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debeautimous
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1/10/05 1:19pm
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RE: Forbidden Jedi Romances -Undeniable Patrimony
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I told you this timeline has great possibilities!!
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debeautimous
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1/10/05 1:46pm
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RE: Forbidden Jedi Romances -Undeniable Patrimony
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Liam's blood boils he fights to calm himself. Deb senses she needs to back away she does so quickly. Liam storms out of the room and walks toward the waterfall in the midst of the caverns. He uses his Jedi training to calm his anger but then the first pang of grief hits him. He remembers how kind and gentle his mom had been to him. How she took care of him and only wanted the best for him even in this situation. Tears pour from his face. He just keeps walking hoping that the physicality will help ease the overwhelming sense of loss. He stares for hours at the beauty of the waterfall in front of him.
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debeautimous
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1/10/05 1:57pm
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Deb paces nervously in front of the fire she knows he need his space but she also knows he will need her. She attempts to contact him in the force and she feels his anguish. She rushes to find him. He is sitting like a stone mesmerized by the waterfall. She walks up slowly, quietly she sits next to him. His eyes are swollen from his sobs. She looks up at him with great concern and he takes her in his arms and kisses her gently at first but then with more intensity. As confused as he feels she is the one thing he is absolutely certain of.
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DamonD
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Date Posted:
1/11/05 5:18am
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RE: Forbidden Jedi Romances -Undeniable Patrimony
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Not only the timeline possibilities...but here you have a great plot device which might tempt Liam over to the Dark Side. Maybe he will, maybe he won't...that's always a good one!
More feedback needed here. I'm not going to be online all that much over the next 6 months. Send out the search parties!
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debeautimous
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1/11/05 12:45pm
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The kiss lasts a long time and soothes Liam's grief. He pulls away and takes her face in his hands. "Deb I need you! he swallows hard trying to get the rest of his thoughts out. "I need you to be my wife." Deb is overwhelmed by his vulnerability and honesty. She has felt the same way for as long as she can remember but always fought it because of the code. Now that she stood in the arms of the man she loves she realized that she is free. She answered him by throwing her arms around him tightly. Just like his father before him Liam was a master of unspoken conversations. He made sure it lasted until there was nothing left unsaid.
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debeautimous
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1/11/05 12:59pm
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OK so I love mush 
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1/11/05 4:46pm
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monicawankenobi
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I think that story kinda ok. But for my suggestion the story shouldn't be most about Liam. How about Ewa, Harrison, Natalie and ect. Be more with the other Star Wars character more.  ! Very good story but add more other Character to it. !
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debeautimous
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1/13/05 12:05pm
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Read the second one it is all about young Obi Wan...
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debeautimous
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1/13/05 12:11pm
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Liam and Deb spent the day at the waterfall. There was a sweet serenity between them. The galaxy had certainly taken a turn toward the darkside but this moment belonged to them and they were not going to waste it. The droids catered to their needs and returned them to the underground chamber when they were ready.
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1/13/05 12:30pm
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In the underground chamber they sat in front of the fire eating the meal the droids had prepared. The droids were programed to anticipate Liam's needs. The door opened and a very familiar and very old Max jumped into Liam's lap. Liam was stunned and filled with childhood memories at the same time. The fluffy animal moved slower than he used to be able to but his eyes gleamed the same. "Max! Liam exclaimed as he hugged the big fur ball. Deb was completely amused by the scene and giggled to watch her big strong Jedi play with abandon as a little boy.
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debeautimous
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1/14/05 12:30pm
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For the moment they were safe and content. Liam was so glad to see Max but it did make him miss his mother deeply. Deb held Liam close to her. She wished she could make all the hurt go away. Liam did not say a lot verbally but Deb knew him well enough to know it would take some time for him to be himself again. Once again a holographic message came up. It was Sapphira. "Liam we are all so proud of you. In a few months I will come and get you and Anne Debra to start your mission. You will have everything you need to train. You will have to learn to fight without being obvious of your Jedi powers. You will also receive new identities." Do not go to the palace for any reason. There is an Imperial governor in charge of Empyrea and we need to keep you safe. I can hardly wait to see you!" she smiled. Liam breathed a sigh of relief. He assumed the worst when he knew his mother was executed but to know that his Aunt survived flooded him with a new sense of purpose. He looked over at Deb and kissed her on the cheek. She wondered what he was thinking but didn't ask. He deserved his privacy.
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NikitaSkywalker
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1/14/05 2:37pm
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Hey Debeautimous!
*Whew* Finally caught up...but it looks good. Some interesting twists there...wonder what their new "identies" will be?? 
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1/15/05 3:21pm
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Liam was even more quiet than usual and he seemed a bit mysterious. Deb sensed he had something on his mind and he was struggling to tell her. The droids asked to see her and she went with them. When she did there was a room full of flowers and an absolutely beautiful royal Empyrean wedding dress. She was completely taken aback. Liam had written her a beautiful letter that told her he couldn't wait for her to be his wife. She had the droids help her get dressed and met Liam at the waterfall. He was standing there in his best Jedi attire smiling as she walked toward him. There was an Empyrean Holyman that performed the ceremony. Deb's hair cascaded around her and Liam had never seen her look so amazing. Her eyes sparkled as she said her vows. Besides the holyman and the droids the only other witness was Max who sat drooling at Liam's feet. It was a precious moment in Jedi history. Hope in the midst of despair.
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1/15/05 3:53pm
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At the end of the ceremony the droids played a holographic message from Empress Aurora. Her face was beaming with pride. "Yes Liam I did expect this day. I had my people watching the two of you and I knew it would be inevitable. You have too much of your father in you. Anne Debra I have watched you for a long time and I could not have hand picked a daughter in law who would be better for Liam than you. I know that your very presence in his life will make the challenges you face ahead easier. I wish you both wisdom and courage in the days ahead. Take some time for yourselves. I love you both very much and I will always be with you in spirit. Liam's tears flowed and Deb kissed them from his face as the message ended.
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debeautimous
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1/18/05 10:46am
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The droids prepared the royal chamber. It was filled with candles and flowers reminiscent of Aurora and Qui Gon's time together. Liam used the force to pick up his new bride and carry her across the threshold. Deb giggled at his gesture. She knew this would be a very special night for both of them.
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