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Into the Mouth of Madness
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Jedi-Green8
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4/16/00 3:21am
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Hey Milan!
I haven't read any of your fic yet (the computer has been at the fixers) but I'll read it soon.
seeya!
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Jane Jinn
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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4/16/00 1:54pm
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jane jinn...
well...all the posts of the story is here and ....yeah! anyway everything will be explained in time.
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light_sabe_r
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Excellent post!
Looking forward to here more. It was great to show angst from Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan just snapping like that.
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light_sabe_r
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Excellent post!
Looking forward to here more. It was great to show angst from Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan just snapping like that.
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Jedi-Green8
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4/20/00 8:19am
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Jedi-Green8 enters to check his friends thread again, see's much has changed and proceeds to record all the bits that are new to him
good job Milan!
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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4/21/00 12:16am
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***Checks up on replies on story. Excitment fills Jedi Milan-Kenobi when she Jedi Green8 actually visited***
Hi everyone! Well after being scared off by Jane Jinn (Just joking) I have come back from a Writing Class with a new passion of getting this story up to speed!
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It's so cold. Why is it so cold? Where am I? Qui-Gon? Are you there? Please help me! Don't leave me alone! Please Qui-Gon! Don't let them near me. I promise I'll be a better Padawan! Please Qui-Gon help me! Don't leave me alone! Please!
Qui-Gon Jinn tried to push Obi-Wan's pleads out of his mind. Had he actually done the autrocities that Obi-Wan had implied? Waves of powerful painful emotions hit Qui-Gon hard. He loved Obi-Wan as a son...Obi-Wan knew that.
Snap out of it...Obi-Wan will come back to you. You hope. Qui-Gon had never felt so much despair. He badly wanted to help Portia cure Obi-Wan...of what ever he did had. But until he could help.
Qui-Gon had to sit and wait.
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I can't believe this is happening. Portia moaned inwardly. She sat across the room from Obi-Wan who had became somewhat of a recluse after he broke out. "How did you?"
"Escape." He whispered. "The force can be a powerful ally against the weak minded." Portia nodded in understanding. "You nod as a understanding. But do you truely understand?"
Those words hit Portia like a sabe running her through. "What do you mean by that Obi-Wan?"
"You don't think I was in the right." He pointed out. "You thought me confronting Qui-Gon was wrong. I felt it to be right."
Portia clinched her fist. She wasn't upset with him...she couldn't be. But it was just the whole concept in itself. "I need to tell you something Obi-Wan."
"What can you possibly tell me?" Obi-Wan asked.
"The truth about Qui-Gon."
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light_sabe_r
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Ooooh!
What is this truth? Is she just explaining what we know as the truth or is she going to tell him something else?
Don't leave me in suspense.
MORE PLEASE!
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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Stay tuned...the truth will be revealed.
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HimitsuNo
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this is getting interesting, and im going to keep reading.
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-HimitsuNo
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Jane Jinn
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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4/22/00 1:29am
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The truth? He shook his head in fury and fear. He knew the truth, Qui-Gon betrayed him. It was simple and plain as that. Obi-Wan often wondered if this was destined to happen. But for some odd reason, he wanted to trust her. Very badly, he needed someone to confide in, or he felt lost. Everyday was a constant struggle not to give in to his hate. "What is it?"
"He wasn't there Obi-Wan." Portia said cautiously. Obi-Wan gave an empty stare, not knowing how to comprehend the truth. No! She was lying! He saw him there. He saw him give permision. Nononono.
"No!" He screamed, not in anger, but in fear. Qui-Gon was there! He couldn't dream that. "Portia he was there!" Portia walked over to Obi-Wan. Her grey eyes showed sympathy to what Obi-Wan was going through. But did she really understand? She had been in his place before.
"Obi-Wan." She began. Obi-Wan saw the pain that filled her. Was it pain for him? Or for Qui-Gon? Did she work for him? For the lab? Was he going to go back? Tears began to flow from Obi-Wan. He once would try to stop the tears. But not any longer. Portia reached for Obi-Wan but he slapped her hand away before she could give a somewhat comforting embrace.
"Get out of here." He whimpered. "I thought I could trust you Portia."
Portia gave a look as if she was stabbed through the heart. "You can trust me." Obi-Wan gave a cold hearted look at her. How could she help him? He had been through so much. "Don't shut me out now." She pleaded.
"Leave." Obi-Wan repeated. His tears began to flow more heavy. "Please...just go." Portia, with a heavy heart got up and walked out of the room. Obi-Wan wrapped his arms around his knees and began to rock himself to sleep.
"What's happening to me?"
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Jane Jinn
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That's it, he's cracked up.
I can't help but feel guilty as one of the people who love to beat him within an inch of his life...
<sigh>
Don't give up on him too easy Portia! Get your butt back in there!
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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As Portia closed the door behind her she heard Obi-Wan sliently weep. She wanted so badly to turn around and go back in. It was best not to. She thought. He has lost her trust, at least that is what he thinks. Trying desprately not to begin to cry herself she hurried out of the pshyciatric ward and turned down the dark halls of the temple.
How was she going to gain his trust again? The same exact question haunted her mind repeatedly as she made her way to her quarters. Wallowing in her own emotions, it wasn't that much of a surprise she ran head on with someone. They both took a spill on the floor. "I'm sorry." The person had a female voice.
Portia rubbed her head and looked up to the female. It looked sort of anphibious. "It was my fault I should have watched where I was going." The other helped Portia up and brushed her off.
"Are you new at the temple?" The girl asked. Portia shook her head 'yes.' "Well! My name is Bant." The girl bowed to Portia as she did the same to her.
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