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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 11/12/03 5:27pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 10/12/03
	How about a little up amidst this busy time of year? -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 12/15/03 7:14pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 10/12/03
	Ok, I'm soooooooo sorry for not updating but finals have come at a disturbingly terrifying shock (nah, i'm doing ok).... I have my last one tomorrow so the update will be sometime this week. Thank you all who are waiting and don't worry-I'll give you all Christmas bonus posts to make up. Ok? ~Ami -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 12/16/03 6:02pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 10/12/03
	Christmas bonus, eh? Well...ok. -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 12/21/03 8:56pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 10/12/03
	Heh...first of the Christmas promised posts!!!! Thanks Moffy & Tahi for keepin this alive!!! ~~~~~* Chapter 31 Creeping slowly towards the lifts, Padme smiles encouragingly to her little group. They just need to get to the northwest twentieth level platform. There is a transport en route to the platform and they should be able to make it before the transport arrives. The only obstacle is getting there quietly and unnoticed from traitorous, evil eyes. Padme reaches out with her senses, searching for any threat that would expose the escape of the children. She holds both of her children close to her, knowing that the enemy wants to destroy the twins at all costs. The second generation is coming to power, whether the chosen ones are children or not. The first of many battles is coming but…. //But when is the question. The Sith are coming nearer to the temple but they will NEVER get my children or these little ones with me. Not while I still have breath within me!!!!// Eyes narrowing with determination, Padme moves the group forward, slipping through hidden, even from the trustworthy residents, passageways and towards the transport. Guiding the children through the dimly lit passages, Padme can feel their nervousness. To her surprise she feels all of them giving her strength and they all trust her with their lives. The senator maybe only a semi-force sensitive but to these children she is every bit as important as the other Jedi. Location Unknown Painfully staggering, Arritin moves quickly towards the outer passage of the building he had unceremoniously appeared into. The records are safe but he’s in some sort of ancient, and little used, area of a building nearby the Senate. He has to get back there and help his wife and friends. Running a hand along the wall to his left, Arritin grips his lightsaber, tightly in his right hand. The pit, inky blackness is unsettling but the Jedi Knight knows it’s probably safer than igniting his lightsaber and announcing where and what he is. Suddenly, an explosion rocks the building he is in and Arritin is launched forwards and through a wall. Slamming into the ground outside, a semi-conscious Arritin finds himself sprawled across a platform outside of the rightmost building from the senate gallery building. Coughing, the young Jedi moans pulling himself to his hands and knees. Dust, wood, and other sorts of lay all around him and he coughs harder. Horror fills his eyes as he looks towards the senate building. It is on FIRE and falling in pieces to the ground. Pain staggers him as he tries to pull himself up, but it is not just his pain that hurts him. “ALI!!! SARIANA!!!! THIMOS!!!! NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” he screams, his eyes filling with tears. His best friends, and his wife, are in terrible pain and he can feel darksiders surrounding them. He has to do something. He cannot stay on his hands and knees with tears in his eyes and pain in his heart. Eyes going cold as ice, the Jedi pulls himself up and searches for the best way to reenter the damaged and ‘dying’ senate building. Unexpectedly, though, a scream in his mind nearly breaks his heart and he knows two children need his help more than his wife and friends do, /PAPI!!!!!!/ “KARINA!!! And THEO!!!!!” Freefalling in Coruscant Airspace, Coruscant Screaming, Karina and Theo reach out and grabs the other’s hand as the two children fall towards the topmost surface of this capital, city-like, planet of Coruscant. Tears stream down each of the Jedi children’s face, as they know they are going to die if they don’t think of something quick!!! There is nothing to break their fall and nothing close enough to shoot cables to. As the two children fall a hundred more feet, Karina notices something as the world continues to spin in an array of colors. “Quick, “ she screams. “Use the hook climbing cables!!!!!” A bang is heard before the sound is snatched away by the wind, and the two children are suddenly saved from their freefall. Looking down, however, the Jedi initiates realize they are still over one thousand feet from the topmost surface and are literally hanging by their wrists alone. These little cables, luckily, can easily support their weight, but what exactly did they connect themselves to? “Karina?” Theo asks, turning his soft jade/gold eyes to her silver/blue ones. His best friend meets his gaze and tilts in her head in response. She is still recovering from their previous situation. “Should we allow ourselves to be drawn upwards?” Laughing, Karina can’t help but tease, “What don’t you like the view? C’mon, Theo, do you really want to hang around all day?” “That was bad, Karina. I expect better from you!!!” Theo says back trying to sound older and more adult-like. Of course, this only causes Karina to fall over laughing. Yelling at her, Theo says they need to find out what they are attached to since they could fall at any moment from now. “Oh there’s a happy thought, Theo!!!! Fine, I’m ready to activate. Are you?” Karina replies, mock-glaring at her companion. He really had to be serious for once in his incredibly young life. Theo nods and together they release the inner hold function of their cables and hooked into “reverse.” Instantly, the Jedi are yanked upwards and they feel they are going faster than when they had been freefall. The world becomes lines and even Theo, going about the same rate, has blurriness to him. His cry is snatched away before Karina could decipher it, but she decides not to focus on the down points of this little ride. The girl frowns and an icy hardness comes to her eyes. They have no idea what will be waiting for them…or do they? “THEO!!!!!” she screams out loud and through the Force. “Ready your lightsaber!!! He’s waiting for us!!!!!” Theo’s eye widen and tears threaten to spill. He wails at Karina, “Oh by the Force!!! What did we do to deserve this? I swear I’ve been good!!!!!” “Oh my God…..” End Chapter 31 -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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shadesaw Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 12/22/03 1:40pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	UPPP!!! -----signature----- "The Force will be with you always." Obi-Wan Kenobi "This party is over." Mace Windu All the power in the world is no substitute for wisdom. Lightsider Jedi Knight to Master PattyB0123 Mandalorian 10 Lieutenant-- ATOC Defense Force
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 12/23/03 2:03pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	The only obstacle is getting there quietly and unnoticed from traitorous, evil eyes. Gotta watch out for those evil eyes. //But when is the question. The Sith are coming nearer to the temple but they will NEVER get my children or these little ones with me. Not while I still have breath within me!!!!// Good girl. The pit, inky blackness is unsettling but the Jedi Knight knows it’s probably safer than igniting his lightsaber and announcing where and what he is. Ooo, nice description. The rest of the chapter is rather tense. Good work Ami ...but: “Oh my God…..” Would a SW character really say that? -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 12/27/03 9:47pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	'Allo, everyone who's checking out my story. I should have the next wo posts by next week unless my muses hit me over the head. I might have more-depends on the chaos happening lately. Thanks Shadesaw Thanks for the up. Glad you like. Moffy "The only obstacle is getting there quietly and unnoticed from traitorous, evil eyes." Gotta watch out for those evil eyes. Paranoia...with good reason!!! XD!!! "//But when is the question. The Sith are coming nearer to the temple but they will NEVER get my children or these little ones with me. Not while I still have breath within me!!!!//" Good girl. Glad you agree. Padme probably likes your support... "The pit, inky blackness is unsettling but the Jedi Knight knows it’s probably safer than igniting his lightsaber and announcing where and what he is. " Ooo, nice description. Thanks-I want you guys to become part of the story! The rest of the chapter is rather tense. Good work Ami Heh. "...but: “Oh my God…..” " Would a SW character really say that? You forget Moffy, each character has his/her own beliefs. I believe there's a divine being b/c it's simple for me to see that someone is up there watching over us. When it comes to Force, c'mon. The Force is the life-energy of the universe. Guess what? Who created the Force? God did. He created everything! Okay I have to go!!! ~bye and thank you!!! Your replies mean the world to me!!! ~*Amilight -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 1/5/04 6:03pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	Well, way to explain Ami. Oh, up -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 1/20/04 6:48pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	No update here either? Hmmmm....... -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 1/24/04 4:51pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	Uh...no. Sorry, Moffy. I've been kinda busy w/ college and now I got jury duty. sigh Well, I'll write more of my stories while I'm waiting. I'll have nothing better to do. Sorry gtg (time limit) UP! An update is coming, thanks. ~Amilight -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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jedi_enigma Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 1/24/04 10:34pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	Excellent, Ami! Loved it! “Oh by the Force!!! What did we do to deserve this? I swear I’ve been good!!!!!” lol! That was great! I can't wait for more! Keep it cool! Enma -----signature----- "I run this ship!" "Oh, so you're Jeff Vader." Eddie Izzard I am Madam Gimps-A-Lot! Fear my gimpiness for I shall hobble after you and smite you with my crutches!
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Moff_D Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 1/30/04 7:56pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	Uppers. -----signature----- 'Why are you always smiling?' 'Cause it's all so ******* hysterical.' -Road To Perdition. Apt, no?
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 2/8/04 8:14am Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	Enigma Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!!!! Moffy Thanks as always!!!! Okay peoples, I have the updates and I'm revising them as well as adding a few last minutes things. It should be up later today or tomorrow. Thank you so much for waiting patiently...college has been a little stressful. As I'm writing this I'm doing research for a law paper (pre-law) and english lit. Sorry for the delay and thans again! ~Amilight -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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Amidala22 Registered: Jun '99	Date Posted: 2/9/04 5:11pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) Updated 12/21/03
	Hey thanks everyone for waiting, you guys are so awesome. Okay, here it is and I gtg do some studying for two exams. Wish me luck. And here we go..... ~~~~* Chapter 32 Gasping, Arritin moves towards where his daughter and godson are facing an enemy way out of their league. Godforsaken Sith are going for the children before the adults. Cowards. Eyes narrowing, Arritin continues to head towards the children, farther and farther from the senate building. He knows he’s doing the right thing in helping the children but he cannot shake the feeling that he’s failing the first generation of Jedi prophecy. The conflicting feelings of his duties are especially difficult since Anakin and Obi-Wan are in there as well with Sylin. /Don’t worry about us, husband mine…/ //ALI?! Are you alright? Is everyone-?// Arritin’s silver/blue eyes go wide with overjoyed relief and shock. He starts to run towards Karina and Theo now, hope burning within his heart as he feels all of them reach out to brush his presence in the Force. /We are more worried about you and the children…/ Sariana’s voice echoes through the mind bond they all share. He feels Anakin and Obi-Wan’s reassurance that they’ll be fine as long as he eventually makes it to the little ‘party’. //Why me…?// /Hurry, no time. The children…the second generation, my dear husband./ As smoke bellows around him, Arritin closes his burning eyes and dives through the black fumes. Luckily the wind picks up and Arritin is out of the smoke and heading towards where the upper-middle class residential buildings are located. A stab of worry hits Arritin as he wonders why they are on a lower level platform than when he last checked on them. //Karina’s scream must have been her falling. I can feel her and Theo’s fear….whoa calm, Arritin. Wait…they’re full of determination now. Hmph. Hold on, little ones. I’m coming.// His cloak flapping and swirling all around him in the wind, Arritin quickly searches for the best way towards the platform where Karina and Theo are about to land on. He couldn’t seem to shake an uneasy feeling though, and Arritin knew something must waiting for them. The children, the heads of the second generation, are in danger. Stifling a curse, Arritin backs up before throwing himself into a full fledge sprint. Quickly reaching the edge of the platform, Arritin impossibly Force-leaps high into the air and towards a platform seventy or so feet away and twenty feet up. Landing smoothly in the middle of the platform he continues on towards another. He quickly pulls off another gravity defying jump, which causes him to fly over a major travel lane in this sector of Coruscant. His cloak flies back and he soars horizontally then down towards the next platform; this one is ten feet below and fifty feet away from his most recent position. //Hold on. // Coruscant Airspace, Coruscant Quickly closing in on the distance that separates them from the top part of their jump hooking cables, the two Jedi children grab their lightsabers for the battle ahead. It is a race now to see whether they’ll reach the end of their cables before the Sith does. This dark creature must have been enjoying watching them fall towards their deaths. Too bad for him that these little Jedi are making it quite clear they’re rather allergic to dying. As the wind roars in her ears, Karina draws as much of her power as her little body can handle. She readies a small burst of barrier shield, a gift she inherited from her father, as she nears the end of the cable. -SNAP!- The two Jedi children’s cables clip together and they are on the edge of a platform perhaps one thousand and eight hundred feet up. Scrambling, the part elvish humans pull themselves up and over to flop onto the platform, but they immediately gain their feet and unhook themselves from the platform. The darkside monster is almost upon them and they have to get out of there! With hair whipping into her, Karina grabs Theo’s hand and begins running towards the nearest building. Theo recovers quickly and looks back as the two little Jedi run as fast as they possibly can. The Sith is gaining on them! His long strides are quickly closing in on the gap between him and the two Jedi children. With crimson lightsaber a blazin’, the Sith grins in feral delight. “Oh we’re dead!” Theo says as they pick up the pace and start using the Force to help speed up their all out run. Karina glares at him and says, “Thanks always nice to know one of us is so optimistic!” “Shait!!!” Shut up! “RUN!” Karina screams, completely ignoring his comment, as the two of them leap onto the outer steps to this evacuated residential building. “Hurry, he’s gaining on us!” “This way!” Theo yells back, pulling on her hand, and the two of them dive through the door and rush towards the lifts in the back. Bypassing the chaos left behind-broken chairs, clothes and personal belongs everywhere (on tables, in the lifts, on counters, and on the floor), and curtains torn-the two Jedi dive towards the lift. Hitting the up button, Karina risks a glance over her shoulder to see the Sith about to reach the stain glass doors. Eye widening, she looks around for something, anything, to slow the demon down. Theo, seeing the Sith as well, looks to his left and sees the main desk. There just has to be a locking mechanism. It seems the same thought has occurred to Karina for she immediately leaps over the counter and lands behind the desk, right into the chair. Quickly scanning the controls, she sees the emergency button and hits it hard with her little hand. Outer, metal doors close just as the Sith reaches the building. Breathing hard and gasping with relief, the two Jedi cheer at each other. The lift opens suddenly, and Theo calls out to his best friend, who immediately leaps back over the counter to join him. They enter the lift, which is made of transparent material, and hit for the level in the middle. The Sith would assume they would go for the highest since that would be the best place to find a transport away from the building. What he doesn’t know is these Jedi are geniuses when it comes to strategic situations. Of course, that doesn’t mean they can defeat this evil creature who they feel is starting to scale the walls. Both children are fervently searching for a way to hide their force presences from this monster. Feeling him climbing the outer walls of the building in lethal, whipping gusts of the wind, the two little Jedi look undoubtedly pale. “What is trying to be? A spider or something?” Theo whispers. Karina glances over at him, “You really want to know?” “Maybe.” “Riiiiight…” Suddenly the building shakes with a darkside fury and the two children jump and cling onto each other. “Karina.” “Yes?” “We are so dead.” “Thank you so must for being positive. I feel so much better.” “Your welcome,” Theo says with a grin as Karina glares. “Why are we having this conversation anyway?! We have to do something?!” Karina hisses at her best friend. Theo looks at her wide eyed and says back, “And what exactly is that?” End Chapter 32 ~~* Enjoy? -----signature----- 'Shots in the Dark' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8774613 "Fear is no one's Ally">Sari-'Angel's Plight' http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=8234696 "Rebel High" http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=7087285 Please Read!!
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shadesaw Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 2/10/04 7:43pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 2/9/04!!!!! - Date Edited: 2/10/04 7:45pm (1 edits total) Edited By: shadesaw
	UP!!! -----signature----- "The Force will be with you always." Obi-Wan Kenobi "This party is over." Mace Windu All the power in the world is no substitute for wisdom. Lightsider Jedi Knight to Master PattyB0123 Mandalorian 10 Lieutenant-- ATOC Defense Force
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