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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 1:48pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hello. Miss me? ******************** Obi-Wan sat in his room on board the small ship taking them to Mejdul. He looked at the chronometer, still 24 hours until they arrived. Usually he would spent this time meditating but now he couldn’t seem to focus. He had a feeling they shouldn’t be going to Mejdul. It was a feeling he couldn’t seem to shake. He was so deep in thought that he didn’t even notice Qui-Gon enter the room. “Padawan.” At this Obi-Wan snapped back to reality. “Oh, I’m sorry Master. I didn’t hear you come in.” “It’s alright, Obi-Wan.” Qui-Gon said sitting on the sleep couch next to his apprentice. “Something bothering you?” “Can’t you feel it?” “What?” “The dark ripples in the force. They’ve been getting stronger as we gotten closer to Mejdul.” “I feel nothing. Relax Obi-wan. Odds are this is just some prank that has gone to far.” “Then why was the council worried about it and why are we going to investigate?” “The council is not worried and the monarch has asked us to come.” Obi-Wan made one last attempt to convince Qui-Gon to turn the ship around. “If we go to Mejdul something bad is going to happen. I know it.” “Trust me Padawan. Nothing bad is going to happen. It’s late get some rest.” Qui-Gon said as he left the room, but he wasn’t entirely sure his apprentice’s feelings were incorrect. ************************** The next day when the Jedi arrived in Mejd they were greeted by the monarch Sharrach, “Welcome, Jedi. You have no idea what a relief it is to see you. The scare over this vandal has kept many of the people from traveling or leaving their homes at night.” “We wish to see all of the places where the vandalism occurred. Then I would like to see the reports of the accidents.” Qui-Gon requested. “You do not wish to rest first?” Sharrach said slightly surprised. “No thank you.” Qui-Gon replied. In truth he would have liked some time to rest after traveling, but one look at Obi-Wan told him while he might rest his apprentice would not. Obi-Wan was already on full alert as though there were enemies around every corner waiting to jump out at him. Qui-Gon wanted to see all the evidence as soon as possible so he could dismiss this whole situation as a practical joke quickly, for his Padawan’s sake. “This is Mondle” the monarch said indicating the man beside him. “He will show you where all the vandalism took place.” With that the three set off into the city, none of them noticing the black cloaked figure stalking them from the rooftops. *********************** You like? -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 1:50pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Listen up everybody!!! In my next post Obi gonna get his butt beat. I'll post it tonight if I get feedback from this post. Bye! -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Obi the Kid Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 3:14pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	OBI TORTURE !!! WOO HOO!!! feedback...feedback...feedback...feedback... feedback...feedback...feedback...how's that!!! -----signature----- Come and join my Ewan list: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/EwanLiam2/ My TPM fic site: http://www.angelfire.com/movies/obithekid/
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The Jedi Princess Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/2/00 3:48pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	OBI TORTURE!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!! Please post, please post, please post!!!!!! BTW, Obi the Kid, did you find your bricks?
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MI-ALIA Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 4:03pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	great story I love obi-tourture it's the greatest Ibis keep on going !
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 4:27pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Here’s the Obi-T ************************ It was nearly midnight and Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan were still looking at the graffiti. Mondle had left them at dusk claiming he had “errands” to run, but Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon knew he just didn’t want to be out after dark. They had seen wall after vandalized wall and still had no clue as to who did it. Now they were both exhausted and there were still more walls to look at. Qui-Gon was about to suggest they go back to the palace for the night when a hooded figure dropped from the top of the alley, strait into their path. Both Jedi immediately put their hands on their lightsabers. “Who are you?” Qui-Gon demanded, he didn’t like being surprised. In reply the figure pulled out and ignited an amethyst colored lightsaber. The figure rushed at them so suddenly and quickly they barely had time to activate their own lightsabers. Because of the figures short stature it was able to weave between the two Jedi with relative ease. It quickly became apparent that the figure was spending most of it’s effort merely blocking their blows. While it blocked Obi-Wan’s attacks easily, Qui-Gon was giving the fighter a much more difficult time. Yet neither could get through their attacker’s defense. They both felt the dark side radiating through this person. Despite the difficulty of the battle Raya was having fun. It had been a long time since she’d been in a lightsaber duel. She waited for Qui-Gon to give her an opening. There! The Jedi Master’s last assault had left him slightly off balance, she kicked him hard in the chest. It knocked the wind out of him and sent him to the ground. Obi-Wan surprised at his Master’s fall left his guard down for a split second. It was all Raya needed and she buried her lightsaber deeply into Obi-Wan’s right shoulder. He screamed dropped his lightsaber, staggered back a few feet and then fell to his knees in agony. She raised her lightsaber to deal a similar blow to his left shoulder. He looked up at her hooded face the pain so evident in his eye, Raya paused a second to enjoy it. The force suddenly warned her of the Jedi Master directly behind her, gathering the dark side around her she leapt on top of the nearest roof. Qui-Gon’s attack had barely missed her. Looking down at the two Raya realized had she not stopped and succeeded in injuring the boy again it would not have given her enough time to block the Jedi Master’s attack. I’d be in two pieces right now had I continued, she thought. She watched Qui-Gon immediately drop beside his Padawan and begin examining the wound. She’d been lucky, had Qui-Gon not been off balance she would have never been able to wound the boy or escape. It had been a considerable risk, but one worth taking. Of course had her plan worked perfectly she would have wounded Kenobi’s left shoulder as well making it almost impossible for him to fight with his lightsaber. She wanted it that way so when she returned to kidnap him there would be little or no resistance, provided she found him alone. But this would have to do. ********************* I have plenty more where that came from. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Obi the Kid Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 8/2/00 4:40pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	oooh, more Obi torture please? -----signature----- Come and join my Ewan list: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/EwanLiam2/ My TPM fic site: http://www.angelfire.com/movies/obithekid/
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The Jedi Princess Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/2/00 6:51pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	more please! This is great!
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/3/00 7:47am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	More Obi-T (sort of) ********************** Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon walked out of the Healer’s room of the palace the next morning. Obi-Wan’s shoulder was completely covered on white bandages and every time he move his arm it sent waves of pain spiraling through his body. The healer had told him not to use his arm and to stay in bed for 3 days. The wound had been the worst the healer had ever seen, he was lucky he hadn’t lost his arm. When they got to Obi-Wan’s room he laid down almost immediately. Qui-Gon sat down on the bed beside him. “You were right about something bad happening if we came here.” Qui-Gon started. “I should have been more cautious.” “It’s not your fault, Master.” “How are you feeling?” “About the same as the last 60 times you’ve asked me.” Obi-Wan replied with a grin. Qui-Gon smiled at his apprentice. “Sharrach wants a full account of what’s happened and wants to discuss ways of finding this prankster.” “I think we have good proof that this isn’t just a prank, Master.” “I agree, but Sharrach is probably going to keep me busy for a while. Stay here and get some rest.” “No problem, Master.” With that Qui-Gon left and Obi-Wan promptly fell asleep. He woke up to someone knocking on his door. Rolling over he saw it was dark outside. Had he really slept that long? The knocking continued. If it was Qui-Gon he would just come in, Obi-Wan thought. Finally Obi-Wan got up and open the door to find a messenger who gave him a letter and left. Obi-Wan sat down on the bed to read the letter. ‘Obi-Wan, There have been new developments in our mission. If you feel up to it come out to the gardens so I can tell you about them. It really is a lovely night. I think the fresh air will do you some good. -Qui-Gon’ Actually Obi-Wan didn’t feel up to it. He was tired and would have rather just gone back to sleep, but new developments could be important. So he reluctantly got up and headed for the gardens. It was dark in the gardens but one could see every last star. Obi-Wan never thought the gardens could be so huge, how was he ever supposed to find Qui-Gon? After thinking about it he choose a path his Master would have most likely gone down and started walking. He was surprised at how tired he was, walking was starting to be hard. He reached the end of path, which stopped at the garden wall, which completely surrounded the palace grounds. Still no sign of Qui-Gon. “You got my message.” a strange low voice behind him said. Obi-Wan whirled around to see a figure step out of the shadows. He recognized the person as last night’s attacker and immediately drew his lightsaber into his left hand. “Where’s my Master.” Obi-Wan demanded, sounding must stronger than he felt. “Still discussing plans with the monarch.” The figure ignited it’s light saber and with relative ease flicked Obi-Wan’s weapon out of his hand. The figure then moved it’s lightsaber an inch away form his throat. “You wouldn’t last a second in a fight with me, even if you weren’t wounded. I don’t see why Qui-Gon puts up with such a weak apprentice.” The last thing Obi-Wan saw was a first coming at his face. ------------------ Raya stood over the unconscious Jedi. She took out the steel chord she had brought with her and began tying his hands and feet.. She made complex knots so he wouldn’t be able to use the force to untie them. Then she picked him up and threw him over her shoulder. She drew the dark side around her and leapt straight up and over the wall, landing softly on the other side. She then began the long walk back to her ship. The walk usually only took 10 minutes of force amplified running, but carrying the Jedi threw off her balance and made it impossible to run. She got back to her ship an hour later and left Obi-Wan in a room, locking the door behind her. In the cockpit she started the engines and took her ship into orbit. She didn’t want to be on the planet when Master Jinn found out his precious Padawan was gone. She had probe droids listening to all the palace conversations and when she did land her ship again, it would be in a place Qui-Gon had already searched. ***************** feedback is always nice -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Obi the Kid Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 8/3/00 7:52am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Obi's gonna get it.... Hey JP !! I did find my bricks...get ready to build that wall !! HA !! -----signature----- Come and join my Ewan list: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/EwanLiam2/ My TPM fic site: http://www.angelfire.com/movies/obithekid/
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/3/00 10:39am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	After this post I’ll run out of prewritten stuff, so ideas about how I should continue would be very appreciated. ************************** Qui-Gon had finally got out of his meeting with Sharrach and the other officials around midnight. He was completely exhausted. The palace officials had almost been in a panic about the attack and it had taken a while for Qui-Gon to calm them down. He walked to his room and sat down on the bed. How long has it been since I’ve slept, he wondered. Not since we arrived on the planet two days ago. I should really go check on Obi-Wan, but first I’ll lay down for a moment, just a second. Then I’ll go see how Obi-Wan is, he decided. Unfortunately he was asleep before his head his the pillow. --------------------------- Raya was standing in the middle of a dark room. Suddenly Obi-Wan Kenobi and Qui-Gon Jinn appeared out of nowhere. The three launched themselves into battle. She disarmed both of them and was about to deliver a killing blow that would strike both of them when a white figure appeared and using the force threw her back. She saw the Jedi disappear and jumped to her feet. The white figure still stood where it had been . “I won’t let you kill them.” it said in a strangely familiar voice. Anger wheeled in Raya. She’d been so close! She leapt at the figure, a savage growl escaping her lips... and passed right through the thing. Not discouraged she attacked again and again, none of the blows hitting their mark. Finally Raya fell to her knees in exhaustion. “I won’t let you kill them...” the white figure said. “And you’ll never kill me.” It added quietly. “Who are you!” Raya demanded. “Your conscience.” Raya awoke with a start. She’d never had a dream like that before. As she lay on the sleepcouch thinking about the dream she did something she’d never done before. She started laughing. What a stupid dream, she thought. Imagine me having a conscience. She thought back to all the people she had killed, there had been so many. There was no way she could have a conscience. What was that? She could feel strange ripples in the force, only they were of the light. The Jedi boy must be awake and meditating, she thought. She cringed slightly, she hated the light. It had probably caused her weird dream. She got up and put on her black cloak. Then making sure her hood was up she walked to the Jedi’s room. ----------------------------------- Obi-Wan slowly opened his eyes and found himself in complete darkness. His head throbbed as did his wounded shoulder. He tried to rub his aching shoulder to find his hands were bound behind his back. He tried to sit up and found him feet were bound as well. Panic began to rise in his throat. He quickly quelled it and started to assess his situation. He was in a room with a cold metal floor, it was dark, completely dark so there couldn’t be any windows, his hands and feet were bound. At the moment he was at the mercy of his captor which could be either a Sith or someone who hates the Jedi. He didn’t know which he would have preferred. He struggled to get the bindings off but to no avail. After a few minutes of squirming Obi-Wan got himself into a knelling position. He might as well meditate, he had nothing better to do. After about an hour (as near as he could figure) he heard footsteps coming from outside the door. In seconds he was on full alert. He saw the door open and the lights flicker on. The person in front of him was dressed totally in black. It was the same attacker he’d seen in the gardens and in the alley. He kept his mind shields up and his face expressionless. The dark energies flowed strongly from this person. One thing he hadn’t noticed before was how small the person was. “Been meditating have we?” the person said. “What do you want?” Obi-Wan asked. “Oh I want lots of things, my Master to be pleased with me, the Jedi Order to come to an end, the Sith to rule the universe...” “You are a Sith.” “Really, I hadn’t noticed. What tipped you off, the black clothing, the lightsaber, or perhaps my use of the force.” “When my Master finds out about this-” “One your Master doesn’t know your gone yet and two I want him to find out. You see, my Master wants me to kill a Jedi but Master Jinn is much stronger than me, so he is going to have a little accident trying to save his beloved apprentice.” Obi-Wan’s expression never changed while the Sith said this but inside his spirits sank. “Oh and by the way, I’ll need this.” With that the Sith pulled out a knife and put it at the base of his braid. “No!” he screamed. He struggled to get away. Finally the Sith had to hold him down and cut off the braid an inch above his shoulder instead of at the base. The Sith left him in the dark, crying over his lost braid. ------------------------------- No-o-o! Qui-Gon was awake instantly. The scream had come from Obi-Wan. He’d cried out through their bond. Qui-Gon was up and running, he burst into Obi-Wan’s room to find it empty. The sun streamed into the room. He saw a letter on the floor, picking it up he read it and the color drained from his face. It was a letter to Obi-Wan from him, only he hadn’t written it. **************************** Ok everybody I need some ideas. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/3/00 4:10pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This is kind of sappy sorry. ***************************** Walking back to the cockpit Raya started examining the braid she’d stolen from the Jedi. All that kicking and screaming for a piece of hair, she thought. What a waste of energy. Then shedding tears because it was gone. Didn’t the boy realize it would grow back, if she let him live. The thought struck her that she hadn’t decided what she was going to do with the boy once she got rid of his Master. He was no where near her strength and would be useless in a training duel, but killing him seemed a waste of potential. A year or so training under her Master and he could become a dangerous adversary, not that her Master would train an ex-Jedi. Still maybe she could find some use for him. Nah, she thought , as soon as I take care of his Master I’ll just kill him. Raya considered how she should approach Master Jinn with her proposition. She could send him a note with his Padawan’s braid in it or send him a holographic message. Or she could meet him and personally give him the braid. Either way he’d want proof that his Padawan was still alive. He’d respond much better to her demands if he was well, which meant keeping him fed and not kicking the crap out of him when he got annoying. Although she could still do that as long as she made sure he could still walk and that the bruises weren’t visible. She decided to approach Jinn personally, but she’d make sure she had plenty of escape plans available, just in case. Looking at the clock on the wall she saw it would be morning in Mejd soon. There was no way she would even think about landing her ship in broad daylight and Qui-Gon had probably found out by now that his apprentice was gone. She programmed the ship computed to highlight all areas around the city of Mejd that had been searched. Realizing she had free time she went straight to a training room. She wanted to be prepared for when she would confront Master Jinn. ----------------------------- 8 hours later, Raya emerged from the training room. She was tired and hungry, but the knowledge that she was a slightly better fighter than she had been when she entered the room was worth it. She went to go eat something. While she was eating she noticed it had been more than 36 hours since the Jedi boy had eaten. She was supposed to keep him healthy and she’d forgotten to feed him. Maybe this is why Lord Sidious never let me have a pet, she thought. Getting up she grabbed a small loaf of bread and a bottle of water, then headed to where the boy was. Walking in the small unfurnished room she saw Obi-Wan sitting up with his back against the wall. He looked up at her with his ever expressionless face. “You should be glad I’m here.” she told him. “I didn’t ask for your company.” he sneered. “That wasn’t very Jedi-like.” she said kneeling beside him. “Turn around.” “Why, so you can stab me in the back?” “Turn around or I’ll cut off the little bid of braid you have left.” she threatened. She didn’t feel like playing games right now. Reluctantly Obi-Wan turned putting his back to the Sith. He felt his captors hands pulling at his binds. Probably making them tighter, he thought. He was surprised when he felt them loosen and then being pulled off his wrists. He turned back rubbing his sore wrists and staring at his captor as he or she began loosening the chords on his ankles. Once Raya had the chords off Kenobi (who was still looking very startled that she untied him) she set the food and water beside him. He looked at it as if it were poisoned. “Eat it.” she told him. “What did you do to it?” Obi-Wan asked suspiciously. “If I wanted to poison you I would have stabbed you with a syringe while you were tied up. But if you’re going to be stubborn-” She pulled a piece off the loaf of bread and put it in her mouth. After she swallowed the boy looked convinced and started eating. Raya stood and watched him devour the bead and then drink all the water. She left taking the steel chords with her and leaving the light on. *************** I still need ideas. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/3/00 4:33pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Great story. I have an idea, it may be a long shot or stupid but,... how about some Obi-Wan-Raya 'interaction. There both sixteen, she's a girl he's a boy, they're alone on a space ship.... -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/3/00 5:31pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Sorry Ibis I don't have any suggesstions for you, but I wanted to let you know what a good job I think you have done so far. I am sure a good idea will materialize. Good luck!!!!
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/3/00 5:49pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Actually JEDIMASTERYU the thought crossed my mind. Its not a stupid idea maybe I'll use it hint hint. I'll probably post one more time tonight. It shouldn't take me more than an hour or so. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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