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Jedi Knight Anakin
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4/27/00 11:06am
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If I may borrow a description from TPM book...
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Lucas thought he heard Rypic scream when he went down, but he realized it was himself, calling his name. He went down without a sound, a pool of blood forming around his body.
Lucas attacked with all his ferocity again, then kicked the Sith back and backflipped out of the way. He kneeled down, closing his eyes. The Sith sneered at him, wondering if he was going to fight again. The Sith charged up an enegy ball, aimed it at Lucas...
Lucas took a deep breath, becoming one with the Force, and the Sith fired.
Lucas dodged it in a split second, flipping into the air. He landed in front of the Sith, who was caught completely off guard. He quickly rammed his green lightsaber into the Sith's chest, pushing it in to the hilt. The Sith's flesh began to melt away, and Lucas tore it out, taking the left half of the Sith with his blade.
He disengaged his lightsaber and ran to Rypic.
"Rypic, are you alright?"
The boy was taking quick, short breaths and there was a pool of blood around him.
"Oh Sith. Hang in there, kiddo."
He hoped help was coming.
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Joguy
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4/27/00 1:43pm
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I'm sick today so I'm staying home from school. Only one thing to do...write!
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"I'll...be...-a-alright...j-just a flesh wound," managed Rypic.
"Rest easy. We need to find you some bacta. Do you know where the nearest center is?" asked Lucas, lifting the boy's head up.
"There is one...right above us...o-on the fifth floor. But...the staircase is...a few halls away from...h-here."
Lucas knew the boy would die of blood loss before they reach the stairs.
"Right above us?"
Rypic nodded. "Just about."
Lucas jumped into the air and spun his saber. The hole opened in the ceiling and a few chunks of cement fell down. He shut off his lightsaber and force jumped onto the next floor. He stretched out his hand and concentrated on lifting Rypic.
"Hold your robes up to your wound!"
The apprentice did so without a word. The boy settled into Lucas' arms. They found themselves in a long hallway. It was a very open area. They were on an inside balcony that rang along the doors. A fountain was five stories below. Lucas checked a few doors and finally saw one marked, "East Medical Center."
There was always one of these when a Jedi couldn't heal himself.
Lucas opened the door and saw a tank sitting across the room. He flicked the lights on. The boy had passed out and Lucas knew he wouldn't like someone to undress him and prep him for the tank so he decided to put him in with his clothes on. Lucas turned on the tank and looked at the boy. He looked dead. He should have put the proper equiptment on the boy to stop bleeding. The tank was turning red. Even the filters weren't helping.
"Hand in there..."
Cirani and Ree-Sez wandered around the temple. It was deserted. They both suddenly felt something was wrong. Suddenly, something kicked Cirani into a fountain. Her lightsaber was on the moment she hit the water. A wookie growled behind her and she heard a saber ignite...
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Jedi Knight Anakin
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Lucas felt sick. The Sith was powerful, too powerful. More than any one of his kind he had encountered.
He pondered it for a moment, then turned back to the boy. The blood seemed to have been filtered so far, and it wasn't gushing as much as before. He put his hand to the tank, and called upon all the Force power around him, taking it from every plant, ever drop of water, every animal in the temple, focusing it, and releasing it into Rypic's wound.
Slowly, very, very slowly, the wound began to close and the bleeding began to stop.
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Sci Michaels
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The fight with the Sith had occured so quickly that Ree-Sez's auth...err...Ree-Sez had not been able to aid in the battle effectly.
After the fight had ended, and Lucas had helped Rypic up to the next floor, Ree-Sez and Cyrani had wandered around the temple. Suddenly, they had been attacked and Cyrani was in a pool of water.
Turning towards the attacker, Ree-Sez saw an immense wookiee over three times his height wielding an ebon-bladed lightsaber. The wookiee looked unusual, with some shocks of its long, matted hair died purple, and some areas shaven bare.
Ree-Sez, used to not carrying around a lightsaber, had become an expert on Jedi telekinesis. The wookiee's blade hissed and sputtered out as the lightsaber's handle crushed in on itself.
The wookiee beast roared its frustration and moved to remove Ree-Sez's triangular head from his long neck with its claws. The eeteasian waved his hand, imagining the wookiee flying back against the wall. To his surprise, the wookiee staggered a bit, then continued towards him.
Ree-Sez redoubled his efforts and caused the wookiee to pause, but ever so slowly, in the battle between the eeteasian's Force push and the wookiee Sith's brute strength, the wookiee was winning....
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Taryn
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The battle finally over, Cirani noticed Rypic bleeding badly, wishing she could heal him, but her Master had been the healer. When she heard of the Bacta center above them, she had stepped forward to fly the boy there, but Lucas acted faster than she, and Rypic was soon gone to be healed by the powers of Bacta.
Cirani turned toward Ree-Sez.
"I want to thank you for the help you probably don't even realize you gave me near the fire. If it wasn't for your hand on my shoulder, I could never have gotten into my second mind in time for the battle."
She knew Ree-Sez was confused about that second mind thing, after all, he was no Byrian, but before anything could be said, they both felt something was wrong, and she found herself in a fountain, her lightsaber having shorted out because the water. She heard a growl behind her, and saw a massive wookie holding a lightsaber, advancing toward her.
She saw Ree-Sez use his powers to crush the saber, and push the wookie back, but he couldn't hold out for long. She placed her saber in its place on her left hip and jumped into the air, hovering on her long thin wings, and pulling her Master's saber from the holder on her back, igniting the icy blue blade.
She dove in on the wookie, aiming a kick to the creature's head, but the wookie felt her come and swung out a paw, connecting with her thigh and one wing as she spun out of control to the floor. The wookie roared with anger as the lightsaber sliced his arm off halfway between his elbow and wrist. Forgetting Ree-Sez, he turned toward Cirani, intent on killing the girl who had hurt him.
Cirani looked up, her leg on fire from the pain. The lightsaber had skidded five meters away, toward Ree-Sez, too far away for her to call it to her. She couldn't trust her leg to hold her up, and she knew one wing was badly damaged.
But she wasn't completely defenceless. There was one thing she could do that might save her. A skill that not many Jedi even knew about.
Cirani concentrated in the Force, and created a protective shield around her. One that nothing, energy, matter, nothing, could get through. She was safe for a while, but had in the past been able to hold it with intense concentration for only three minutes or so.
[This message has been edited by Taryn (edited 04-28-2000).]
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Joguy
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Lucas could sence the battle below them. He could tell people were being hurt. How many Sith were there in the temple. He hoped Rypic would recover quickly because he senced there was more evil around. It was large temple but it seemed that everyone was gone. Where could everyone be? Suddenly his head started to hurt. He saw the fire pit. He saw Rypic, Cirani, Ree-Sez, and himself. People where running by, Sith were chasing them. People got onto ships, they escaped. Somehow, the fire had created some odd force barrier. He saw a Sith look staright into the fire pit. He couldn't see anyone but four people were standing there. Some Jedi escaped...some died. His headache left him and knew they had to get out of there. The Sith really wanted something or someone in that temple to send so many of them.
"We need to escape," Lucas said to himself, "It's time to get you out of there Rypic."
He pulled a switch and the bacta started to drain. He suddenly the sound of a lightsaber crackle. Somebody was close by. With a loud crash the glass in the bacta tank exploded. Rypic fell to the ground, bacta pouring over him. A Twei-liek(I really don't know to spell it) stood in front of the two.
"Rypic, are you alright?" asked Lucas as he turned his saber on.
"Yeah...good enough," replied Rypic as he ignited his slippery saber.
It almost slid out of hands but he tightened his grip. The Sith's saber ignited and Lucas' hands quickly shot to his throat. Force Grip. Rypic dove over the alien and thrust his saber through the back of his chest. The Sith coughed but continued to fight. He wasn't even bleeding. This released his grip on Lucas and both Jedi were fighting once again. They took the fight onto the inside balcony. Rypic was tired of being the stupid, weak apprentice who got hurt. He fought with all his might and he could tell the Sith was impressed. Lucas blocked the Sith. The alien drove Lucas' saber into the ground and kicked him in the face. He flew over the balcony and grabbed the railing. Rypic pushed the Sith towards the edge. He was startled by the push. Rypic's saber entered the alien's left thigh and emerged in his right shoulder. He fell over the balcony and landed in the fountain below.
Cirani saw the splash. It came from the fountain right behind her. She looked up and saw Lucas and Rypic five stories above her.
They needed to escape.
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Joguy
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rolleyes.gif Double Post!
[This message has been edited by Joguy (edited 04-28-2000).]
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Sci Michaels
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The wookiee had made a fatal mistake turning its attention away from Ree-Sez. With a loud crack, the wookiee's leg snapped under the pressure of the eeteasian's force abilities.
Growling in pain, the sith beast called upon his own powers to walk despite the pain, and turned back towards Ree-Sez. As it stepped past Cyrani's masters' saber, Ree-Sez calmly grabbed a mental hold of it and brought it up, swinging it around and activating it. With a plop, the wookiee's head fell to the ground.
The monster's body didn't seem to realize it was dead, however, keeping stomping towards Ree-Sez. The eeteasian brought the Force to bear, and this time, without its Dark Side abilities, Ree-Sez was easily able to fling it against the far wall, where it finally stopped moving.
Deactivating the saber, he floated it back towards Cyrani. "You may need this," he croaked jokingly.
He looked up at Lucas and Rypic, stories above. "We must leave."
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"The closest ship is probably on the east landing platform. You two get out the door and start the ship up. Lucas and I will take the window down," said Rypic, pulling Lucas back over the balcony.
Cirani and Ree-Sez nodded and took off towards the door with force speed. Lucas and Rypic ran back into the mecical room walked to the window. The temple was on mountain and the east side was on the edge of a cliff. Lucas looked down and gasped.
"I was going to say don't look down," said Rypic.
They saw Ree-Sez and Cirnai running towards a medium sized ship.
"The landing platform with the ship is downhill. We can find something and slide down. The landing might be rather unpleasent though," said Rypic.
Lucas looked back and saw two large metal panels on the bacta tank. His lightsaber was quickly on and the Jedi had sleds. Rypic crouched down on top of the sled and jumped. Lucas hesitated but followed.
Ree-Sez ran into the ship. It was fancy, like a royal transport and could hold a crew of about ten. It had a sleek design and light shone off of it. Cirani stepped into the ship and saw the two Jedi falling on peices of metal. As they hit the ground, snow shot into the air and their brown cloaks were white in an instant. Suddenly she saw something jump from above.
"Lucas!" yelled Rypic. He saw a Rodian jumped in front of Lucas' sled. The Jedi backflipped off and landed in a snow bank.
His lgihtsaber ignited and he wasted no time fightning another Sith. He repeatedly force pushed him into the wall.
Rypic slid his sled right up the ramp into the ship.
The Rodian jumped into the air and sliced Lucas in the leg. The Jedi force pulled the Sith into his saber and quickly halved him.
Ree-Sez fumbled with switches in the cockpit. He flipped a few buttons and the ship started to lift off.
Lucas jumped back on his sled and started to slid towards the ship. It lifted off of the cliff and slowly moved away. Lucas used the force and his sled flew off of the cliff's edge. He hoped to land on the ramp nut knew he coudln't make it. He dove off of the sled and grabbed the edge of the ramp. Cinrai and Rypic pulled him in and shut the door.
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Jedi Knight Anakin
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Lucas pulled himself inside, grabbing his bleeding leg.
"Sith! I got hit in the leg!"
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Ree-Sez sighed in release. They had gotten away. Then he looked at the scanners. There were small starships in the way.
"Fighters!" he croaked. "Cyrani! Rypic! Whichever of you is a good pilot, take the controls. The other one man the weapons. I'll see to Southring's leg."
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(BTW, it's spelled Twi'lek)
While Cirani was inside her protective Force 'bubble', she began to push back the pain as all her species can, but she had problems connecting with that portion of her brain. She opened her eyes, seeing the wookie finally get defeated. She let the bubble go, and carefully stood, not even looking to see how bad her leg was. She knew she and Ree-Sez had to get out, and was glad he knew where he was going.
Before long, all four of them were in the ship, Rypic looking for a volunteer to pilot it away while he tended to Lucas' leg.
"I can do either." Cirani said, pain evident in her voice.
The other Jedi looked at her, noticing one wing held out at an unnatural angle and the torn and bleeding leg. She knew at least Ree-Sez must be wondering how anybody could move that fast on a leg wounded as hers was.
"Byrians can push back pain temporarily, but I've had problems with that lately. The pain's coming bad." she explained, then turned to address Ree-Sez. "Are you a better pilot or gunner? Whichever you decide, I'll take care of the other."
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*Ree-Sez tended to Lucas. He asked Rypic and Cirani to pilot or gun. You just had them mixed up(I do that alot)*
"My father was a pilot. He taught me the basics before I went off to start training. I can pilot," said Rypic.
Cirani nodded.
Rypic sat down in the pilot's seat and grabbed the controls. Ships flew over them at all angles. He had to know where he was going.
"Hey! Where are we going? Another planet? Try to find a place to hide? Where?"
His question was drowned out by the sound of a laser hitting the room. Another hit the side of the ship and sparks flew. The lights went out as one thrust engine was destroyed.
"I don't know if I can keep us in the air!' yelled Rypic.
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Concentrating upon Lucas' leg, Ree-Sez muttered, "We just need to get away for now. Final destination can come later."
Lucas pulled himself over to the navcomp, disrupting Ree-Sez' concentration. "Where are we?" Lucas muttered. "Way out in the Outer Rim. Here," he pulled up the stats of a planet, "It's the closest system. Some place called Tatooine."
***Hey, it's Star Wars. We gotta go there. It's tradition***
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Jedi Knight Anakin
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I've always wanted to go to Tatooine!!
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"Remote, out of the way..." Lucas continued. "The Sith don't exist there, it's my best bet."
"Yeah, but we can only hope there's a safe haven there for the time being." Ree-Sez suggested, with more of a hint of worry in his voice.
Lucas sighed, thinking. He then turned to the Jedi who was piloting the ship.
"Set a course for Tatooine."
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I'll gladly go into the spaceport! *Raises hand enthusiastically.* Oh oh me me pick me!
"Mostly sand, dust, and spaceports." Re
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