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Jedi-2B
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9/19/03 5:41am
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RE: Jedi Slave (post ROTJ Luke and Han fic, not slash!) (small...) UPDATE 9/17/2003!!! (more tonight
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Yes! An update! That Mina is getting worse all the time. Looking forward to seeing how much further into this mess Luke and Han can get themselves into.
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It was on her fifteenth day in the darkness of the Nirauan cave when Mara Jade awoke to discover a rescuer had finally arrived.
It was not, however, any of the potential rescuers she would have expected.
It was Luke.
~~And the rest is history~~
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Jade_the_Sith
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10/5/03 11:33am
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I love your story! You're horrible too Luke!!! 
And, MINA!!! grrrr~spoiled brat!  Can I slap her???  Please, please, please??? 
Oooo~up soon please!!!
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MariahJade2
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10/7/03 6:10am
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RE: Jedi Slave (post ROTJ Luke and Han fic, not slash!) (small...) UPDATE 9/17/2003!!! (more tonight
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Mina is a royal pain. I wonder how Luke's going to fend her off, or will he have to submit?
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Princess_Tranquility
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10/15/03 2:12am
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First Half of this post second half goes up later tonight! Enjoy!
PT
The meal wasn’t much just like Nicholas had stated last night, but it at the least fill the empty spot in Luke’s stomach. Sipping on the water canteen he looked towards a flock of some type of winged animal hovering over the fruit vineyards. Luke sat off to one side of the building on a wooden barrel, attempting to shut out the noise around him and search for a calm center. He was tired and worn out he needed to meditate before he blew a fuse.
Sitting back with a sigh he found that active control of his senses was useless. The tension and worry that gripped at the back of his mind was just too overpowering for him at the moment, he needed to relax more.
Luke did a few deep breathing exercises hoping to settle his nerves. Opening his eyes he focused them on several small stones that littered the barren dirt at his feet. Reaching out with the Force he felt them, lifting them one by one until he had about thirty of them floating calmly at different heights before him. He basked in the Force a little longer reaching out for other life that existed beyond the kenneled eating area.
He sat there a moment drifting in slight meditation when he was startled awake by heavy footsteps. The rocks fell lifeless to the ground just as Gal-Outa announced his presence.
“What’s wrong boy? Not used to being around space trash?” Gal-Outa asked pointing his nerf prod at the large group of collected slaves.
Luke glared at him.
“No probably not. You’re an Alliance slave, pampered as much as those Imperial ones I’ll bet. But here well this is how things really are. It’s not as bad as I’d like it to be, but it’s more real then where you come from. “
Luke just continued to stare him down, his hands gripping at the barrel’s edge.
“You’re a defiant little one aren’t you? You’ll learn though while you’re here.” The man began to pace, closing in on him slowly.
“You’ll find that you’re just another piece of space trash nobody wants, abandoned to a life where not even masters want you around except when they’re angry so they can take their frustrations out on your hide. You’re nothing more then a whipping post with a voice, you need to be reminded of that.” Gal-Outa sneered grabbing Luke by the collar of his shirt and yanking him forcefully to his feet with one tug. Luke gaped at the action hearing nothing but the splintering sound of wood behind him.
“Perhaps I can do General Solo a favor and put you back in your place for him free of charge.”
Luke breathed deep keeping himself from reaching out with anger towards this man, his eyes only lapsing once at a possible beating. He felt calm defiance settle in just as the man dropped him to peer over his shoulder.
“Uh-oh what’s this?” Gal-Outa stated gazing at an area of the barrel where a large rift of missing wood existed on one edge. He and Luke both stared at his right hand where a fistful of splintered wood rested within it.
The guard grabbed his wrist yanking Luke towards him. He tightened his grip forcing Luke’s hand open in the process. Luke went to struggle free but thought it again as the man studied the inside of his wrist. His large fingers stroked the seam where cloned tissue met his skin and leaned over to listen for a moment as the metal joints opened and closed.
“A prosthesis eh’?” The guard chided. “Very interesting.” He spent another minute digging at the skin until he exposed a tab and popped the covers open tearing the skin in an instant. Gal-Outa gazed into the circuits and wires, feeling around and Luke clinched his teeth attempting yet again to squirm away from the iron like grip, all it did was tighten.
Luke hoped the guard would stop prodding around his hand soon but hissed as several wires were pulled free and sparks leapt from the opening, a moment later he lost the feeling and movement to his hand and all his fingers save the smallest one.
“Oops. Sorry.” The guard mocked. Luke grasped his torn hand against him looking at the frazzled wiring hanging limply from around the cover plates. Just then he heard the man’s nerf prod hum to life. “Perhaps we can charge some feeling back into it.”
Luke backed up against the wall wanting nothing more then to reach out and force shove the guy through the wooden fence. He couldn’t though he had to keep his and Han’s cover going.
“Maybe this way you’ll learn to not make me appear a fool in front of Lady Welsher again.” The nerf prod connected with his side and Luke felt himself jolt at the sudden rush of electricity. The prod came at him once more this time touching the skin above the destroyed hand. Luke twisted against the wall and felt as the prod attack his back boring in deep enough to draw blood
Luke knew he’d have to pretend he couldn’t handle the pain or else the guard would torture him all day and he’d need to be able to walk in order to make it to Han’s suite. The quicker he feigned extreme pain the sooner the guard would stop.
He dropped to the ground, his body still slightly convulsing from the electricity, he had kept from screaming so as not to scare the other people in the eating area.
“Had enough space trash?” Gal-Outa asked in a spiteful tone.
Luke held his eyes closed whipping up some fake tears which flowed forward easily to complete his cover and nodded slowly in answer.
“Good. At least you’ll remember not to get on my bad side again boy.”
The whistle sounded again, and Luke felt himself hauled to a standing position and pushed roughly after the departing slaves.
“Get back to work.” The guard scoffed watching as Luke left looking back only once to show his fraudulent defeat. Gal-Outa laughed as he moved over to join the other guards smoking at a table.
//Let him think he won this time, next time I won’t make it so easy for him.//
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RebelMom
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Date Posted:
10/15/03 8:21am
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Forget about the cover, Luke. Fight back. *grr* Bad guards. I have a bad feeling that he's going to need that hand soon.
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Dancing_Jansons
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10/15/03 8:39am
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Luke's getting in tough now.
Maybe Han will repair his hand. And then go smack that guard around.
Good post, PT!
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Jade_the_Sith
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10/15/03 8:56am
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*click* *click* *click* *click*
That's the sound of Luke's hand now 
Cover nothing, just give him a good wallop and lie Luke~just knock him a good one in the head and he won't remember a thing. Not like there were any witnesses- 
Anyways, wonderful Princess. Can't wait till the rest tonight
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Tych_sel
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10/15/03 1:17pm
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I'm thinking that Han may looking at even more trouble than he thought. It's going to be hard for him to explain away what's happened to Luke's hand.
I think Luke knows that lashing out would be to act in anger. Punishing this guard isn't worth the risk of falling to the Dark Side. Luke's just lucky that the guard didn't catch him while the stones were in the air.
I'll be interested to see where this goes next, Princess.
Force be with you,
Tych_sel
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The_Good_Twin
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10/16/03 1:49pm
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 ; oh my, what did he do to Luke's hand? That was so cruel!
Luke really has to fight back!
And I agree, Luke was really lucky that he wasn't caught lifting these rocks! 
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Seven
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10/18/03 2:51pm
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Darned all the mean people on this planet!
They're hurting Luke!
MAKE THEM STOP!
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Dancing_Jansons
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10/24/03 10:21am
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More soon, PT?
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The_Good_Twin
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12/11/03 5:54am
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and up...
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Tych_sel
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12/26/03 11:05pm
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Any chance of a post soon? It's been more than two months! (plans to go back and start reading from the beginning again.)
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Seven
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2/14/04 1:12am
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ACK! The board is PINK!
~giggles~ I like!
Vader: You would, Seven, You would.
Seven: Darn right! Just here to wish everyone a good Valentines day and a wonderful time today with all your loved ones!
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The_Good_Twin
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3/8/04 2:07pm
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Up
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