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Count The Cost (what if Amidala and Obi-Wan were married)
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Sara_Kenobi
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8/13/04 7:16pm
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RE: Count The Cost (what if Amidala and Obi-Wan were married)
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Great to see you, June. It's also wonderful to know that your hands are healing up good, too. That's great news! 
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Glad is June
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RE: Count The Cost (what if Amidala and Obi-Wan were married)
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9/17/ 03 Well mesa back. Once again I'm sorry it's taken me so long to write this. I've kind of had to push myself to get it up. So here it is.
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Boss Nass arrived at the lagoon with Bil Tim and the Royal Guard a few minutes after Richie went into the cave.
"Mesa no liken Richie go alone." Boss Nass shook his large head. Sunny (the Sun) isa heavy with sleep now. It play a little more. Then go to bed." He looked up at the sky. "But Luna (the moon) shine bright tonight. So wesa wait till Obi call us." Boss Nass noticed Kacey and Joe Joe shivering. "Tarn (the earth) isa still shiverin (cold) after Sunny go to sleep in Spring. Light a flame (fire) on rim of water. Keep boyos warm."
The tunnels wove and twisted. Sometimes they opened into large caves with several openings. It wasn’t long before Richie wasn’t stopping to question which way to go. He knew which tunnel led to Tanya. It seemed as though he and the planet were one. He was running as fast as he could when he burst into the cave of crystals. Richie tried to stop but his momentum took him straight toward Anakin and Tanya. He managed to do a leap flip at the last second. Hitting the floor with an "Oofff!"
"What the-!" Anakin bolted up. He hadn’t sensed the boy approaching. Very strange for a Jedi. Anakin did not like the feeling.
Tanya sat up shaking her head. She felt dizzy, hot and cold all at once. She noticed Richie staring at her. "What are you staring at? You look like you’ve never seen a female before."
"I haven’t." Richie blushed bright red. "That is I’ve seen pictures. It’s a lot more ... uh .. Stimulating in the flesh."
"What are you talking about?"
"Look at yourself." Richie responded his eyes and the smile on his face getting bigger by the second. For the first time he truly understood why the Gungan and Naboo watched their adolesent and older teens so closely.
"I know what I look like. Stop acting so weird. My head hurts. I don’t feel like playing guessing games with you." Tanya closed her eyes and put her fingers to her temples. All she wanted to do was focus on healing her head. Her head felt so heavy. Not opening her eyes Tanya bent her legs to her chest to lay her head on her knees. Something was very wrong. Skin was touching skin. Not cloth against skin. Tanya opened her eyes and let out a yell. Grabbing her clothes and holding them as best she could to cover herself Tanya backed away from Richie and Anakin. "How ... how did I get like this?"
Rich stood and frowned. "I wasn’t here when you got the way you are. Why don’t you ask your brother who’s no danger to you?"
Tanya looked over at Anakin. "Anakin what did you do? My God, Anakin, what did we do?"
While Tanya and Richie had been talking Anakin was getting dressed. He knew there was no having Tanya now. Anakin stood and picked up his under tunic. "Nothing." He mumbled. "Absolutely nothing."
"If we’d done nothing I wouldn’t be this way."
"You’re naked Tanya." Anakin growled. "Why can’t you say it? What’s the matter with you? Some healer you’ll make."
"What’s that suppose to mean?" Tanya asked shaking.
"Never mind."
Richie wasn’t sure what to do. He wanted to help Tanya. But how? "Tanya why don’t you just put your clothes on. We can talk about this when we get back home. They’re all worried about you and Anakin. Come to think of it, by now everyone is probably about me too."
"You 2 turn away."
Richie out of respect for Tanya did turn.
But Anakin laughed. "What the Sith does it matter? We both have seen all there is to see of you. If you dressing is all the pleasure I’m going to get tonight I don’t want to miss it."
Richie was furious. He stepped next to Anakin.. "Why don’t you wait outside for us, Anakin?"
"Why should you stay and not me?" Anakin waved his hand. "GO AWAY LITTLE BOY."
Richie felt the Force suggestion. He wasn’t sure what he felt rise in his heart. Anger? Perhaps? Except it wasn’t a negative feeling. He didn’t feel like striking out. He did at that moment feel very much like a husband. "It’s proper for me to be alone with Tanya when she’s in a - a - a" The boy searched for the right words that wouldn’t hurt Tanya. "unclothed state." That got Anakin’s eyes off of Tanya.
"Unclothed state? She most certainly is." Anakin looked at Tanya lust in his eyes.
"Didn’t you hear what I said? I said it was proper for me to stay. It’s not proper for you to see her this way. LEAVE!"
"What is it with you Naboo and your old fashioned ideas about being proper? Tell why should you stay and I leave."
"I have a right?"
"What right?"
"A husband’s right." Richie stood as tall as he could.
"A husband’s right?"
"Yes."
"Look kid," Anakin spoke very slowly. "You’re probably to young to know this. You have to be married to be a husband."
"I am."
"You am what?
"I am married."
Anakin laughed. "And who’s husband are you?"
"He’s my husband." Tanya informed her brother coming closer fully clothed.
"You have got to be kidding." Anakin tried to brush the truth he heard away.
"No, Anakin, it’s true. We were married the day you...."
"The day I what?" Tanya and Richie exchanged a meaningful look. "The day Obi-Wan’s brat cut my hand off. So you celebrated the loss of my hand by getting married. It figures." Anakin turned away.
"No Anakin it wasn’t like that at all. We-
"We what? I thought you were different. I hoped you were open to a better way. New ideas. New ways. Now I see you are just as brainwashed in the ‘Jedi Way’ as Gracie. Obedient little Jedi droids." Anakin gave Tanya and Richie a disgusted sneer. "No not droids. Droids are capable of some independent thought. No you’re more like robots."
"But, Anakin, staying true to the Jedi teachings is the best way. It is the only way for me." Tanya tried to get Anakin to listen "You thought it was the only way for you once. You’ve lost direction. Come back home and talk to Uncle Ben. He’ll help you."
"DON’T YOU GET IT? I DON’T NEED ANY HELP. THE JEDI NO LONGER EXSIST. WHY SHOULD I LISTEN TO ANY TALK OF AN ARCHAIC WAY OF LIFE? A RELIGON THAT CONSTANTLY PREACHED DENIGHAL. DON’T DO THIS. YOU CAN’T HAVE THAT. DON’T TOUCH. DON’T ENJOY. DON’T DESIER AND MOST IMPORTANTLY DON’T LOVE."
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We looked at the cloud and a smal cross formed at the top. It left as quick as it came. God is between us
and the storm. R U Sidious illustrations for Count the Cost.
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jodiwent
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Date Posted:
10/16/04 4:05pm
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Oops I missed this!
This little tid bit has wet my appetite for more.
I still want to smack Anakin silly!
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Sara_Kenobi
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Date Posted:
10/21/04 8:24pm
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I'm back in time for a very powerful post. Excellent writing, June. Anakin, I think, needs to learn to listen to people who care about him. Well done!
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Glad is June
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4/19/05 8:14pm
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At least one of my stories is still active I've really got to get back to working on my stories. Can't wait for the Episode III to come out.
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We looked at the cloud and a smal cross formed at the top. It left as quick as it came. God is between us
and the storm. R U Sidious illustrations for Count the Cost.
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4/20/05 9:47am
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Please do June! We've missed you! I'm sure you can ask a mod to help you out and unlock your other stories if you want to.
Looking forward to Episode III here too!
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The Butler
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Very long time no see! Up and up!
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"If, drunk with sight of power, we loose, / Wild tongues that have not thee in awe,
Such boastings as the Gentiles use,/ Or lesser breeds without the law,
Lord God of hosts, be with us yet,/ Lest we forget--Lest we forget."
Kipling, "Recessional"
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Glad is June
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Date Posted:
5/26/05 12:10am
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Mouse and Butler it's nice to hear from you both. I'm still here a about a half hour or so a week lurking on my own stories. Problem is I haven't had time to work on my them. When I was 20 or 30 years younger I figured life would get less complicated as I got older. Truth is it got more.
I have seen Sith 2 times. Other than reading the ROTS book that's as close as I've got to doing anything SW. I know how I want all the stories to end problem is finding the time to get there.
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