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Jedi_KnightMariah Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/6/00 5:38pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Perfect! I wish I had the talent of half the people here. I might have the courage to write something oneday. Where was I? Oh, yeah; Awesome!
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/6/00 9:39pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Keep going! -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/8/00 2:05pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Sorry I haven’t posted. I had to do my summer reading projects (which I’m still not finished, grrrr). ********************* Raya finally got a hold of herself and shook Obi-Wan’s arms off her. “Stop it. That only makes me feel worse about killing you.” “You don’t have to kill me, you could run away.” Obi-Wan suggested. “Tried it when I was nine. I couldn’t eat solid food for three weeks. Besides I don’t have anywhere to go.” “You could go to the Jedi temple with me and my Master. We’d protect you from the Sith.” “You’re kidding, right? I doubt I’d be welcome there, you know because of the whole being a Sith and trying to kill you and your Master thing.” “If you left the dark path they would go easier on you and you didn’t have a choice.” “They wouldn’t believe me.” she said. “I believe you.” he replied. “This from the boy who kissed me and told me I was beautiful.” Obi-Wan blushed. “Um, about that... you see, at the time I was kinda...” “Totally out of it and delirious.” “Yeah, sorry.” “I don’t really care.” “Why not?” “I don’t remember anyone ever really caring about me, why should a cute boy.” “You think I’m cute?” “I like your accent.” “Well you’re not to bad looking yourself and I think you have the potential for being a really nice girl. So what do you say we get out of here?” “You promise you won’t let the Jedi council execute me?” “I promise if you agree not to kill me or my Master.” “I’m tired of killing people.” “Ok, let’s go.” “Think you can walk about twenty miles over rocky ground.” she asked. “With some help from a friend.” he said looking at her. “You’re going to have to explain this whole friend concept to me.” “I’ll tell you on the way.” Sorry I haven’t posted. I had to do my summer reading projects (which I’m still not finished, grrrr). ******************* Raya finally got a hold of herself and shook Obi-Wan’s arms off her. “Stop it. That only makes me feel worse about killing you.” “You don’t have to kill me, you could run away.” Obi-Wan suggested. “Tried it when I was nine. I couldn’t eat solid food for three weeks. Besides I don’t have anywhere to go.” “You could go to the Jedi temple with me and my Master. We’d protect you from the Sith.” “You’re kidding, right? I doubt I’d be welcome there, you know because of the whole being a Sith and trying to kill you and your Master thing.” “If you left the dark path they would go easier on you and you didn’t have a choice.” “They wouldn’t believe me.” she said. “I believe you.” he replied. “This from the boy who kissed me and told me I was beautiful.” Obi-Wan blushed. “Um, about that... you see, at the time I was kinda...” “Totally out of it and delirious.” “Yeah, sorry.” “I don’t really care.” “Why not?” “I don’t remember anyone ever really caring about me, why should a cute boy.” “You think I’m cute?” “I like your accent.” “Well you’re not to bad looking yourself and I think you have the potential for being a really nice girl. So what do you say we get out of here?” “You promise you won’t let the Jedi council execute me?” “I promise if you agree not to kill me or my Master.” “I’m tired of killing people.” “Ok, let’s go.” “Think you can walk about twenty miles over rocky ground.” she asked. “With some help from a friend.” he said looking at her. “You’re going to have to explain this whole friend concept to me.” “I’ll tell you on the way.” ******************** Does anybody know what the movie Eye of the Beholder is about, my parents won't let me see it. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/8/00 3:26pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	MORE! -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/8/00 3:56pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Sorry about that last post it got screwed up and I can't change it. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/9/00 2:19pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	to the top -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/9/00 2:36pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Don't sweat the double post. I like the way Obi is starting to get to her. I know he will triumph with her in the end!
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/9/00 4:10pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This is great, can't wait for more! -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/10/00 9:02am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hi again *************** “Master Jinn?” Sharrach asked. Qui-Gon turned to look at him. “I have some good news.” “What?” he asked without much interest. “You have a visitor, he came to the palace escorted by a young lady and is very intent on seeing you.” “I’m not interested in see any of the officials children.” and he turned away again. “Oh, I suppose I’ll just tell Obi-Wan you’re busy.” Sharrach replied. Qui-Gon spun around to face him. “Obi-Wan is back?” he said in disbelief. “Yes, and he brought a young girl with him. She’s-” but the monarch didn’t get to finish what he was saying because Qui-Gon was already halfway down the hall. He rounded a corner and stopped. Obi-Wan was standing some thirty feet in front of him. He looked tired and weak and the girl standing beside him was holding his arm and supporting some of his weight, but he was there. “Obi-Wan?” he said. Obi-Wan turned and saw him. “Master!” he said and smiled. Qui-Gon walked up to him and hugged him. “Am I ever glad to see you. You wouldn’t believe what happened.” “Tell me later, I’m just happy you’re alive.” Qui-Gon replied. Letting him go he put his hand on Obi-Wan’s arm like the girl had been doing, to steady him. “This is Raya, she saved me.” Obi-Wan said indicating the girl beside him. “Raya this is my Master Qui-Gon Jinn.” “I know, remember.” she said hesitantly. Qui-Gon could see the girl was uncomfortable in his presence. “Oh yeah, sorry I forgot.” “I can’t tell you how much I appreciate your help.” Qui-Gon said to the girl, hoping to settle her unease, but it seemed to only make it worse. He also noticed the girl looked tired and sad like a lost child. Sharrach had finally gotten down the hall to join them. “I will make sure you are rewarded, Raya. You can stay in the palace for a few days if you would like.” “Thanks.” she replied then looked at Obi-Wan. “Oh, Master, can I talk to you for a sec, alone.” Obi-Wan asked. “Sure, but then you have to go to the healers.” He replied then the entered an adjoining room. “I’ll go have them set up a room for you.” Sharrach said and left. Raya leaned against a wall. This is just the beginning, she thought, let’s see Obi-Wan should get to the me being an ex-Sith in five... four... three... two... one... “SHE’S A WHAT?!” erupted from the room Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon had entered. Followed by what sounded like Obi-Wan trying to calm down his Master. ----------------------------------- “Master, please don’t yell. She’s different now, she doesn’t want to be evil anymore.” Obi-Wan pleaded. “I don’t care what you think she is, she just trying to trick you Padawan, she hasn’t really changed.” “Yes she has Master. The Sith Lord beat her up and then ordered her to kill me, but look I’m still breathing. And besides I promised her we would protect her.” “Fine! I’ll let her go back to her ship and leave.” “No! You can’t do that. If she goes back her Master will kill her!” “Letting her stay here endangers everyone in the palace and around it. She’ll kill us in our sleep.” “No she won’t and if you make her go back I’m going too.” “You’ll be killed!” “So will she. I promised we’d protect her and if you won’t I will. You’re always talking about how people can change. She wants to change and be good. How is she supposed to do that if no one will give her the chance. She knew she wouldn’t be able to go back and she left anyway. I’m just asking you to give her a chance.” Qui-Gon was shocked by his apprentice’s feelings on this. He could see that there was no way he was going to change his mind. “Alright. She can stay for a few days, but she’s never going to be left by herself and I’m going to watch her. If she messes up once, I’m going to tell Sharrach she’s the one causing the trouble and I will personally hand her over to the prison guards.” “Fine.” Obi-Wan said and walked with some difficultly out of the room. Alone Qui-Gon wondered how he was going to keep an eye on the Sith and his apprentice twenty-four hours a day. ******************* Tell me what you think. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/10/00 9:12am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Way to defend her Obi-Wan. But you have to understand Qui-Gon, he can't just say ok and let a Sith loose on the galaxy. Goog post Ibis, I look forward to more!
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/10/00 10:38am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Alright! Jedi and Sith apprentices together, who knows what kind of trouble they'll get in. MORE! -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/11/00 8:17pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	nudges Ibis "who knows what kind of trouble they'll get in" Hint hint.gif Up. -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/12/00 6:29am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Ok people I need a vote on how I should proceed. Who wants Raya to get in a lot of trouble with Qui-Gon (any suggestions would be nice). -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Jee-dai Registered: Jun '00	Date Posted: 8/12/00 7:06am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Gee, Raya stabbed Obi in the shoulder, almost dismembered him, froze him near to death, and gasp cut off Obi's braid. I think Qui-Gon is justified in at least giving her a few hostile looks. -----signature----- Some of my favorite (dead?) fanfics... Appearances http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=1203598&page=1 The Lost Children http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=3212597&start=4933048 Prophecies and Destinies
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/12/00 1:16pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	You know my vote (Trouble is the best way to go.) -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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