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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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Bant unconciously twisted at the bottom of her tunic. "He wants you to come in with Qui-Gon, Portia." Portia looked to Qui-Gon and back to Bant. "Obi-Wan feels if you are in the room with him, he will be safe."
Portia sighed, she was worried about this. Qui-Gon's expressions hadn't changed so she just came out and asked him. "Do you have a problem with me going in there with you?"
Qui-Gon shook his head. "No. If that is what he wants that is what he should recieve." Qui-Gon walked up to the door and rested his head for a long moment. He had not actually spoken with his padawan since they had found him. How would this go? Would it all work out? He felt Portia's hand on his shoulder.
"It will be okay Qui-Gon." Portia tried to reassure him, and herself. The truth was, Portia didn't know how he would react, maybe it was a good thing she was going in with him. Qui-Gon stood up tall and headed inside the room.
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Obi-Wan kept a hard glaze as he sensed Qui-Gon's presence in the room. He couldn't make himself look at his master. How would he say things to him? How would Qui-Gon reply? Obi-Wan obviously had no idea about how things were going to go here. Obi-Wan nervously looked up to Qui-Gon then looked to the ground again. He was as intimidated as a small child of Qui-Gon's size. He tried to speak but all that could come out was a soft. "Hi..."
Qui-Gon's heart wrenched as he saw his Padawan. It was almost as if Obi-Wan had turned back into a small child. "Hello Obi-Wan." Qui-Gon sat in the other corner of the room, not to upset his padawan.
For a long moment they just stared at eachother. Exchanging silent words that only the two of them could understand. The sorrow threatend to over flow within Qui-Gon's eyes; and the fear threatened to eat Obi-Wan alive. Obi-Wan choked back tears and put his head in his hands. There was obviously something said that had upset or either surprised Obi-Wan.
Qui-Gon stared at his hands, not knowing what to say. He thought he had this planed out. But obviously wrong. All he could think of to say was. "I'm sorry my Padawan." Feeling defeated in his heart Qui-Gon stood up slowly and began to walk to the door.
No! Obi-Wan's heart cried. Portia was speaking the truth, so was Bant! There was no logic in Qui-Gon actually doing that. No! Somehow...it now made some kind of sense. "Ma...Master?" Obi-Wan stood to face his master who had turned with Obi-Wan's call. Qui-Gon nooded faintly and Obi-Wan continued. "B..Bant said that you went searching for me. Is it true?"
Qui-Gon frowned inwardly. He saw the amount of pain that subsided in Obi-Wan's heart. "Yes...as soon as I realized you were missing I went looking for you. I didn't stop until I found you." Tears were streaming down Obi-Wan's face now. Not in sorrow...but in happiness.
"Yo..You mean you weren't in the lab." Qui-Gon shook his head 'no' in response. "And you would have stoped them if you were there?" Qui-Gon shook his head 'yes.' Obi-Wan sobbed harder. His master was speaking the truth. He would have done that. Obi-Wan looked to Portia then to Qui-Gon. He walked up slowly to Qui-Gon. "I'm sorry." Obi-Wan quickly hugged his master and moistend Qui-Gon's tunic with his tears.
"No Padawan I'm sorry." Qui-Gon rubbed Obi-Wan's hair as he held Obi-Wan close to him. He wasn't going to let his Jedi ego get the best of his Padawan. Qui-Gon looked up to see Portia walk out the door. He mouthed a 'thank you,' and Portia noded in response and shut the door. Qui-Gon held his Padawan and whispered softly to him. "Rest now...the pain is over."
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Jane Jinn
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Kit'
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More and UP!!!!!
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HimitsuNo
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*A smile crosses himitsuno's face* well wrote milan, well wrote. Oh milan I wanted to talk to you IM me next chance you get and also everyone I am going to try to write my own Fan Fic, its been a while since I did so but in the past people have enjoy'd em so il tell you all when I start.
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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More is coming....Just working out a few kinks in the story. cool.gif
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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Well for right now...this is the last post for this story. This is a begining of a four (or five) parter. I would like to thank Jane Jinn, Himitsuno, ZfileB, AngelBoy, Kit, and everyone else who took there time out to read this story. This is just the begining so...more is to come. cool.gif :razz:
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Jedi Milan-Kenobi
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Most apologizes. My <censored> computer killed my last post and well...it will be up asap. I promise.
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More! I'm suffering from fanfic deprevation!! Okay, so I'm a bit overdramatic (as always) but, more fanfic! This is really good.
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If she could only begin to know how much I care for her. Would she stay with me? Or would she go away? I can't make her stay. I know I want her to stay. But I must continue to repair the bond between Qui-Gon and myself. I can tell her....can't I?
Obi-Wan shook his head slowly. He could, it would work though. But should he anyway. It couldn't hurt...yes it could. Things like that do hurt. It would for him and her. He bit his lip unconciously at the inner struggle that was being fought within him. He could ask for Qui-Gon's advice. NO...won't go to that. Can't...won't. Force! Why can't I make up my mind?? I love her! I know that! But...
Now Obi-Wan was really giving himself a headache.
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Reader's Poll! Should Obi:
A. Get to his senses
B. Forget the whole thing
C. Go get Qui-Gon's advice
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You know what I think. :razz:
Keep it up. When does poor Obi go home?
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Oh, it seems to me, I have some difficulties in making up my mind... Isn't it A, or B, or C at last? I'm thinking... And now - just one thing: this story has a VERY nice and suitable name! It's outstanding.
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HealerLeona
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Sith! I seemed to have lost this thread for awhile. Sorry.
But it was such a pleasure to catch up with so many posts.
Wonderful story. Now I promise to keep track of it.
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HimitsuNo
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Obi-wan should get to his sences, it will make a strong bond between those two and will make for a more interesting story later if something should happen to one of them because the other would go nuts and rampage untill they get to who hurt them. ((Just like we talked about remember milan?))
Keep it up,
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Well. It couldn't last forever. Portia sighed heavily, she knew it would come to an end...and she would have to leave. She came into the all to familiar entrance to Obi-Wan's padded cell. And gave a quiet knock. A voice coming from the inside replied. "Enter."
As Portia entered the room she gave a smile to Obi-Wan. "Well I have come bearing good news." Obi-Wan raised his eyebrow in reply. "You are free, you can get out of this cell." He smiled furiously and sat up.
Obi-Wan walked over to Portia and gave her a hug. But he didn't want to let go. And the way that Portia was holding onto the moment...neither did she. They just stood there silently. He whispered into her hair a soft. "Thank you." Portia looked back up to Obi-Wan and traced his cheek bone with her fingers.
Portia stared at him silently, not knowing what to say. It was over...it was truely over. "I...I..." Obi-Wan leaned over and gave her a kiss. That turned her into five diffrent forms of goo. Portia pulled away from him and finished what she was going to say. "I love you." He smiled and laughed. "What?"
"You took the words right out of my mouth." He hugged her again. "Well...I am going to my quarters and taking a shower. I don't smell well." Portia smiled.
"Well my quarters are right next to yours. I'll walk you." They both walked out of room and niether of them never thought of looking back.
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Portia entered her quarters in some what of a rush. But as she shut the door her alert system switched on immediately. Someone was in here, and it wasn't Obi-Wan. Turning she caught the smell of a Boonta Light. "I told you to leave Obi-Wan alone."
"I thought I told you not to help him?" The man retorted. "I don't deal well with people who disobey me." Portia, out of the corner of her eye saw another man come out of the shadows of the room. "Lock the door."
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Obi-Wan pulled on a new tunic and smelled it with a new respect for clean clothing. He walked over to his sleeping couch and pulled on his boots. As he did he heard a scream coming from...Portia's room. In a flash he jumped out of the room and began pounding on Portia's door. "Portia!"
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