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Tenel'Ka
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4/11/00 11:06pm
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Great story so far!!! Keep going, it's just getting good!
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Senator Palpatine
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4/11/00 11:32pm
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Anakin exited his ship in front of the battered and bruised Millenium Falcon.
"I have a bad feeling about this."
He ran inside to look for Mo'bi and saw the controls had been trashed. "Sith Spit!"
But he noticed that the speeder that was kept inside was gone.
He must have used it to get away from whatever did this. I've got to find him and Jacen because whatever did this, is probably the same thing that killed Uncle Luke.
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Wampasmak
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4/11/00 11:42pm
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Everybodys heading for that planet... Great story!!
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The Jedi Princess
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4/12/00 11:19am
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Anakin closed his eyes and concentrated for a moment. He could sense Jacen, his brother was far away, but he was definately on the planet. Mo'Bi on the other hand was no where to be found. It troubled Anakin that his young cousin seem to have no force signature at all. Anakin knew that Mo'bi was in grave danger, and he had to find him and Jacen before it was to late.
Anakin was glad that his ship had a cloaking device. He needed to move with as much stealth as possible, if he to were caught that would not help his brother at all.
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Mara and Jacen were on the move. Jacen stopped and closed his eyes. Mara saw this and asked, "What is it?"
Jacen looked confused, "Anakin is here. Something is wrong."
Mara's eyes grew wide, "Mo'bi?" Closing her eyes she desperately looked for her son's signature in the force...and did not find it.
She looked at Jacen, "Something has happened to Mo'bi."
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TK-667
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4/12/00 11:39am
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Great job Jedi Princes and Senator Palpatine! Keep it up, I need more!
Skywalker/Solo family reunion on this mystery planet. All spirits welcome, just bring your own beverages.
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Senator Palpatine
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4/12/00 12:55pm
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Mo'bi sat in his cage. It was cramped and cold. He was always cold in space. His Master had always requested extra blankets for him when they went on missions.
The Sith brought him food, again. And again, Mo'bi refused. He knew he couldn't eat that ood. Who knew what was in it. Arduous left it there.
Hours passed and Mo'bi couldn't beat his temptation anymore. He had to eat. He was starving. He quickly devoured one of the pieces of bread. Everything got a little blurry.
He next started on, what looked to be, Dewback stew. He took two small bites and the whole room started to spin. He started to feel groggy. He could barely move.
Darth Arduous wallked in and opened the cage. He flung Mo'bi over his right shoulder. "Welcome home, my young apprentice."
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Senator Palpatine
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4/12/00 4:16pm
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Anakin could feel his brother's presence getting stronger. He must be nearing where he...no, they were.
Who was this other person? Is it the attacker?
Anakin knew he had to reach Jacen as soon as possible.
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Mara was worried. She could barely breathe. Jacen was trying to calm her down, but it wasn't working very well.
He decided he would have to relax her himself. He placed his hand on her shoulder and she slowly began to calm down. She was breathing regularly now and hopefully, he would be able to convince her that they needed to keep moving.
They had to find whatever killed Luke, but he knew even in this relaxed state she would still be worried about Mo'bi. And that she would rather search for the answer about a living relative than an answer to one about a dead one.
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I have to find Mo'bi. I can't leave him to die like I did his father. I won't let him down. I have to save him. I have to. I don't care what Jacen says, he won't keep me from doing what I know, in my heart, is right.
[This message has been edited by Senator Palpatine (edited 04-13-2000).]
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The Jedi Princess
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4/13/00 11:35pm
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Mara and Jacen started to move again, suddenly Mara let out a choked scream, "Mo'Bi! NOOOOOOOO!"
Jacen grabbed his aunt by the shoulders and said, "Aunt Mara! What's wrong!"
Mara started to struggle, "My son! Luke's son, he is in pain. I have to get to him, I can't let it have him. I CAN'T LET IT HAVE HIM!"
Jacen held his aunt tightly and tried to reassure her, "We will find him Aunt Mara, I promise."
Mara let out another choked sob, "Don't you get it Jacen? It has Mo'Bi, it killed Luke, and I have the feeling it killed your father."
Jacen felt all the color drain from his face, "What do you mean, what about my father?"
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Senator Palpatine
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4/14/00 5:32pm
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Although he was in the next room, Mo'bi could hear Arduous's conversation with his master.
"Anakin Solo has gone to the planet trying to stop the boy from finding his master. This ptiful, little group thinks they can find us. After you have disposed of the boy, go back to Colacca and take care of the others."
"As you wish, Master."
He could hear footsteps, so he assumed the conversation was over. They were getting closer to the door. Mo'bi knew that he was going to die soon, unless he could come up with a plan.
The door opened and Darth Arduous stepped in.
"Lord Deleterious wishes for me to kill you, but I have other plans. Join me and we can take revenge on this galaxy for all the wrong it has caused."
"The Jedi are fixing the wrongs and making them right."
"Oh really, then why do the leader of the Jedi think your father was a crazy old wizard?"
"MY FATHER WASN'T CRAZY!"
"Ah yes, there are the feelings that you must show. I am offering to make you a deal, because I know that we need each other."
"What do you mean?"
"I will spare your life, if you join me."
"NEV-"
Arduous cut him off,"Hear me out. Together we could destroy Darth Deleterious and you could have revenge for your father's death. We could dissolve the Jedi Council and rule the Jedi and teach them the true meaning of the Force."
Mo'bi had to admit it wasn't that bad of an idea. WAIT!, he thought to himself. I can't, what would happen to mom? And Master Solo? They would be heartbroken.
Feel. Don't think. Trust your instincts., his father's words haunted him.
"Alright, I'll do it."
"Very good, my young apprentice."
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Senator Palpatine
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4/16/00 1:04am
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Is anyone still reading this???
Senator Palpatine
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"It's a little childish and stupid, but then again, so is highschool."
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The Jedi Princess
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4/16/00 1:57am
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Night fell, and Anakin set up camp and knelt to meditate. Anakin placed his heals underneath him and his hands on his thighs, so if he were attacked he could have his blade ignighted in a second.
Then Anakin saw a vision, it had his father and Luke in it. In the vision, Anakin saw his father succumb to a painful death. Then he saw his uncle succumb to an even worse death. In the vision, was also a figure shrouded by evil.
Anakin came out of his meditation trance confused. He knew then and there that his father's death and Luke's death were connected. And the answers were on this planet. He had to find his brother and soon, all depended on it.
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Some distance away, Jacen and Mara had also set up camp, and Jacen was also being assaulted in his trance, by the same vision.
He knew that he had to find Mo'bi before it was to late, because whoever had him, was the one who destroyed his family.
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4/16/00 8:48pm
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"The Jedi Council called you father a crazy old wizard. Why?"
"They didn't believe the Sith had come back, but now we shal punish them for their mistakes."
"Very good, Mo'bi."
"Why do you keep calling me Mo'bi? Shouldn't I get a Sith name?"
"That will come after your first successful mission."
"When will that be?"
"In several days, if you can do this mission succesfully."
"What is my mission, my master?"
"You are to go to Colacca and destroy Mara Jade Skywalker's ship, along with those of Anakin and Jacen Solo."
Mo'bi got a strange look on his face. One of sadness, confusion, and acceptance.
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The Jedi Princess
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4/18/00 9:58pm
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Jacen was keeping guard of the small camp while Mara slept. He threw another log on the fire and poked at it with a stick. He was lost in his thoughts. Who was this enemy?
His thoughts were interuppted by Mara having a nightmare, in her sleep she screamed, "NO! MO'BI, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
She sat straight up and looked around confused. Jacen went to his aunt and sat next to her, "are you all right?"
Mara tried to control her eratic breathing and shook her head, when she her panic was gone she said slowly, "Luke came to me in a dream. He told me to save our son."
Jacen felt his blood run cold, "From what?"
Mara looked at Jacen and replied, "The dark side."
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Senator Palpatine
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4/19/00 6:17pm
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"But Master, I can't hurt the people I love," Mo'bi said.
"If you're to be a Sith, you love no one."
"Yes Master," Mo'bi said with a disappointed look on his face.
"After we have completed our missions on Colacca, we will go to Coruscant and show the Jedi Council the true nature of the Force."
"Our? Missions?" Mo'bi was confused. His Master had a mission too?
"Yes, I have a mission as well."
"What is it Master?"
"That is none of your concern."
"Yes Master,"Mo'bi was looking at his feet, too embarassed by all of his mistakes to look at his new master.
Darth Arduous was right, Mo'bi thought to himself, in the beginning when he had told me I would learn the truth soon enough. I have. The Jedi had done nothing for him. If the Council had listened to my father, maybe he and Uncle Han would still be alive, but they hadn't. Then they said he could no longer have a master and Master Solo didn't even fight to keep him, that had hurt the most. I understand now what dad meant by,"Many of the tuths we cling to depend greatly upon our point of view."
[This message has been edited by Senator Palpatine (edited 04-19-2000).]
[This message has been edited by Senator Palpatine (edited 04-19-2000).]
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The Jedi Princess
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Date Posted:
4/21/00 11:38pm
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Leia Organa Solo stood outside the Jedi Council Chamber and paced back and forth. Never had she been so nervous to face the order whos rebirth was, in part, due to her brother. But times had changed and the Jedi Council was now a group of conniving back stabbers. It was nothing like the council that Yoda sat on in the days of Qui-Gon Jinn. This council had no compassion.
Finally the door opened and Danni stood there. She smiled at Leia and motioned for her to step inside. Kerph Stal looked at Leia with contempt, "Well, Leia, I see you have come before us. Not because you share the same mystic ideas that your brother had I hope."
Leia bit back a cutting remark and said, "I have come before you on behalf of my sons."
At the mention of Leia's sons, Danni's eyes grew wide, "What about them Leia?"
Leia looked at Danni and said, "Jacen is missing. Mo'bi took the Millenium Falcon to go and search for him and..."
One of the council members looked indignant, "The apprentice went to search for the Master. He must be found immediatly and dealt with."
Leia did not like the sound of that, "Anakin went after them both."
Through all of this Kerph Stal looked unpreturbed, "it is of no concern to us. Jacen went after answers to questions that never existed."
Leia took a deep breath, "I come before you to ask the Jedi for help in finding my family."
Kerph snorted, "Leia, we do not have time to run off on mystic crazed crusades like your sons have."
It looked like the council leader was about to dismiss her when Danni spoke up, "We will take it to a vote."
[This message has been edited by The Jedi Princess (edited 04-21-2000).]
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