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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/15/03 1:09pm Subject: Journey to the Present- L/M, J/J , H/L Sequel up! - Date Edited: 11/1/03 1:08pm (21 edits total) Edited By: Eowyn_Jade
	I've decided that this will be a three part story, this being the second part ^_^ DUH! Will here it is all! Hope you enjoy! Summary: Jaina, Jag, Jacen, Mara and Luke must start correcting the errors that occured in their life after palpatine was struck down. Journey to Present by Eowyn Jade Jaina awoke in a strange position. She found that her hands were numb, she was lying on them, and her feet were entangled in Jag’s who was lying next to her, a large gash on his forehead and the blood dried all down his face. Panicking she scrambled up on her knees, and cradled his head in her lap, trying to brush away thedried blood. She could see that he was still breathing so she breathed easier. All of a sudden she started noticing her surroundings. She was on Naboo…at least she thought it was Naboo. After glancing around more, she was sure it was. And they were lying in one of the corners of the throne room. She started wondering why she was here, when the memories flooded back to her. Franically looking around she saw no sign of Luke or Mara. Looking back down at Jag she saw his eyes open, and he was staring up at her with a smile. “You look beautiful.” Jaina blushed at his comment and helped him sit up. He gingerly touched the wound on his forehead and winced as he tried to get some of the blood off. Jaina snickers a bit and reached up to plant a small kiss on his lips. “Atleast you’re here…” She sighed, loking dreamily into his eyes. Sh hadn’t felt romantic in so long, and she was starting to feel the hormones acting up again, making Jag look like the cutuest thing on two feet. “Uhhuh…”Jag murmured, their lips were inches apart. “And where is here?” “I think we’re on Naboo-“ Jag cut her off my throwing himself at her, his lips laming into hers and the sweet scent of him felling her senses. She smiled and deepened the kiss, wrapping her arms around him and pulling him closer. This was what she wanted. This was what life should have been like when they got married. Not traveling through time, but waking up in each other’s presence, kissing each other good morning… They were startled out of their kiss by the doors opening near them, slapping them into reality, or close too it. Jag grabbed Jaina’s hand, pulling her deeper into the shadows of the early morning. They heard footsteps going down the long hall and saw a figure walking in the pale light. Jaina could not make out the face. Another figure appeared in the view and ran up to the first one, whispering excitedly. The two figures hugged and kept walking down the hall together. As they got closer and closer, Jaina caught snippets of the conversation and the figures on their faces were getting more and more clear. It was a young boy and girl. Well not exactly young, about 20 or 21 Jaina would guess. She squinted to make out more of their conversation, carefully shielding herself and Jag from their view. “Has mom set a date for you two yet?” “No she’s still working out the details with the Queen Mother. But Isoldor and I are going to pick out rings this afternoon.” “Who would have thought that arranged marrigies could be so…prefect!” As they left the room, Jaina finally caught a good look at their faces. She gasped and quickly covered her mouth with her hands, hoping they wouldn’t hear. They didn’t seem too and they both kept walking and finally left the room. Jag was still staing hard at where they had exited and Jaina felt her heart pounding frantically. She started tapping Jag’s shoulder, but he held up a hand for her to wait. He was obviously still trying to make out some of their conversation. But Jaina kept tapping his shoulder, causing him to finally turn around and face her, annoyed. “Jaina what!?” he hissed at her. “That was… that was…!” She couldn’t seem to get the word out of her mouth. Jag looked confused and she forced herself to calm down so that she could get the words out. “That was my mom and uncle Luke!” <>><<> Luke couldn’t quite tell where he was. He forced his eyes open, hoping that his sensed would reach out wider, but that gave him no hope. He was in a large room, a palace it looked like. It was the early morning hours with sun streaming through the windows ever so slightly. Mara and Jacen were both starting to sit up and it was clear that neither of them knew where they were either. “Well it looks like Yoda was right. We didn’t go back to our time period…” Jacen was the first to voice their thoughts. “You guys recognize any of this?” Luke stood up and looked around. He saw the foot of someone sticking out from behind a pillar on the other side of the room but Jacen’s remark pulled him back to their conversation. “This looks like the palace on Naboo…” he said. “I wonder if we didn’t leave that time period after all…” the clicking of boots was heard down the hall and they fell silent, shrinking into the shadows as to not been seen. A man, about average height, around the age of 20 walked into view. Luke didn’t know whether to chuckle or throw up when he saw the man. The 20 year old Luke Skywalker looked much different that Luke remembered himself. He had been scrawny and skinny. This Luke looked more masculine than Luke had probably ever been in his life. Luke almost shook of the idea that it WAS him. But Mara gave a small snort behind him and held in her laughed, confirming that she too knew it was Luke. Luke watched in astonishment as his younger self kept walking down the halls, unaware of the spies around him. A young girl ran up to him, and Luke sucked in a quick breath and bit his lip. Leia’s young beautiful face hovered next to the Young Luke’s, and she broke out into a smile. “Guess what!?” She said smiling. “Don’t tell me that idiot actually proposed to you?” Luke heard himself say. “Leia stuck out her tounge. “Just because I have a life and you don’t doesn’t mean you have to be cruel. I happen to like Isoldor very much!” The young Luke smiled. “Just kidding sis. I’m happy for you.” They ambraced and continued walking down the hall, but the conversation soon got too faint for them to hear. Luke heard Mara snickering behind him and he turned around. “To bad I didn’t marry THAT you…” She said through her chuckles. Luke rolled his eyes and turned to Jacen, the younger man shrugging at his aunt’s comment. Let’s get out of here and figure out what we’re supposed to do…” Luke said with a sigh and stood up, lending a hand to Mara, and Jacen hoping up right beside him. He felt Mara grab his arm, measuring the muscles in it. Luke pulled away. “Cut it out Mara!” He hissed, but a small chuckle came out of his lips. “I almost looked like that when the emperor died, right after I had completed my training. You should have tried top kill me then.” <>><<> Whatcha think? EJ -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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AERYN_SUN Registered: Apr '01	Date Posted: 2/15/03 1:20pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	Well, it looks like I'm the first to review. Awesome post, Sora. can't wait more ~aeryn -----signature----- my livejournal - http://obisgirl.livejournal.com Realm of Attatchment (Obidala and Sabewan Thread) - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=27453838&brd=10304&start=27455097
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JainaJag00 Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 2/15/03 1:20pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	fun! nice postie ej, and i look fwd to seeing wat u do. especially since there's now two of them. sounds like fun. -----signature----- Jag and Jaina forever!!!!!! Look in my bio for links to my stories/viggies! http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=10145097 A Niruaun Night- J/J Coming sometime in the future: The Final Force: Lost and Solo by JJ00 and TBF!
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rhonderoo Title: Former Head Admin Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 2/15/03 1:49pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	ooh, good start Eowyn! So I'm guessing Anakin and Padme still marry and have Luke and Leia? You have me hooked! -----signature----- DT421 FYI: You don't deal with me. I deal with you. Damned right the Jedi's fire has gone out of the universe. I was the bad-ass Class C extinguisher who snuffed them. - @darthvader (Darth Vader on Twitter)
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 2/15/03 1:51pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	oh dear...it sounds as if you're going to be messing about with han and leia now...I LOVE!!!! should be very fun nice start EJ! ~TJF -----signature----- The Reason Why (prequel to FaIC/IYC): http://boards.theforce.net/Boards/message.aspx?topic=30299388 If You Call (sequel to FaIC): http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29705372/p1 http://moonlightrick.livejournal.com
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/15/03 1:55pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15 - Date Edited: 2/15/03 1:56pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Eowyn_Jade
	You're always the first AERYN_SUN ^_^ Thanks so much! hehe, thanks for reviewing JainaJag00 ! Glad you liked it! Yeah they're still married rhonderoo ^_^ Yeah! You're hooked! Awsome! Thanks TJF ^_^ Yeah this is all about Han/Leia and Mara/Luke! It's gonna be very fun to write ^_- EJ -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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Jedi_Mastre_Kris Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 2/15/03 1:57pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	yay! throws confetti ooh! can't wait for next post!! BTW- thnx for the PM, EJ!! UP! -----signature----- I am Krisaé, Loyal Handmaiden to the Crest! If evil can love, then what is evil?-Natalie Portman O\|[{}]\|o[=================) "But why is the RUM gone?"- Jack Sparrow
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/15/03 2:16pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	Confetii! YEAH! Thanks for reviewing JMK! EJ -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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Jedi_Liz Title: Former CR Lincoln NE, USA Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 2/15/03 2:24pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	thanks for the PM! A nice start! -----signature----- Current Fic: Lightswords of Fury: Special Edition - L/M Romance http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24270936/ Chapter 19 posted on 7/21/08 Coming SOON: Mara Jade of Chandrila Grove Coming SOON to SAGA Fanfic
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/15/03 4:20pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	No problem jedi_liz ^_^ Thanks for reviewing! -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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little_Skywalker Registered: Nov '02	Date Posted: 2/15/03 4:46pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	this is gonna be good. -----signature----- "never tell me the odds" -Han Solo "Sith Lords are our speciality"- Obi-Wan I was not a damsel in distress. I was a distressing damsel." -Carrie Fisher
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jagfellover Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/15/03 10:45pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	YAY! Sequel is here! Is it just me, or did it sound like Luke and Leia were getting married form Jaina and Jag's pov?! Maybe that's just me, 'cause it is late and I am tired. So great start EJ! Can't wait to see the next bit! Danielle -----signature----- Ritz Crackers Rock My World! Read my J/J fic: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8547137& "SOLO! GET YOUR DAUGHTER OFF MY SON!" I am a Jag Fel Lover because Jag Fell Over "Jag Fel was one of those people who looked good from every angle."
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/16/03 5:53am Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	Thanks little_Skywalker Thanks for reviewing jagfellover ^_^ I didn't mean for it to sound like Luke and leia were getting married...Luke says "Has mom set up a date for you two yet?" nad Leia talkes about how she's going to pick out rings with Isoldor...humm...Sorry If I lead you astray! EJ -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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jedi_jaina_solo71786 Registered: Feb '03	Date Posted: 2/18/03 12:44pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	YAY!!!!!The sequel! It's really good...so far. I hope you get more up soon! -----signature----- Jaina/Jag Shipper Come join the OFFICIAL Jaina/Jag fanlisting! http://www.geocities.com/jainajagfans/
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forceaddict Registered: Sep '02	Date Posted: 2/18/03 2:38pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	great work, not leia and isolder again, wonder what is going to happen with it this time -----signature----- Do or do not there is no try~ Master Yoda "I'd as soon as kiss a wookie" ~ Leia Member FADA
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Eowyn_Jade Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/18/03 4:51pm Subject: RE: Journey to the Present-(sequel to "Journey to the Past") Started 2/15
	Well thanks so much jedi_jaina_solo71786! I'm so glad that you liked it! hehe...that's where my evil streak will come in soon forceaddict ! Thanks for reviewing! EJ -----signature----- "You guys are like ravenous wolves." -Devin ~ Defying Gravity ~
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