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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 10/27/00 1:25pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	No feedback? =^( -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 10/28/00 6:01am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Ok here's a short post, if anyone is still reading. ******************** Raya stood in front of her Master. “I don’t want to be evil anymore. Go away and leave me alone!” “Fine,” Lord Sidious responded. “But don’t come crawling back to me when you kill your friends.” “I’d never hurt the Jedi.” “Yes, you say that now, but inside that hate and anger still burns. You cannot escape it, it is a part of you, now and forever. It’s only a matter of time before it rears its head again.” “No, I’m good, I’m good!” she cried back, but even as she said it she could feel the darkness taking hold of her. She pulled out her lightsaber and attacked her Master, but as the blade came down upon him he disappeared and Obi-Wan took his place. She couldn’t stop in time and Obi-Wan fell dead at her feet. ------------------------ Raya woke up, drenched with sweat. She looked around to see the now dark familiar room of the healers. The dream had really shaken her, worse she could still feel the dark pulse deep within her heart. She had to get rid of it, before she hurt someone and she knew just how to do it. Quietly without waking any of the other healers she crept out of the room, heading to where she thought Master Yoda’s room was. ********************** I should beable to finish this story with one more post. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 10/28/00 12:43pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Here it is, my last post. ********************* The next morning Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon stood before the council. Master Windu spoke first. “We suppose you have discovered that Raya is no longer at the healers.” “Yes,” Qui-Gon replied. “We found out when we went to see her this morning. Where is she?” “Address that later we will.” Master Yoda said. “More pressing matters we have to discuss. Deceived the council you did. Told the truth about Raya you did not. A Sith apprentice she was.” “Yes.” Qui-Gon replied. “I deceived you but I never lied to you.” “Allowing a Sith into the temple jeopardized the safety of the entire order.” Ki-Adi-Mundi said. “She is no threat to us, and she did save Obi-Wan and myself.” Qui-Gon responded. “Kidnapped Obi-Wan she did, nearly killed him she did.” Master Yoda said. Obi-Wan who had been staring at the floor suddenly looked up. Qui-Gon was surprised. He hadn’t told Master Yoda or anyone else what had happened on Medjul, yet he knew this. “Surprise you this information does?” Yoda asked. “How did you find out?” he asked. “Told me last night, Raya did.” “She told you everything?” Obi-Wan asked. The old Master looked at him. “Yes, Padawan Kenobi, everything. Proud of you, your Master should be.” “Thank you Master Yoda.” he said. “We have discussed all the details of this situation,” Master Windu continued, “and reached a decision. You will get a warning this time Qui-Gon. If you ever try to deceive us again you will risk expulsion from the Jedi Order.” “Yes, Master.” Qui-Gon said. “Now what of Raya?” “Gone she is, exist she does not.” Master Yoda responded. “What?” Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan said in unison. Yoda sighed. “Knew of the darkness in her she did, and that overcome it she could not. Asked me to erase her memories she did. No memories, no anger, no hate. Exist Raya no longer does.” The two Jedi just stared at him. “You killed her.” Obi-Wan said quietly, blinking away the tears that had started to form. “Yes.” Yoda confirmed. “What of her now.” Qui-Gon asked. “We’ve given her a new name.” Master Windu said. “Master Laura has offered to take her as her Padawan learner.” “She is to become a Jedi?” Qui-Gon asked. “Yes. May the Force be with you.” Mace said ending the meeting. --------------------------- As soon as the two Jedi were out of the room Obi-Wan burst into tears. Qui-Gon tried to comfort him. “Obi-Wan, Raya made this decision on her own. She wouldn’t want you to cry for her.” “No, she wouldn’t want anything. She doesn’t even remember me anymore.” He turned and ran from his Master, who didn’t even try to follow him. Qui-Gon knew he needed to be alone. Obi-Wan ran in the back of the gardens, where he collapsed into sobs. ----------------------- Darth Sidious was not pleased. He’d found out about what the Jedi had done to his apprentice. She was useless to him now. Oh well, he thought, I have another candidate that should make a better apprentice than that stupid girl. ------------------------ About an hour after arriving in the gardens Obi-Wan heard two voices. Looking out from his hiding place, he saw Master Laura and Raya sitting by one of the ponds. No, he corrected himself, it wasn’t Raya anymore, she was dead. Master Laura must have said something funny because her apprentice laughed. It was the first time Obi-Wan had ever heard her laugh, and it sounded beautiful to him. Master Laura got up and left, but the girl stayed a few minutes longer. Than she got up and started to leave as well. As she passed by the place where Obi-Wan was hiding to leave she spotted him and stopped. “Hello.” she said. “Are you alright, you look upset.” Obi-Wan stood up. He looked at the girl from foot to head. She looked so different dressed in Jedi garb. His eyes paused at her waist where Raya’s onyx lightsaber hung. They let her keep it, he thought. He continued to look at her until he reached her eyes. He’d expected them to be the sad eyes he was used to, but they weren’t. They were bright and full of spirit. “Hi, I’m Renie.” “Renie, pretty name.” he said still startled by her eyes. “Yeah, it means reborn.” she said cheerily. Suddenly, Obi-Wan didn’t feel so upset anymore. He hadn’t lost Raya, she had just been reborn. And she had been reborn into a much happier person. “I’m Obi-Wan.” he said. “Nice to meet you. I know this is going to sound kinda corny, but I’m new here. So you want to be friends?” “Yeah.” Obi-Wan said. “I’d like that a lot.” THE END **************** Well? What do you all think. Please don't stay silent. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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