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Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 1/20/02 4:33am Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	yeah Starlight we noticed that you dissapeared from the other RR -----signature----- Love is something we should cherish and not let it slip through our fingures when it comes Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendid thing, lifts up up where we belong. All you need is love The force will be with you..........Always
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Jedi_Jewl Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/20/02 6:23am Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	Haven't I seen you before Obi_Wan_Kenobi's_Girl? Thanx Starlight! I'll use Caylana for you. -----signature----- One Book to rule them all One Book to top them One Book to bring them all And in their tracks will stop them In the many stores where novels lie!
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Obi_Wan_Kenobis_Gal Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 1/20/02 5:11pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	Yeah you have seen me somewhere before J_J. Like the other RR. ------------ Rand made his way over to the common area. He heard someone call out his name. He turned and kept walking at the same time. There was no one there. Next minute Bang. Rand walked right into someone. He turned to face them. "My apologies...." He didn't finish his sentence. He was cut off by a pair of navy blue eyes looking straight at him. "That quiet ok." She said. "My names Caylana. Whats your's?" Rand blushed. "Rand." -----signature----- Love is something we should cherish and not let it slip through our fingures when it comes Love is like oxygen. Love is a many splendid thing, lifts up up where we belong. All you need is love The force will be with you..........Always
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Midnightetak Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/20/02 11:08pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	Whoah! De ja vu! ___________________________________________ Rand didn't know what to say, he was totally mesmerized by the pair of navy blue eyes. "I am very sorry, i.." Rand had to take a deep breath and a step back before he could control himself "Are you alright?" asks Caylana looking at Rand, smiling lightly "Yes, quite fine thankyou. Please excuse me..i need to go and eat," Rand blurts out and then silently berates himself for his stupidity. holy sith!? What a stupid thing to say!! You idiot! Quick do something! Invite her to eat with you!!ANYTHING!.. Rand's concious tells him. "Oh..okay," Caylana replies moving out of his way so he can get past "Would you..like to come and join me?" "Oh sorry, but i have to go and do some training, maybe afterwards?" Caylana offers brightly "Training.." Rand says distantly, "Oh! TRAINING!!!" Rand suddenly realises the time he has wasted and curses himself again, Idiot!! "That would be..nice. See you later then." "Yeah okay! Cya later!" Caylana says with a nod Caylana walks out of the common room and Rand takes the opportunityto reflect, Amazing, i have managed to make a complete fool out of myself in a mere minute, ME! Of all poeple! With that Rand vanishes, using the force propelled run to get him to his training..just in time.
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Jedi_Jewl Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/21/02 6:51am Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	Ooooh! Rand's getting into the swing of things! _____________________________________________ Nerad ran quickly to the temple, and ran into a boy, spilling all of his things on the floor. "I'm so sorry!" The boy helped him pick his things up. "No problem." Nerad said quickly, and tried to run past the boy. "Hey! What's your hurry?" "Nothing." "Right." The boy's blue eyes were smiling. Nerad looked at him. "Haven't I seen you before?" "Might. My name's Obi-wan. What's yours?" "Obi-wan?" "Ya." "I've gotta' go!" Without another word, Nerad pushed past Obi-wan, and ran as fast as he could. "Wait! What's wrong?" but Obi-wan's words fell on deaf ears. He shrugged, and went to the training rooms. *************** Seorna wandered into the training rooms, and found Jesca and Kira sitting there. Jesca scooted over to make room for her. "Are you okay?" Seorna asked tenderly. "I am now." sighed Jesca. "Where were you?" Seorna told both of them about the incident with Nerad and Ravv in the dining hall. "I can't beleive he grabbed you like that!" exclaimed Kira. "You should tell one of the Jedi Masters." "I don't know." answered Seorna. "I have feeling that- I just don't know. I wish I could help Nerad, though." "Ya." Jesca said distantly "I can't help but feel sorry for him." "Who wouldn't?" Kira put in "The poor kid appears to be fairly smart, but he just seems so alone." "I know." Seorna sighed. Just then, Aralise came running in. "Seorna!" she gasped "Hi Aralise!" Kira said cheerfuly. "Oh! Hi Kira, hi Jesca." She breathed "Aralise! What's wrong?" Seorna asked. "It's Ravv. He's out for revenge. He's very angry! I'd suggest you lay low." "What are you talking about?" "He's mad about the whole thing in the dining hall. But now, he's also mad because Bruck told him he saw you and Nerad hugging in the room of a thousand fountains." "What?!" "Man Seorna." Kira sighed "I knew you felt bad for him, but golly!" "I didn't hug him! I don't think he would have let me if I had tried!" "Well," Aralise said, finnaly catching her breath "I suggest you stay away from him till he cools off. As I said, he's out for revenge." "Oh no!" Seorna got up and started running. "Seorna!" Jesca called after her "Where are you going?" "To find Nerad!" Seorna ran faster than she'd ever run before. What if Ravv found Nerad? Seorna was running so fast, that she didn't notice the boy in front of her, when she left the training rooms. SLAM! She ran right into him. "I'm sorry!" She gasped. "That's okay," He answered "It seems to be a day for running into people." She looked up. "Obi-wan!" "Ya? Oh! Hi Seorna!" "Have you seen Nerad?" "I- does he have black hair and brown eyes?" "Yes!" "Short, kind of mousy?" "Ya- mousy?" "Shy." "Oh. Yes!" "Kind of skinny, blue tunic, brown-" "Yes! Have you seen him?!" "Oh. Ya, if that's what he looks like, I think he's the kid I just ran into on my way here. I seem to be running into every-" "Thank you!" "Wait! Why?" "I have to save him!" "Save him? From who?" "Ravv!" Seoran ran. Obi-wan stood for awhile. If Ravv was now also picking on a poor kid like Nerad, and Seorna, he'd find quite a bit of trouble from Obi-wan. Obi-wan had his own problems for now. Rand was who he was angry at. He still couldn't beleive that he said that to Jesca! Obi-wan had to find her. He walked into the training rooms. There was Jesca, sitting on a bench with Kira, and Aralise standing in front of them. Jesca looked up, and saw Obi-wan. He can't know that that comment hurt me. I can't let it bother me. Act confident, Jesca. Act natural. Jesca smiled. "Oh! Hi Obi-wan!" "Hi Jesca." Aralise turned around and looked at him. "Hi!" "Hi Aralise." Obi-wan answered. Jesca noticed that Obi-wan looked kind of sad. "Something wrong?" She asked simply. "No." He answered. "I just- wanted to appoligize for what Rand said." "You didn't say it." She said easily "Why should you be sorry?" "I just am." "Oh. Well, that's okay." Silence. "So, Obi-wan, have you seen Nerad?" "I just told Seorna were I saw him last, if that's what you mean." "You did?!" "Ya, so?" Aralise groaned. "Ravv's out for revenge because Bruck told him that he saw Seorna and Nerad hugging." "Sheesh! I didn't think she felt THAT bad for him!" "She didn't hug him!" Kira groaned "Since when did Ravv take after a nice girl like Seorna?" "I don't know, but she's more worried about Nerad right now. She's trying to find him. I sure hop that Ravv's not out for Seorna." "Me to." Obi-wan nodded. "Shouldn't we help her?" "Like how?" Aralise shrugged "If she wants to help a poor kid like Nerad, that's nice, but it's her problem." "Aralise!" Kira fumed "How can you say that?! You're Seorna's friend!" "I don't want to get pounded by Ravv!" "He'd not going to! If he does, than he'll be in huge trouble with the masters!" "Besides, Aralise." Obi-wan eyed her "That's sort of a coweredly aproach, isn't it?" Aralise pinned him with an intense green gaze. Then, she stood up, and ran. _____________________________________________ PANT! PANT! :o Sorry if that's just a bit long for you guys, but I had a burst of insperation! -----signature----- One Book to rule them all One Book to top them One Book to bring them all And in their tracks will stop them In the many stores where novels lie!
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starlight_kenobi Registered: Aug '01	Date Posted: 1/21/02 1:04pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	This is really good guys! Keep up the good work! P.S.- I like the Caylana\Rand interaction. -----signature----- I'm strange. What more do you need to know? Check out my story : Qui-Gon adopts a baby girl in... The Gift of A Destiny http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=3874972&replies=41 Princess of Snap of The Fortress
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Jacinta_Kenobi Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/21/02 2:49pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	Jesca shook her head. "Obi-Wan, you really need to learn how to be a little more discreet, for heavens sake." She said, then waited patiently as Obi-Wan neared the doorway. Just a little to the left...little more... She abruptly pulled a lever with her mind, and Obi-Wan, warned by the force, looked up just as a bunch of little vial looking things fell on him. Jesca started to laugh as the little vials opened up, dumping many color of dye all over Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan glared at her through dripping eyelashes. "Jesca! What is this stuff?" He asked, but Jesca merely laughed harder, holding onto Kira for support. "Nubian Dye!" Jesca gasped out. Obi-Wan's eyes went wide as he wiped a hand against his hair and it came back green. Then, unable to stop himself, he started laughing too. Jesca was back. Jesca had made a decision that afternoon. If Obi-Wan figured out she had a crush on him, she would just have to live with it. She wasn't going to cry or freak if he found out. It had come as a suprise to her, but Obi-Wan's reaction had made her hope that he would be mature enough to handle it. Jesca continued to laugh, her eyes shutting, and then opened them up just in time to see Obi-Wan grinning above her. "Hmm...this one didn't open...I wonder how it works?!" He said loudly, and pressed the catch as Jesca screamed. Bright blue dye tumbled into her black hair, and Obi-Wan came down, grinning wildly, and worked it in with his fingers as he screamed. Jesca noticed that Kira had not wanted any on herself, and had ran off. Suddenly, Jesca launched herself up at Obi-Wan and wrapped her arms around his neck. "Thanks Obi." She whispered in his ear, breathing hard from giggles. Obi-Wan slowly held her back. "What for?" He asked a bit shakily. "For everything. For being my friend mostly." Jesca said, not caring that she was getting blue dye on Obi-Wan's cheek. She pulled away a little, feeling a strange urge to kiss Obi-Wan, but shook her head and stood. She wasn't ready for THAT yet. Neither was Obi-Wan. Together they stood. Obi-Wan was bluching a bit. Jesca spent the next few minutes cleaning the dye mess up. "So...how long does this stuff take to wash out?" Obi-Wan asked. "Only a few weeks." Jesca said. "What?!!! Qui-Gon will kill me!" Obi-Wan cried. "Probably." Jesca grinned, then hugged him once more as she finished cleaning, and headed down a different hall. "I need to shower. See you later!" She said. "Yeah." Obi-Wan said softly. *** Obi-Wan opened the door to his room, carefully looking around for Qui-Gon. Not seeing him, he made a mad dash for the 'fresher, but a voice stopped him. "Pad..a..wan!!! What...in the?" Qui-Gon called between long, hard laughs. Obi-Wan blushed. "Jesca dumped dye on me." He said slowily, a bit dreamily. Qui-Gon raised an eyebrow. "Oh. Jesca is really nice, isn't she?" Qui-Gon probed. "Um-hum." Obi-Wan nodded even more slowily, then his eyes cleared. "When she's not playing tricks!" He said and ran for the fresher, ignoring Qui-Gon's laughs. **** Whew....fingers are tired. -----signature----- "If the package says, 'Now with REAL chocolate!' what were you eating before?" "A conclusion is simply the place where you got tired of thinking." "Compromise means you admitting I'm right and you're wrong."
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Jedi_Jewl Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/22/02 4:02pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	Yes! Jesca got'im!..........oh boy! _____________________________________________ Seorna turned the corner. To her relief, Nerad was alone in the room of a thousand fountains. "Nerad!" She gasped. He turned to face her, and she halted in terror. "Nerad! Your face!" Seorna stared at the black eye, the cut across his cheek, and the bleeding lip. "Who did this?" She demended, walking closer. "No one." he mumbled. "Nerad! Tell me who did this to you!" "Nothing! I just tripped!" "And got a black eye?" Seorna sat down next to him. "Nerad, is it Ravv?" "No! I mean- no. I told you I tripped!" "No you didn't." She said softly. She reached down for a corner of her tunic, dowsed it in the water of the fountain, and began cleaning the cut on Nerad's head. Nerad winced. "Now hold still." She soothed. "I'll just clean this up for you." Suddenly, Nerad's eyes went wide, and he stood up. "I have to go! You'd better go!" "What?" Seorna stood up. "Nerad, let me help you! What's going on!" "Nothing! Go away!" "Nerad!" Suddenly, Ravv and Bruck stepped out of the bushes. "I told you they were sneaking off to here." Bruck sneered Ravv nodded. He turned to Nerad. "I thought I told you to stay away from my girl!" "I did! She came to me!" "That's right." Seorna stood up. "I came to him, because I wanted to help and talk to him. And I am NOT your girl!" "Why not?" "Because your a bully, and I don't even know you!" "You could get to know me." Ravv stepped towards her." "You'd better stay away." Seorna warned in a steady voice. "Oh really?" Ravv leaped at her, and she barly dodged. Hopping over the fountain, she landed easily, and began to back away. Suddenly, she backed into Bruck. She wasn't sure how he got there, but she didn't want to know. She lunged away, but felt both her arms get wrenched back, and she fell backwards. Ravv walked up. "So, how about a kiss?" "No thank you." She said flatly, struggling against Bruck's grip. Ravv walked even closer. "Just one good smooch." He put his face to hers, but was suddenly yanked backwards. He whirled around, and shot a fist at Nerad, who was clinging to his ankles. Nerad fell to the floor with a cracking thud. Ravv turned back to Seorna. "I want a kiss." He said angrilyl. "Well that's too bad." She answered stifly. "Oh really?" Ravv sat down on Seorna's outstretched legs, so she couldn't move them to kick him again. With her legs imovible, and her arms pinned behind her back, Ravv prepared to give her a kiss. Suddenly, somone picked him up, and let him drop to the ground. He jumped to his feet, and turned. "You've got a lot of nerve you-" Ravv started at tall boy in front of him. "Sorry." He mumbled. "Didn't mean to-" "I know what you were doing." The boy said crisply. "I just- Bruck! Lets get out of here!" Bruck releised Seorna's arms, and she fell back onto the pavement. Both boys barly ran from the tall boy. Seorna sat up. "Cris!" She gasped. He gave her his hand, and hauled her to her feet. "You okay?" "I'm fine." "I sure hope that settles that kid." "I'm afraid even if he gives up on me, he'll start after another girl." Seorna sighed. He looked at her hand. It was cut from getting pressed against the concreat. "Lets get you cleaned up." He said. "Cleaned up." Seorna repeated "Nerad!" Both of them turned to the boy on the ground. He was bent double as if he had been punched in the stomach. "Poor kid!" Cris started to lift the uncountios boy off the ground, and blood dripped from a big cut on the side of his head were he'd fallen on the floor. "This is all my fault." Seorna quavered. "No it's not. If it weren't for you, we might not have known that Ravv was beating up on this kid." Seorna nodded vaugly. Cris turned. "You sure you're alright?" "Ya." She nodded "I was just so scared." "I know." He put a hand on her shoulder. She looked down at Nerad. "Do you think he'll be fine?" Cris glanced down at him, and nodded. "Sure. This kid- Nerad. I think he's got enough sperit in him, he'd get better if he were dead!" He smiled, and they both went for the Medical wing. __________ Ravv watched them. "I can't believe it! I wanted Seorna!" "Well, Ravv." Bruck sighed "Your gonna' get trouble when you go after someone nice like her." "Then she's not worth it." Ravv shrugged "I'll find somone else." Ravv set off on his own. He wandered into the training rooms. For some reason, there was dye all over the floor. He kept going. He went outside into the hall, and saw somone. It was a girl sitting in a corner and reading a data pad. What was her name? He knew he'd seen her before. Oh yes! Kira. Man! She was so pretty!.......... Uhoh! -----signature----- One Book to rule them all One Book to top them One Book to bring them all And in their tracks will stop them In the many stores where novels lie!
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Midnightetak Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/22/02 5:54pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	hehehehe! Loved everyone's posts. They're really good.
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Jacinta_Kenobi Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/22/02 6:25pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	Uh-oh is right.....well, guess I'd better get to work! *** Kira was reading her datapad. It was the newest thing she had been reading. She loved readig the tales of old Jedi, and this one was of a woman named Adrea Fialya. Kira found her funny, because Adrea always stood up for herself, and she got into trouble sometimes. She looked up as she heard someone approaching, and grimaced. It was Ravv, that bully. She stood slowly, Ravv towering over her small barely 5'0" stance. Even though most people her height would have felt at a disadvantage around Ravv, she didn't. She had never been afraid of bullies. She threw her curly red hair of of one shoulder and glared up at him. "Hello Ravv." She said slowly. Ravv often picked on her friends. He picked on Obi-Wan, which upset Jesca, so it made her mad, and he also been picking on Seorna and Nerad lately. Kira was glad that her group of friends had Cris to stand up for them, even if he DID irritate her sometimes. "Hello Kira." Ravv said in a low tone. Kira almost rolled her eyes, but did not. "I'm late for practice." Kira said, gathering her things and starting off. "Alright bye!" Ravv said, and she walked down the hall as quickly as she could without running. A large grin spread across Ravv's face, but it was not a good one... * Obi-Wan scrubbed futiley(sp?) at his hair, but the dye wasn't coming out, and his scalp hurt. With a sigh, he rinsed the sopa out, and turned off the water, stepping out of the shower. He dried off and threw away his old tunic, which was ruined, and then put on a new tunic. He came out and stood face to face with his master. "You're hair is still green, Obi-Wan." Qui-Gon said slowly. "Yes master. It's Nubian Dye. Jesca said it will come out in a few weeks." He said nervously. Qui-Gon's eyes went dark. "I'll talk with her. Go to your room." He said. Obi-Wan stomache clenched. "Please Master..." He started, but didn't finish. For some reason, he didn't want Jesca in trouble. Qui-Gon turned, suprised. This was the first time Obi-Wan had dared say anything in this sort of a situation. "Yes?" Obi-Wan blushed. "Never mind." He said, and ran for his room. Qui-Gon looked in the direction Obi-Wan had disappeared, and smiled slightly, then stopped and set off to find Jesca. *** I don't have time for anymore, sorry! Feel free to step in anywhere! -----signature----- "If the package says, 'Now with REAL chocolate!' what were you eating before?" "A conclusion is simply the place where you got tired of thinking." "Compromise means you admitting I'm right and you're wrong."
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Jedi_Jewl Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/23/02 4:57pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!) - Date Edited: 1/24/02 5:11am (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi_Jewl
	Ohhh! I like it! Sorry that I took so long, but I had an evaluation, if that's how you spell it, at the Ortho. I'm geting braces!!!!!! Okay, I'll post. _____________________________________________ Rand ran towards Caylana, the minute the training rooms were empty. She came walking up the hill, and Rand ran to meet her. Suddenly, he felt silly, and came to an abrupt halt. "Somthing wrong Rand?" Caylana aksed. "N- no." Rand mumbled. He didn't care about girls! "Well, I have to go back to the training rooms to get my stuff," Caylana said slowly "Do you want to come?" "Ya!" Rand said, a little too quickly and eagerly, he thought. "Okay! Lets go!" They walked back towareds the training rooms. Rand was just starting to feel comfortible, when Caylana slipped in some strange dye on the floor. Before he knew what he was doing, Rand reached out a hand, and steadied her. "Thank you." Caylana said slowly. "I can't imagine how that dye got there." "No." Rand let go of her, as if she were on fire. "I have to go." "So soon?" "Ya." without even a goodbye, Rand turned and marched away. He wasn't like this! He wasn't! Caylana watched him go. "I'm sorry." she said quietly, but honistly didn't know what she did wrong. After she got her things, she set off to find Jesca, Seorna, Aralise, or someone! Suddenly she had a need to be near girls. _____________________________________________ Sorry it's so short, but I have to go. -----signature----- One Book to rule them all One Book to top them One Book to bring them all And in their tracks will stop them In the many stores where novels lie!
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Midnightetak Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/24/02 2:33am Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!) - Date Edited: 1/24/02 2:49am (1 edits total) Edited By: Midnightetak
	Is some what confuesed by Jedi_jewl's post but shrugs and gets on with it --------------------------------------------- Rand leaves Caylana in the training hall and goes off to find his Master, who was in converstaion with another Master of somewhat familar appearance. "I am sorry Master! I was delayed abiet," Rand explains," It' won't happen again" "Very well then, We have been waiting for you so that you may begin," Comments the his Master indicating a chalk circle on the ground where Rand was to Train. "You want me to practice? Here? Why not the training hall?"Rand says with a frown well aware of the openness of the area "Do Not question my methods Padwan" Rand's Master says emphasizing the word Padwan to make the pointed distinction between him and Rand. Rand and his Master exchange equal looks of stubborness. Rand gives in with a sigh, "As you say Master," Before removing his cloak and activating his lightsaber as he steps into the chalk circle. As soon as he did this another Padwan, cloaked, with their green lightsaber drawn steps into the circle also. Rand, thinking it odd for his opponent to conceal themselves druing practice prompts them to reveal themself. What is the matter Padwan? Why are you afraid to reveal yourself? Remove your cloak. Rand says in a voice that caressed his opponents mind seductively "Nice try Little Brother but i don't fall for that trick anymore," Says a girl removing her cloak. Rand arches an eyebrow before gasping as he realises who he is sparing against. "Emily?"Rand says startled to find his half-sister here.
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Jedi_Jewl Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/24/02 3:51pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	What the- Oh my goodness! He has FAMILY! Cool job! Sorry 'bout that last post. When I tried to copy it, to make sure I didn't have to re-write it if it didn't post it, it didn't copy the whole thing. But, no harm done! Okay, here we go! I think I'll wait until you do some more on Emily, and see how you want her to be written. I guess we'll get left hanging till later. _____________________________________________ Soerna had her hands fixed up. They still hurt, but the Bacta had taken over, and now she felt a little better, and less shooken up. At last, Cris stood up. They had stayed in the waiting room at the healers wing for about fifteen minutes. "Well," he said, turning to Seorna. "I'd better go check on Obi-wan. Last time I saw him he wasn't in the best of moods." He put a hand on her shoulder. "You going to be alright?" "Yes." she said, rubbing her hands together. "I think I'll wait up for Nerad." "Okay. What are you going to tell them?" "I don't know. Last time somthing like this happend, Nerad begged me not to mention it, and acted like it was nothing." "Ya, well, you can't deny the truth, if they ask you outright." "I know. I'll tell them." "Okay." He smiled down at her. "Take care of yourself, okay?" "Without Ravv following me around anymore, I think I'll do fine." He gave her shoulder a squeez, and left. ________________ Kira couldn't find her data pad. She finished up her practice, and was going to read some more. But it was nowhere to be found. Finnaly, she descovored it was sitting on the bench at the far end of one of the training rooms. She activated it, and stard at the message on the screen. Meet me in the storage rooms on the third floor, tonight at 9:00 p.m. I have somthing I need to tell you. Love, a friend. A friend? Like who? Kira deleted the message, and sat down to read. But now, she couldn't concentrate. Should she go? Who could it be? ____________ Qui-gon went looking everywere for Jesca. It was hard to find her, but finnaly, he found her talking to Caylana in the garden. "Jesca?" the girl looked up. "Master Qui-gon! Did you want me?" "Yes. I'm sorry Caylana, but I need to talk alone." "That's quite alright, Master Qui-gon. I just was finishing." "Thank you." Caylana left. She had wanted to talk to Jesca, and was a little worried at what Qui-gon's problem might be. She hurried off to find Seorna. "Jesca?" "Yes?" "I'll be streight forward." "Okay," "I-" Qui-gon stared streight at Jesca, sighed, and said "I want you to stay away from Obi-wan." "What?" Jesca breathed. She didn't want to care. She especialy didn't want him to know she cared. But somehow, she did. "I think you're a distraction, and a problem. The last thing my Padawan needs is a girlfriend." Qui-gon said sharply. "We're just friends. We play jokes on eachother, what's wrong with that?" "You're a distraction. Obi-wan has never talked back to me until today after I reffered to you." "So?" "You've never argued with me before." "You've never talked to me before. You don't even know me! You don't know what I'm like!" "I know enough to know I don't want Obi-wan to see you again! And I don't either!" Tears brimmed in her eyes. Qui-gon's gaze became soft. "Jesca, I-" Jesca rose to her feet, did a quick bow, and fled away. What had he done? _____________________________________________ BAD Qui-gon! -----signature----- One Book to rule them all One Book to top them One Book to bring them all And in their tracks will stop them In the many stores where novels lie!
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Jacinta_Kenobi Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/24/02 10:50pm Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!)
	JEWL, YOUR MEAN! HOW DARE YOU INTERFERE WITH OBI-WAN AND JESCA'S RELATIONSHIP, QUI-GON?!!! Well, I'll show him. *** Kira stared at the screen, then finally deactivated it with a sigh. She probably shouldn't do it. Her master wanted her IN at 9:00. How would she explain? Still, she wanted to find out who the 'friend' was. She walked into her room that she shared with her master. Fyrin, her master, came out of the kitchen, smiling. "I made your favorite dessert!" She said with a large smile. Kira blocked a wince, and smiled back. "Thank you Master...." She said slowly, then thought a moment. "Master, may I sleep over in Jesca's rooms tonight?" She asked. She would check with Jesca as soon as she could. "You have classes tomorrow." Fyrin said, frowning. "I know...but we wanted to work on some homework, and it might take awhile. It would be easier if I stayed the night." Kira said, crossing her fingers behind her back. Fyrin continued to frown, but finally nodded. "Thank you! Can I go tell her it's ok?" Kira asked. "I suppose. Come back for dinner, and get your things, and then you can head over." Fyrin said. "Thank you." Kira said, and ran out, hoping frevently that she didn't get in trouble for this. * Cris walked out of the healers, and started towards Obi-Wan's apartments. In a few minutes, he pressed the switch to open the door. It slid open, and he stepped inside. "Obi-Wan? Hey Obi, are you here?" He called. A faint, "yeah," came from another room, and Obi-Wan came out, his robe on and the hood drawn up. "What's up with that? It isn't cold!" Cris said, and knew that Obi-Wan was hiding something. He used the force to throw the hood back, and stepped back in suprise before busting out laughing. "Your...hair.." He chocked out. Obi-Wan gave a half-grin. "I know. Jesca did it." He said. "You're not upset?" Cris said, as he stopped laughing in suprise. "Well, not really. I'm starting to like it." Obi-Wan admitted. "Mmph..." Cris laughed into his hand. "You have it bad, Ob." He said. "What?" Obi-Wan asked innocently. "Jesca. You're stuck on her!" Cris said. "So?" Obi-Wan sniffed while he blushed slightly. Cris hadn't expected that, and he stiffened. "I don't know." He admitted, and they both laughed. "I'm going to take a walk. Coming with?" Cris said. "Can't. Master said to stay here." Obi-Wan said. "Oh, come on!" Cris said. He often got Obi-Wan in trouble. Obi-Wan bit his lip. He DID want to see Jesca. Maybe Qui-Gon wouldn't be too mad. "Okay." He said. * Jesca bowed quickly to Qui-Gon and fled, tears streaming down her face. //What's the matter with me? This is the second time this week I've shown my emotions! All because of Obi-Wan! And now Qui-Gon...// She thought, and cried harder, running past a bewildered couple of students. She ran straight into Kira. "Jesca, what in the force?!! Who died?!" Kira cried, puttin her hands on her friends forearms. Jesca was NEVER like this. Jesca looked at her, then shook her head, and ran away, tears still streaming down her face. "Wait, Jesca!" Called Kira, but she ignored her. Jesca breathed in great gasps, and dimly she realized she was hyperventilating, but she pushed it away as she reached her favorite fountain and sank to the ground sobbing. Unfortunately, Obi-Wan knew where her favorite spot was. * Obi-Wan pushed through some brush. "Come on Cris, just let me look, and then we'll go!" He said, and turned to see Jesca collapsed on the ground next to the fountain, sobbing, and breathing jerkily. He ran over. "Jesca! Jesca, what happened? Jesca, what's wrong?" He had never seen her like this. He folded Jesca instinctivcely in his arms, trying to quell her sobs, but she only cried harder. "No...No....Please!" She said inbetween gasps for air, and pulled away. "What?!! What have I done?!" Obi-Wan asked desperately. Jesca merely shook her head, and stood, splashing some water on her face from the fountain. "Qui-Gon...forbid me...from see...ing you..." She said, then looked longingly into his eyes as she wanted to just collapse in his arms, but fled for the third time that day. Obi-Wan just stared with his mouth open. Cris whistled. "Man, I NEVER thought I'd see the day Jesca would freak out like that. That's some power you got, Ob!" He said. Obi-Wan slugged his arm, then turned back the way Jesca had ran. Slowly his eyes darkened until they were just angry, stormy dark blue circles, almost blending with his pupil. "I'll talk to you later, Cris." He said stiffly, then started back towards his rooms, his breath angry, and his fists clenched. * Jesca ran out into the hall and ran into Kira a second time. This time, Kira grabbed her arms and stopped her, pulling her to the ground. "Calm down....calm down, Jesca....What happened?" She asked, and slowly, Jesca explained. *** Horrible place to leave, I know, but I'm tired of typing. Uh-oh! Look out Qui! Padawan on a rampage! -----signature----- "If the package says, 'Now with REAL chocolate!' what were you eating before?" "A conclusion is simply the place where you got tired of thinking." "Compromise means you admitting I'm right and you're wrong."
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Midnightetak Registered: Sep '01	Date Posted: 1/25/02 1:51am Subject: RE: The Right One 2!! (Romance RR, need LOTS of help!) - Date Edited: 1/25/02 2:00am (1 edits total) Edited By: Midnightetak
	midnightetak is sitting on the edge of her seat hoping for some active confrontation! wonders if now would be a good time to start chanting Fight? hehehehe! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Rand couldn't believe it and didn't want to, Emily, his half-sister! Here?! NOW?!* While Rand recovered from his shock, Emily took the open opportunity to attack. Lifting her weapon she made a particularly complicated series of moves that Rand barely managed to block. Suddenly without warning Emily manages to hook her foot around his and trip him up. "Ah!" Rand yelps as hits the ground rather hard "You are strong Little Brother, but not strong enough," Says Emily with triumphant-mockery as her lightsaber points at his chest Rand looks up at his half-sister and frowns, calming the dull throb of pain in his back Rand draws apon the force and uses it to blast her out of the chalk circle, holding back enough not to hurt her, " You should know strength does not matter with the Force, only life." Rand replies icily locking gazes with her as she staggers back onto her feet. "Good Rand, very good," Says Rand's Master helping him off the floor and dusting him off, Emily's Master doing the same for her. Rand was about to say s omething when he noticed a gril run to a nearby fountain and collapse, apparently upset. Looking closer he noticedthat the girlwas the same one that Obi-Wan Kenobi had been teasing earlier. Good grief, what has he done to that poor girl now to make her so upset?One day Obi-wan you will get your come-uppance...and i hope i am there to see it.
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