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Princess_Tranquility
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8/21/03 9:56pm
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RE: Jedi Slave (post ROTJ Luke and Han fic, not slash!) UPDATE 8/4/2003!!!!
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8/24/03 9:12pm (1 edits total)
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Here's another part of our story and get ready bacause things are about to heat up...
Promptly after breakfast Luke and Nicholas headed back towards the palace. Moving through slave’s quarters they twisted and turned several times before ending up at Han’s door.
Nicholas approached but Luke held back his eyes closed in concentration. He had felt heavy eyes on him, eyes that were too distant to be noticed. It had felt strongest upon entering the castle cascading to little more then a nuisance in the back of his mind now.
“Luke aren’t you going to knock?” Nicholas asked as he turned to face the Jedi.
Luke reached towards the door. Han wasn’t inside, Luke knew he wouldn’t be it was late morning, this was usually the time Han checked on the Falcon. He would even more so today because Chewie wasn’t here and the ship had stood alone all night.
Luke opened his eyes, the countenance of Nicholas somewhat blurred from the deep deliberation. Nicholas looked cautiously at him before speaking his name again.
“No he’s not here.” Luke replied in a brisk tone.
“How do you know?”
“It’s late morning. I know my master. He’s out at his ship right about now.”
“Why would-“ Nicholas began, slightly confused but Luke cut him off with a nudge on the arm and the pair descended the many steps, hallways and lifts that dropped them to the docking bay.
Heading out the glass double doors they trekked their way across the enormous landing pad towards the Falcon, which was settled nearest the door.
They approached the lowered ramp and Luke motioned for Nicholas to join him. The boy hesitated the entire time taking wary steps and looking over his shoulder several times before finally entering the lounge.
Han exited the fresher wiping his hands on a towel then stopped dead in his tracks as he spotted Luke and Nicholas.
“Luke. I take it you knew I wasn’t in my room.” Han said with a jaunty smile, emphasizing the word “knew”.
Han peered over Luke’s shoulder at Nicholas who was walking around the lounge in slight amazement. He would stop to study the different control boards reaching out to touch them but pull back just as suddenly.
Han skirted around Luke, and headed for the boy in casual strides.
“What’c’ha doing Kid?” Han asked as he came up behind Nicholas.
Nicholas back stepped a little at Han’s presence.
“I’m sorry sir…I didn’t mean to…” Nicholas fought out shakily.
Han studied him intently confused as to why the Kid was scared to death. He hadn’t done anything. Han turned his head to rest a gaze on Luke who nodded slightly before moving forward to take the proffered towel.
“Sorry about what Kid? Go ahead and look all you want just thought maybe you might have had a question about the equipment. I’ll be more then happy to answer anything you’re unsure of.”
“I’ve never…been in a starship before Sir. Not since I was very small, when my mother and I were purchased on Rystall. But we were only in the cargo hold I never saw the instrument panels or…even seen space from a viewport.” Nicholas stated in quiet tones.
“Well do you have any questions?” Han asked once more.
“Questions…Sir?” Nicholas responded unsure of what to say to that. No one had ever given him a choice to anything before, and permission for a slave to ask questions was just unheard of. He tried hard to think up one as he watched the general bear down on him. He didn’t want to upset him by not asking anything, for he was being so kind. But try as he did nothing sprang to mind.
“No Sir. Forgive me for not having any Sir.”
“It’s no big deal.” Han laughed. “Probably too much to take in at one time, hard to center on just one question I suppose. Why don’t you go ahead and look around the rest of the ship, while I talk to Luke. The cockpit’s up that way.”
“Thank you Sir.” Nicholas responded in a giddy tone as he walked swiftly up the corridor to the cockpit.
Han waited till he was out of hearing range before turning to Luke.
“So what’s up Kid?” He asked in hushed tones.
“I’m fine just got done with breakfast and Lady Welsher said you wanted to see me. Is everything okay?”
“Well…” Han started as he ushered Luke over to the acceleration couch. Han sat down while Luke stood near him just in case Nicholas came bounding in. “I received a message early this morning from Sarah. You know those crazy assumptions you had last night about Mina possibly wanting you?”
“Yeah?” Luke responded hesitantly.
“Well she does. Sarah said she has every intention of asking for you. I haven’t been approached by the Chancellor yet so were still in the clear. I’ve been giving this a lot of thought Luke. What you said last night. I’m still confused as to what to do.”
“I told you last night Han. Sell me, the Rebellion needs this treaty.” Luke implied.
“I hope selling you is a last ditch effort and you’re not expecting me to give in the moment he asks?” Han stated cautiously.
“Well I should hope not. You’re not that much in a hurry to get rid of me are you?”
“Of course not! How could you think that!”
“Han I was being sarcastic.” Luke replied in even tones, surprised that his friend hadn’t picked up on that.
“This isn’t the time to be playing games Luke. I’m worried about this. It might be getting too complicated for us to handle.”
“What’s complicated? If worse comes to absolute worse you sell me, otherwise we should be okay.”
At that moment Nicholas walked in, still scoping out every detail of the ship he came across.
“Alright Luke.” Han started in a stern voice. “But don’t forget what I said, understand?”
“Yes master.” Luke replied quietly as he bowed.
“Thank you Sir. You’re ship is amazing! I greatly appreciate you trusting me enough to come aboard.” Nicholas bowed as well before joining Luke at the exit ramp.
“Meet me at my apartment at 1800 so you can escort me to dinner Luke. By the way where are you heading?”
Luke went to open his mouth before realizing he hadn’t the slightest idea. He turned his attentions towards Nicholas who piped up with a response.
“The Master could probably use his help with the guest house we’re building on the North Ridge Sir. That is if you don’t require him further.” Nicholas responded.
Han thought for a moment. He wasn’t used to demanding Luke to do things.
“No he can help. Luke aid them a with the guest house. It’ll give you something to do during the days when I don’t require your assistance. I’ll see you at 1800.” Han responded coolly.
“Yes Master.”
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Dancing_Jansons
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Date Posted:
8/22/03 9:18am
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RE: Jedi Slave (post ROTJ Luke and Han fic, not slash!) UPDATE 8/22/2003!!!!
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Nooo, Luke! Don't let yourself be sold!
He's so self-sacrificing, that boy. 
Can't wait for more, PT!
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MariahJade2
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Date Posted:
8/22/03 10:30am
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Luke has no idea what he's letting himself in for. 
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The_Good_Twin
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8/22/03 11:47am
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RE: Jedi Slave (post ROTJ Luke and Han fic, not slash!) UPDATE 8/22/2003!!!!
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I can imagine that things are going to heat up- I mean Han plays 'Master' while Luke is working the whole day!
And I think it would be better for Han not to present when Leia finds out what is going on behind her back!
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star_rebel
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8/22/03 9:23pm
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RE: Jedi Slave (post ROTJ Luke and Han fic, not slash!) UPDATE 8/22/2003!!!!
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I think it will come down to poor Luke being sold.  Once Han dosen't own Luke anymore, there is no telling what will happen to him. Han can't protect him anymore. I think it will get very bad before it gets better. Once Luke is a slave, how will events happen so that he is not a slave again. It will be interesting to see what you do with this Princess. Poor Luke for having to somehow get thru this(hopefully not damaged to badly), and even poorer Han when Leia eventually finds out. Hope to see more soon.
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Seven
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8/23/03 1:16pm
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Hiya! Long time no see!!!!
I missed you all soooooooo much. I was away in a land without a computer! It was horrible.
At anyrate.... Good things in these last few posts!
That's all for the moment... but expect more of me and Vader soon!
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8/23/03 5:24pm
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I've been having the worst time getting the boards to let me post a reply. *grr*
I have a horrible feeling that Luke is going to get sold (or stolen) and everything is going to fall apart.
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kristeh
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8/24/03 9:04pm
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I have a bad feeling about this!
Kristeh
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Seven
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9/9/03 9:32pm
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Seven: Helllllllo?
Vader: What are you doing?
Seven: Giving this pooooooor little ficcy and UP!
Vader: And why would that be?
Seven: Shut up you! I've hired someone else!!!
Vader: ~shocked~ Who?
Seven: No one you know. Now get lost!!!
Vader: ~runs into the bathroom~ Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!
Seven: ~slams the door~
Sorry about that! Now, UUUUUUUUUPPPP!!!!
Vader: Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!
Seven: Pfft. Get over it.
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Princess_Tranquility
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9/17/03 12:53am
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Very small post but I had a horrible case of writer's block! I've also been preparing for college and working. Assistant Manager of a pizza place ain't easy, let me tell ya'! And I know all the other managers out there can sympathize with that.
I've also been working on a fanfic for submission to a fanzine being released early next year. The girl that writes it is a good friend of mine so I hope to get in, she said I should have no problem. Then there is some new pieces for my Jedi Knight costume that have taken some time as well. But hey I'll just let you read what's here, with a promise for lots more this week in here and especially All That Matters! I plan to hit the others up to so never fear.
Be seein' ya' soon!
PT :P
She stood hidden in the shadows of the castle’s tall cone covered towers. From here she had a perfect view of the field servants as they toiled in the brisk morning sun. Mina didn’t find slave labor at all interesting, and it wasn’t their struggling efforts that had dragged here out to sweat in the daylight either. It was Luke. Even from this distance she could easily spot him.
Golden tresses hung limply over the wet brow and the cream shirt appeared dingy as it clung close to his sweat soaked skin. Taut tanned muscles flexed in his arms and through the wide open collar of his shirt as he helped to lift the heavy weight of granite stones setting them on a hover crane, never once having to stop to catch his breath.
She had been watching with amazement, heat growing in her skin as he continued working past the fatigue that plagued the others. He had stopped only once to shed the brown vest and roll his sleeves up to just below the elbow.
//What strength, what endurance.// She thought temptingly. The sun rose higher in the sky and she felt sweat trickle down her face as it signified the noon hour. She looked towards him again realizing with some amusement that a lot of the growing heat within her had nothing to do with the sun at all. She wanted that strength that seemed to live inside of him and she would have it.
Mina had been thinking about Luke ever since last night, and though she had wanted him for a house servant upon seeing the calm tension that drifted through his body language, she realized that field work suited him. He seemed to enjoy physical exertion as opposed to being locked indoors like a pampered pet. He would work outdoors if he wished, but when she required him, he’d have no choice but to come to her. He’d get used to it.
A loud horn resounded around the valley and the servant staff began moving towards their corralled eating area again. Luke took the moment of respite to lean back against the half built structure and sipped longingly on a canteen the guards had handed out. He relaxed a bit then trailed off after the rest of the group.
Mina watched as he left then turned her attention on the two male house slaves she had had accompany her. They lay half asleep, seated on the brown stone beneath them looking towards the ground.
“Up with you.” She stated in heated tones clearing her throat. “Now! Let’s go!”
They rose quickly one of them handing her a gold goblet filled with grape cider he had poured from a matching pitcher. The other fixed her blue velvet skirt before opening a lace parasol above her head.
She took a grateful sip from the challis then shoved it into the servants hands once more in disgust.
“That cider isn’t even cold! How dare you expect me to drink such foul juices!”
“I’m sorry mistress I had no idea-“
“That the cider had turned warm and sour in the morning sun?” She responded hastily.
Sunlight fell in her eyes again and she turned snapping at the servant behind her.
“And you hold that parasol straight, or else I’ll have pins put in your wrist so as to keep it from bending . Maybe then it won’t falter again!”
“Yes mistress so sorry..” The boy responded as he clasped his other hand around the twitching muscles in his wrist.
Silence fell as she smoothed a wrinkle in her dress.
“Well what are we waiting for the sun to go nova! Do you enjoy watching me sweat like a fat cow?! Let’s move it before I have you both locked in punishment cells for the night. Maybe some time there will sharpen your response coordination.” She demanded loudly.
They both apologized repeatedly in hushed tones as they moved escorting her towards the roof’s exit.
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9/17/03 8:10am
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Can I slap Mina? grr. Luke is going to end up in her hands, isn't he? I like the idea of more story coming too. 
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9/17/03 9:07am
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What a brat!
Han better figure out a way to keep Luke out of her clutches. A fate worse than death that would be!
Can't wait for more, PT!
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9/17/03 1:25pm
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And I always thought that I were a spoiled brat! But in comparison to Mina... I am an angel!
Oh, and there is more to come?!-
And you also did a Jedi Knight costume, that's great! I once did a Princess Leia costume, the one she wears in ANH,for a carnival party and it was really funny(just the right costume to get freedrinks )!
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Tych_sel
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9/18/03 5:16pm
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Wow, Mina makes some of the other rulers we've seen in the EU look like they're living on bare bones. If she thinks she's going to get Luke to do whatever she wants, she's got another thing coming. And Force help her if Leia ever finds out!
Force be with you,
Tych_sel
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9/18/03 10:59pm
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Captain Jack Sparrow: That be one firey lass.
Seven: Ahhh! Umm.... Hiya! It's pirate day and since Vader has been fired for being mean and just plain annoying, Captain Jack Sparrow will be helping me with my reviewing today!
Captain Jack Sparrow: Tell 'em that that Mina needs a good lot of Rum.
Seven: You scurvy pirate! I told you not to talk about foul drinks here!
Captain Jack Sparrow: And when you did, love, you forgot one very important thing...
~blatant movie rip off~ I'm Captain Jack Sparrow.
Seven: Riiiiiiiiiight. I just found this podt! Yay! It's great! Another great depiction of Mina and how badly she wants Luke.
Captain Jack Sparrow: Savvy?
Seven: Watch it Sparrow, or I'll take that hat!
Captain Jack Sparrow: Not me 'at!!
Seven: Good then be quiet! Now just one more... no two more things..... LUKE WATCH OUT!!!! MORE SOON PLEASE?
Captain Jack Sparrow: 'an you call me Crazy? At least I'm all by my onessies, but you lassie, 'ave some problems mate.
Seven: Welp.
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