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8/21/04 3:42pm
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RE: Like Scattered Seeds: Part I: Melona's Story~~HM/OC ~~Updated July 18
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*mutters how all the authors updated while she was away and the nshe ended up not noticing*
Oooo, i love that post, it's really.. okay, well I can't think of the word at the moment. But I loved this post a ton!
Hehe, that's funny. I've got an OC who's named Brianné.
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Handmaiden_Yane
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9/14/04 9:19pm
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RE: Like Scattered Seeds: Part I: Melona's Story~~HM/OC ~~Updated July 18
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Holé crap! I haven't updated this since July! *bites lip* I'll get back to this soon...I promise!
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9/18/04 2:04pm
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That would be nice. 
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Handmaiden_Yane
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9/30/04 5:39pm
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 It would be, wouldn't it?
I've decided to work on Melona everé Saturdé and post everé Sundé...or something like that.
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9/30/04 5:58pm
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Yeah, that sounds great, but I'll believe it when I see it. 
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10/2/04 4:32pm
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I started writing!!!!!!
Look forward to some Errian/Melona action!
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10/3/04 3:26pm
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YAY! We get a postie soon!!!
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10/4/04 9:11pm
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RE: Like Scattered Seeds: Part I: Melona's Story~~HM/OC ~~Updated July 18
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I think I've got something...let me fix the title real quick...
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10/4/04 9:13pm
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RE: Like Scattered Seeds: Part I: Melona's Story~~HM/OC ~~Updated October 4th
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So I'm late...sue me...it's not much, but it's something and it moves the story along.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
It seems so long ago. When Farisé and I were fighting over who would be the man in our dancing lessons…who would get to play Pretty Paola or Neat Nesta…or if I got to wear her pink dress this week or the next week…just petty stuff! Stuff that I would die now to get back…I was just mulling over the latest fight we had about…er…hair dye(?) when a deep, male voice interrupted my thoughts.
“Melona?”
I whirled around to see a tall, dark, handsome…Errian. I smiled. A distraction! All I wanted now was to talk with one of my best friends about pointless stuff…like sublight engines…and maybe even dance.
“Errian! It’s good to see you. I trust you enjoyed the concert?”
Errian inclined his head politely. “Very much so. You were wonderful.”
“Thank you,” I dipped into a dramatic curtsey and tossed my head. It was a childish custom between Errian and I…he the dashing prince, and me as the beautiful princess. After my curtsey, he usually bowed back and then we’d have a mock fight in which I’d thoroughly kick his butt. But this time…he just stood there, a strange look in his eyes that frightened me. I was hoping he’d say something, hoping he’d grin at me lopsidedly and ruffle my hair, but he never did.
“Want to dance, Errian? They’re playing the new jizz tune.”
I grinned, and to my great relief, he grinned back.
“All you want to do is dance,” he ribbed.
I smiled easily. “Well, why not?”
He led me out on the dance floor and we joined everyone else, dancing, laughing, out of breath…just like old times.
After the song was over, I was thirsty and Errian went to go get us some drinks. As I passed by my aunt and Errian’s mother, I nodded and smiled, and went to go sit down. They moved away and as they did so, I heard some of their conversation. “…what a nice couple…”
I shivered. Were they talking about…?
I got up from my chair and looked around desperately for Errian. There he was, coming through the crowd…he reached me and handed me my drink, which I grabbed and gulped down. Errian laughed, and tried to take it away.
“Calm down! Good thing it’s not alchoholic!”
I let him take it, and glared at him. “Why not?”
I half-turned, unpleased with the evening in general. The band was now playing a slow love ballad, which made me roll my eyes. I was about to walk away, when he took my hand.
“Will my lady dance?”
Something caught in my throat as I saw how earnest he was. Swallowing awkwardly, I allowed him to lead me back onto the dance floor. It was nice, I guess, dancing the Starry Waltz. It was a beautifully elegant dance and I loved it…but with Errian…it was new and strange…I wasn’t used to seeing my best friend this way. The dance finished way too late, and I tried to get away…wasn’t it time to go home yet? But again, he took my hand and lifted it. His lips barely grazed my fingers, and then he moved closer.
And I punched him.
“Ouch! Stars, Melona!”
“I’m sorry!” I whispered in a strangled voice, and ran.
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Knight-Ander
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Date Posted:
10/8/04 2:35pm
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Looks like Melona is all befuddled about her feelings and Errian is the poor fellow who has to pay for it. It will be interesting to see if the bumpy road of that relationship will ever be smoothed out.
Nicely done, HM_Yane.
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10/9/04 3:33pm
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And I punched him.
I love it! Melona doesn't let anybody take over her! very cool.
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Date Posted:
10/11/04 2:29pm
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RE: Like Scattered Seeds: Part I: Melona's Story~~HM/OC ~~Updated October 4th
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10/11/04 2:51pm (1 edits total)
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Dude, check out the awesome reviews my storé got:
The FanFic Newsletter
After I get Anyanka's new email address, the post should be on its way to be beta'd.
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10/15/04 7:29pm
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Congrats, H_Y. 
Hope you didn't review your own story.
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10/16/04 7:24am
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Congrats on the reviews, Yané! They were well deserved.
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