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Arwen-Jade_Kenobi Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 3/16/02 3:46pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	More PLEASE!!!!!!! -----signature----- Retired Council Master of the Lightside It's all about the blues, baby "Love can ignite the stars." - ROTS novel I'm a Trekkie: Deal with it, or suffer the wrath of Khan This user is certifiably insane
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Nat Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 3/17/02 2:43am Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	Yes I like! More!! -----signature----- Cueille le jour "You want to go home and rethink your life." Obi-Wan Kenobi - AOTC Garen Groper
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PadawanKitara Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 3/17/02 6:13pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	More please -----signature----- Courtier of the Royal Order of Shambling Dufi We are Dufi...Resistance is Futile! UCLA BRUINS
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I love Sci Fi Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 3/18/02 7:35pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	great post!!!!!! OK , does this story follow the books? -----signature----- "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired, is in a final sense, theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed." (April 16, 1953). ~Dwight D. Eisenhower Wars not make one great. ~Yoda
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/22/02 3:40am Subject: The Fight Against Darkness (pre TPM)
	The Fight Against Darkness (Pre-tpm) Well heres more! Obi-Wan waited outside the council doors. He yawned. /Why did the council call me here at this hour?/ Obi-Wan glanced around the hall back towards the lift. It was 2 o'cloak am standard time. The lights were still off in the hall, he wondered if this was some kind of prank. He was sleeping in his nice cozy bed...he yawned again, suddenly feeling a bit more tired. He opened his eyes to rub them, but noticed something glimmer near the vent. "What the..." he stepped closer picking the object up. "Bloody hell!" He dropped the shell and ran down the hall towards the lift. He had found the shell from a bomb of some sorts, and the gasses were leaking through the vents of the temple. Obi-Wan pushed the button for the lift to open, but it was jammed. "Sithspawn!" he kicked the lift door. He turned to the window. "This will be an interesting discussion for the matienance men..." he said as he unclipped his lightsaber from his belt, and sliced a nice neat hole in the window. He carefully pulled the slab of glass inside and set it down. he glanced outside, and pulled his grappling hook from his belt, just in case. Obi-Wan stepped out onto the ledge and started to make his way to the end of the ledge. He looked accross at how far it was to the next, and mustered up the force. He leaped and with the aid of the force he landed perfectly. Time was of the essance, he needed to shut of the vent systems. He slid down a slopeing ledge and leaped into the air soaring for the balcony, his Jedi cloak fluttered behind him as he was nearly there, he reached out with his hands and grabbed onto the ledg. He pulled himself up and ran to the door. He entered the access code. Access Denied. "..Someone changed the pannel codes." Obi-Wan slammed his fist up against the machine. Access Granted. Obi-Wan grinned, that was a trick he and his friends used when they forgot codes. He took a deep breath, and ran inside, entering a dark hallway. He looked around, not seeing anyone. His senses were on high alert as he ran down the hall towards the lower levels. Another lift. "Looks like this time I'll take ths stairs." he opened the door for the staircase and ran down them. He slowed down as he heard something. It sounded like something scattering accross the floor... He took slow steps as he desended the stairs, he couldn't see and had to rely on his senses to guide him. Realization hit him. This was a trap! Whoever had done this had set him up to walk right into this. He turned to run back up the stairs but something metalic landed on the previous platform. Obi-Wan's hand went insticntivly to his lightsaber. He could hear the joints groaning. It was a droid of some kind. Obi-Wan stepped backwards down another step. The droid leaped out at Obi-Wan. Quickly Obi-Wan menuvered himself away from the droid, but not without getting a slash on his arm. He felt pain as he turned to face the droid. He knew now that it's arms were giant blades. He ignighted his lightsaber after decideing in only a second the wound was minumal. The droid leaped at Obi-Wan for another attack. Obi-Wan ignighted his lightsaber and sliced at the droid's mid-area. The dround landed on the steps in two halfs, which clanged noisly down the stairs. Obi-Wan got an idea. Quickly Obi-Wan remebered his grappling hook was prepaired. He unclipped it, and fired up and ahead towards the ceiling where the stairs would most likely end. He tugged on the super strong rope to see if the hook would hold his weight. It would. He pressed a small button and the Hook retracted the slack it had let out, shooting Obi-Wan along with it. Once he was suspended in the air, he pressed another button and from another compartment the handle of the hook latched onto Obi-Wan. This technuique was used when Jedi were in harsh climbing condictions outdoors. He was allways finding new ways to work with gadjets. Slowly he used the rolling option to let loose a little bit of rope at a time, once he got to the door, he noticed there were three other droids waiting, faceing away from him. This had to be done fast. Carefully he gathered the force, tapping something hallow a few platforms up. The droids raced up to investigate. Obi-Wan slammed his fist against the pannel controls. Access Denied. "What??" Obi-Wan said under his breath, "Work!" he tried it again. Access Denied. The droids had realized their mistake and were quickly comming back down the stairs. they had noticed Obi-Wan. Obi-Wan ignighted his saber, re coiled his grappling hool and jabbe the hilt of his lightsaber against the pannel. Access Granted. Obi-Wan raced through the door as it opened, the droids fast behind heading for the now closeing doors. Obi-Wan turned to look at the door, just before it closed a droid leaped out, and tackled him to the ground, its spider like legs planted themselves into the ground. Obi-Wan ignighted his lighsaber and held it defensivly as the creature swung a powerful deadly arm ay him. he used the force to send the now detatched arm away from his head, as he swung around to hit it from underneith. The droid screached and shut down it's systems. Obi-Wan stood up quickly, and scrambled down the hall towards the main corrider, and towards the security booths. He hoped he still had enough time. Jedi awake can filter out certian gasses, but asleep, he wasn't so sure about. Qui-Gon raced against time back to the temple in his hover car. For the middle of the night, The passages were still crowded with citizens. Qui-Gon could see the temple up ahead. All it's lights were shut off, usually they had their backups on..no something wasn't right, and he knew it. He stood up. The trafic was still, he suspected someone probaly got into an accident. The temple wasnt that far..Qui-Gon managed to grin. He stood on the hood of his vechial, and jumped from air car to air car, hearing yells from various people, as he did so. He leaped off with a running start and landed on the Temple's main landing pad. Once he saw the security guard on the ground, he knew he was too late to warn them. -----signature----- Cause I did enough to show you that I Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away There's nothing that I can do or say...
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/22/02 3:42am Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	That ones a bit longer than the others, Enjoy! -----signature----- Cause I did enough to show you that I Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away There's nothing that I can do or say...
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/22/02 3:45am Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	More spelling errors lol i need a spell checker, *Droid -----signature----- Cause I did enough to show you that I Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away There's nothing that I can do or say...
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Ganki Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 3/22/02 5:41am Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	Please more soon! oh congrates on a name kicks the stupid droid -----signature----- “The act of putting pen to paper encourages pause for thought, this in turn makes us think more deeply about life, which helps us regain our equilibrium.” ~Norbet Platt
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I love Sci Fi Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 3/22/02 3:28pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	cool! -----signature----- "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired, is in a final sense, theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed." (April 16, 1953). ~Dwight D. Eisenhower Wars not make one great. ~Yoda
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I love Sci Fi Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 3/26/02 7:56pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	up! more? -----signature----- "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired, is in a final sense, theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed." (April 16, 1953). ~Dwight D. Eisenhower Wars not make one great. ~Yoda
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PadawanKitara Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 3/26/02 8:08pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	How did I miss that last post? Good action sequence. -----signature----- Courtier of the Royal Order of Shambling Dufi We are Dufi...Resistance is Futile! UCLA BRUINS
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Erin-Starlight Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 3/26/02 8:16pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	One Question : When will you post more ?
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shanobi Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 3/26/02 8:44pm Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	Finally decided to read this. Its very interesting, cant wait for more. -----signature----- The Plot Bunny Thread: http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/8535413/p1/?1308
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/27/02 3:08am Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	The Fight Against Darkness (Pre-TPM) (i guess its kinda an AU and you can say it goes along slightly with the JA books ) Obi-Wan entered the main control room. With out wasteing any time he accessed the power control pannel and switched all the power on, and then went through the short sequence in shutting down the ventlation systems. "Very good, Padawan." a dark robed figure hissed from the shadows. Obi-Wan turned to face the dark figure, he could sense darkness emitting from it..his mind suddenly was reeled with darkness..a dark hand flashed into his mind. Obi-Wan stumbled backwards, "No..Who are you? What are you doing to me?" "Ahh my dear boy, the question is, who are you? Are you so sure of yourself, My padawan?" Obi-Wan grinded his teeth, "I'am not your Padawan.." The dark figure chuckled and removed his darkness from Obi-Wan's mind. Obi-Wan leaned against a control unit, "Who do you think you are??" "I do believe I've already answered that question." the dark figure couldn't help but smile. Obi-Wan could feel his intentions. "No..your going to blow up the temple.." "Ah! So you do have a brain of your own." Obi-Wan glances at the remote the dark figure held in it's hands. "Your planning to stop me, I'm afraid I can't let that happen, boy." the figure took out a blaster from under it's cloak. It was at this exact moment Obi-Wan had to make a decision. So many lives depended on him, His Master..the council..the Jedi..everyone. He could not allow this no matter what the cost, he would sacrafice himself if need be. "Oh..whats a poor..Padawan to do?" the dark figure shifted in the shadows towards Obi-Wan, clutching the remote. Obi-Wan gathered the force around him, he straightened..and prepaired himself for death, he would accept it, if it came. The darkly robed figure for a moment, faltered, he hesitated. Obi-Wan took this moment to swing into action he leaps up high and kicks the dark figure's wrist, sending the remote high into the air, quickly Obi-Wan commaned the remote with the force to come to him, he reached up and grasped it in his hands, and hit the deactivation switch. At that moment Obi-Wan turned, but the dark figure was faster, much more skilled and expirenced than Obi-Wan. The figure fired and hit it's target. He turned to look at the dark figure..but he had vanished..everything but his cloak.. "Time...in time...truth shall be revealled..will you be ready? Padawan?" the voice whispered throught the shadows. Obi-Wan slumped against the control unit, pain racked through his body. The figure was gone..and the temple was saved..Obi-Wan made his way to the door, and it opened, thank the force the motion sensers were activated in the re-boot of the power. Obi-Wan stumbled out into the main corrider near the temple entrance. Qui-Gon could feel his Padawan's emotions..and could sense what he was prepairing for. "Obi-Wan.." Qui-Gon raced down the hallway, he couldn't allow Obi-Wan to die, not now, not ever, it was his job to protect him. Then Qui-Gon heard a blaster fire. He felt Obi-Wan's pain..but also felt..acceptance. Two more halls to go. Qui-Gon hadn't even noticed the power was turned back on, he turned the corner. One more to go..he stopped. There stood Obi-Wan, a hand draped accross his mid-section, he staggered towards Qui-Gon. As Obi-Wan approached, he saw Obi-Wan stumble, instinctivly Qui-Gon reached his arms out and cought Obi-Wan before he fell. He picked him up in his arms and raced down the hall. Qui-Gon had no idea that the temple had been filled with sleeping gases. Qui-Gon looked ahead as he saw figures running towards them, he slowed his pace, and stopped running as they approached. "Qui-Gon, what happened?" It was Jedi Master Mace Windu, along with Adi-Gallia. "I'm not exactly sure, I don't have time, Obi-Wan needs to get to the healer's wards..hes--" "Qui-Gon, Everyone's asleep, Gases have been pumped, and the temple was on lock down..untill the power was restored." Adi looked to Obi-Wan, who was in Qui-Gon's arms. "But..Obi-Wan.." Qui-Gon looked down at his Padawan. Mace walked into the security booth, and picked up the announcement beaker. "Attention, if there are healers that are currently not fealing the effects of the gases Please get to the secuirty booth, Now." Qui-Gon paced in the small waiting room of the healers ward. The receptionist glanced up at the huge Jedi Master un-nerved. "Please sit down Sir." she glared at him. "I need to know how he is." Qui-Gon stopped paceing and stared right back at her. "When someone come's out and Tells you, you'll know how he is, now SIT DOWN!" She yelled. Qui-Gon sat. He knew better than to argue with a receptionist.. Qui-Gon sat for what seemed like hours, days..years..an eternity. Since Obi-Wan had been taken into the medical ward, Mace Windu and Master Yoda have gotten the Jedi temple situated and up and running normally. Qui-Gon sighed, he was worried, was he over worrying? No..he decided. He wasn't. Ever since Obi-Wan was a boy, Qui-Gon allways felt the need to protect him..but Obi-Wan was growing up.. Qui-Gon looked around the waiting room, it was empty, becides him and that receptionist..he glared at her. Soon Obi-Wan would be a Knight..perhaps sooner than he wants. He wished Obi-Wan could remaine a padawan...but knew that wasn't possible. Qui-Gon only wished he knew what had happened in the control room. As if someone was reading his mind, the Medical door swooshed open and a healer stepped out. Qui-Gon stood and walked towards the healer, who was reading over a chart. "How is my Padawan?" The healer looked up at the Jedi Master. "Obi-Wan will be fine..he's currently in a bacta tank, he will be up soon, you can wait in there if you'd like, his wound's wern't as bad as we thought they were, he's stong, and expected to make a full recovery." The healer smiled. Qui-Gon nodded, "Thank you.." he walked past her into the Bacta room. The darkness was forming again..this time it was different, foggy, as if it were a memory. The fog cleared leaving a small child. It was him! The child was sitting hugging his knees, rocking back and forth, than the child looked up at him, "Hi" Obi-Wan heard the small voice echo, he looked down at the child, "Hello.." Was this another dream? Surely this was wasnt so bad.. The Child stood up. "Your in Danger. The darkness will have you, and you know it, dont let it have you..dont let it consume you...dont let yourself get lost in the darknesssssss.... The boy's form shifted into a towering dark form with tattered old robes. "No!" Obi-Wan shouted. The figure removed it's hood..revealing an older Obi-Wan, much aged with scars lineing his forehead. "Join the darkness My Apprentience!" "No! Never! Go away!" the present Obi-Wan sank to his knees holding his head. "Leave me alone!" Obi-Wan's eyes shot open as he was lifted from the bacta tank and into a medical gown. Obi-Wan was eased onto a medical table. He groggly turned his head seeing his Master at his side, he smiled weakly, "I..m fine, Master.." his voice souned horse. Qui-Gon could do nothing but smile gratefully that the force hadn't taken his padawan from him. -----signature----- Cause I did enough to show you that I Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away There's nothing that I can do or say...
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Jedi_Knight_Jenobi Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/27/02 3:11am Subject: RE: Dont have a name yet, but its about Obi-Wan mostly
	Augh more spelling and grammer errors, next time i will use a spell checker.. -----signature----- Cause I did enough to show you that I Was willing to give and sacrifice, And I was the one who was lifting you up When you thought your life had had enough, And when I get close, you turn away There's nothing that I can do or say...
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