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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi
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Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
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The Jedi temple's halls were silent, not a single soul roamed the halls, except for one. Young Obi-Wan Kenobi was restless. Over the past few standard weeks on Coruscant, he's had a series of what seemed like endless dreams, or visions, and their not very pleasant ones at that. He let out an exhausted sigh as he walked down the dim hallway, he tried to keep his footsteps silent, he didn't need anyone wakeing up to question why he wasnt sleeping. He knew very well that it's been exactly 6 hours and 12 minutes since the temples lights were shut down, and everyone was suposto be sleeping.
/How can I sleep when these dreams haunt me?/
Obi-Wan headed for the one place that could possibly calm him, the room of 1,000 fountians. He pushed the door open with the palm of his hand and quietly walked in. A small smile pressed on his 20 year old lips. Obi-Wan sat down near the water, he felt the coolness of the grass benieth him. He closed his eyes and began to slip into a light meditation, but as soon as he did the vision flushed back into his mind.
Blackness... utter blackness. He couldn't see anything, he felt panic start to rise, he reached out to the force....but it eluded his grasp.. it seemed to dangle just inches away. Suddenly the darkness shifted, and slowly it melted to a different color, red, but not just any red, blood red. He closed his eyes, but nothing could stop it. Every where he looked, it was there. Then he heard a fermiluar voice yell out. "Master! Master where are you?" he started to run, everywhere he went the red followed him, and it got closer and closer. It soon turned black again, "Master!" he yelled again, this time his voice sounded like a small child's, and not his. Then the darkness cut him off, she stopped, and looked everywhere for somewhere to go, but there was no where, suddenly everything was consumed by the darkness, and everything grew silent except for the beating of his heart. He heard a rolling sound, and he felt something nudge his foot. He hesitated..but leaned down and picked up, immedatly he knew what it was and he droped it, "NO!!!!!"
"NO!!!!!" Obi-Wan's eyes shot open to find he was still sitting in the same spot..his breathing was heavy. He gathered the force up and wraped it around himself like a blanket.
Well what do you think??
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Cause I did enough to show you that I
Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up
When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away
There's nothing that I can do or say...
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi
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3/13/02 4:23am
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Made a few spelling mistakes where theres a she, it should be a he  sorry lol
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Cause I did enough to show you that I
Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up
When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away
There's nothing that I can do or say...
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BLADE_KENOBI
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Great start Jedi Knight Jenobi! I wonder what Obi found? Post more soon!
Wow! Already got me hooked! Great description of the vision/dream. Keep up the good work!
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shanobi
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Yes,very good start. Does Qui know of Obi's dreams?
Cant wait for more. 
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi
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3/13/02 1:13pm
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<Master! Master where are you?>
Qui-Gon sat up from his sleep couch, something had awoken him. He glanced around for his padawan but Obi-Wan wasn't in the room. He could feel Obi-Wan's fear, but it dissapeard just as quickly as it appeared. Qui-Gon got out of bed and slid into his cloak. He accessed the door pannel and stepped into the darkened hallway. He knew exactly where Obi-Wan was.
The fountain room.
Obi-Wan sat near the water, fighting internally with his emotions. /Should I tell Qui-Gon?/ Obi-Wan thought to himself. He stood up quickly, knowing there wasnt a way out of telling him now; he could sense his Master was awake. He stepped out, and into the hallway. Slowly he began to make his way back toward the Master/Padawan wing. He stopped, seeing Qui-Gon, with a worried expression on his face. "Whats wrong Obi-Wan?" Qui-Gon asked, he could sense his padawan's nervousness.
"Master.. I need to talk with you."
"You know you can talk to me about anything, my padawan." Qui-Gon's words and smile reassured him.
"I've been having dreams.. if thats what they are..more like nightmares.. and their troubling me." Obi-Wan looked at his Master with a tired glance, almost expecting to see a dissapointed look on Qui-Gon's face. He found nothing but a gentle knowing smile.
"Padawan, dreams may only be dreams, but we shouldn't take this lightly, they clearly have disturbed you enough that you can't sleep, What are they about?"
"Master, their horrid, I see nothing but blackness, and then blood. Slowly it faded into darkness again, and I was running, it cough me and I was swallowed up in the darkness. I heard you yell out, I felt panic, I called back, but you kept yelling. Then i felt something hit my feet...Master I.." Obi-Wan couldn't finnish. He immedatly felt relief wash over him, he was glad to finally tell someone. "They get more real, every time.." he added quietly.
Qui-Gon looked as if he were in deep thought for a moment.
"As i said, we shouldnt take this lightly. In the morning I'll see to it that you talk with someone about these dreams." Qui-Gon put a hand on Obi-Wan's shoulder. He had almost forgotten Obi-Wan wasn't a child any longer. Qui-GOn smiled as he remembered how clumsy Obi-Wan had been, and now, he blossomed into a young man at the age of 20 right before his eyes. Qui-Gon nudges the half asleep apprentience towards their room. "Come, we have to get some sleep"
they both went back to their room.
Obi-Wan grumbled slightly as he heard a loud continous beep, he realized it was his comlink. He sighed. Lazily he reached over and picked it up. "Obi-Wan here?"
"Padawan, we have been summoned before the council."
Obi-Wan heard his Master's voice radiate through the com loudly.
"Yes Master." he mumbled.
Qui-Gon was waiting outside the Council's chambers when Obi-Wan came running to his Master's side.
"Forgive me Master, for being late." Obi-Wan huffed.
Qui-Gon nodded, and the chamber doors opened.
They both stepped in the circle silently. Obi-Wan could feel Jedi Master Mace Windu's eyes shift and settle on him.
Thanks for the replies! and You'll soon find out what Obi-Wan picked up
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Cause I did enough to show you that I
Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up
When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away
There's nothing that I can do or say...
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TheFallen
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3/13/02 1:21pm
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* GASP! *
Another story to follow! Yay! I liked the beginning... And we all want to know what he picked up.
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Hmmmm....  Very interesting! I'll check for updates.. Post soon!
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"You want to go home and rethink your life." Obi-Wan Kenobi - AOTC
*Garen Groper*
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PadawanKitara
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You caught my interest
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Just found this story, Great job so far. You have my interest peaked. Can't wait to see how this all develops
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they make our lives whole."
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi
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Master Yoda was the first to speak.
"Disturbed we are."
"Yes, we are." Mace Windu added in his two cents.
Yoda glanced at Mace and tapped his grimer stick.
"Know you do, Obi-Wan; why you are here, yes?" Yoda's gaze shifted to Obi-Wan, who didn't look surprised.
Obi-Wan nodded.
"Dreams some of us have had. Know we do, you have had simular."
"Three of us have had strange dreams, all different, but all connected. The force has told us this." Mace looked at Qui-Gon.
Obi-Wan looked up at his Master.
/He's had dreams too./
Qui-Gon nodded slowly.
"These dreams all forsee something unimaginable." Mace glanced from Qui-Gon's taller form to Obi-Wan's shorter.
/Gee, they sure know how to stare you down../
"Spoken to Qui-Gon, we have." Yoda sighed.
"You will not be going on this next mission with Qui-Gon." Mace stated flatly.
Obi-Wan was shocked.
"What?? No! You can't do that..I--" Obi-Wan began to protest but he was cut off by Yoda's yelling.
"You will stay behind, you must! Obey our rules you will!" Yoda narrowed his eyes at the Apprentice.
Obi-Wan quickly stopped and bit his bottom lip, hard.
"Go now, Obi-Wan." Yoda frowned reluctently.
Obi-Wan bowed and left. It took most of his control to stop himself from screaming in protest. Obi-Wan could feel this was wrong.
/Qui-Gon couldn't have agreed to this..or could he have?/
Obi-Wan sighed. He took slow steps as he headed down the hall towards the lift. He looked up and saw someone heading for him.. it was Bant.
"Obi-Wan.. I'm sorry..I knew.." She looked at his face and knew he was upset.
"Why? Why didn't you tell me?" Obi-Wan shifted his weight from his right foot, to his left.. He wasn't in the mood for this.
"I couldnt.. you have to understand.." Bant's Mon Clamarian eyes eyes reflected sadness back at Obi-Wan's blue ones.
Obi-Wan nodded silently, and brushed past her and into the awaiting lift. He pressed the button to close it, before Bant could turn and say anything more.
"Oh...Obi-Wan.." Bant frowned.
"You didnt have to be so harsh on him." Qui-Gon said as the chamber door's closed with a slight bang.
"Done it is, harshness was required." Yoda turned to look at Mace.
"We trust you'll be fine on your own?" Mace asked Qui-Gon.
Qui-Gon nodded.
"I'll manage.. what of Obi-Wan?" he asked.
"He will be needed here,we're sure of this. We can not prevent this danger from occuring, it has already begun. It will happen reguardless of what ever actions we take at this time, all we can do..is wait." Mace sighed.
Can u guess whats going on?
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Cause I did enough to show you that I
Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up
When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away
There's nothing that I can do or say...
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TheFallen
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3/14/02 1:14pm
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I hope you think of a name soon... Hmmm...
But I don't care, either way, I really like how this is coming out.
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3/14/02 2:49pm
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oooo, very interesting....I wonder what's happening, is this AU?
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"Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired,
is in a final sense, theft from those who hunger and are not fed,
those who are cold and are not clothed." (April 16, 1953).
~Dwight D. Eisenhower
Wars not make one great. ~Yoda
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3/16/02 3:13am
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Obi-Wan walked down the temple's hall. Anger was in his thoughts. Were they not telling him something? Had he done something so wrong that the council was going to remove him? But what? And most of all, why?
His thoughts were drowned out as he found himself at a demistration. Obi-Wan peered inside at the children. He smiled softly, his anger dissapearing. Obi-Wan watched the children playing and talking as a Jedi Master tried to gain their attention, he got an idea.
The children looked up as they heard someone noisly step inside the room.
"Hey, listen up here! My name's Obi-Wan Kenobi, and I'll sit in on this lesson, if you all will." Obi-Wan nodded to the Master. All the children quickly quieted down.
"You will find him, along with the few others, and..dispose of them. Understood?" A dark form turned to face a smaller form. "Yes, I will do as you wish, my Master."
Obi-Wan grinned as he had three children no older than 2 climbing onto his lap and planting themselves there as the master went into an explination of what they should do in certian situations. The lesson was short, but the children managed to pay attention with Obi-Wan there. He was like a child magnet.
A woman came in and escorted the children out of the room, many of them waved and yelled goodbye. Obi-Wan stood up, and streched.
"I should have you sit in more often, Obi-Wan." The Master smiled, "Thank you for your assistance."
Obi-Wan smiled, nodded in return and headed out of the room.
A small form watched the scene from above in stands. Master Yoda sighed sadly. "Fear I do..Hope I do..make right decision you will..Obi-Wan."
Obi-Wan walked into his room and grabbed a towel. He headed to the refresher, but stopped. He had a message. Walking to the machine he pressed a button and a holo appeared. It was Mace Windu.
"Hello Obi-Wan I trust if your hearing this..well, that you have this message. I'm sur eyour wondering why we havn't called you before the council. Well theres a reason. We have reason to believe there are spy's among the temple, some may be in the upper levels near the chambers. This information we can't afford to let leak out. We have reason to believe the temple will be attacked. Qui-Gon has been sent to stake out what might be the spy's headquarters. We are unsure of when these spys will attack. The dreams some of us have had are a warning. We're sorry we couldn't explaine to you before the council, but it was nessicary that you believed it was real. You are not going with Qui-Gon because we fear we might need you here incase of an attack." The figure of mace seemed distressed. "And there will be an attack." If you happen to run accross anything important, contact me immediatly. Mace, over and out." Mace flashed a peace sigh as the image dissapeared. Obi-Wan smiled slightly, but then again frowned. He had been wrong, and let his thought's outrule his instincts. Obi-Wan slung the towel over his shoulder and headed into the refresher.
Qui-Gon ducked behind a metal beam as a figure passed by. It had been 4 hours, and he had learned nothing yet. Not that he expected to learn much, this operation was highly secretive.
He watched three human's load boxes into a shuttle, couriously he raised his binoculars to see if he could figure out what their cargo was. He felt his senses jump to life as he quickly turned around. A Grungy looking man stood there, blaster aimed at Qui-Gon's neck. "Jedi. I should have known." the man hissed. Qui-Gon slowly stood up. "Don't move Jedi." The man turned his gaze from Qui-Gon to reach for his communicator. Big mistake. Qui-Gon stepped into action. In one fluid motion he snapped his arms out to shove the man backwards. The man taken off-guard stumbled backwards. Qui-Gon raised his hand before the mans face. "You will tell me what's in those cargo boxes."
"I'll tell ya whats in those boxes, their shippin' bomb's to a secret location. Their after some guy..a jedi, named...Ah whats his name..thats not important." the man studdered slightly.
"Yes, it is, you'll tell me who the Jedi is." Qui-Gon added a bit more force behind hsi words.
Qui-Gon's eyes widdened as the man spoke a name. He grabbed his com-link and ran into the shadow of the strees to head back to his transport.
The man stood up, brushing the dirt off himself, as if it would make a difference, the man was filthy; and headed back to load the boxes.
TY for the replies! Not sure if it's considered an AU..but well erm. heh TY AGAIN! Hope u guys like how this is going
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Cause I did enough to show you that I
Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up
When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away
There's nothing that I can do or say...
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Sigh = Sign
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Cause I did enough to show you that I
Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up
When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away
There's nothing that I can do or say...
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TheFallen
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Aaahhh! Post soon...
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This story has my attention. Hope you post again soon.
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