Jedi Council Forums - The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)

Locked Topic | Read Only Topic | Previous Active Topic | Next Active Topic

Pages: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 - ~~Previous~~ | Next | Reload

Author	Topic: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 11:25am Subject: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This is my first fanfic so don't expect too much. I'll post the first part Later Today. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 11:28am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Cool a new JA. I look forward to reading!
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Obi the Kid Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 12:11pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I like the title !!! -----signature----- Come and join my Ewan list: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/EwanLiam2/ My TPM fic site: http://www.angelfire.com/movies/obithekid/
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 1:54pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Ok here goes ********************* Raya sat on the floor of her ship thinking of the past few nights. She’d spent them vandalizing every wall of the city Mejd, the capital of Mejdul, and just last night the palace gardens and inside the palace walls. In particular the monarchs bed chamber, while he was sleeping in it. Everyone was stunned to see the result of her toil, and with good reason. After all, how often is it that you see ‘Death to all Jedi’ and ‘the SITH are rising again’ Painted in red all over the walls. Hopefully the palace incident would be the last straw. Force she hope it would. She didn’t like being forced to resort to such childish fashions and personally Raya thought it was tacky. But she was getting desperate now that all her other ideas had proved fruitless. In truth Raya had been causing mischief on this planet for almost a month now, trying to get the officials to request Jedi assistance. Yet even after three public transports had mysteriously blown up (even though Raya had taken great care to make sure it didn’t look like an accident), eight palace guards had been found dead with their heads several feet from their bodies, and plenty of other unexplained accident resulting in loss of life the monarch and the public ignored the fact that the incidents were connected. For Raya it was down right frustrating. How dense and ignorant could these people be? Instead of calming her anger she let it grow and grow until she burned with rage. Using it she flung a glass across the room and watched it shatter as it hit the wall. She felt the anger start to leave her along with the power it brought. ‘No! This isn’t supposed to happen’ she cried out in her mind ‘I am a Sith apprentice, anger is always within me.’ Slowly she felt the anger and darkness return. Few times had she ever let go of her anger and afterwards Darth Sidious made her never want to do it again. It was a sign of weakness and her greatest flaw. But she couldn’t think about that now, she had a mission to complete. She remembered when her Master had first called her to brief her on it. “Raya” “Yes, Master?” “It’s time you prove your worth to me.” “Gladly Master. What do you wish me to do? Assassinate a Senator? Destroy a military base? Perhaps kidnap an official’s child?” she asked eagerly. “No... something much more challenging.” “If it is a challenge then I look forward to it.” “I want you to kill a Jedi.” “What?” “Are you questioning me?” “No of course not. I will kill a Jedi. I believe there is one on Ablegon as we speak. It won’t be difficult to-” “No. That is too easy. This is meant to push you. I want you to lure a Jedi to you, first. You are dismissed.” Despite the fact she had to get the Jedi to come to her, Raya still had thought it would be easy. How wrong she had been. And now here she was waiting for news of what was to be done about the palace. She decided to meditate while she waited. She closed her eyes and pulled the darkness around her until it was the darkness pulling her instead of her pulling it. She felt the anger and hate that came with it, twisting and corrupting her soul. Not only that but she felt the power that pulsed in the dark. She grabbed a hold of that power and felt it radiate throughout her body. It was an intoxicating experience and she loved every second of it. There was unimaginable power there and one day soon she through training and patience she would be able to control it. But for now she had to be satisfied with only touching it and using part of it. Raya wasn’t worried about time, she had plenty of it, after all she was only 16. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 4:52pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hey! Isn't anybody reading this! A little feedback would be nice. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 4:55pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Come on! It can't be that bad, can it? -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 5:27pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hmmmm... a 16 year old Sith Apprentice, interesting! I have a bad feeling about this Please keep up the good work Ibis!
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Jedi_Borme Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 8/1/00 6:21pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This is very good so far. I can't wait tell you post more. An a 16 year old Sith sounds like bad news. -----signature----- "True friends stab you in the front." -Oscar Wilde Go to my web pag: http://geocities.com/ribhinn2aingeal/index.htm
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 7:53am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Here’s some more. **************** Qui-Gon Jinn and his 16 year-old apprentice Obi-Wan Kenobi stood in the center of the council room. Obi-Wan was slightly anxious, they had just had a week vacation after a particularly strenuous mission and now that they were well rested he was looking forward to a new mission. Master Yoda spoke first. “Requested Jedi, The Mejdul monarch has. Strange writings on city walls there are. Vandalism it is.” “They want a Jedi to go searching for vandals who are most likely children playing a prank?” Qui-Gon asked in disbelief. Even Obi-Wan was surprised at this. “It is more than just a prank.” Mace Windu put in. “There have also been a number of strange occurrences resulting in quite a few deaths. Perhaps, you should see what has been written on the walls.” he said showing a hologram of one of the walls. The silence that followed was proof of how serious the situation had become. Obi-Wan himself was surprised by the sight. “Death to all Jedi” and “the SITH are rising again” painted in red all over the wall. Whoever the artist was had taken considerable time in painting it, because the paint dripped down in all the right places, giving it the appearance of blood. “If a Sith this is, very dangerous this has become.” Master Yoda remarked breaking the silence. “We shall leave at once.” Qui-Gon replied. ***************** I’ll post more as soon as I get it typed. Less than an hour. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 8:53am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	More as promised! ***************** Raya had been keeping close watch over the city. No piece of information would slip by her. She had just come from a late meeting of the city officials she had snuck into. Security had been tight but she easily got passed it. In the high ceiling room no one had bothered to check the decorative jafen wood boarder that ran a foot from the ceiling, it also served as a sturdy ledge from which she could survey the entire room. She smiled to herself, remembering what she’d heard. Not one Jedi but two were coming, Qui-Gon Jinn and Obi-Wan Kenobi. Not that the latter was even worth knowing, he was just an apprentice. However Jinn was, he was a Jedi Master and often was called the best swordsmen in the order. A fight with him would certainly be a challenge. One Raya wasn’t sure she could overcome. This was going to be fun. As she walked through a training room to get to her sleeping quarters she caught sight of her reflection in the mirror which made up an entire wall. Raya was in no means vain, she only used the mirror to correct the imperfections in her fighting stances and moves (which nowadays were few and far between) but always she kept her hood up and covering her face, even when fighting. Now however it had fallen without her noticing. It was the first time she’d seen her reflection in almost three years and her appearance startled her. She looked incredibly young. She was of course 16, but her age never meant anything to her. She was also small only 5ft 2in which actually helped her in combat because she was a smaller target and moved quickly in small spaces. Her skin was pale for a human and her hair red, her hair could be blue for all she cared. It was her eyes that shocked her most, emerald green, but not cold and hard like her Master’s. Thy were sad and tired like a lost child or sad angel. She turned away from the mirror in utter disgust. How could she look like that, like a weak little girl? She shook her head to clear her thoughts. I am a Sith, she thought, I have killed hundreds my appearance means nothing. She continued to her sleeping quarters then realize he Master would want a report on what’s been happening. She turned on the comlink, not bothering to raise her hood, and waited as the hologram of Darth Sidious appeared. “I suspect you have news for me.” he said. “My plan has worked Master, the Jedi Qui-Gon Jinn and his apprentice Obi-Wan Kenobi will be arriving within three days.” “You are over your head already. You will no doubt fail” Raya was momentarily stunned but quickly hid it. She had successfully completed the first half of her mission and now her Master predicted failure. Soon her surprise turned to anger. “I will not fail.” she hissed through clenched teeth. Lord Sidious seeing the anger in his apprentice smiled beneath his hood. She was young, yes, but he’d had other apprentices before and those with twice her experience and training would never be able to defeat her in a lightsaber duel. “I do not doubt your abilities, apprentice, but Master Jinn is the greatest swordsman in the Jedi order. In combat there is no way you could defeat him.” At this Raya’s anger lessened and a mischievous grin appeared on her face. “But Master, I don’t intend to defeat him in combat. All I have to do is best a 16 year-old boy. We all know if Kenobi disappeared Master Jinn would do anything to get him back.” Lord Sidious gave no reply and ended the transmission. Raya went to one of the training rooms and spent the rest of the night working diligently to prepare for the days ahead. **************** How is it so far? -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
The Jedi Princess Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/2/00 9:07am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This story is very intriging. I look forward to finding out more about this sith apprentice. And I also sense the possibility of Obi torture. hehe Please add more.
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 9:30am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	She works very hard at being evil, but the eyes of a sad angel may give her away. A 16 yr old Jedi Apprentice VS a 16 yr old Sith Apprentice.... how much do I love that!!!! The sparks could fly, in more ways than one!!!!!!!
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 11:13am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This part was originally supposed to be part of my last post, so you may want to read the ending lines of it. ****************** Meanwhile on Coruscant Darth Sidious sat pondering on the message he had just received from his apprentice. He had to admit though only to himself, that Raya was one of the... no, the best apprentice he had ever had. Her quick thinking and natural skill in combat had always impressed him. She was also the only apprentice he’d had that never showed fear and uncertainty in the face of anything even himself (this he did not like but he would live with it). He thought back to the time when he had first brought her to Coruscant. He hadn’t even been considering her as an apprentice at the time. The choice had been completely random. He’d seen a 6 year-old girl in a public park on another planet. The child matched the criteria he was looking for and when the child’s mother turn away he took her. By the time the mother had looked back he was half way to his ship. He’d looked down at the child he was carrying at his side. He could see she was finally realizing what was happening. He expected the child to start crying and screaming for her mother but she did neither. The little girl looked up at him and calmly said “Take me back.” It surprised him that she didn’t panic even when he threw her into a room on his ship and locked the door behind him as he left. When they reached Coruscant he hauled her off the ship and walked to a training room where his current apprentice at the time stood waiting. “Here.” he said forcing the girl forward. His 21 year-old apprentice stared at the child not knowing what his Master wanted him to do with it. “As a reward for completing your last mission you can have this to practice your lightsaber drills on. I went out of my way to get it for you so don’t kill it right away.” As he was leaving the room he caught the evil smile on his apprentice’s lips and heard his lightsaber ignite. He returned a few hours later to see how his apprentice was doing. What he saw shocked him. His apprentice was cowering in a corner, he’d been beaten bloody and there were several lightsaber burns on his body. He turned and saw the girl across the room, there was a horrified expression on her face and she didn’t have a mark on her. At first he didn’t believe Raya could have done this but after seeing the security tapes it was confirmed. Lord Sidious sat back remembering the incident, his apprentice had died of his injuries later that day and taken Raya as his new apprentice, but in the end she didn’t come out of the experience completely unscathed. The sadness in her eyes over what she had done had never gone away. Even now when she had most likely forgotten about the Sith apprentice she’d killed her eyes remained unchanged. But eyes or not he knew she would become a great Sith. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 11:21am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	She is one tough little girl!! Obi I see a great battle in your future This is a great story Ibis, more more more!!!!
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
Obi the Kid Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 11:27am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	keep it up...great story here !! -----signature----- Come and join my Ewan list: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/EwanLiam2/ My TPM fic site: http://www.angelfire.com/movies/obithekid/
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History
The Jedi Princess Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/2/00 11:41am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Up we go!
	Locked Topic \| Active Topic Notification \| Private Message \| Post History

Pages: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 - ~~Previous~~ | Next | Reload