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Omega.0
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4/12/00 1:59am
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Yanick entered a room where Omega spoke to another of his kind.
"You know what is expected of you. I suggest we use...What is it, Yanick?" Omega demands.
"Sir, incoming message."
Omega walked to the command station console and turned on the comm.
"Omega's Whisper here. What do you want?"
"I am informing you that the Jedi will be delayed."
"I figured that already. I suppose I have no choice but to wait."
"An emergency came up. They will be along when..."
Omega turned off the comm and addressed his fellow Defel.
"Carry out your orders."
"Yes, Omega."
With that, the Defel left the ultra-violet light of the Whisper into the invisibility the normal lighting in the Temple allowed.
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Wampasmak
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4/13/00 1:31am
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Sorry, but Veetee just can't stand to see this thread on page 3.
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Taryn
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4/13/00 2:01am
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Taryn and Krythraar traveled in silence along a walkway outside the Temple. They stopped at a place where Taryn saw several beams that spanned the distance to the next building, several stories up.
"Now, Rahsa, are you prepared to concentrate on the Living Force, and not on your twin?" Krythraar asked.
"Yes, Master Krythraar."
"The danger here is real. If there is one bit of doubt, one moment of distraction, you may die."
Krythraar saw the determination in the girl's face, and continued.
"Climb out onto the beams, Rahsarooko, and concentrate in the Force. This exersise is to test both your balance, as well as your connection to the Force."
Taryn did as she was told, and, this time, she was ready for the attack. Blaster bolts shot out from every direction, and Taryn jumped, deflected, and dodged them, all the while, staying on the beams, her footing not slipping once. Finally, the attack stopped, and Taryn stood, feeling that more was to come.
From somewhere above, another being came down upon her, his eyes flashing with hatred. He moved swiftly, thrusting his saber toward Taryn, but she managed to leap over him. Before she landed, she felt the Force grab a hold on her as Krythraar pulled her back toward the Temple. When she was back on the ground, she looked back at the attacker, but he was already gone.
"Your skills are improving, Rasha, but I felt you were outmatched by that being."
"Do you know who that was, Master?"
"Yes. Come. We must talk."
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light_sabe_r
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4/13/00 7:01am
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Spen-Mal could hear the voices, but couldn't make any sense of them.
Suddenly she heard something that made her sit up straight.
"...Sith...."
Spen-Mal nearly catapaulted herself out of her bed. "Where are they?!!!!" She demanded.
The eyes of all in the room suddenly turned to her. She took note of who was there, Obi-Kenobi, Master Gallia, Master Yoda and the security droid Vee-Tee.
"Hoping answer that you could." the little Jedi master replied to her demand. Spen-Mal layed back down on her pillow and brushed a strand of her shoulder length hair out of her eyes.
"Jori and myself had dissolved the conflict early, so we were on our way home when we recieved a distress call from a ship stranded twelve light years from the nearest system."
"So it wasn't on Dantooine." Obi-Wan noted, stroking his chin. Spen-Mal shook her head.
I left Jori there! Tears started to well in her eyes.
"Continue you must!" Yoda commanded at the sight of the young Knight. "Grave danger this is!"
Spen-Mal felt like she was swallowing her lip. Her voice dissappered.
Adi Gallia placed a hand on the young woman's forehead. "Tell us when you are ready."
Spen-Mal nodded and nodded asleep.
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Wampasmak
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4/13/00 1:20pm
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Ok, enough talk. We need a threat here.
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TheLastApocalypse
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4/13/00 4:50pm
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Kaishi vanished into her messy chambers and emerged again swathed in the beautiful new robe Kané had gotten for her.
Rather than a traditional white blouse, she wore a gleaming black one with rainbow corals painted over it. It's sleeves hung nearly to the floor, fish darting over them as though they were alive.
The skirt was brilliant green with waves crashing along the hem and a dragon curling around Kaishi's hips. She spun and let the yards of silk sweep around her, just barely brushing the marble floor.
She gave a giggle of glee. But then she halted very suddenly.
Footsteps echoed down the corridor. They approached rapidly; with them came bad news, or so Kaishi sensed. The person-- whoever it was-- was in great distress.
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I've been kinda focusing on my own character for awhile, so somebody take this away. I'll lurk for awhile and let you people do what you like with Kaishi. Just don't kill her, that's my job...
[This message has been edited by TheLastApocalypse (edited 04-14-2000).]
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Wampasmak
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4/13/00 5:34pm
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Enter the BADGUY! Please!
[This message has been edited by Wampasmak (edited 04-13-2000).]
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Taryn
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4/14/00 2:02am
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Taryn followed the Wookie to a place he felt safest, which concerned the girl. Krythraar seemed to have a lot on his mind, but he looked at the girl and spoke gently.
"You want to know, don't you? That was once a student of mine. He was strong in the Force, but had an anger for me. I'm sure you understand why. My methods are hard, but they work. I thought I'd gotten him to rid himself of anger, but I was mistaken. I didn't even see the anger until he left. I fear he wishes to harm me any way he can, even through my students.
"Rahsarooko, you are my best student. And as such, he might go after you to get to me. Be intune to the Force at all times. If you feel his presence again, contact me at once."
"Master Krythraar, I heard talk about Sith. Did he become one of them?"
"I don't know, Rasha. If he did, there is trouble much closer then we thought."
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Miana Kenobi
Title: Pacific Region RSA
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4/14/00 12:36pm
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hey all! This is a great idea!
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Character: Ellia Monas (from my fan fic "The 6th Bodyguard") Jedi Knight, friend of Obi-Wan's
Where from?: Dantooine
Color Saber: PURPLE!
Parents?: Dead
Grandparents?: Dead
Any living relatives?: Nope. (I had more, but that would give away my surprise ending to 6th bodyguard!)
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Ellia's ship landed quickly and she ran down the boarding ramp. She raced into the Jedi Temple, searching for anyone. She felt a presence flicker across her mind. Two, no, three familiar people. 'Obi-Wan's here, Good,' she thought.
She ran up to to where the presence's came from. She began to wait for the turbo lift, then said forget it and ran up the stairs to the sick bay.
She walked slower as she got to the fifth floor, wishing she would have taken the turbolift. She saw the door to the sick bay, and she opened it and went through.
Obi-Wan heard someone come in. He turned to the visitor. "Ellia?!"
Ellia stopped to catch her breath. Obi-wan ran over to her, putting his arm around her to support her.
Master Yoda walked over. "Jedi Ellia, back from Dantooine so soon?"
Ellia bowed slightly. "Master Yoda, our people have been forced off planet by Chancellor Palpatine's Stormtroopers. I was one of the lucky ones. I escaped before we were to be gased."
Obi-Wan led her over to a girl lying on a medical bed. "She just came to us from Dantooine."
Ellia peered at the girl. "Spen-Mal, oh gods." She turned to Obi-Wan. "Is she alive?"
Obi-wan nodded. "Just asleep."
"Where's Jori?"
Obi-Wan shook his head. "She was the only one."
Ellia sighed, then cursed under her breath.
"Obi-wan, could I talk to you privately?"
He led her out the door into the hall.
"What is it, Ellia?"
"Something's been bothering me ever since Naboo. I know you got rid of the Sith lord, but.. I still have a feeling that there are more out there. I saw one on Dantooine."
Obi-Wan raised an eyebrow. "Are you sure it was a sith lord?"
Ellia nodded. "I took one look at him, and my blood ran cold. He was tall...very tall. He had a black suit on, and he had deep breathing. He turned to me.."
Ellia stopped. Obi-Wan peered down at her face. "What did he do?"
"He pulled out a lightsaber, Obi-Wan." She looked down at the ground. "It was Anakin's," she whispered.
Obi-Wan felt his heart stop. "Then what?"
Ellia looked over at the wall, remembering. "He called me by my name. MY NaME! He tossed Anakin's lightsaber over at me, and said, 'This is warning. Go into hiding or suffer the consequences.'"
Tears streaked down Ellia's face. "Then, he pulled out his own lightsaber, and fought me."
She looked back down at the ground. "I ran, Obi-wan. I ran away. I was so scared."
Obi-Wan pulled his friend into a hug. "It's okay, Ellia. It's okay. At least you're still alive."
Ellia's tears soaked Obi-Wan heavy cloak.
The door to the medical bay opened and Indra walked out, feeling the pain from the next room.
Obi-wan motioned for her to leave.
Ellia still cried. "Oh Obi-Wan. It was Naboo all over again. Dead bodies were everywhere. People I knew, visitors, guards, everywhere!"
Obi-Wan held Ellia close, fearing he knew who this mysterious being was.
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Taryn
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4/16/00 3:25am
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Sorry to say this so soon, but my time is taken up elsewhere, and so I'm leaving this story. Do what you want to Tari.
A while after the attack by Krythraar's former student, the Jedi Knight, Cirani Hancas, returns to the temple to select a padawan. Taryn fought her best and was selected. She said farewell to her friends and Krythraar, and left the temple for possibly the last time.
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Miana Kenobi
Title: Pacific Region RSA
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4/16/00 3:54am
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Tayrn, you're leaving us?
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TheLastApocalypse
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4/16/00 6:26pm
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This doesn't belong on the second page!
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4/17/00 12:16am
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Is anybody going to be a bad guy...
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Spen-Mal once again awoke, yet this time she was alone.
"Jori, I'm so sorry." She muttered to herself, remembering the galent Young Jedi male who offered to help her on her first official mission as a Knight.
I'll save you Jori! She hastily pushed herself out of bed and forced herself to walk to the hanger bay. I can make it, for Jori!
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Taryn
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4/17/00 2:15pm
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Sorry, but I feel I have to for a while. Things in my life has gotten a bit intense. I will say this about myself...I'm getting married in May. Perhaps when I return in june, if it's still going, I might return to this story.
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Omega.0
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4/17/00 2:21pm
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The Defel spy wanders about the halls of the Temple, observing all he can, undetected, as far as he can determine. He wandered into the room of a thousand waterfalls.
'Perfect.' he thought as he took in the room. 'This room will be perfect.'
The Defel began exploring to see what all the room had to offer to him.
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