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Jee-dai Registered: Jun '00	Date Posted: 9/5/00 9:58pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Heehee, do I detect a fledging romance in the works? :-) -----signature----- Some of my favorite (dead?) fanfics... Appearances http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=1203598&page=1 The Lost Children http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=3212597&start=4933048 Prophecies and Destinies
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 9/10/00 4:50pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I know, I know it was longer than two days I'm sorry. School work is getting in the way. I'll try to be better. **************************** Obi-Wan was with Raya. They had been talking about lightsaber moves. Obi-Wan made a quick glance at the door to make sure no one was around before he asked his next question. “Where did you get your lightsaber?” “I make it, just like you. Can I have it back?” “Sure.” he said handing it to her. “What’s it made of?” “Metal and wire. The outside is a casing made of onyx.” She answered. “You carve it?” “Yes.” “How? It’s so intricate, I never seen anything so detailed.” he marveled. “I just started carving and that’s what resulted.” “What kind of animal is it?” he asked. “It’s called a dragon. They’re spoken of in old legends that originated before the republic existed. They came in lots of colors, but the black dragon was said to be the most cunning.” “Do you know any of the legends?” “I know one or two. Would you like to hear one?” “Sure.” Raya closed her eyes for a moment, thinking of a legend. “There was a black dragon. She was young as dragons go and while she was stronger than most her age she wasn’t the strongest. She was evil and worked hard at it. She torched towns and killed many people. No one dared challenge her. She was feared by all who crossed her path. But one day a young human challenged her. He drew a sword and told her he wouldn’t let her hurt anymore people. She laughed at his challenge and with a swish of her tail disarmed him, but he didn’t run away. He kept fighting even though he was unarmed. Eventually he was hurt to badly to continue. The dragon then carried him off to her lair to eat him. When they got to the cave where the dragon lived she dropped him and opened her mouth to gobble him up. But he didn’t scream or beg for mercy, he just stood the and awaited his death bravely. This touched her in a way she couldn’t describe so she sparred him for the moment. That moment became days and weeks. All the while she was caring for his injuries until finally he was well again. “The man as well was beginning to like the dragon and when she finally offered him freedom he refused to go. He wanted to protect the dragon from other humans like him because he believed that the dragon wasn’t really evil. Finally after some persuasion the dragon convinced him to leave, but he swore to return.” “Well what happened?” Obi-Wan asked very much interested. “There are two endings to this legend. In one the young man returned with a magic potion, which the dragon drank. The dragon then was transformed into a human girl the same age as the young man. They married and lived happily ever after. In the other the dragon was visited by another dragon who told her the man had tricked her and was on his way back with an army. The black dragon then flew to where the man was and killed him in a rage for his betrayal. Then she found out he really wasn’t bringing an army to kill her and she jumped off a cliff onto sharp rocks a thousand feet below to end her pain over killing the only person she ever loved.” “I think I like the first ending better.” Obi-Wan said. “Me too.” ********************************* It would be nice to know which end you all like. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 9/11/00 2:46pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	It's ok to send feedback. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Jedi Master Nejaa Halcyon Registered: Jun '00	Date Posted: 9/11/00 2:59pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	This rocks... UP! -----signature----- "The Wheel of Time turns, and Ages come and go, leaving memories that become legend. Legend fades to myth, and even myth is long forgotten when the Age that gave it birth comes again." Robert Jordan
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JEDIMASTERYU Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 9/11/00 7:56pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Great Post! Obi-Wan has a little trouble reading through the lines, eh? -----signature----- "The first step to wisdom is recognizing your ignorance" - Yoda, Shadows of the Empire "Don't call me clumsy" - Obi-Wan JA #2 "Join me and we can rule the galaxy father and son" - Darth Vader ESB "I don't believe it" - Luke ESB "Be Quiet! All of you"
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Jedi Master Nejaa Halcyon Registered: Jun '00	Date Posted: 9/17/00 10:52am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I feel the NEED, the NEED for SPEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!! -----signature----- "The Wheel of Time turns, and Ages come and go, leaving memories that become legend. Legend fades to myth, and even myth is long forgotten when the Age that gave it birth comes again." Robert Jordan
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 9/24/00 11:03am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I guess I should explain why exactly its been two weeks since I posted. My mom canceled our account with my internet server so I havent gotten a chance to go on the internet. I'm really sorry. Also I've been writing a new fan fiction, so I havent been keeping up with this one. I know I'm a terrible person for making you wait so long. But all my readers have my sincerest apologies. Anyway, on with the story. ********************************* A little while later, Obi-Wan got up to go to the fresher. The second he was gone, she got out of bed and threw some covers over the pillows. Inspecting her work, she made sure it looked like her form sleeping. She felt guilty about leaving the healers, but she wasn’t going to miss an opportunity to explore the Jedi Temple. Besides she wanted to know how to get to the nearest exit as quickly as possible if there was ever a situation where she had to leave quickly. She snuck out of the healers without anyone seeing her. She wasn’t silent as usual because her wound limited her movements. She made a mental note of her surroundings so she would be able to find her way back. She took the lift down a level and continued her exploring, staying out of places she knew she was likely to find others. She walked around for about an hour and never saw anyone else. “This place is a huge maze.” she said to herself. She felt a warning in the force and slipped around another hallway. She heard two people talking. One she recognized to be the little green gremlin, Master Yoda. The other she didn’t know. “You wanted to talk to me, Maser Yoda?” the deeper male voice asked. “Yes Mace. Found out what Qui-Gon is hiding I have, but tell the other council members you must not.” “What is so important that the rest of the Council can’t know about it?” Mace asked. “The girl Qui-Gon brought.” Master Yoda said. “What about her?” “Believe she was a Sith Apprentice I do.” “What!” Mace said sounding shocked. “He brought a Sith here?” “Believe this I now do. Saw a part of her mind I did. Fill with guilt, misery, and darkness it is. But some light I also sense. Though not as strong it is.” “Do you think that is why he brought her to the temple?” “Yes, but sense I do another reason. Tell us the complete truth of what happened on Mejdul he did not.” Master Yoda replied. “Qui-Gon has gone too far this time.” Mace said, angry obvious in his voice. “When the Council hears of what he’s done-” “Tell the Council of this we will not, not yet. Wait we will. Come clean on his own Qui-Gon might.” “Or Obi-Wan might under a little pressure.” Mace said. “Leave them both alone we will.” Master Yoda said with a stern look. “Put one against the other you will not.” “Fine, but what of the Sith?” “If loyalty to the Sith she still had, stay here she would not.” “You think she wants to help us?” “No. Think I do she wants to get away from her former Master. Knows she does that he will not try to get her here, that safe she is.” Master Yoda sighed. “Such sad eyes for one so young, such a hard life that of the Sith.” “You’re not sympathizing with her are you?” Mace asked. “Chose to be a Sith she did not. When given the choice to leave the dark path, choose the path of the light she did.” “She may have chosen to leave the dark path, but she still walks in the shadows between.” Raya heard the two Jedi walk away in different directions. Now she had a real reason to be afraid. Two of the Council members knew what she was and it didn’t sound like either of them cared for her past. She could either stay here in the temple and face the Jedi, or she could leave and face the wrath of her Master. She didn’t like either. Slowly she made her way back to the healers. She knew how to hide from the Jedi, but there was no way to hide from her Master. ********************** I find it alot easier if when you send me feedback you up my story. It helps me remember that I have to post and I don't have to go throught 11 pages before I find my thread. Thanks:^) -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 9/25/00 2:22pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Um, I know I haven't posted in a really long time, but everyone counldn't have stopped reading. So, is anyone out there? Anyone at all? Don't tell me I'm alone... -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 9/26/00 2:59pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	ISN'T ANYBODY READING????????????????? Hello! -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Kim-kenobi Registered: Jul '99	Date Posted: 9/26/00 10:08pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	sorry I have been constantly reasing but was not able to reply. YES!!!!!! IAM READING!!!! Kim B
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 10/8/00 2:11pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I kno I know I haven't been posting lately, I'm sorry. So here's a longer post for all my dedicated readers. ************************* Raya stopped right outside her room at the healers. She heard the yelling from down the hall. Sneaking a peek inside, she saw Jasd yelling at Obi-Wan. Looks like someone discovered my pillows, she thought to herself. Taking a deep breath is walked into the room purposely limping. She put on her most innocent face. Jasd took one look at her. “Where have you been!” he demanded. “You were told you couldn’t leave the healer’s.” “I haven’t been anywhere.” she said quietly, acting like she was intimidated by him. In reality one punch from her and she could break his neck, but she figured she might as well act like she was a scared little child. “I had to go to the fresher. I couldn‘t wait for Obi to come back.” “Oh.” Jasd said turning red. Then he very quickly left. Obi-Wan gave her a grateful look. “I thought he was never going to stop yelling.” he said. “Um Raya, you were gone a long time, longer than it should have taken you to go to the fresher.” Raya thought quickly. “I can’t walk very fast.” she said indicating her limp. “Okay.” he replied. ------------------------ A week later, Qui-Gon was just leaving his quarters when he saw Master Yoda. “Good evening Master Yoda.” he greeted. “Good news I have.” Master Yoda said. “Raya is completely healed.” “That is good news.” Qui-Gon said. “Yes, it is. Now ask her we will about how she saved your apprentice, then home she can go.” “Master Yoda, about her leaving. She doesn’t exactly have any place to go.” Qui-Gon said quietly. “Why is this, want her back her parents must?” Master Yoda said. Qui-Gon was trying to think of a way to tell Master Yoda she couldn’t go back, but he couldn’t think of anything. “Answer this not you do not have to. Tell Raya she is to come before the council at three you will. You and young Obi-Wan are to be there as well.” With that the Old Master continued down the hallway and Master Jinn went to the healers. --------------------- “What?” Raya was sure she had heard wrong. “The council wants to speak with you later today about how you rescued Obi-Wan.” Qui-Gon answered. “But Master, if Raya tells the truth they’ll know what she was.” Obi- Wan protested. The three of them were in Raya’s room at the healers. Raya was sitting cross-legged on the hospital bed. “I know, but there’s not much we can do about it.” Qui-Gon said. “Raya’s completely healed, she doesn’t have an excuse not to answer questions anymore and she can‘t stay in the healers forever.” “It doesn’t matter whether or not I go before the council.” Raya said quietly. “Master Yoda and Master Windu already know I’m a Sith apprentice.” Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan just stared at her for a moment. Qui-Gon was the one to break the silence. “What makes you think that. Neither me nor Obi- Wan has said a thing to anyone.” “I know, but I heard them talking, Master Yoda found out and he told Master Windu. The only reason they didn’t tell the rest of the council was because they thought you’d fess up to it eventually.” Raya answered. “When did you hear them talking?” Qui-Gon asked. “Um Obi-Wan, you remember last week, when Jasd thought I left the healers?” “Yeah, you said you went to the fresher and you limped so it took you a long ti-” He realized what Raya meant. “You really left. That’s what took you so long and why you put the pillows under the blanket.” “You left the healers?” Qui-Gon said, surprised. “Do have any idea how stupid that was. What if you had gotten caught. Of all the reckless stunts to pull-” “Look Qui-Gon.” she said raising her voice slightly. “In case you haven’t noticed, I’m not exactly inexperienced at sneaking around, plus it wasn’t even my idea to come here in the first place. As a person who makes it her business to get into places she’s not supposed to be, I think I have some knowledge of how to get around without drawing the attention of others. So I’d appreciate it if you’d get off my back about it!” Raya gave him an icy stare. She wasn’t about to be scolded a person she tried to kill and the whole situation with having to go before the council was beginning to anger her. Qui-Gon sighed. “Listen Raya, I don’t doubt your abilities, but had you gotten caught it would have made things much more complicated. And I still don’t understand why you left in the first place.” “One, I was sick and tired of having a babysitter staring at me every second. And two, if I ever had to leave her quickly I wanted to know where the nearest exit was.” she answered. “What do you mean by if you ever had to leave quickly?” Obi-Wan asked. “Somehow, I don’t think any of the other Jedi in the Temple would be as understanding as you two are about an ex-Sith in their Temple.” Raya explained. “Raya, we aren’t going to let anything bad happen to you.” Qui-Gon said. “Yeah, I was stuck in the healer’s for a week because I got a splinter.” she said sarcastically. Obi-Wan gave her a skeptical look. “You’re the one who decided to go all noble.” “You rather I hadn’t?” she asked, raising her eyebrow. “No, of course not.” he replied. “Good, ‘cause you’d better remember I was around you when you were delirious, I can black mail you.” she said as a mischievous smile crept across her lips. Qui-Gon gave his apprentice a questioning look. “You know, I still don’t know exactly what happened on Mejdul. Perhaps one of you should tell me.” “Don’t worry Qui-Gon. You’ll hear all about it in Two hours, when we go before the council.” Raya responded, the impish smile still on her lips. ******************* I'll try to post more often, but I'm busy four nights a week. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 10/9/00 1:14pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	I do like feedback. HINT HINT. Please I really would like to know what you all thingk of my story. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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JediKnight-Obi-Wan Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 10/9/00 1:35pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Your doing a good job. Your story is very interesting. I'm curious as to what Raya will tell the council. Keep up the good work! -----signature----- "The course of true love never did run smooth"---A Midsummer Night's Dream
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 10/16/00 4:23pm Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Hi everybody! ******************** Raya stood before the twelve council members. Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan were standing a few steps behind her. Her face showed no trace of any of her thoughts. Mace Windu spoke first. “It is good to see that you are well again.” “Thank you.” she responded. Again she showed absolutely no emotion. “We have many questions to ask you, afterwards we will help you get back to your planet. Your parents must be worried about you.” Mace Windu continued. “I wish that were so.” she said. “What do you mean?” Mace Windu asked. Now he was sure he had Qui-Gon caught, and out of the corner of his eye he saw Qui-Gon tense slightly. “They don’t care about me; in fact I’m pretty much dead to them.” Raya answered. She had to concentrate not to smile. To her this was like a game, one she knew she could win. “My mother hasn’t taken care of me since I was six. I‘ve kinda had a hard life, having to raise myself and all. The few adults that paid attention to me thought I‘d turnout to be a criminal.” Raya lowered her eyes, as though she wasn’t proud of it. She saw the sympathetic looks from the other council members in the room. Raya was adept in manipulating the truth. Master Windu however didn’t look compassionate, but he knew her secret, that made him her opponent in the game, along with Master Yoda. “These adults,” Mace said, “did they take care of you?” “What’s your definition of take care of? I only had one adult that looked over my shoulder. But he only came around when he thought I didn’t do something good enough. Any other times I had to fend for myself.” Again there were sympathetic looks around the room. Raya was truly enjoying this. Mace was looking annoyed, which only added to her fun. “How did you rescue Obi-Wan?” he moved on to a different subject. Raya had no trouble answering this question. It was too simple. “I was in the mountains, north of the city, and I found him. He didn’t look to well so I helped him back to the city. He insisted we go back to the palace, so that’s where we went.” “What were you doing in the mountains?” he asked. “You haven’t ever been to Mejdul have you?” “No, but I know enough about the planet to know that nothing can survive in the mountains. There’s no food there and even less water.” He was trying to trap her, she realized, but she wasn’t worried. “You’re right. Nothing can survive in the mountains.” she saw the surprise in his eyes. He hadn’t expected that answer, but his surprise was only temporary. “You haven’t yet told us why you were there.” he pointed out. Raya had to be careful about how she answered this question. Qui-Gon didn’t want her to lie, she knew what she wanted to say but she had to word it right. “ There are beautiful sun rises and sun sets in the mountains and it’s possible to only go to the mountains for a day, if you bring some water and food.” The others seemed to be satisfied with this. Of course she hadn’t said she’d done it, only that it was possible. “And you just found him lying there.” Mace said, an eyebrow raised. “I admit it wasn’t exactly an every day experience.” she answered. Again she never said that was what happened. Mace looked defeated, he turned to Master Yoda. Raya smiled inwardly. One down, one to go. “Wish to return to Medjul you do?” Master Yoda asked. He caught Raya off guard, she was quiet for a moment. “No, I do not.” she said quietly. “Why is this.” Master Yoda pressed. “I have nothing to go back to.” she said. This was the absolute truth, she hadn’t twisted it. “Nothing here you have.” “That’s not true. Here I have a friend” she said indicating Obi-Wan. “I never had that before.” The council members exchanged glances. “Dismissed you are.” Yoda said. Together the three left. *************** Hope you liked it. More to come. -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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Ibis Registered: Aug '00	Date Posted: 10/19/00 6:00am Subject: RE: The Sith Rising Again( JA FanFic)
	Um, a little feedback please? -----signature----- Everybody needs a little chaos. "I never liked fate. He always cheats at cards."
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