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astroanna
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RE: A Destiny Delayed- AU JA- Thanks, shanobi! *Updated 1/06/04*
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Sheila- Thanks so much, that means a lot!  Glad you enjoyed it!
obi-ew- Coming from someone I admire so much, those words hold great value for me...thank you so much!
PK- Thanks so much, PK!
Shan-  It all came from your seed, my dear!
Musing- Thanks so much! It always helps to get feedback on what I can do to improve, but I'm very glad you stuck around and I hope you enjoy the epilogue!
OK, all, here we go...hope this isn't too mushy...
EPILOGUE
Obi-Wan made his way through the vast hallways of the Jedi temple, his steps purposeful but slow, their natural grace evident even to the most casual of observers.
Three years had passed since he had become Qui-Gon Jinn’s apprentice and in that time he had become a valued and important member of the Jedi Order. That was why today was not an ordinary day for Obi-Wan. It was the day he would take his place among the ranks of the esteemed Jedi knights.
Today was Obi-Wan’s knighting ceremony.
Even though it was a day of joy, he could not go forward, could not begin the next chapter of his life without acknowledging his past and the master that was, and remained, so dear to him.
It was not long before he reached the simple but lovely memorial that commemorated all the Jedi who had fallen.
It was a wall of polished black stone, set at the far end of a vast hall with marble floors. The entire room was lit with golden sunlight that streamed through two huge windows and the names of all the fallen Jedi were inscribed with flowing silver letters.
Slowly, silently, Obi-Wan made his way to the revered monument. Gradually he fell to his knees and lovingly placed the flower he had brought at the base of it. His head remained bowed for some time before his eyes raised themselves to gaze at his fallen master’s name.
Luminara Unduli.
Ignoring the tears that tracked their way down his face Obi-Wan gently traced his fingers over the reverently inscribed letters. Taking a deep breath, Obi-Wan’s voice was a whisper when he finally spoke.
“I did it, Master. We did it. I wish you were here today, Master. Qui-Gon has been a great mentor to me, and I’ve come to respect him, even love him. He’s become the father I’ve never known.”
Obi-Wan smiled, but it was bittersweet.
“But it’s still not fair that you’re not here with me to share in what we worked so hard for. You were like the mother I never knew, Master, and you should be here.”
After several long moments Obi-Wan wiped away the last of his tears and got to his feet.
“I love you, Master.”
For some time he simply stood there, immersing himself in the peace and tranquility of the serene place.
Finally he heard footsteps behind him, and he knew in a moment who it was. Smiling, Obi-Wan spoke without turning around.
“Hi, Master.”
Qui-Gon Jinn came to stand next to his apprentice, and he too was smiling. Turning toward the younger man, he waited until Obi-Wan was facing him.
“She’d be proud of you, Obi-Wan.”
Qui-Gon gently cupped his apprentice’s cheek as he spoke.
“I know I am.”
He drew his apprentice into a warm hug and the two were silent for several long moments. Qui-Gon drew away and looked into his apprentice’s eyes, and there was still a smile on his face.
“Come on, padawan.”
Draping an arm around his apprentice’s shoulder, Qui-Gon led him from the memorial.
The day would surely prove to be a memorable one; for both of them.
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Wow....well, that's that...I hope you all enjoyed this ride, I know I did...
There are a couple of people I want to thank in particular, so I hope you'll all bear with me...
Shanobi, of course, for letting me use this brilliant little piece of inspiration and for all the support she's given me every step of the way...thanks, girl!
Obi-ew, I couldn't have done it without all the encouragement and support, so thanks so much...you're the best! 
Lurkalidth, for being my cheerleader, thank you so much!!!
To all of you who've taken the time to give my work a read, thank you, thank you, thank you!!! You're all such cool people, and I'm so glad you've all enjoyed what has been so much fun for me...thanks!
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Sheila
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1/8/04 6:44pm
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Great job astro. I loved the epilogue. I hope to see another story from you sometime soon, I really enjoyed this one.
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PadawanKitara
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Beautiful- but you forgot the kleenex alert 
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~Crys her eyes out, that was so sad, but happy at the same time, they only had 3 years together, but they where good ones....
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shanobi
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That was the perfect amount of mush astroanna! You did such an incredible job with this, and i'm so humbled that such a great story could come from one of my lil ole plot bunnies
You said all you needed to say in this epiloque. You showed us how much Obi has grown, and that he hasn't forgotten Luminara, and gave us a real glimpse into the relationship that developed between Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan. It was a very warm and loving apprenticeship under both of his masters.
This was a great fic and I hate to see it end. Are you planning to move on to something new, or are you possibly thinking a sequel?? Whatever your plans, I wish you luck
--Shan
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obi_ew
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Wonderful way to end it and not too mushy. I have to agree with Shan . A sequel would be nice, after all Xan is still amongst the living and I'm sure eager to get revenge.  Can't wait to see whatever you decide to do next.
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astroanna
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Sheila- Why thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
PK-  Sorry about that!!
Jenny- Thanks!
Shan- Thank you so much! I'm very pleased that you enjoyed what I did with your idea and as for what's next...I'm not really sure...
obi-ew- Thanks so much, and I couldn't have done it without you!
Well, all, I have to admit I'm not really sure what I'm going to write next, but I'll definitely keep anyone who wants to know posted...
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I missed the ending! [face_shocked]
Sorry! Like everyone else said, just the right amount of mush. I'm sure Luminara was watching wherever she happened to be. A sequel would be good - Xanatos wouldn't stayed locked up for very long...
Hope to see more from you when you can manage it, Astro!
Shaindl
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I found it again! Excellent job. I like that the dolt finally figured it out. Thanks for the story. Its been fun. (do consider a sequel.)
~Rosy
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I liked this story a lot. Thank you.
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Astroanna,
A wonderful story. You built Luminara's and Obi-wan's relationship so very well.
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astroanna
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Shaindl- Thanks so much! I'm very glad you liked it!
RRFD- Thanks! I doubt I'll do a sequel, but we'll see...I'm sure I'll keep writing and posting, though...
F-D- Thanks!
PaddyJuan- Why thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks so much, all!
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astroanna
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One last up!
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Up
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astroanna
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Why thanks for the up, FD!
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