. wink

But I'll wait until the end of 08 to start my next ridiculously long story that this beloved thread inspires. grin

love you guys!

-Lures rose


Okay, it's FINALLY here.

to quote Chip from Beauty and the Beast: "Here we go!"

-Lures rose

 

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earlybird-obi-wan 
Registered: Aug '06
6130_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/10 8:31am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/3/08
I have another one for the first sentence challenge, a SiriWan

Healing

 

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Jedi-Gon 
Registered: Nov '07
13737_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 6/11 9:10am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/3/08
Oh! Oh! *twitchtwitch* Plot bunnies attacking! Little fuzzies... Must... Write... *Scurries off to MicroWord*

 

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brodiew 
Registered: Oct '05
6593_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 6/16 2:09pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/3/08
Ok, so this vig opens with a sentence from a previous years challenge, but it includes two sentences from the current challege.

Please enjoy OC Lens Eli with his best friend Ben Skywalker in Friendly Ribbing .

 

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FirstSentence 
Registered: Dec '07
41732_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 6/17 7:40pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/17/08
As some of you may be aware, I have children. Two of them to be precise--both of them are exuberant bundles of hyperactivity. Save for a few hours which we lovingly call bliss.... err.... nap time. As such, I understand this sentence perfectly.


Our children aren’t sleeping, they’re recharging.

 

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JEDIGUNSHIP 
Registered: May '08
7439_Republic Gunship
Date Posted: 6/18 10:51am Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/17/08
That sounds like me. My sentance is "The hyperactive kids were recharging after their rampage of destruction." That'd be a good first sentance.

 

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VaderLVR64 
Title: Fan Fic Manager in Combat Boots
Registered: Feb '04
42064_Darth Vader
Date Posted: 6/18 12:31pm Subject: RE: The *NEW* First Sentence Challenge -- New Sentence 6/17/08
Oh I like it. The muse does too. tongue

 

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