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Author Topic: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
Jedi_Suzuran 
Registered: May '02
24121_Padme
Date Posted: 2/20/03 4:50pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!

I can't believe it's over. cry cry cry cry

But it was worth it. What a great ending, master. *sniff* Loved Xani congratulating Obi-Wan.

*runs off the thread crying*

 

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Shaindl 
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 2/20/03 4:54pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
Aw, it's over. That's sad.

But the ending was GREAT!

That was great, OE, and thanks for not doing something lousy to Anakin! grin I really liked him in your story, and I think I would have cried if something bad had happened to him.

I can't wait for you to start posting the sequel. Yes, I'm assuming, but I hope if I say it enough, you'll take the hint and run with it. grin

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Sheila 
Registered: Oct '02
14377_Jedi Kermit
Date Posted: 2/20/03 4:56pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
That ending was spectacular oe ! It was nice to see a knighted Anakin who obviously still loves his master. I enjoyed this story so much and look forward to whatever you throw our way next. I will miss your daily posts, but I will see you at TOTS! happy

 

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astroanna 
Registered: Jul '02
6148_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 2/20/03 4:58pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE! - Date Edited: 2/20/03 5:10pm (1 edits total) Edited By: astroanna
Wonderful ending, obi-ew!!

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I'm sad, though...

It's over....

cry

I have to admit, though, there was one part that I didn't get...

"{ You did well Padawan Mine }

[ Thank you little one ]"

Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....

Maybe I'm dense, but who was Obi hearing?

confused

Anyway, wonderful work and although I'd understand if this was the end, I wouldn't mind a sequel at all!!

grin

Brava on wonderful piece, obi-ew, and roses to the author!

*tosses roses at obi-ew's feet and begins to applaud wildly*

happy

EDIT: OK, after thinking about it a little bit, I got it! (duh!!)

Obi was hearing Qui's congrats ("You did well Padawan mine") then Xanatos's, ("Thank you little one")

A little slow on the uptake today!!

silly

 

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CYNICAL21 
Registered: Jul '01
Date Posted: 2/20/03 4:58pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
You hope you did OK? God save me from misguided humility!

This is a lovely, wonderfully plotted, intriguingly developed story, with marvelous characterizations and a perfect emotional balance. Never fear, oe - you did yourself - and Obi - proud.

And I also vote for a sequel; you have a lovely premise already in place.

CYN

 

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PaddyJuan 
Registered: Nov '02
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Date Posted: 2/20/03 5:01pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
Wonderful!

That is the perfect ending for this story. I really love it!

Thank you so much

 

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Cascadia 
Registered: Apr '02
40001_Anakin
Date Posted: 2/20/03 5:58pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
It was perfect, oe! I think you did a beautiful job. love

Anakin was very well written. I'm not really a fan of the character, but I do believe there are good qualities in him, and you brought them out. It's nice to see a sympathetic Ani.

Obi-Wan was superb. You write him very well.

Xanatos - Well, I think you've almost single-handedly sparked a Xani craze here on the boards with all your fics.

Jivan was a welcome surprise. And opens up much new unexplored territory here. You should write a sequel.

Luminara is a canon character that you've given much more depth to.

What a great story! I'm glad you picked up the plot bunny! grin And I can't wait to see more from you.

 

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LuvEwan 
Registered: Mar '02
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Date Posted: 2/20/03 8:04pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
Nah, obi_ew...I don't think you should have a sequel.

After all, it's not like you'd have any readers. wink

I guess all I can offer is another cry because this wonderful, incredibly unique story is already over. It seemed so short---that's a compliment. grin

**sigh** Get going on a new story, before I go into withdrawal!!!

 

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Arldetta 
Registered: Jul '02
40072_Jedi
Date Posted: 2/20/03 8:17pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
*sniff* Qui's and Xan's little encouragement was absolutely beautiful!! cry It was what he needed to hear, no matter how long it took for him to hear it.

I still think we need a sequel. tongue But I will do my best to be patient. grin


I love how you managed to portray Obi, Ani and Xan in this. I actually like ANi!! [face_shocked] That's hard to do. Mostly, I think he's a whiny brat, but that's just me. wink

Well, wonderful journey! And I look forward to reading more. grin

 

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Jedi_Knight_Hunter 
Registered: Jun '02
23524_Xanatos
Date Posted: 2/20/03 8:28pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
Did ok? *seconds Cyn as there is no way she could put it better*

I just don't know what to say. I'm sorry to see it over, and think, no, know that you did a wonderful job telling a wonderful story. It was deep, heartwrenching, and just plain spectacular!

And that's all I have to say.

 

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PadawanKitara 
Registered: Dec '01
6383_Barriss Offee
Date Posted: 2/20/03 8:41pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
great happy

 

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Happy_Hobbit_Padawan 
Registered: Feb '03
6637_Padme
Date Posted: 2/20/03 11:21pm Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
I love happy endings. happy This was a great fic! I look forward to reading more of your stories. happy

"I'm fine Anakin.It was merely a flesh wound," he assured his former apprentice. Did anyone else think of Monty Python and the Holy Grail when they read this line? "It's just a flesh wound!" (you have to see that movie to get it!) laugh grin silly

 

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VadeyFan2002 
Registered: Sep '02
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Date Posted: 2/21/03 1:44am Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
I want to thank you deeply for this beautifully done fiction.

Congrats!!!
And my apologies for not replying recently, but I fall victim to DRL.

Vadey

 

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Red_Jedi_Knight 
Registered: May '02
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Date Posted: 2/21/03 5:34am Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
wonderful!! i loved it!! thank you for writing it!! *sigh* i love obi he's such a great guy and ani turned out okay too!!

 

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Dagobah_Y 
Registered: May '02
7276_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 2/21/03 9:20am Subject: RE: The Face Inside -AU-Xani/Ani/Obi Updated 2/20/03 COMPLETE!
Sigh. Wonderful ending! happy

 

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