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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/18/00 10:35am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hi, I'm back from my trip and I'm all caught up and waiting impatiently for more. -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 8/18/00 9:05pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	taps foot "And impatiently waiting for more." -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/19/00 1:17pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hey, isn't anybody besides JEDIMASTERYU reading this? (Thanks JEDIMASTERYU) Come on someone else must have some oppinion on how my story is. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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The Jedi Princess Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/19/00 2:17pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I'm reading it! I'm reading it! Must have more soon. I have to know what is going to happen to Raya. So post soon.
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Jee-dai Registered: Jun '00	Date Posted: 8/20/00 6:43am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Up. -----signature----- Some of my favorite (dead?) fanfics... Appearances http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=1203598&page=1 The Lost Children http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=3212597&start=4933048 Prophecies and Destinies
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/20/00 9:13am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Sorry it's not a very long post. ******************** Qui-Gon walked out to where Obi-Wan was waiting. Seeing his apprentice’s optimistic face he turned away. Obi-Wan’s hopes fell almost immediately. “She not going to make it, is she?” he said. Qui-Gon turned back to him. “Obi-Wan, the healers here aren’t equipped to deal with someone with such severe injuries as Raya’s.” Qui-Gon said quietly. “Isn’t there anything we can do? A healing trance maybe?” “No, a healing trance would only prolong her life, not save it. But there is one thing we could do, it’s a long shot but it’s worth a try.” “What Master?” “The healers at the Jedi Temple could heal her, if she survives the three-day trip.” Qui-Gon said. “But outsiders aren’t allowed in the Temple and if the Council found out that she was a Sith...” “I know. They may make an exception if they knew she saved both our lives and I’m not going to tell them she was a Sith apprentice until she’s healed enough to where she can survive without medical care.” “The Council won’t like this Master.” Obi-Wan pointed. “Obi-Wan, you were right about her from the beginning. She does have a good heart, she just didn’t have a choice as to how she wanted to live. She was forced down the darkened path. I don’t completely trust her but she’s proven she doesn’t want to be evil anymore. I didn’t see that until now, until she tried to save you. She had the opportunity to escape, but instead she went against an enemy she knew she couldn’t defeat, that is true goodness. Now it’s our job to help her, no matter what the Council thinks.” “Did you feel her using the light side of the force?” “Yes, she could have been a great Jedi Knight. Now go pack your things, we’re leaving as soon as possible.” “Yes Master.” he said and turned to leave. “Obi-Wan what’s that in your hand?” Qui-Gon asked. “This? Its Raya’s lightsaber.” he said handing it to him. Qui-Gon studied it for a moment. “Beautifully carved, I’ve never seen anything like it.” he said handing it back. “I know. It’s hard to believe anything this beautiful could be so lethal.” Obi-Wan said, then left to pack. *************** I'll post more later. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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The Jedi Princess Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 8/20/00 9:41am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Please post more today!
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Master_Tahl Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/20/00 11:19am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This is great keep posting! -----signature----- lEElEEE(==========- 'Ever stop to think and forget to start again?' - key chain N-SW: http://geocities.com/doscu
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/21/00 9:02am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hi again! ******************* Obi-Wan looked at the chronometer, they still had five hours until they reached Coruscant. The last three days had been the longest of his life. Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon had been taking turns watching over Raya. They hadn’t gotten much sleep. When it was his turn he held her hand and talked to her. She had been getting steadily worse through out the trip. He bent down over Raya. “Please don’t die,” he whispered in her ear. “We’re almost there, don’t die now. I haven’t gotten a chance to thank you.” ------------------------------------- Raya had been fading in and out of awareness the whole trip. She could feel death coming and she decided she wouldn’t fight it. After all there was no reason to stay, even if the Jedi helped her recover and leave the dark side, it didn’t matter. Her Master was still out there, he’d just wait until she was alone. Did it really matter whether she died here or then? Either way he’d cause her death. She felt herself fading out of consciousness, probably for the last time when she heard it. “Please don’t die. We’re almost there, don’t die now. I haven’t gotten a chance to thank you.” At first the voice was so distant she thought it might have been her imagination, but after a second she realized it couldn’t have been. Someone wanted her to live. She didn’t know who but it didn’t really matter. The voice sounded desperate. Maybe I’ll stick around a little while, she thought, just to find out who wants me to live so badly. Her mind made up she concentrated on putting herself into a healing trace. -------------------------- Qui-Gon checked the hour, it was time to contact the Temple and arrange for healers to be waiting for them. He sent a transmission to the Temple. A few seconds later a hologram of Mace Windu came up. “Did you complete your mission?” Mace asked “The person who caused the vandalism won’t be doing it again.” he replied. “Was it a Sith?” Qui-Gon hesitated to answer. In truth he didn’t know how to answer. “I believe it would be better to address that question in front of the whole Council.” “Not a problem, the Council would like to speak with you the moment you land.” Mace Windu said. “Unfortunately that may not be possible. I request that some of the healers meet us when we land. We have a patient for them that is in poor condition.” “What’s Kenobi done now?” Mace replied with a sigh. “It’s not Obi-Wan.” Mace raised an eyebrow. “If it’s not your Padawan, and from the look of it not you, then who is it that needs immediate attention?” “A young girl, about sixteen.” Qui-Gon said. “Not another, what was that your apprentice called them, pathetic life forms.” “A pathetic life form is about as far away from this girl as you can get, but I will explain everything to the Council.” “See that you do.” With that the transmission ended. Qui-Gon leaned back in the pilots seat. How was he going to explain everything to the Council without telling them that Raya was a Sith. ************** Hope you liked it! -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/21/00 9:07am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I liked it, I liked it. I was gone for a while and thrilled there were so many posts to catch up on!!! Kind of funny how Mace assumed it was Obi-Wan that needed the healers! Hope we get more soon!
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/22/00 8:13am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Ok everybody I've got major writers block. I would appreciate some more ideas as to where you want me to go from here. I don't care how stupid the ideas sound. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/23/00 5:05am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Gosh, this gets off the first page fast. Come on people I can't write anymore if I don't have any ideas. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 8/23/00 11:14am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	DOESN'T ANYBODY CARE!!! -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Kelly Kenobi Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 8/23/00 11:20am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I care I care! I just have no talent for writing these things, nor do I have any good ideas for you.... Sorry! I am sure given time you will think of something great!
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Jee-dai Registered: Jun '00	Date Posted: 8/23/00 1:45pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I care too! It's just that I don't have ideas to contribute right now. -----signature----- Some of my favorite (dead?) fanfics... Appearances http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=1203598&page=1 The Lost Children http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=3212597&start=4933048 Prophecies and Destinies
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