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Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 1/29/06
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Amidala22
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Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 1/29/06
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Disclaimer:I'm not making money off this and I apologize profusely to George Lucas and all creators of the crossovers I do. All original characters are mine though!!! So ask if you want to use them or archive this.
Angel's Plight (Major AU- PT, OT, EU w/CO)
By: Karen a.k.a. Amidala22 (on the Force.net Jedi Council Forums)
Important Info:
*This is Mid Episode 2-NJO. Traitor kinda annoyed me (except for the last chapters  , so this story bouncing around in my head has finally been released from my insane imagination.
*This is a reality created by an insomniac Star Wars fanatic in the middle of the night (took me a long time to type it!) so if it doesn't make sense-ASK or Deal with it!!! This is very long, so please be nice. This only a trailer to an interesting story.
*To avoid confusion read careful the following for reference:
„Kaltori, Karina Nept, Kari-Ann Nileson, Ceri, Kari, and Kali = one woman 20% elvish, 80% human.(she & Theo are in combined form.)
„ Westian, Theodore Sunn, Thei Senni, Ti, and Theo = one man 18% elvish, 82% human.(It varies b/w Human, Combined,& Elvish dominates for Elvish powers.)
„ Luctian Naberrie` (Luke), Ari, and Aaroni = Luke Skywalker
„ Lailia, Leia Organa, and Shimana = Leia Organa
( There is an Au Jedi Prophecy text, too.)
**** Accents****
Kaltori and Westian = sound like a cross b/w Irish/ English accents (They are Kolistan w/ Elvish blood) figure that out (heh heh)
Luke and Leia = a cross b/w Nubian and Alderranian accent; Luke more Nubian, Leia more Alderranian.
***Symbols*** (VERY IMPORTANT)
2(***~***) = Separating character times (PT, OT, etc.)
*~* = Same moment or hours or days
***~*** = Years time span
Italics = Kaltori ( Karina) narrating
/bold/ = Westian (Theo) speaking mentally someone else¡¦s and his own thoughts
// =Thoughts
**// = Theo and person in that flash of story speaking thoughts together
This trailer is actually a vision...I made this so you can actually see it....
Confused? So am I... you'll see
So without further ado...
Trailer of:
Angel's plight
*A time of Great trials and hanging in the balance is the universe...Guardians with a council whose guidance under God keep order in the universe are pitted against the 25 Sanchin (dark Guardians) and their cronies. Ground Zero of this cosmic battle is the Center dimension. Should it fall a domino affect will follow.
The center dimension is the Dimension of Balance a.k.a. The Jedi of the Light vs. The Sith of the Darkness.
Four of the 16 are from this dimension. Two human (suppose to be but¡K) with two non-human. The Jedi humans stay in the dimension without their guardian powers, the other without.
*As darkness falls, the valiant efforts of the Jedi are in vain and the two guardian/Jedi cry out for their other powers and help. Danger of eternal darkness comes.
Time/ Space/ Reality is crossed and hundred years backwards go the Dimension of Balance. All memories of the original timeline are erased.
A second chance...A new reality...
...Galaxy Reborn...
The PAST
"Palpatine is the Sith Lord!" Sarina, a Jedi Knight, cries at her three fellow Jedi and best friends.
"We need proof!" Thimos yells back, as they run. His jade green eyes flash at her. Brushing her red striped white hair out of her eyes, she stares at Ali and Arritin. Ali asks Arritin,
"See anything in your Elvish-Jedi human visions of yours, fearless leader"¨
"We are almost out of time."
*~* "I will not leave her"
"You will be expelled from the Jedi Order!"
"I don¡¦t care!"
"What would Padme do?"
Master Obi-Wan Kenobi looks sympathetically at his padawan-learner Anakin Skywalker.
"She would do her duty."
*~*With Anakin recovering from Count Dooku¡¦s attack, Jedi Master Kenobi is forced to face the traitorous Sith alone. Lightsabers crashing together- one blue, the other red/black- Obi-Wan tries to hold his own the Sith bent on killing him.
"I'm disappointed in you, Grand Master Kenobi. Master Yoda holds you in such high esteem."
// Oh, bite me, traitor!!//
In a swift motion, Dooku strikes Obi-Wan mercilessly: slash across his left arm, right thigh, left side. Burning pain rips through Obi-Wan Kenobi, as he falls to the floor.
The key cannot die now. He is the only one of the first generation to fight in the Battle of the Dimensions.
As Dooku prepares to send Obi-Wan into the oblivion, a green lightsaber protects the barely conscious Master Kenobi.
Anakin holds his own, but Dooku is gaining the upper hand. Obi-Wan muster enough strength to throw his lightsaber to Anakin. Two lightsabers flash against the Sith¡¦s red/black one. The Sith's the more experienced swordsman, though. He quickly relieves Anakin of his lightsabers, and slash the youth across his stomach. Gasping in pain, Anakin falls to his knees, and Dooku sends him across the room to land next to Obi-Wan.
Smiling evilly, Dooku approaches the vulnerable pair. Suddenly, a new player enters the fight.
A game, a web of deceit. A chess match between the light and the dark. The Dark may cover the light for a time, but the Light pierces the darkness. The game continues.
***~***
An older Anakin holds his three year-old daughter, Leia, as his beautiful wife Senator Padme Amidala holds their younger twin son, Luke. ( *Leia-strength, herald of good news *Luke- light, lightbringer)
"We must hurry, the clones have been given orders to kill any Jedi they encounter!" Obi-Wan cries. Arritin rushes up with his second child, Kari-Ann. Ali comes up with her eleven and four year-old sons, Jerian and Seth, and puts hand on her daughter shoulder. Sariana and Thimos and their four children come up too. Their children are Elyani, Thei, Missy, and Sorian.
The two seven year-olds, Thei and Kari-Ann, move direct in front of Anakin, Padme, and Obi-Wan.
¡"You are the first generation with Obi-Wan being the key. Anakin is a male human, so the second generation defenders must be part elvish-humans. The stronger of the two is Guardian of the Chosen is female, the Protector of the Chosen male," Kari-Ann whispers.
"We must, as being the defenders, bring the second generation to safety," Thei adds.
"I will take will take Leia to Alderran. She'll be safe, I promise you," Obi-Wan tells Anakin and Padme, as he takes Leia from Anakin.
"And I will take Luke to Naboo. He will be called Luctian- the Nubian version of Luke," Padme says holding her crying son. Anakin calms his sad children before speaking.
"I will fight in the Outer rim against the Sith and keep in touch. It is the only way to protect our children. I must defeat Palpatine."
***~***
"You will never defeat me, little chosen Jedi!¡¨ the Sith yells at Anakin. ¡§Where are your children and wife?"
// Wanna bet on that Palpy?//
"They are dead!" Anakin cries lying through his teeth, as he shield himself.
"Too bad, Skywalker! Come on, Jedi Chosen One! You could not even save your family!"
"Is that an attempt to turn me to the darkside?" Anakin returns calmly. As Anakin dodges the lightning that Palpatine throws his way, the Sith emperor yells over the roar of the battle,
"You cannot win, boy! The Republic might survive, but the Jedi Order will die!"
"Your taunts are pathetic. Do you know that?
"***~***
***~***
The PRESENT
"Run! The Imperials are here!" a young aide screams at the Nubian council. The young governor runs to warn the queen, but he runs straight into Imperial invader.
A shot rings out, and the young man screams.
// The darkness//
Danger is the game...the game is dangerous. Risks must be undertaken.
"I must contact my mother!" Luke screams to Sabe, as they race to the transport to get out of the siege city of Munpari. The head of Luke's royal guard Rori Leitan yells,
"You are the elected Prince of Theed, the son of the once again elected queen, and part of the royal family! No offense, Luctian, but have you lost your mind?"
"You don't understand! Our people are dying. My relatives are dying- I can feel it! Our resistance cells can only save so many people! We have to get our people out of the line of fire!" Luke cries looking desperately at his friends and protectors.
"Theed is too dangerous. We must go elsewhere!" one female guard replies loudly over the explosions caused by invading Imperial troops.
"They are after you, Luctian," Sabe says. Then whispers into Luke's ears, so only he can hear her. "I am an advisor to your mother, Luke. She wants you to be safe."
"I must help my people!" the fifteen teen year-old cries defiantly.
*~* "Move the fleet to intercept! Have the Super-Star class cruisers to open fire at my mark, and all other craft-including fighter to immediately fire at will!" the nineteen year-old Jedi leader commands. Brushing her two front braids out of her face, Karina ( Kari-Ann) Nept studies the tactical readout closely. The holographic view screen her all she needs to know. Her blue/silver eyes look up, after looking at where her and the enemies ships are. "All cruisers! Fire! I repeat- Fire at will!"
*~* Another Jedi controls his fleet carefully with deadly accuracy. The nineteen year-old boy sighs. Theo, Thei, shakes his head. They are heading straight into Imperial entanglements. He thinks,
//Figures.~Hey, my fellow Jedi upholding the non-republic involvement in military and government postions! A little help here?//
// Stop acting so melodramatically you and Kari don¡¦t uphold their policies either, Thei¡Kyou are simply helping the republic for a time. We are allied, not controlled by the Republic.//
// Thank you for the vote of confidence, but I want to know if you feel something dark coming towards us or not!//
// Calm, Thei,// another Jedi whispers in his mind. //We feel them, too. We must prepare. Kari-Ann is fighting alien invader, isn¡¦t she? You can do this. We will fight the Sith mentally and physically. Their..//
//...Imperial allies. Got it! Time to get busy!// another Jedi interrupts. Cutting the link, Thei thinks,
// Man, I wish Kaltori and I weren't so telepathic/empathic. Well they call me impulsive...what do they call the Jedi sent with me? I shouldn't disappoint them.//
Danger. Again.
//Why do I feel helpless//
***~***
As Han takes the twins to a low level hangout for their 17th birthday, Karina and Theo must decline. Giving Luke and Leia their presents, they leave to do their duties.
Another stage is set. I'm sorry I wish I could always be there. Everyone must face the trials of life and destiny alone. The generations of Jedi prophecy simply face harder ones. Darkness makes its move.
***~***
"Move it Skywalker. You and your children must go defeat Palpatine and his fellow Sith in his throne room!" Karina yells, as they race to outrun the Sith chasing them. Theo shouts in warning,
"Be careful, a trap has been laid!"
"They're gaining!" Luke screams, as they race down another hallway. One side a hall of doors, the right a side of windows with platform outside. Brilliant colors-blue and gold- are faded by the inhabiting darkness caused by the Sith's pretences. They run across to the other side.
"We must face this alone, don't we?" Leia cries to the others.
"Go! Go! We'll take care of the Sith!" Karina cries gesturing to the doorway's threshold.
"Destroy the Sith emperor," Theo yells, as the trio passes through the doors. Rushing to the door locks on either side, the two Jedi Knights close and secure the door with codes, voice prints, and Force signatures.
Smiling at their work, the two Elvish-human Jedi turn to face the Sith.
"There are at least sixty Sith!" Theo says, gaping in horror.
"Oh, by the Force! God save us!" Karina cries looking up.
***~***
"Run fly boy!" Leia screams at Han. Han Solo glances at his Jedi wife and looks in the distance.
"I'm running, Your Worship. But, Leia, one question."
"What?"
"What are we going to do at the end? Fly?!"
***~***
"We are running out of time!" Luke yells holding his four year-old daughter.
"I'm aware of that!" Karina snaps back.
"They're coming!" Leia and Han yell pulling their three children along with them.
"Hurry, we have to get our children outta here!" Theo yells at the chosen 14.
"Brillant!" Mara returns, as the group turns a corner and runs down another hallway lined with glass windows on either side. Running into another hallway, Corran yells,
"Watch out! They're now in front of us!"
***~***
***~***
The FUTURE
Screams echo, as the Battle of the Dimensions erupts into a full out battle of the Light verse the Dark. All 16 guardians join the Chosen of the second and third generations and the key. Along with the powers of Light of other dimensions, they face off against the unified powers of the Dark.
***~***
Entering the game, the stakes are higher. As a few years pass from the Battle of the dimensions, every person goes in alone. The risks are higher, the gains richer, and the very existence of trillions hang in the balance.
Run! The single words echo in Corran¡¦s mind people of the circle of 40 are dying and Liani of the 14 is dead. The rules have changed and he feels that his time has run out.
Tick-tock, tick-tock. Time is ending. Many fall; Jedi fall, Chosen fall, darkness falls, and hope fades.
Millions begin to die, as Sith forces from another galaxy aid the evil already in the main galaxy of the center dimension. Death and suffering sounds of friends and people echo in the minds of the Jedi.
//Pain! All I feel is pain and the screams of the innocent! Make it stop! For the love of God and the Force! Make it stop!!//
Friends and foes alike fall, under the onslaught of the battles raging across the once peaceful galaxy. The Jedi can't protect them all!
Yelling , Winter, Tycho, Wedge, and Idella rush into the battle with starfighters zooming over their heads.
"Watch it!" Michelin screams at his semi-force sensitive friends. The young Jedi looks up at the sky and see the stars and the battle raging up there. Through clouds his vision moves to see between the stars and to the conflict as if he were there.
The 14, a few are among the dead, but the ones among the living are changed and suffering. It starts anew¡Kthe prophecy once thought finished has arisen to prove destiny has a very different plan.
**//Run! I have to run!//** Mara races to help Luke lying helpless in the battle field, but he is not the one in danger of death. Sith come in all directions and in horror she fights with both her and Luke¡¦s blades.
"Mara, watch out! NO!!!"
// Danger...red alert....danger//
The prophecy...the prophecy. It says that the circle of 40 and the chosen 14 and the third generation will lose members now. Pain, it says but...A Jedi feels no pain...
Or do they?
"Hurry, Corran! Hurry, Mirax! There no longer Any time!" The three Solos scream. Nickian yells,
"We're almost there!"
Risks are under taken and the consequences are unavoidable.
"Run, Han! They're trying to block us off!" Leia yells. Lando and Tierra scream back at them and the combined Resistance and Republic troops,
"Incoming!!"
"We're being surrounded! Run across to the other building! And Watch out, Leia, I think they're after you!!"
Some fall...in pain or worse.
"Here they come!" Seth cries. "Darini! NO!"
//The battlefield is lined with deception, the Jedi must watch out.//
Some might captured or injured
Running, Luke is separated from the other Jedi and Republic/Resistant group on the space station.
//An Ambush// the Force whispers.
//This getting ridiculous. What do the Sith want with Leia and me. Alive, too. WHAT? They're surrounding me!//
Luke runs down the hallway and into the intersection Sith pour from all directions and Luke wraps himself in a strong force-field. The Sith press against the field. Luke falls to his knees.
"The liitle Elvish blood and incredible Force sensitivity you and your sister have won't be enough."Luke strengthens the Force-field.
"That won't help you, little Jedi," A Sith master's voice says darkly.
Arowian.
Fear
Theo runs across the roofs of buildings jumping away from the absurd amount of Sith chasing him.
//Didn't know they hated me this much. Would've gotten them a special gift for such an honor//
A force-push throws him off balance and he falls twenty stories. Luckily, he uses the Force to break his fall, but the force of the impact stuns Theo into a state of shock.
Moaning he pulls himself up to his hands and knees. His eyes widen and he looks up in horror. A sith smiles, and he slashs Theo across the back. Theo screams in agony.
//What are we going to do?//
Luke uses the Force-field to blast the Sith back and he flips over their heads and down a corridor.
**// I have to get out of here!//**
Alone. Cornered.
//They're right behind me// Luke thinks quickly running down the hallway. It dead end...two choices-right or left. Sounds come from all directions.
"What the-?"
Taunted, injured...what now?
Theo pulls himself to his feet, but another Sith kicks his feet form under him. Theo retaliates by a side kick to the creature¡¦s head. Suddenly all of them attack at once.
"AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!"
The protector needs protecting, but the trials have blocked all help from anyone. It must face alone. The protector is alive, but he too has been taken down. One left.
Karina comes rushing down a narrow passage way with at least dozens of Sith chasing her.
//Don't they have something better to do?!//
She comes to the end and skids to stop. The ramp ends in a tiny platform overlooking an abyss. She turns around to the Sith standing at the edge of the tunnel.
The Guardian...the prophecy says two choices...two live without freedom or death.
**//What can one do?//**
"Master Nileson, your choice?"¨
"No."She steps to the edge. Flicking her left right and cable wraps around her forearm.
I AM the Guardian of the Chosen! I chose...NEITHER!
She falls into abyss, and launches the cable ...but she continues to fall as the cable shoots upwards.
****End Trailer****
Like I said before : This a vision, but since i can't write something like this so long...I'm doing it here so you know the whole story.
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Isn't anyone going to read it??? Please...someone reply!!!!
i'm going to cry now!
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Prologue:
Darkness, Lightness, colors, and pain. Images swirling…the Future? Elvish blood mixing with the human blood of the Jedi. Within such a child…the young man…the Jedi child…the Jedi Knight. Treachery, suffering…the clone wars- the clone what? Strange things not come to past or thousand years gone. The future? No, the present…what did Master Kenobi find and why is Padawan Skywalker in pain?
An image…the evidence…the killer…the Sith…all points to…Palpatine?! No, the battle is upon us…the very survival of the Jedi and the Light of the center dimension…center dimension? Why are myths running through my mind as I meditate?
Because such a myth is part of you?
“What?”
Aarinen, Arritin, you are two myths are you not? A legendary Jedi and a magical elf.
“There is no such things as magic!”
Not in this dimension, no. There are magic dimension-the only place where magic can be good or evil-using in else where leads to the darkside.
“Who are you?”
I was actually the original Guardian of all Dimension and the powers, only one of them mind you. The other family is my pair…you are my heir, at least for the time being. Your knowledge was blocked .You must receive your other human inheritance
Closing his eyes the past is revealed to him…he is the sixth to have the power, the fifth-quasi generation. //Why am I the weakest generation, if my Jedi blood is enhanced by the Elvish?//
Remember, all generations before the seventh generation-sixth quasi all have to reach their first half century to reach full power.
“I’m going to die before then, and so is Sariana.”
Now go, Jedi, find the evidence to destroy Palpatine…you are the Leader of the Companions in Trial, the four of Royal blood! Now destroy the Sith before he can get his hands on a vulnerable Anakin! Oh No! Watch out!!!!
Startled, Arritin wakes up, in shock, but darkness clouds his vision and he blacks out!
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Hey~~~!!!!!! I love this new story of yours. I can't believe the prologue and ch. 1 (hehe, I'm the first to have read it--even before it was posted. >=P ) were all written in a few hours. This is amazing!! You've always written well, but because your dedication is so great and because you've written so many stories, your style just keeps improving. That's what I love about you! And your humorous touches always leave me shaking with laughter. You write about all of the characters so well; even though they are placed in another universe, they still have their wonderful unique qualities. I can't wait for you to finish this story--as well as all of the other stories. You're a genius to have all of your stories interconnect in some way. Kaltori and Theo are cool characters--go elf-humans!! ^_^;; I also love your details of all of the Jedis' and Siths' battles against each other. The way you write them is the best! I always enjoy reading about your battle scenes. =D~
SO!! Keep writing forever and ever!!! I love you Amidala22!!!!!!
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Well, it looks like I'm writing for MaSeiya& myself, but for anyone reading this, I'm almost done with chapter 1 and will be posting very soon!!!!
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Here we go or here I go...
Chapter 1- The beginning of the End?
Eyes wide in shock, a young Jedi woman stands up, grabbing her head and crying out. Her companions try to hide the fact that there is something wrong from the Jedi trio by throwing up an illusion for a moment.
“Ali? Are you alright?” the voice of Thimos Calin pierces through the void in her mind and heart.
Sarina Leti stands up and reaches out to touch her young friends arm. They and their friend Arritin Nilten are all the same age and the Companions of Trial to Anakin Skywalker, the Chosen one. Sariana whispers with her eyes unfocused.
“It’s Arritin, isn’t it?”
“I…my husband. Like you two, I feel him always…even at great distance. Something is very wrong…I felt pain…and…shock. Then it was as if a dark shroud fell over him…taking him away.”
“But he’s still alive. We would have all felt him die and he can’t leave us anyway…he’s the leader of the Companions of Trial…we’re the Four of Royal Blood!” Thimos cries, as the three of them rise to leave. Dropping credits on the table, Sariana turns to him.
“That would be more reassuring if you sounded confident.”
“We have to find him,” Ali Rilnalo says, running towards the Senatorial buildings.
“Yes, but what else is wrong?” Thimos asks. They begin to walk fast, trying not to run. People get rather disturbed if they see Jedi start running.
“Arritin saw something…Palpatine…is a darksider. He sent that along with a scream of alarm.”
“Let’s move, we need to find evidence against him and corrupt senators, demand that we are allies of the Republic and must have any trespassers of our open files and surrounding temple areas investigated or trouble will ensue, and above all…find our unlucky kidnapped leader!!!” Sariana cries racing towards senators not directly under Palpatine and are trusted.
“Well, at least we know why we can only feel Palpatine as cold, emptiness,” Thimos remarks, as they near the apartment housing of the senators.
Huge and beautiful, marble and stone, it sparkled like a white palace. The Jedi did not notice for their mission is of the utmost importance. Sariana went to find the senators, Thimos runs to call the Jedi temple on a very secure, encrypted line, and Ali kneels in a busy, protected indoor garden searching to find Arritin’s presence.
.*
Running, Anakin, Obi-Wan, and Padme jump onto a clone transport, and lift off into the air. Spotting Count Dooku, they tell the clone soldiers to follow full speed after the Sith Lord.
Explosions burst around them, and one nicks them sending clone soldiers and Padme flying out into the Genosis desert. Anakin screams they must go back, while Obi-Wan cries they must move on and that he needs Anakin to go with him. Obi-Wan cannot handle the darksider on his own.
“ I will not leave her!”
“You will be expelled from the Jedi Order!”
“I don’t care!”
“What would Padme do?”
Master Obi-Wan Kenobi looks sympathetically at his padawan-learner Anakin Skywalker.
“She would do her duty.”
Flying towards an entrance into the cave Dooku flew into, the two Jedi jump swiftly from the transport.
Entering the chasm, the two Jedi head towards Count Dooku.
“You’re going to pay for all the Jedi you killed today,” Anakin cries hotly and unJedi-like.
Obi-Wan tries to calm his apprentice and says for them to slowly go in together, but a headstrong Anakin races in. For his folly the Sith throws the young padawan into a wall with a terrific blast of blue-white lightning.
With Anakin recovering from Count Dooku’s attack, Jedi Master Kenobi is forced to face the traitorous Sith alone. Lightsabers crashing together- one blue, the other red/black- Obi-Wan tries to hold his own against the Sith bent on killing him.
“I’m disappointed in you, Grand Master Kenobi. Master Yoda holds you in such high esteem.”
// Oh, bite me, traitor!!//
In a swift motion, Dooku strikes Obi-Wan mercilessly: slash across his left arm, right thigh, left side. Burning pain rips through Obi-Wan Kenobi, as he falls to the floor.
As Dooku prepares to send Obi-Wan into the oblivion, a green lightsaber protects the barely conscious Master Kenobi.
Flipping the Sith’s blade away from his Jedi Master, Anakin fights hard to defend himself and Obi-Wan. Anakin holds his own, but Dooku is gaining the upper hand. Obi-Wan musters enough strength to throw his lightsaber to Anakin. Two lightsabers flash against the Sith’s red/black one.
The Sith’s the more experience swordsman, though. Back and forth the blades whip around the two combants so fast that the lightsabers seem but swirls of multi-colored light around the twirls and flipping force-sensitives. Anakin moves with amazing grace moving the blades back and forth striking one and the other against the darksider’s single one.
Dooku quickly relieves Anakin of his lightsabers, and slashes the youth across his stomach. Gasping in pain, Anakin falls to his knees, and Dooku sends him across the room to land next to Obi-Wan.
Smiling evilly, Dooku approaches the vulnerable pair. Suddenly, a new player enters the fight.
Master Yoda the most powerful Jedi master so far, walks slowly with his cane into the chamber where the fight is.
He throws his cane down and resumes a fighting stance. Throwing lightning at him, Dooku is surprised when Yoda easily catches it and reflects it back. After a few minutes lightsabers are the new weapon of choice. Yoda flips back his long soft cloth jacket and whips out his small lightsaber.
His ignites green contrasting the Sith crimson red/black lightsaber. The battle begins.
*
His eyes flickering, the young Jedi tries to open his uncooperative eyes. His eyes open slightly, and Arritin sees the ceiling of a transport. Turning his head he sees the incredible scene of the city of Coruscant. The buildings begin to blur, and he senses a presence that just came behind him. Looking to his right all he see is the dark blue back of the soft seats he laying across.
Suddenly, a hand forces his head to left and Arritin tries to fend off his assailant, but, with his hands bound and head spinning, he fails miserable.
//Well, this sucks.// he thinks as a needle punctures the side of his neck and he falls into unconsciousness.
*
As Yoda continually whips over Dooku’s head, striking back and forth against Dooku’s blade, Dooku realizes he is not the most powerful force-sensitive. Yoda continues the offensive, flipping and hitting in mid air, spinning and kicking, and crackling the lightsabers together. He says,
“Not bad, my old padawan.”
Dooku decides this is the time to leave and breaks off a part of the machinery around the hidden hangar. He throws towards the injured pair of Jedi. Yoda’s attention is distracted, as he throws his power towards the huge falling pipe and hurls it away from Obi-Wan and Anakin.
The Master-Padawan pair pick themselves off the ground just as Padme, Barris and her master come running in, just in time to miss the battle and Dooku. As the three woman tend to the two young men, Yoda stares after his former turned evil apprentice.
Hearing laughter, he sees the other Master-Padawan pair holding Obi-Wan and Anakin with Padme Amidala on Anakin’s left side.
Together the five Jedi balance to drag Obi-Wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker to get medical attention. All five are conspiring to get Anakin time to marry Amidala on Naboo. Though, marriage is not forbidden, it is not encouraged. The Jedi council, though, has lost control of this matter, as many Jedi have married. Giving birth to future Jedi.
*
Running back and forth, Sariana is able to gather enough information to bring a case against Palpatine, but they need Arritin to get hard evidence-besides Palpatine will be surprised that Arritin is bringing evidence when he should be tied up. Thimos has gathered some Jedi to help search for Arritin Nilten, with also leaving a message for the Jedi council and company-warning them about Palpatine. They began to feel a disturbing darkness on Coruscant.
“We have to keep moving!” Thimos cries at his two friends. Suddenly, his commlink beeps for attention.
“It’s the Jedi survivors from Genosis!!!” he cries.
“They certainly have their timing down pack,” Sariana quips. “Hey Ali! Come on! We’ll get the council and Obi-Wan and Anakin!!!”
“Ali?”
“Hurry, Arritin needs help soon and Anakin isn’t with the others. Arritin? He’s in trouble!” Ali cries. Thimos looks at her and says,
“When is he not in a compromising situation?”
“Quiet about our fearless leader. Especially, when my husband is more powerful than all of us!” Ali yells back, as they descend the airlift to transport level.
Running across the lobby, with people giving them surprised and wary looks, the trio rushes to get to the Jedi temple. They dodge colorfully decorated ministers, senators, aides, and tourists.
“Jeez, what up with the tourists. You can always tell them. They’re gawking at everyone!” Thimos cries, flipping over people drawing the fascinated tourists after them.
“They must have never seen a Jedi before!” Ali yells over the surprised roar of the crowd. They flip over people in unison, and rush towards the doors. The crowd cheers with the usual individuals looking uneasy- when a Jedi runs it is so not a good thing!
“Good going, you guys! We’re now the main attraction!! So much for animosity!!” Sariana cries when they reach the doors. They run to a transport and head to the Jedi Temple platform, where they will meet with the other Jedi to go rescue Arritin.
*
Moaning, Arritin opens his eyes and looks around him. He’s in a different room then he was before. He tries to move, and he is then aware of the strange bonds holding him down. His head spins…
//Like seeing new scenery but I’d rather pass on this one. Well, I have never been to such a depressing room. Wonderful, I’ve been kidnapped and cannot concentrate on the Force. Alrighty… got that covered. Now the question is who is holding me prisoner? //
“Sleep soundly, Jedi?”
“Chancellor Palpatine,” Arritin gasps, as he turns his head to his right to see the dark lord, the Sith, standing in the doorway. He decides to play it cool. “What are you doing, Your Excellency? Why am I tied to this bed?”
“Don’t play games, Jedi. I know what you saw…I came into that observatory room when you fell into your always right Elvish visions. You simply didn’t move in time to…”
“To escape you knocking me out and carrying me away. Why did you kidnap me?”
“Stop acting ignorant, boy. I know you know what I am.” Palpatine snarls and the darkness around him grows. Arritin presses back against the bonds, deeper in the bed, with his silver/blue eyes wide in horror.
//Whoa! Not a happy darksider right there.//
“Why not kill me, then?” Arritin asks calmly, ignoring the feeling of dread. The Sith Master walks up to the bound Jedi and smiles unkindly. He says coldly,
“You have a purpose…don’t worry. You’ll be alive for awhile, then I’ll put you out of your misery.”
“Thanks.”
The Sith glares at the sarcastic reply, and Arritin can’t help but gulp in apprehension. He controls his fear, though.
“Not afraid, are we? I’ll make you fear me, Jedi child!!” Palpatine, Darth Sidious, growls at Arritin.
//And I thought being in my mid twenties and having two kids would at least put me up to young man//
Arritin thinks ruefully. The Sith Lord walks up to the side of the bed looks down on the young Jedi. Arritin meets his gaze calmly, but he is still very wary of what Palpatine is going to do with him.
“I’m not afraid of you, Palpatine. I know where I’m going when I die, do you?”
“It doesn’t matter…you should be worried on when I send you on your way to the afterlife. You are important somehow-not because of your visions. You are very powerful…hidden power,” Palpatine whispers mostly to himself.
//Dear God, don’t let him find out I’m part of the first generation of Jedi prophecy!// Arritin hides his thoughts from Palpatine, strengthening his mental shields.
“What are you hiding, little Jedi,” Palpatine hisses unpleasantly.
“I’m not hiding anything, that’s your department, Palpatine,” Arritin returns coldly.
Palpatine reaches to touch Arritin’s forehead, and the young Jedi struggles to get away. The Sith slight touch brings waves of pain, as he slams against Arritin’s mental shields. Arritin does his best to stifle his cries of pain, as the Sith’s mental assault intensifies. After a few moments, Arritin can’t help but scream. Suddenly, as quick it came, the assault ended, and the pain diminished leaving behind an awful headache.
Arritin, head down and gasping, looks up at the darksider blearily waiting for any more assaults from Palpatine.
“You are an interesting young Jedi, Arritin Nilten. I have been anxious to meet you,” Palpatine says.
“Glad to know I’m in such high demand,” Arritin replies flippantly. The Sith snarls and slaps the Jedi across the face. Head back down, Arritin thinks,
//Ow. ‘A Jedi does not know pain’. Awe, leave me alone. Hearing dead Jedi in my mind is so not cool.//
A hand unexpectedly grips his jaw and forces his head up. Glaring at Palpatine, Arritin is suddenly aware of the blood running down from his mouth, cutesy of the Sith. Trying to look away from Palpatine’s creepy, soulless gaze, Arritin wonders how they ever missed the Sith’s presence. Sure, people can have strong sheilds, but this coldness, this darkness is terrible. How could the Jedi miss this evil-this strong evil?
Still battling to get away from the cold, empty, and death feeling exuding from Palpatine, Arritin struggles and pulls against his bonds. Wrenching his jaw back from the Sith, Arritin glares at Palpatine. Arritin then bravely lifts his chin, but Palpatine’s instant strikes throw his head to the side. Arritin shakes off the Sith’s attack and turns back to face Palpatine with determination in his eyes.
“Perhaps you’ll be more cooperative later…after a little lesson in obedience, my dear elvish-human Jedi,” Palpatine smiles wickedly.
“I wouldn’t hold my breath on that Palpatine. You’ll suffocate,” Arritin returns.
//Not like that’s a bad thing…//
“We’ll see, Jedi. Now I have a senatorial meeting…the leaders of the Republic are turning to me and against your weak kind. If you would only join me…”
“Not even if hell freezes over, Sith,” Arritin replies, his tone icy. Palpatine snarls,
“Then you all will die.”
“Not bloody likely!”
Palpatine smiles coldly again, and he walks out of the room to head the beginning of what he believes will be the fall of the Republic.
*
“What’s going on?” Mace Windu, one of the heads of the Jedi Council demands, as he and the other survivors of the Battle of Genosis come into the Jedi temple.
“Arritin has been kidnapped by the Sith hiding under our very noses! He told you there was something amiss for months. Now, when my husband found out who it was leading them to destroy us and the Republic, he got himself kidnapped,” Ali says coldly in a soft voice.
“And we need our leader…” Thimos tells them quietly with Sariana nodding in agreement.
“Who is the Sith leading the Republic to its destruction?” Adi Gallia, another one of the council asks.
“It’s Palpatine, isn’t it?” Obi-Wan’s quiet voice sends the entire room full of Jedi into silence.
“Yes, how?” Sariana asks confused. Everyone else just stares.
“When I was a prisoner of Dooku’s he told me that the Republic was being controlled by a Sith. I just thought he wanted to look innocent enough for me to come over to his side,” Obi-Wan explains.
“Then the Sith are already after the first generation. We’re in deep trouble,” Barris says softly.
“No, we can protect the first generation from the Sith so they can fight. All we have to do is get Nilten,” a Jedi in the crowd cries.
“And how are we suppose to do that? He’s been kidnapped by darksiders!”
“Uh, excuse me but…What are you guys talking about?!”
“Don’t ask…we’ll figure something out. Just improvise!” Obi-Wan returns calmly.
“Great…so simple. Except when does anything go as plan or be simple?” a Jedi Knight yells over the crowd. “We’re definitely still in trouble, here.”
“No, we are not. Rescue Arritin, we will,” Master Yoda, the other head of the council corrects.
“We must bring Palpatine down…”Adi Gallia starts.
“We have evidence but not enough. Arritin can lead us to it, and I believe that-beside that Arritin probably saw something in his visions- is the reason Palpatine kidnapped him,” Thimos interrupts.
“Then we will need to find him, won’t we?” Adi returns. Thimos and the others nod.
“We have senators that will help and we have enough evidence to bring corrupt senators down and put the people on our side. That should be give us time to take out the Sith,” Sariana says with a wan smile.
“Then what are we waiting for…let’s take Palpy down,” Master Adi Gallia says, making sure her lightsaber is on full power.
“Wow, you are way too eager,” Master Obi-Wan Kenobi stares at her.
“There’s no time! We have to save Arritin before it’s too late…Palpatine already has emergency power! Once he gains full control…the Republic will fall and so will we!!” Jedi Master Jahli Herim says loudly to the group assembled.
“What are we waiting for! Time to get Palpy!” another Jedi cries over the crowd. Mace turns to him.
“I’m surprised you guys didn’t scream ‘Die, Palpy, die!’, what with the emotions I’m feeling.”
The Jedi assembled lower their heads sheepishly and a feeling of a calm peace falls over them.
“Careful, we must be. The Sith want our power they do. Kill or consume you, they will. Stay calm, and be on guard…Few Jedi needed, are they,” Yoda says, as the remaining members of the council turn to leave.
“We will destroy them and Palpatine. It’s time to move,” Adi Gallia says, as they and other Jedi rush to leave.
“I feel Arritin twenty miles away in the Southern sector three levels down. He’s conscious, but darkness is blocking him from me,” Ali tells the council.
“Let’s go.”
**End chapter 1**
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This looks interesting.
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Well, all I can say is that it took you long enough to start typing up your stories and posting them! I really like Thei and Kaltori's personalities here, and the whole fic is really funny and with a lot of action! Write more soon!
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I have more readers!!!
Score!!
Please hurry back Tahiri, we have to work on Rebel High & I want to know if you'll read the next two chapters of this fic "Angel's Plight".
You can thank Stephanie for me writing this for I was torturing her with ch. 9-10 or 10-11(depends on how long I make PT and early OT). I'll have to bug you on that for it will be the greatest chapter to write & what I have down on paper is enough to be one chapter.
CH.2 is coming-don't worry
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PLEASE LIKE THIS & ANY LURKERS PLEASE REPLY!!! (i write fast when i'm motivated!!)
ok...here it is...(really long)
Chapter 2
Struggling against his bonds, for what feels an eternity , Arritin finally relaxes realizing that his efforts are in vain. He sighs, trying to rest.
//I can’t give up! I have to get out of here!//
Feeling the presence of darksiders all around him in the building he’s in, Arritin knows he only has a limited amount of time before a Sith comes in and gives him an injection or a nasty drink of a strong drug he’s sure not many have experience or his has never heard of before.
//I love being a test subject. Well, whatever they’re forcing into my body really needs work…I’m not even feeling a buzz! Okay, I think I’m officially going insane.// Arritin thinks, as his head continues to spin.
//I feel like I’m up in the clouds-twirling and twisting. Oh, my God, does my head hurt. I must get free before they come…but how?//
Glancing around then dimly lighted room, the young Jedi observes a large window with long, thick and drably drapes and a polished wood table to the left, and he sees the door to the right. Next to the door is a dresser with a mirror-bordered in crystallized glass.
//How nice, I’m trapped in a room which is both drab and elegant at the same time. Thank you so very much, Palpy. When I soon escape your evil friends, I’ll have to repay you for your kindness.// Arritin thinks sarcastically. In front of his bed is a chest and beyond that a blank wall. He is tied to a four post bed in this dark, dreary room, and the molecular bonds are binding him tightly. He could barely move at all.
Heavy footsteps sound down the hallway, heading towards Arritin’s room. Eyes widening, the young Jedi knows his time is running out. Arritin thinks frantically,
//Foreboding footsteps…where’s the creepy music when you need it? What can I use, what can I use?!//
Feeling the effect of the drug beginning to fade, Arritin realizes it’s now or never. Looking at the door, it suddenly dons on him. He can feel the Force now, and there’s a beautiful mirror screaming ‘break me’ over in the corner!
Reaching out with the Force, the young Jedi ‘pushes’ a strong blow towards the fragile glass. It shatters loudly, and Arritin can hear-and feel- the Sith begin to run towards the room his being held prisoner in.
//Crap, crap, crap!!! No more time, I have to stall them. With what though? I’m sure they’d rather string me up then listen to my astounding wit! Wait the door…it must have a locking mechanism on this side. Hey why not, I’m suppose to be drugged out of my mind! Well, I’m going insane anyway, what do I have to lose?//
Concentrating on the panels around the door, Arritin feels the lock on this side of the door. Pounding footsteps-multiple people now- are racing towards him. He feels them trying to suppress his powers, but he throws them back and away from his mind. He activates the door just as the Sith try to open it.
//Well, that was close…now time to get free before they get in!!//
Seeing the broken glass, the young Jedi pulls a large, jagged piece towards his left wrist. It rips through his bonds and barely misses his wrist. Sighing in relief, Arritn uses it on his right wrist, then on the bonds around his waist, legs, and ankles. He stands up quickly and uses the Force to bring circulation back to his legs. Banging begins on the door, but there’s only two Sith out there.
//They must not want the others to know I’m too much to handle. Time to prove that I’m really a brat when I get in tough situations. Also, I’m going to kick some serious Sith hide back to dark holes from which they came for kidnapping me!!//
Stealthily moving to the door, Arritin can hear the Sith cursing him out. The young Jedi smiles, and shields his presence from the darksiders. Still only two, the Sith are almost through the door’s locking codes. Arritin bites his lip in slight worry, but he starts to open the door. Just as the Sith push, Arritin Force-pulls the chest in front of his bed towards the door and the darksiders.
The Sith fall right over the chest, and Arritin leaps over them. They reach out to grab Arritin, but he deftly dodges their attempts. He runs down the hallway and feels for his lightsaber and the elvish knifes he had been carrying when Palpatine decided he wanted to add Arritin to his ‘collection’.
*
“He’s free! He’s free!” Ali cries, as the group of Jedi head to the Southern sector.
“Still three levels down?” Obi-Wan yells over the sound of the landspeeder.
At her nod the Jedi Masters of the council cry that they must get there quickly.
“They’re probably chasing him right now!! He’ll be harder to reach if they capture him again!” Mace Windu says to the others.
“Find him before they do, we must!” Yoda cries loudly in his broken basic.
“And get Palpatine before he can get to the senate! The politicians on our side cannot resist him for very long!!” Adi Gallia yells. The others nod in understanding, and Sariana cries where Arritin is.
“He’s getting…he’s what? He just grab his knifes and lightsaber, and now he’s doing the only thing he can do against ten Sith!” Ali replies, as they enter the Southern sector in the less elegant part of Coruscant.
“And what’s that?” Thimos yells in return. The Jedi begin to descend to the third level and are waiting to land, until they know exactly where Arritin is.
“Running!!” Ali replies, closing her eyes and reaching out for Arritin’s presence. The other Jedi lower the tranports to a deserted landing platform on the third level.
“Oh, my God! Is he insane?” Sariana cries. Ali shakes her head and smiles.
“Nope just really, really not wanting to be kidnapped again! Desperation is one efficient mode of motivation!!” Ali explains. “He’s down two levels, now.”
“I’d have to agree with Sariana, Ali, that Arritn is a little off right now,” Obi-Wan says calmly, trying not to smile.
“How did he descend two levels in a matter of a few seconds to a few minutes?” Adi Gallia cries out.
“Improvising, he is. Help, he needs from us now. Go, we must before find him, they do!” Master Yoda commands , as the Jedi leave the two Republic soldiers they brought with them with the transports.
“Hurry, it’ll take time to descend those levels to get to him! He’s very close!!” Ali yells, as the group of Jedi jump quickly from building to building-descending rapidly.
*
Palpatine moves towards his office and brainwashed assistants, waiting to meet with Senate and start the ending and fall of the Republic. With the visionary part-Elvish Jedi neutralized and under his control, the Sith Lord can easily disguise his true intentions until it’s too late. The Jedi council no nothing of him, yet.
Unfortunately for him, he has a strange feeling that something is amiss in his dark plans for the future.
*
Running down the hallway, Arritin feels his wife reach out to him, and he tells her he had to get his lightsaber. He feels the council and Obi-Wan near her, but can barely hear them for Ali is mentally yelling at him to move it or she’ll come after him.
//Why do I have this feeling that if I get killed or captured she’s going to either personally going kill me or go after me in the afterlife to bring me back so she can personal skin my hide?//
Feeling the Sith chasing after him, Arritin races through the threshold on the building to a platform over hundreds of feet high. He continues, almost reaching the end, and feels around at his options. Going up would be easy, but the Sith could catch him easily since he’s losing time right now. The buildings to the left on right near him are no good for the Sith could just pounce on him if they aim themselves just right. Below him twenty feet out and two levels below is a glass ceiling with a clear pool surrounded in a garden of the only nice building around here. He quickly puts his lightsaber one of the pouches still around his waist, and thinks,
//Why is the only way out the most unappealing and unpleasant of the lot?//
Just as he reaches the end of the platform, Arritin throws himself towards the glass ceiling window with his arms straight and fists closed flying towards the building.
// Thank God, I have strong personal shields.// He thinks as he throws a barrier around himself, protecting him from the speed of the fall, the glass, and the impact of hitting the water.
He crashes through the glass-shattering it- and goes fist and arms straight into the water like a diving swan of his homeworld of Kilste, capital planet of the Koliste` sector. He reaches the bottom of the pool and quickly pushes himself up coming through the deep pool to the surface. Breathing deeply, Arritin brushes his hair out of his eyes and looks around as he treads water. Though clean and clear water, the jungle looks and little wild but well trimmed not the less.
“I’m not even going to ask. Okay, thanks for free shower, but it’s time to go!” Arritin says to the jungle and swims to the edge and pulls his dripping, waterlogged self out of the water. “Luckily, I put my lightsaber in a water proof pouch or I would have no true weapon but what I can actually concentrate to get my Force-potential and my elvish magic.”
Head still spinning from the after affects of the drug, Arritin sways a little as he heads towards the entrance out of the building and to the fifth level of this part of the Southern sector. He rushes out, and he feels the Sith searching for him…they don’t know where he is.
//As long as I can stand, I’ll be able to shield myself, but they’ll eventually find me and they will not be happy. Maybe they won’t kill me out right…but I rather throw myself off a cliff than be in their evil presences again. Oh, there’s a happy thought! I’ll have to go into a magic dimension and chill with some pure unicorns just to purge my senses of their ill-treatment this last day and a half or however long it has been since I was kidnapped.//
He begins to runs, but he keeps swaying and cannot run as fast as he can. Feeling the Sith come near him, Arritin stumbles and falls flat on his face.
//Ouch…I’m so dead…have to keep moving.//
He quickly pulls himself up to his hands and knees, but he feels and hears a Sith and the dark hum of a Sith’s ignited lightsaber.
//Oh, no. No…no…no!//
Arritin suddenly opens himself to the Force fully and dangerously in his condition, but holds his head high and regaining his feet. Barely standing on his feet, the young Jedi ignites his gold/white blade contrasting the red/black one of the darksiders. The Sith smiles coldly and says at least he’ll have a little fun before dragging Arritin back.
“You’ll find I’m not so easily subdued, Sith,” Arritin says calmly, trying his best not to fall on his face again. The Sith laughs,
“What are you going to do, little Jedi, your potential may be great, but you are to weak to control or access you powers.”
“You forget one thing,” Arritin whispers with a ghost of a smile. “I’m not fully human and the other bloodline doesn’t come from this dimension.”
“What?”
Arritin whispers quietly in Elvish singing for the power of the Elves of the ‘Rings of Power dimension’ to come. Singing a little loudly at the confused darksider, Arritin summons the Elvish magic to protect him for a time. The Sith is blasted back with the magic power flowing from Arritin which intensitfies the Force-pushing attack of the Jedi.
Taking the distraction, Arritin turns and runs as fast as he can away from the Sith. The strength he had gained is once again lost, and he feels he consciousness slipping.
//I’m losing this game. // Arritin’s thoughts start to fade as his vision blurs. He trips, but he still remains on his feet.
He feels a warning in the Force before something pierces his back. He begins to fall, but his strength of will let’s fall him into a crouch. Facing his enemies, Arritin keeps his ignited gold blade to his right side away from his body, as he holds his left hand out to touch a wall close to him.
“Time to go back…your little exercise time is over. Time to sleep,” a Sith says mocking Arritin. Arritin simple smiles calmly at him. Another Sith walks closer to the young Jedi but remains her distance seeing the icy determination shining in Arritin’s eyes.
“You can’t win, Jedi, come here,” another female darksider whispers seductively to Arritin.
//I wouldn’t bet on that…I’d rather not stay for a another visit in that unappealing hotel!.//
//Arritin? Aarinen? I’m coming…we’re coming don’t give up!! We’re coming…// Ali’s voice whispering kindly and full of love echoes in Arritin’s mind.
//Ali…help…// Arritin mentally sends back as his fight to remain awake is taking its toll on him. The Sith begin to tighten a circle around and above him. There seems to be no way out.
//There’s always a way out…hold on, husband mine. We’re here…we’re here.//
//Where? Are you hiding?// Arritin sends back using Ali’s presence as a way to remain conscious. The Sith move in closer…
**// Come here, little Jedi…come here.//** a Sith’s voice whispers suggestively. Arritin feels himself start to move towards the darksiders…he can’t fight their control…he’s too weak.
//NO!// Arritin forces himself back using his blade to keep the Sith around him at bay.
“You can’t fight us any longer, Arritin Nilten,” a Sith says confidently.
“Your overconfidence is not only your weakness, but misplace and annoying as well,” Arritn returns.
“Your faith in your friends is your, Jedi brat!”
“Faith in your friends is never a weakness!!” Sariana, Thimos, and Ali scream in unison, as the Jedi descend on the unepecting Sith. The darksiders, too focused on Arritin, are surprised but immediately turn to face the threat of the Jedi. One of the Sith charges Arritin slamming his red/black blade against Arritin’s gold one.
Startlingly, Arritin hold his own and shows he is a superior swordsman.
“You may be better in the skill of lightsabers, but you are not at your full power,” the Sith smiles wickedly, as he knocks Arritin’s blade from his hand and presses his lightsaber against Arritin’s unprotected throat. Arritin, gasping and glaring, pushes against the unyielding wall, and looks directly into the Sith’s eyes. The Sith glances upwards to see the other Sith losing the battle against the superior and many Jedi, and Arritin begins to sing in Elvish. The Sith immediately covers Arritin’s mouth, stifling the summoning of Elvish magic.
The Sith glares at Arritin, closes down his blade and wraps his arm around the young Jedi, beginning to drag Arritin away from the battle and all hopes of rescue. The Jedi sees this and yell to get Arritin and his captor. The other Sith are neutralized, and the Jedi close in on the Sith who again ignites his blade and holds it against Arritin’s throat with the other still over the mouth of the Elvish Jedi.
“Back off or this Jedi will be sent to the afterlife before his time!” the Sith snarls in warning. Eyes wide, the muted Arritin looks suggestively towards the stray pieces of buildings slowly falling apart around them.
Ali nods and uses it as a distraction. The other Jedi pouch on the Sith, as Arritin throws the blade away from his throat and wrenching free of the hand clamped over his mouth. With the Sith captured and under control, they Jedi tend to Arritin. Obi-Wan holds Arritin up, as the other three of the ‘Companions in trial smile softly at Arritn.
The Jedi masters tell everyone to move for time is dear to them and the Republic.
*
Heading back to Coruscant, Anakin Skywalker and Padme` Amidala Naberrie` Skywalker smile at each other in love. They are happily married and are heading now to see the Master of the Council and are sure they will happy and bless their union.
Anakin suddenly stops smiling and his eyes go unfocused. Padme, being semi-forcesensitive feels the warning and looks at Anakin.
“What is it?”
“They’re in trouble all of them. Right under my nose is the Sith! It’s Palpatine and to think he was trying to poison my mind and destroy us all!”
“Palpatine…never trusted that conniving, sly, and cowardly man,” Padme says coldly feeling betrayed and strangely calm at the same time.
“We have to hurry!” Anakin cries.
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Waiting, the senators know the time for the meeting is coming soon. The Jedi have been uncommunicative for an hour. Where are they?
“There’s only so much time, Senator. The Jedi must come soon or Palpatine will be the death of us all!” a young aide cries in horror.
“We can only wait and hope they will find the unfortunate young Jedi who has the information and knowledge to save us. He has the evidence or know where it is…” The senator breaks off as a comm transmission beeps for attention.
“It’s from the Jedi!! They have retrieved their ‘young friend’ and he has found the ‘packaged’ we are looking for!”
“Call the other senators! We no longer need to stall…also connect all transmission to the senate room. That way the entire Republic will be able to see Palpatine for what he is and he will no longer be able to control us!”
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“So what do we exactly tell the senate?” a young Jedi asks the council, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and the ‘Companions in Trial’.
“Any suggestions?” Obi-Wan looks at Arritin and his friends. “What do we tell them before presenting the evidence?”
The group continues to run, and the ‘Companions in Trial’ look at each other.
“Don’t we need the proof from the senators?”
“Palpatine is the Sith Lord!” Sarina, a Jedi Knight, cries at her three fellow Jedi and best friends.
“We need more proof!” Thimos yells back, as they run. His jade green eyes flash at her. Brushing her red striped white hair out of her eyes, she stares at Ali and Arritin. Ali asks Arritin,
“See anything in your Elvish-Jedi human visions of yours, fearless leader?”
“We are almost out of time.”
“That doesn’t help!! Thank you, but we’re under enough presser. I’m sure you have realized it!” Obi-Wan cries to Arritin.
“Hurry!” another Jedi yells, as the entire Jedi council and other Jedi come rushing into the Senate building.
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As Palpatine starts to address the Senate, the trusted and respected senators yell that Palpatine is a traitor and that they have proof of him and other corrupt senators. The senate goes into an uproar and other representatives yell in agreement and other in shock. There are mostly yells against Palpatine, though.
“Wait, I’m sure there’s logically explanation. The dear senators have a right to explain their case,” Palpatine says calmly as if he’s not to blame.
“Liar, what about the clone troops you have programmed to kill the Jedi and us?!”
“What are you talking about?” Palpatine returns. The senators smile and release proof to the senate and across the entire Republic. The senate gasps and soldiers come to take the corrupt senators away. Witnesses come to testify against the senators and against Palpatine.
“What about the Jedi…?” Palpatine asks trying to gain control.
“Yes? What about us, Sith Lord? You are trying to kill us, the Republic, and the innocent people the Republic represents!!! You tried to turn the senate against us, told them to break into our file-which didn’t work- and you covered us the wrong doings against us! We help the Republic and are against those who use their powers for evil!” Adi Gallia cries as the Jedi enter through many door ways of the Senate.
“You are trying to bring me down, falsely!” Palpatine tries to accused the Jedi.
“Stuff it Palpatine the proof and the state of the Republic proves your treachery,” Senators of the Republic cry out, demanding justice.
“Lies, all lies! How can you say I’m a Sith Lord?”
“Besides the fact that you feel cold and evil, you also have plans for a super weapon found in your computer files-very nice encryption by the way, gave the slicers something to do- and the fact that you kidnapped a young Jedi Knight because he has incredible, futuristic visions which can only be altered in a certain way or sometimes never at all,” Mace Windu says calmly.
“Where’s this poor Jedi? Is he simply misplaced. I would…” Palpatine begins.
“Quiet, Your Excellency of Darkness. I have this thing about being kidnapped-I seem to have to escape just to spite my kidnappers. Though I’d rather pass on other visit to the delightful little dark room you put me in,” Arritin Nilten calmly says loudly so all can hear. Palpatine stares at the Elvish Jedi and his companions darkly. Realizing that he has to change his plans Palpatine says calmly back, with his voice filled with scorn and hate,
“Seems I should watch out for all human Jedi with Elvish blood then, Nilten,” Palpatine snarls and uses the darkside to launch the Jedi back, and he dives towards Arritin with a murderous intention.
“Arritin! Watch out!” Ali screams. Arritin dodging Palpatine yells,
“Please don’t say that. That was said once before and I got kidnapped then. I’d rather not be kidnapped or killed because of a trend being started!!”
Palpatine clears a doorway above the doorways that the Jedi occupy. Arritin race up after him with the Jedi rushing after them. The senate is left in an uproar but at least it will survive against the evil intentions of the Sith.
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Running towards the huge platform which Palpatine is heading for, Arritin yells,
“Darth Sidious!! Palpatine!! Palpatine! You can’t win, your darkness will be eliminated eventually!”
“Not by you, leader of the ‘Companions of Trial’,” he laughs as Arritin’s eyes widen. “Yes, I now know what you are, Arritin. The one who will be defeated is you!”
Arritin stands with the winds whipping around him and Palpatine and he senses more Sith approaching. The wind ripples his clothing and blows his Jedi cloak, finally dry, to the side.
“You can sense them, Jedi. You may have won the round before, but I will win this one!” Palpatine yells igniting his red/black lightsaber. Arritin ignited his in response and waits.
The wind blows around the two combatants: one a young man in brown holding a lightsaber of gold, the other an older man in dark robes holding a lightsaber the color of death.
End of Chapter 2
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This is great! Keep it up! It's very interesting! I like all of the characters in this story! It's great! Please continue!
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UP! Great chapter Ami!! I'd say more but I gotta go, I'll post a more worthy comment when I get back to the states!
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Hey here's chapter 3!! I hope you like it as much as I do!!!
Chapter 3
"Hurry, Padme`!! I feel that time is running out for the Jedi to slow down the Sith, and my 'Companions in Trial' are in trouble. Especially Arritin for he is the leader!" Anakin Skywalker yells to his wife, as they land her silver starship and rush down the platform heading towards the Senate building. To their surprise, Obi-Wan Kenobi is running towards them.
"We know Palpatine is the traitor, Obi-Wan!" Padme Amidala Naberrie Skywalker cries out to the Jedi master. Nodding, Obi-Wan brings them up to date and brings them to the other Jedi.
"Arritin is after Palpatine, who is after you, Padawan," Obi-Wan tells Anakin softly, heading to the higher levels of the Senate building close to where Arritin faces Palpatine with the other 'Companions in Trial' racing to get to that particular battle. Some of the arriving Sith have them blocked off from Palpatine. Anakin frowns at this and looks to Obi-Wan.
"Master, you are trying to protect me aren't you. Please I must help them. They have stopped Palpatine from getting me, and I understand you are still protecting me from the darkside though I tried to ignore the fact that I was the one who kept being headstrong and stupid," Anakin tells Obi-Wan, moving around him to get to Arritin and the others. The senate building is still in an uproar, but the Jedi continue through the crowded madness of the government headquarters of the Republic.
"Calm, Padawan Skywalker. Calm, you must be. Will try to kill or kidnap you Palpatine will. Just as Arritin, try to hurt you he will," Master Yoda tells Anakin and turns and leaves to go after Anakin's companions and fellow chosen of the first generation of Jedi prophecy.
"You cannot stop me and you know it," Anakin flips over them and runs towards a lift heading up to Arritin. Padme and the others race after him.
"Anakin!! You are not ready to face the Sith master!" Adi Gallia cries to the padawan Chosen one.
"And you are not going without me!" Padme yells at her husband.
"Or me!" Obi-Wan shouts as he and Padme leap onto the lift.
They all head to a lower level near the confrontation, and run into a great number of Sith some that were hiding on Coruscant and newly arrived ones from off planet.
"They have finally come. The darkness Arritin saw in his visions and we felt as dark clouds over the galaxy!" Mace Windu yells at the others. The winds roar and presses against them, but the Jedi pay no heed to the dangerous battle ground that is chosen for the beginning of the war of the light verses the dark.
The Jedi ignite their lightsabers, and they face the Sith igniting their red/black sabers that promise death and despair. The brown cloaked Jedi wait patiently driving the Sith to attack first. With screams of fury and hate, the darksiders start their assault. The Jedi meet the charge with a calm and deadly offensive of their own.
The cracking of lightsabers is heard over the howl of the wind and the turbulence of the darkside powers of the Sith hurling black lightning. White lightning and black lightning mixing with the blue lightning cause the battle field to light up in a shower of power.
The lightsabers flash in swirls of color running and blending with the crimson darkness, with the Force-sensitives dancing a vicious game of death and survival. Back and forth they jump and dodge the lightsabers. Many fall on both sides collapsing in pain or starting their passing to the afterlife. The demises on each side makes the battle more fierce and painful.
Obi-Wan twists and forces Sith back, his lightsaber hitting blades of death aside and cutting a Sith in two. His blade moves back and forth pushing the Sith back, trying to get pass the wall of darkness. With Obi-Wan at his side, Anakin Skywalker- the Chosen one - start cutting a path heading to their friends in need. Padme blasts Sith, following the master-padawan pair of her friend and husband.
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