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Lightsaber02
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4/7/00 11:25pm
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Add on story involving you
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Herman Snerd
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ok, we can be in one of the many rooms of the temple...here are the rules.
1) state yourcharacter name and what you are doing in the temple...we can leave the temple and take the adventure anywhere, just add on.
2)try to keep it clean.
otherwise, just add on, and put yourself in as you go so here i go
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Name: Indra Stawa-Padawan of Obi-Wan Kenobi (after anakin).
What and where i am in the temple: I am going into one of the many training rooms, Master Obi-Wan will be there shortly.
*****(now to begin the story)
Indra walked into the room. She looked around, some of the past students were there, but they didnt notice her and so they left. She began to meditate.
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Now someone just walk into the room or something, and talk to me. Sith are welcome too, w/out you, us jedi would have NOTHING to do, may the force be with you.
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Nomi Jade
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4/8/00 12:16am
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Young Jedi Kaiba walked into the training room where a girl was meditating. She sat down on the polished floor near her. They sat in peaceful silecnce for a few minutes.
" Hey," Kaiba finally sputtered out when the girl opened her eyes. " I'm Kaiba."
" I'm Indra. Are you new to the temple?"
" Yes. I am Jedi Master Adi Gallia's new Padawan Learner."
The two got up and looked out at the sun setting on Coruscant.
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" The Sith have risen again, I sense it," Kaiba heard Master Yoda's voice say as she walked past the Jedi Counsil doors to the hall. " We must investigate."
Kaiba saw Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi walk into the chamber after being invited in.
" I will volunteer to go investigate the Sith, with my Padawan Learner," he said.
Yoda spoke up," Another pair must join you. Master Adi Gallia, and her apprentice, Kaiba Clouddrifter. Assist you they shall."
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light_sabe_r
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4/8/00 1:50am
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Obi-Wan left the Chamber followed closely by Adi Gallia, Surpised that both their Padawans were waiting outside, they explained the situation.
"Cool," Indra replied, Obi-Wan gave her a look.
"Come there is a ship waiting," Adi motioned for them to follow her down the hall into the room of a thousand fountains.
Suddenly, a young female Knight started running towards them. "Master Gallia!" She cried.
"You're back early from Dantooine, Spen-Mal?" Adi replied with a hint of worry, tossing part of her headress over her shoulders.
The woman's eyes and throught twitched as she tried to form the words, but it looked like she was exaughsted. "Mission- wrong... lost... Sith."
The group's ears pricked up at the sound of the word. Obi-Wan questioned her. "Where?!" he demanded.
The knight didn't answer, only slumped to the floor, Only then did Kalbia notice a large stain of blood stretching accross Spen-Mal's tunic.
"Master!" She cried, trying to sit the fallen knight up, the knight's shoulder length Bob covered her face.
"Dammit!" Obi-Wan exclaimed. "She knows something about the Sith, we'll have to question her!"
Ai pulled something off her belt and placed it under the Spen-Mal's nose, She Coughed and opened her eyes.
"What about the Sith?" Adi asked gently, using the force to try and stop the bleeding.
"Killed... knight... Found Hideout... know who I am..."
Obi-Wan turned to Ingra "Go get a healer and get them up here immeadiatly!"
"Yes Master."
Ingra raced off down the hall to get help.
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Taryn
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A small girl stood blindfolded before a massive wookie. As the Wookie spoke in his own tounge, Taryn understood.
"Remember, Rasharooko, to control the Force, you must let it control you." the Wookie said to her.
"I do not understand, Master Krythraar."
"Let yourself go. Relax in the flow."
The words had a hypnotic affect on the girl, and she soon felt her hands begin to tingle with the power of the Force.
Suddenly, she felt something. Alarm. Something out of the ordinary was happening. Something Tari was involved in.
The Wookie threw a fruit in front of the girl, who swung her practice saber, and missed completely.
"Rahsarooko, you must break this connection with your sister. It could someday destroy you, and I don't want to see that happen. Now, attention on the lesson."
"Yes, Master."
Taryn wanted to obey Krythraar, but she knows it will not be easy to break a connection she had had since before birth.
When the student twice her size entered the training arena, Taryn fought well, but was distracted, and recieved many burns and bruises.
"I hope you learn from this, Rasha. A Jedi must not think, but feel and do. Now, go to the healers. Get healed up. You have until after the evening meal to yourself, then return to me, ready to work and learn, and leave your sister behind."
"Yes, Master Krythraar."
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Taryn
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Oh, you wanted an intro, didn't you?
I am Taryn. My twin sister and I are training at the Temple, Tari to be a healer, and I'm training to be a Jedi Knight.
I study under the Wookie Master Krythraar, who calls me Rasharooko, because of my size. It is the name of a small wookie hero from his villiage.
At the begining of the post above, I'm in a training session with Master Krythraar, but am distracted because the connection with my sister, who just saw the wounded Jedi.
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Omega.0
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I am of the species called Defel. Also known as Wraith. I am the pilot of the ship, Omega's Whisper, that is waiting for the Jedi.
*looks at wrist chrono*
"Aren't Jedi usually punctual, Yanick?" I ask my co-pilot.
"Be patient, Captain. They will be here. Sometimes things come up."
"And sometimes, I could kill you for how calm you always are. Are you sure you're not one of THEM?"
Yanick smiles and shakes his head.
"They will arrive in their own time."
"When they do, they better just adjust to the ultraviolet lighting in here. If there is one complaint, it goes off, and whatever consequences occur of them not seing me is their problem, understand?"
"Yes, sir. I don't think it will be a problem, though. Yedi adapt to the situation, not complain about lights. But if they do, I will do as ordered."
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Lightsaber02
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4/8/00 4:06pm
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Indra ran down the temple halls.
"TARI, TARI." she screamed.
"What is it Indra?" said the small girl coming out of one of the rooms.
"Hurry, follow me. One of the Masters has a clue to help us unwravel the mystery of the sith, and she is dying, we need you to help."
And with that the two bolted back.
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TheLastApocalypse
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I'm Kaishi, Naboo of course, a thirteen year old Jedi Knight, just out of Padawanhood who fights best with a quarterstaff, can't stand being hot, and loves to be in very high places, which of course gets me in deep trouble with the Council once every couple of weeks. I am currently ascending the topmost spire of the Senate building.
Kaishi ascende quickly, paying no heed to the winds that tore at her silken robes. Her hair was tied back with a brilliant blue silk scarf, and her eyes were masked behind a strip of similar fabric. It was the first time Kashi had ascended the Senate, but she blind-folded herself for a bit of a challenge.
She reached out with the Force, feeling the grey tiles of weather-beaten metal, then took a leap. Somehow though, she miscalculated and her fingertips barely grasped the metal ledge. She dangled for scant few seconds over a drop that could surely killed her, but pulled herself up onto the broad ledge.
She hiked her robes up and dashed the last few yards to the point of the spire, and ripping of her blindfold, she cast her gaze over the great City.
She spent little time dawdling on the the summit; the sun was setting on the glittering horizon and cold rapidly descended upon the City.
Kaishi tied her blue scarf firmly to the spire, then rapidly descended the massive metal structure in the dimming twilight.
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TheLastApocalypse
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People scattered as Kaishi leapt down onto the main level of the city, her robes fluttering and her long black hair streaming.
She strode confidently through the parting crowds ignoring the stares, her boots clicking on the worn pavements.
Suddenly, she halted midstep. Slowly, very slowly, her head turned to the right, until she peered down a side street. Kaishi turned on her heel and dashed into the alley, her voluminous blue skirts streaming out behind her.
Quickly, the crowds fell back into their continuous motion, and Kaishi was forgotten, at least for the moment.
One man stood at the entrance to the alley, in the middle of the street, staring after the beautiful woman who had so quickly vanished into the gloom of a dirty, silent alley.
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Taryn
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When Taryn reached the Healers, she could tell her sister was not there.
"What happened?" a healer asked the girl.
"Distracted durring a duel." she answered. "Do you know where Tari is?" she asked, lying down on a bunk.
"No. She is on free time right now. Now, be still so I can heal you up."
Meanwhile...
Tari rounded a corner and saw the Jedi lying on the floor. She runs over to the Jedi and looks her over, her heart speeding up.
'How can I do this? I've never healed anyone so bad.' she thought to herself. Obi-Wan must have senced her doubt, for he then spoke to the girl.
"Trust the Force, young healer."
Tari sat on the floor next to the dying Jedi and, gently grasping her hands, called out for the Force. She concentrated on finding the main source of the wound, and sent the Force into the body, helping it to heal.
Before she knew it, the Jedi opened her eyes. Tari had done it! She saved the life of one of the Jedi! And she collapsed onto the floor from the effort.
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Wampasmak
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My designation is VT-16. My masters often call me "VeeTee". I am a multi-purpose droid assigned to the Jedi Temple. My current assignment is to read all news releases, spy reports, and any other information I can find on the Sith. My primary goal is to locate them, but all information is valuable. I am a top of the line droid, with a basic astromech torso and head, repulserlifts instead of clumsy legs and treads, and a vocabulater instead of a crude binary communication device.
I was attached to the temples surveillance systems when I learned something most suprising. The Jedi Spen-Mal had returned from her mission to Dantooine. Quite early, too. As I listened to the brief diologue, I heard the word "Sith" repeated several times.
There was new information to be had! that was all I needed to here. I followed my proggraming and floated at top speed toward the corrider where the Jedi was.
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TheLastApocalypse
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*Apoc drop kicks the thread to the top*
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4/10/00 6:58pm
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We are the Mandelorians, and we have been waiting a very long time to destroy you all Jedi scum. A Dark Lord will apear soon and...
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Taryn
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As soon as Taryn was completely healed, she sought out her dear sister. She called out through the Force and followed where it led her. She was suprised to find herself near the Jedi Council room, and as she rounded a corner, she saw Tari lying on the floor.
"Tari!" she said, running toward her sister.
To her relief, Tari sat up.
"I'm okay. Just exhausted."
"I need to talk to you, Tari."
But her sister's attention was on the newly healed Jedi.
"You are better now." she told the Jedi. "I think I'll leave now. I'm not sure I want to hear this information."
The sisters left the area, certain that things will end up good in the end, and they soon arrived at the Room of a Thousand Waterfalls.
"What did you want to talk about, sis?" Tari asked.
"While in my lessons this morning, I felt your alarm. It distracted me, and I was badly beaten in five rounds of dueling. Master Krythraar wants me to break my connection with you."
"What? Why?"
"He feels it will put me in danger, and after this morning, I can't argue with that."
"But, how can we do that? We've had each other since long before the orphan home."
"I know. I don't know if we can do what the wook wants. I feel like he wants me to lose the only tie to the past."
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TheLastApocalypse
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"Kané? Kané, you called?" asked Kaishi as she knelt in the narrow doorway in the dark alley.
"Yes, Kai, I called." An old woman's voice floated from the interior of the darkened shop, "I've found the robe you asked for."
"You have? Oh, thank you!" Kai jumped up from the doorway, nearly hitting her head on the low, Naboo-style rafters.
Kané, a gaunt old woman dressed in swirling skirts identical to Kai's, picked up a package wrapped in shining white silk off the marble counter.
Kaishi took the bundle with a deep bow, and thanked the old woman.
"Kané, how can I repay you? My latest exploit has cost me my month's pocket money!" Kai fretted.
"Oh, don't worry! Anything to get back at those stodgy old Masters is good in my book!" Kané's face split into a wide grin, her eyes disapearing among the loose folds of her tanned skin.
"Thank you, oh thank you!" said Kaishi, bowing again.
She knelt in the doorway and bowed again, then vanished into the shadowy alley.
Kané slid shut the screen and flicked the lightswitch. The room lit up, revealing racks of gleaming silk robes in every color of the spectrum, in literally thousands of shapes and sizes. Kané sank to the floor, kneeling. She cast her powerful gaze about the room, taking in the stunning beauty that never failed to make her happy.
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Wampasmak
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VT-16 entered the room where the Jedi Spen-Mal had been taken after being treated. He noted with disappointment that she was unconscious. As he prepared to leave, Master Yoda addressed him suddenly.
"Ah, VT-16, thought you would come, I did." He sighed,"Tapping into the surveillance systems again, you have."
"I am sorry, Master, but if you wish me to.."
"Apologize, you need not, Veetee. You are programmed to seek information on the Sith. And no better place to hear of them, there is." He looked around the small room.
Adi Gallia spoke up, "I'm sorry, but Spen-Mal is in no condition to answer questions at this time. Return to your post, Veetee."
As the droid turned, Yoda said, "And when you return, send a message to the ship Omegas Whisper at docking platform 0571. Late, its passengers shall be."
"Master, has there been Sith activity on Dantooine?"
"Unfortunetly, yes." He said, bowing his head. "And more there will be, I fear."
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