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Tych_sel Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 7/14/03 12:05pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) 5 Year Time Jump
	Okay, I made it through the trailer. Judging from that, it's going to take me some time to geth through this fic, but I will try and do so soon. Force be with you, Tych_sel -----signature----- "I had a dream I was a Jedi." - A. Skywalker "I am a Jedi, like my father before me." - L. Skywalker A Last Jump: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28296734&brd=10476 Destiny's Heir: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27819347/p
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 7/15/03 1:37pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) 5 Year Time Jump
	Hello everyone! Like I promised here's the next post! A little short, but I have it! Tych_sel Yeah, it's a little long, but you'll get through easily once you get to Chapter 7. The posts get much, much short compared to what you have been reading... Without further ado... *************************************** Chapter 24 As descending shadows begin to slowly cover the sky of Coruscant, everyone-force sensitive or not-can feel the evil energy chilling them to their very souls. Yet through the horror and confusion, there are those readying themselves for battle to protect not only this planet but the future of the galaxy. The Jedi Knights are preparing themselves and evacuating their people, but the Republic seems to be struck dumb. Coming into the arguing senate, where the senators are screaming at each other, people with warnings yell for the senate’s attention. Finally, one Jedi Knight runs in and shouts as loud as he can, “ENOUGH ALREADY!!! THE SITH AND THEIR SUPPORTS WITH CLONE TROOPS IS COMING DOWN UPON OUR PLANET!!! EVERYONE BUT YOU IS PREPARED!!! CALL UPON THE TROOPS AND WARN THE PEOPLE YOU ARE SUPPOSE TO REPRESENT. After that I suggest you leave, but if you leave right now, before your task is complete, the darkness will find you.” “WHAT?!” “YOU HEARD ME!” the Jedi yells loudly over the noise, fighting the urge to roll his eyes and scream in frustration. Suddenly one senator’s, in the mist of the chaos, voice pierces over all the others. “Why will the darkness come after us if we don’t warn our people. Don’t worry, I have did what you asked during the arguing. “Should I leave now?” “The Sith can sense the pride, fear, and betrayal coming from everyone on this planet. If you do not warn your people they will sense the betrayal that your people will feel in the future. If this task has been completely, I beg you to grab innocent people along the way and leave!!! THE BATTLE IS ABOUT TO BEGIN AND YOU WILL NOT LIKE VIEWING THE ALL OUT WAR BETWEEN THE SITH AND THE JEDI. Thank you to those who choose to stay and fight with us-against the soldiers only of course. You will always be acknowledged by the Jedi!” The Jedi Knight screams back and turns on his heels, running out the door. //By the Force! THE INCREASING LEVELS OF STUPIDITY IN HERE IS UNCANNY!!! Seeing and hearing the unnatural moment of silence, the green haired human Jedi screams over his shoulder, “WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!” As the Jedi disappears, the senate instant panics as everyone runs to contact their people, warn all troops on the planet, and get away as fast as they could. “Hurry!!! The Sith will be soon upon us! Get the children out of here!” A red haired Jedi screams loudly, her brown eyes hard and determined. A padawan skids by her and runs towards a waiting transport. His is holding two three year-old (boy girl) twins with four girls and boys, around six to seven years old, are gripped onto the padawan’s robes. The boy could not be more than sixteen, but he’s doing his share of taking care of the little ones. Hopefully, he will stay with them, because the battle that is about to begin will be to the death and not everyone is going to make it out alive. Three soldiers coming running out help him, and the purple haired human padawan goes running back to collect more little ones so the transport can quickly take off. The transports must be launched before the Sith can get weapons to shoot them down-or worse capture them. Padme Amidala Skywalker runs down a red velvet decorated carpet through one of the many halls on the twelfth floor of the complex closest to the Jedi temple. She’s going to collect the children-Jedi and not-and bring them to the temple for evacuation. There are ten children within the building-including little three year-old twins, Leia and Luke. Turning around a corner, she feels the terror radiating from her twin children. Padme’s eyes widen with fear before they narrow in incredible determination. She runs across the hall and into a suite to the left. Into the large entrance way she goes, and races to the huddled children, the oldest being ten. The blond haired Mivian, a humanoid species that appear to be fairies (wings and all), holds onto the other children. Luke and Leia come running to her, tears shining in their eyes. Luke buries his face into Padme, and she strokes his blond hair. She then picks up Leia, whose brown braids swing back and forth, and looks at the other children. She motions them to silence, and begins to creep out on the suite and back into the hallway… ********** Like? ~*Amilight -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 7/16/03 5:58pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	Are you going for some laughs here? I found the whole warning part quite humourous. "You will not like viewing an all out war between the Sith and the Jedi." Hmmm...you're in a bit of a tension-building mood in your fics, huh? That's good, makes people want to keep reading. SO let's have some more. -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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shadesaw Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 7/18/03 9:39pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	Jedi and Sith battle very good. Keep it coming. -----signature----- "The Force will be with you always." Obi-Wan Kenobi "This party is over." Mace Windu All the power in the world is no substitute for wisdom. Lightsider Jedi Knight to Master PattyB0123 Mandalorian 10 Lieutenant-- ATOC Defense Force
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jedi_enigma Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 7/19/03 7:44pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	Awsome posts Ami! ::Then looks worried:: I hope that they are ready, if not they're in major trouble! Pirates of the Caribbean is now ranked extremely high on my list of best movies of all time! I saw it tonight for the fourth time. Keep it up Ami! Sorry it took me so long! -----signature----- "I run this ship!" "Oh, so you're Jeff Vader." Eddie Izzard I am Madam Gimps-A-Lot! Fear my gimpiness for I shall hobble after you and smite you with my crutches!
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 7/20/03 11:30am Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	I'll have more coming soon!!!! Moffy Of course it's about to get even more interesting... Shadesaw Yup! FULL out battles here we come!!!! Enigma Thank you!!! & they'd better be or this is going to be a quick ending for our brave heroes!!! [face_shocked] & I'm glad you were able to come R&R!!! As I said "more coming soon"!!!! ~*Amilight -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 7/23/03 1:50pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	More is coming & the boards are having technical difficulties aren't they? ~Well I'm in the process, so it shouldn't be long...hopefully pming will become available again so I can notify all of you... ~*Amilight -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Tahi Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 7/23/03 10:55pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	Padme’s eyes widen with fear before they narrow in incredible determination. I liked that description - very in-character. Yes - typical senate. Nobody listens properly. Can't wait to see what happens next. -----signature----- Monsters of the Id http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29522013/p1/?0 Many Happy Returns http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/11018706/p1/?2118 new post 11/27 Master to THE_PIED_PIPER
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Tych_sel Registered: Nov '01	Date Posted: 7/26/03 11:50am Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	I've made it through the first chapter so far, and am beginning to get a feeling for this. Hopefully, things will become clearer as the story progresses. Great job so far! Tych_sel -----signature----- "I had a dream I was a Jedi." - A. Skywalker "I am a Jedi, like my father before me." - L. Skywalker A Last Jump: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28296734&brd=10476 Destiny's Heir: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27819347/p
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 8/6/03 6:32pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	Raisin' the thread. -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 8/7/03 3:54pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 7/15
	Chapter 25 Unnatural shadows turn the sky of Coruscant into an unnerving black. A nice intimidation tactic that will cause fear to all but those of the strongest hearts and of course the Jedi. The shadows reveal only the silhouettes of invading ships and the figures going impossibly from roof top to platform to roof. The darksiders, the Sith, have arrived and the battle is about to begin… ** Screaming over the sound of the chaos, Jedi try to gather together for the fight ahead of them. Most of the Jedi children have been evacuated, and the rest are coming along. Each group around the entire capital of Coruscant is coming-including the little group lead by Padme Amidala Skywalker… “HURRY!!! WE’RE RUNNING OUT OF TIME!!!” one Jedi with silver eyes and hair yells with urgency. He is racing towards the first generation of Jedi prophecy, as he shouts a warning to his fellow Jedi. Arritin, Anakin, Obi-Wan, Ali, Thimos, and Sariana immediately race over to him. “Sylin!!! What’s happening?!” Ali cries, as they halt in front of the elvish human Jedi. He gulps and says, “Time is short…and not all of the children have been a counted for. We have already sent transports ahead to the rendezvous point, but what about the rest of us? Your children…?” “None of ours has been evacuated…for some reason we cannot allow them to leave without us,” Sariana says, her eyes filled with worry. Thimos swallows hard and nods with agreement before adding, “The second generation is impossibly activating their own special powers.” “WHAT?????!!!!!!!” Everyone stares at him. He looks back and says why can’t they feel it. Only Arritin is not surprised, and the others look to him. He looks at each one in turn before his eyes go out of focus. He suddenly turns around and to race towards the Senate building, his eyes still look beyond what is before him. Sylin looks at the others before rushing after him. The others follow close on his heels, desperately trying to catch up with Arritin. “Arritin! Where are you going?” Sylin yells, as Ali and Sariana shout say loudly in unison, “Arritin, you crazy boy!!! Where do you think you’re going?! Alone to!!!” “I’m not going alone. You’re following me remember?” He answers with a far away voice. Thimos cries, ‘What are you ‘seeing’?” “Can you give us a hint?” Anakin says, as they leap across the gap between the platforms heading to the senate building. The Jedi are moving incredibly fast at their rate and are doing gravity defying leaps from the platforms-especially when leaping to the bottom of the Jedi temple and to the nearest building hundreds of feet away!!!! Sylin matches them pace for pace since he too is one of the chosen, though he is not part of the main group. He and seven other Jedi support the main seven-Arritin, Anakin, Padme, Obi-Wan, Arritin, Ali, Sariana, and Thimos. These fifteen are the first generation of Jedi prophecy. The second generation is different, though. All three of the generation have supporting groups and each one is bigger than the first, but the second generation is special. The second generation is the most powerful of the generations and will not fall until the very end of the prophetic text recorded within the records that Arritin and Ali carried away two months ago. Each one still has a few records on them-just data disks now. Unfortunately, though, out of all the information within the library and the artifacts that haven’t been taken are still with the temple. Luckily, that number is so minuscule. Twenty-one data disks, five ancient lightsabers, six crystals of light that are the size of your palm, and the last bottle of water from the room of a thousands fountains. The Jedi were able to use their powers to capture some of the water and force the rest to the inner crust-protected from all evil. The water is precious…beyond precious. It’s properties have unimaginable side effects on force-sensitives. These waters will be an important factor within the events of the text coming to past. <What has Arritin seen that would cause him to act the way he is now? Ali’ and His, and Thimos and Sariana’s, children will be okay…won’t they? They cannot die. Two of them, the second heir from both families (Arritin’s and Sariana’s), are of the fourteen which is supported by the circle of forty. Especially since they are the defenders of the chosen. The-!> Sylin thinks before Arritin’s voice breaks through his thoughts. “Sylin!!! Can you sense the presences of anyone that feels cold?” “Huh?” Sylin says, as they leap over another platform and start a steep down ward decent. His voice catches in his throat before they land softly on a platform a couple hundred feet below the previous one. “Um…I feel at least six. We’ll have to get closer, but what is wrong?” “Don’t worry about it I have an idea about what the Sith are planning,” Arritin says back, still leading everyone to the senate building. In the shadowy darkness, the others feel wary and paranoid, as they are leaping from building to building. The Sith are near doing the same thing… WHY IS EVERYONE HEADING FOR THE SENATE BUILDING?! -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 8/13/03 5:07pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 8/7 - Date Edited: 8/13/03 5:08pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Moff_D
	I DON'T KNOW! WHY IS EVERYBODY HEADING FOR THE SENATE BUILDING? C'mon, what are these crazy kids up to? Weird little Jedi folk. They're up to something I'd wager. -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 8/17/03 12:56pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 8/7
	Moffy i'd say so More on the Waaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!! -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 8/19/03 10:16am Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 8/7
	Okay, here's a little tibbit to get everyone thinking........ Chapter 26 Interlude Darkness is falling upon the galaxy and the battle for all worlds is about to begin. The consequences of this war will decide the fate of the Center Dimension. If the Center Dimension falls…everything is lost in the vast emptiness of nonexistence within the evil darkness. Not only does the War of the Force and all battles begin, but the fight for life begins as well. Now setting the stage, the Center Dimension charges towards its destiny, the fate of the universe, and the endless conflict of good verses evil. The Battle of the Dimensions is coming and WILL come to past, no matter what. There is no choice… The time has come. ************************************** Really short I know, but you'll see where it ties in. Already have the next chapter half done. You'll probably have it tomorrow. Morningish? ~*Amilight -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 8/19/03 6:16pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC-next post Luke, Leia, Han, OC) Updated 8/19
	Why do I doubt that? But yes, a short but intriguing post... -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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