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Moff_D 
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Date Posted: 6/12/04 7:45pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 3/8/04
No excuses are necessary. We all get busy. I thought I'd be done with the thesis by now but no such luck rolling_eyes

Ah well, I'll be here whenever you update. wink

 

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Amidala22 
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Date Posted: 6/12/04 8:17pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 3/8/04 - Date Edited: 6/12/04 8:20pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Amidala22
Moffy Thanks and I hope you finish your thesis soon!!! grin


Okay here's the long awaitied (Sowwy blush ) post for all of you!!!!!

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Chapter 34

Transport Lift, Forty-Fourth Floor, Senatorial Commerce Building, Coruscant

Staring at the lift controls as they pass each floor, the two Jedi children desperately try to figure a way out of their current situation. The Sith outside is doing a spider imitation and is actually climbing the building to stay horizontal with them.

“Why does he think we’re so impo`rta`nt?!” Theo furtively says, almost mumbling, his face pale as snow and eyes wide with uncontrollable fear. Karina swallows hard, her eyes just as fearful, and, with her accent also coming out, replies,
“Are we? Why would a Sith bo`ther-we’re just kids. He can`not kno`w! Bakt`in! (Impossible!) He’s probably playing so`me sick game before ente`ring the battle. They want all Jedi dea`d, after all.”

“You’re no`t helping!!!”
“I kno`w! So`rry!”
“Then why did you ha`ve to say tha`t?!” Theo says, glaring at her, before gasping as they pass the forty-eighth floor. They’ll stop at fifty, but stopping for even a second could be deadly, especially since Spider Sith will be on the Fiftieth Floor landing platform before the transport lift will.

“We ha`ve to conside`r everything! If we kno`w why he’s after us or if the`re eve`n is a rea`son, we can up o`ur chances of living to se`e tomo`rrow!!!!” Karina says, tears gathering at the edges of her eyes, despite being a prodigy and ignoring her training (being seven standard years old, the two Jedi children-prophecy or not-are allowed some fear).

“O`kay, okay! Then what are we suppo`se to revie`w, conside`r whateve`r?” Theo says, tearful eyes watching with horror as the lift hits the fiftieth floor. Karina, her eyes widening while the lift doors open, barely whispers,
“We’re the childre`n of the first generatio`n of Jedi pro`phecy, the seco`nd generatio`n. We’re seven, we’re half-bre`eds-!”
“As if he didn’t no`tice tha`t!” Theo hisses.
“-we’re to`o young to die?”
“One would ho`pe---iieeeeeeeeeee!?!?!?” Theo response turns into a shriek, as both children a gripped by the Force and launched out of the lift and onto the landing platform.

Screaming, the two Jedi children slam into the durcrete and metal of the landing pad with their stalker just thirty feet away. Pulling himself completely onto the platform, the Sith narrows his burning red eyes at the dazed Jedi children, who have quickly regained their feet aside from holding onto each other for balance.

“We are so dead,” Theo murmurs in flawless basic at his best friend.
“Li` kniv.” I know.

Theo almost grins that as he used Basic, she used High Royal Kolistian in response. How sad that this seems to be the very end for both of them.

“What are you waiting for?!” Karina hisses again in Kolistian, and Theo realizes neither of them is ready to die. Responding also in Kolistian, Theo asks softly,
“Time to run?”
“YI`!!!!” YES!!!!

As the two Jedi children and the Sith stand off in a mock duel type situation, the two Jedi share a meaningful glance. Flashing a grin at the Sith, the two Jedi bolt down the platform towards the next building to the right, which is farther from the Senate building and closer towards the Jedi temple.

“Is he-?”Theo starts to asks but is quickly interrupted by Karina screaming,
“Yes!!!! Now run!!!!”

A shadow shoots overhead and instantly the Sith cuts them off from their escape root. Laughing, the darksider slowly walks towards the retreating Jedi children.

“Oh not good….”
“What can we do? What can we do?!”
“Calm, Theo. We can think of something…”
“Like what?”
“…I hope.”

The two children go back to back, before each of them ignites one of their lightsabers. Holding her darkblue/silverish lightsaber in front of her, Karina narrows her eyes in concentration. Breathing evenly, Theo holds his green/gold lightsaber in a complementary defense position to Karina’s.

“Never give up, never give in. Right, Karina?”
“To the very end.”


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Senatorial Coruscant Airspace heading towards Major Residential Buildings, Coruscant

Darting in between buildings and what’s left of the evacuating Coruscantian population, Anakin expertly keeps the group way ahead of their deadly pursuers.

“Anakin! Quickly down there to the right! Twenty degrees!” Thimos cries, pointing towards a short cut towards the major residential, now evacuated, buildings. “There’s a series of air channels that we can ‘lose’ a few of these guys on, plus there’s a Jedi group that suppose to be near there.”

“Reinforcements. Smart plan,” Sylin says nodding, before he looks worriedly behind them. The Sith are coming ever closer and if they don’t do something about it soon they are going to get captured and killed!

“Do think I can kill some of them off right now?” Ali says, her voice a deadly calm and with a slight curve to her lips. Sariana raises an eyebrow before replying,
“Maybe, depends on your shooting and their danger sense. Are you able to guess their movements and adjust your shots accordingly?”

“Depends on Ana-!!!” Ali breaks off as Anakin takes them into a spinning dive that shoots them through the shortcut at an impossible speed.
“Boys and their toys….” Sariana says, as her face registered shock for a second. Composing herself, Sariana looks at Ali with Thimos and Sylin listening in. On the other hand, Obi-Wan and Anakin are focusing on the Sith.

“Shall we start the cover fire?” Ali says with a wicked smile. Sylin, Thimos, and Sariana grin in unison. They know that while some will be using blasters the rest can focus on Force only attacks.

“Let’s begin!”

End 34

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I know a little short but I've been so busy-my other stories' posts a bit longer though....thank you for being so patient. And after I go update my other stories I'm going to sleep-I'm really, really sick right now. cry

BTW, did you like? (R&R!!! Please!) happy

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Date Posted: 6/12/04 10:35pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 6/12
Now I feel bad for asking for more story in the other thread. I didn't see that you were sick.

*leaves chicken soup*

Get better soon.

 

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Moff_D 
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Date Posted: 6/14/04 6:18pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 6/12
I better read this before I get crap. tongue

“You’re no`t helping!!!”
“I kno`w! So`rry!”
“Then why did you ha`ve to say tha`t?!”

Have they always talked like this?

“Never give up, never give in. Right, Karina?”
“To the very end.”

Damn straight. wink
Do you like writing the kids?

It wasn't that short. Just about right. wink
I don't have to add, except I wait to see what happens next.

 

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Amidala22 
Registered: Jun '99
44423_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 6/20/04 2:12pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 6/12
Thank you for the R&R!!!! grin

RebelMom Thank you *takes the chicken soup* & don't worry I feel better now. Yes, another update is in the works.

Moffy Yes, I'm glad you liked it and yes both of them have sounded very similar to that. I wanted to show how their accents would (if not controlled) affect their sounding of Basic (which is english to us-well not really just the same sounds I suppose. Have you read the Basic characters? I've got them-that's how we passed notes in class. Wrote in SW Basic...heh grin )....

I do love writing the kids-everyone whose a kid right now is part of my OT major characters. Also Theo and Karina are basically the two major parts of me.

I'll update asap and thank you for replying!!!

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Date Posted: 7/30/04 6:38am Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 6/12
Heyyyyyyyyy!

Are you on vacation or something? tongue

 

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Amidala22 
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Date Posted: 8/2/04 8:34pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 6/12 - Date Edited: 8/3/04 9:55am (1 edits total) Edited By: Amidala22
I was going to say UP! but I suppose I'll answer you, eh Moffy? tongue

As for your question, I've just returned from an Anime Convention (Oatakon in Baltimore, MD, and yes I may have misspelled that tongue )...first time I even cosplayed (well the dressed up part anyway-no skit for me!!! *sweatdrop*)...I was Kaitou Kid from Detective Conan (no released *frowns* as Cased Close, which irks me a little...oh well at least the manga shouldn't have any differences!!! grin ). Hmmm maybe I should send you a pic of him and a scan of me, eh?

Oh the week before was not just lost to costume making but a hospital visit. Yeah...well I almost died last last Saturday, July 24. My meds reacted badly (my asthma meds didn't like the other ones) and I had really bad attack of asthma or whatever. I nearly died 3 times (stopped breathing and all)...so...

Okay, moving on...hey I'm alive...onto the story information. I should have it up tomorrow or Wednesday!!! I have some of the updates written but a few are not quite to my liking (hey I'm allowing my sister's perfectionism rub off!). wink

Oh and another ( grin ) UP!!!!!!!!

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Date Posted: 8/4/04 9:08pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 6/12
Ah well I suppose it's still Wednesday for some of you... blush

Oh well onto the story!!!!!!!!!!!! Enjoy and thank you for your patience. I love each and every one of you! love

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Chapter 35

Fiftieth Level Platforms One Hundred Meters outwards from Senatorial Commerce Building, Coruscant

Lightsabers blazing in front of them, the two Jedi children confront their superior enemy with grim faces. They know there’s no way in the nine hells they’ll ever be able to defeat the Sith-being well seven years old. If they live to be fully trained they’ll be able to take on multiple Sith at once, of course, that’s if they survive until then.

“We’ll need help pretty soon, my friend,” Theo whispers to Karina in their native tongue. Karina, who never takes her eyes off the Sith, says in return,
“I know, but we have to hold out until we can escape.”
“That’s if an opportunity appears.”

“How about being positive, you’re not helping me get rid of my fear,” Karina growls.
“Probably cause I’m very, very scared right now,” Theo says, his lightsaber rises into the classic defensive position-straight out in front of him. Karina instantly flanks him, her lightsaber cross down from the right to her left, right over her small body. Her eyes narrow as the Sith approaches ever so slowly. He’s definitely having fun toying with them. His eyes glow red, and the two best friends pale in response.

“This is very bad,” Theo says calmly, not revealing any of his emotions on their potentially impending death.
“Not kidding,” Karina say emotionlessly back. The Sith gradually comes closer, and the two Jedi children defiantly glare at him. He laughs and Theo raises his eyebrows with Karina raising her right eyebrow.

“This is rather annoying,” Karina, remarks softly to Theo, who nods in agreement. The little boy frowns at the approaching Sith. The darksider grins and says loudly,
“Time for you to die, little ones. So helpless, I almost feel sorry for you.”

“Don’t be.”
“We’re full of surprises, and we’ll fight you until the end,” Karina adds.

“I look forward to how long you tiny little kids last.”
“Oh I hope we don’t disappoint you,” Theo quips with Karina immediately saying afterwards,
“Maybe we’ll give you a run for your money, eh?”


The Sith laughs and asks,
“Shall we begin?”

“How about no?” Theo retorts, with a silly, childish grin.
“Ah, I don’t believe we gotta choice,” Karina hisses, her eyes narrowing in concentration. The Sith only laughs, and suddenly races towards them. The Jedi children’s eyes widen and they both squeak in protest. Immediately he two children move their lightsabers in a complementing battle formation and wait for the Sith.

They did not have to wait long.


Senatorial Coruscant Airspace heading towards Major Residential Buildings, Coruscant

Weaving around multiple buildings as well as through the shortcuts between the buildings and platforms, Anakin expertly moves the speeder closer to the Jedi at both the temple and on the platforms near the temple, and other reinforcements. The Sith, in their multiple transportation, follows very closely behind them. Luckily, Anakin is an excellent pilot and will not allow the Sith to come any closer. Of course the Sith are persistently following behind and definitely way too close for comfort.

“Anakin!!! Can’t this thing go any faster?” Ob-Wan asks calmly, though his eyes wide at the many Sith tailing them.
“Quiet, I’m concentrating!” Anakin yells back. Meanwhile, Sylin, Thimos, Sariana, and Ali are pulling out blasters, the ones unnecessary before since the last battle was between lightsabers and lightning attacks, and start to aim for the nearest Sith.

“Don’t forget to compensate for their dodging and blocking our blaster bolts,” Ali says with an icy determination. The other three nod in unison, knowing they will have to use their abilities to the limit in order to shoot accurately and effectively at the approaching Sith.

The ones on speeder bikes are instantly knocked off and fall to their deaths-thousands of feet below. Thimos winces and says,
“Ugh, they’re not going to be happy.”
“Ah, don’t feel sorry! We got their friends to deal with,” Sylin replies, his eyes dark with apprehension. Ali does not reply, and continues to aim and kill off a few more Sith. Sariana raises an eyebrow at the two and turns her head back to the battle.

They just have to hold these darksiders off for a little bit longer.

Suddenly, they are knocked a little off balance, but Ali and Sariana’s wayward shots take out a few more. Thimos blinks at the falling Sith with surprise before firing his own blaster. Sylin’s gaping expression makes the ladies grin in response and Ali says in amusement,
“That was convenient.”
“That shouldn’t have been possible,” Sylin says, as he recovers from his daze to fire his blaster at the weaker points of the speeder behind them. The hover mechanism, the cooling system, or even the glass windshield being knocked out would certainly delay or take those Sith out of the fight.

“Obviously the Force is with us,” Thimos says with his grin widening.

“Anakin!!!! WATCH OUT!” Obi-Wan suddenly screams, as Anakin immediately yells,
“ Hold onto something, we’re going to be upside down!!!”

“WHAT?!” the four Jedi in the back cry, before they grip onto the seats and sides of the speeder. Just before Anakin takes them into a dizzying spin, the foursome see the problem. Five more speeders, filled with Sith, are right in front of them-shooting ion blasts directly at the Jedi.

“I think I’m going to be sick!!!” Sylin cries as Sariana yells,
“This is not cool! Anakin! Hurry, I can’t hold on much longer!”

Thimos says nothing as he holds on for dear life with his eyes squeezed shut. Obi-Wan gasps, as they spin continuously downward Anakin expertly moves them continuously towards the temple-only heading in diagonal curve towards the lower platforms. Ali screams as Anakin throws them into a spinning downward spiral, his eyes narrowed in perfect concentration.

Anakin levels out a few hundred meters down and slips in-between two extremely large senatorial office buildings. They are coming up on the Jedi temple filled with experienced Jedi and the military resistance.

(end chapter 35)

 

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Date Posted: 8/7/04 4:23pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 8/5/04
*sniffs*

No one's looked at this one yet!!!!!!! cry cry cry

 

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Date Posted: 8/10/04 5:27pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 8/5/04
WOW!!! That is all I have to say.

 

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Date Posted: 8/13/04 8:28pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 8/5/04
Oops! Forgot about this one. Many pardons grin

Now then...Good stuff! Some good action here. I wonder how these two scenes might tie into each other?


Oh, and what exactly are the "nine hells?" tongue

 

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Date Posted: 9/14/04 7:58pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 8/5/04 - Date Edited: 9/14/04 7:59pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Amidala22
*stuggles to climb out of the rabbit hole she's in*

Okay everyone sorry for the delay & my updates will be up Fri/Sat. It'd be earlier but I have a presentation, a nasty quiz, & work.

So yea...fun, fun, fun.


Shadesaw Thank you!!! grin I'm glad you liked it!

Moffy Hmph...ah I forgive you. wink Thanks for reading & what are the "nine hells"?

Ahaha...that's part of a term used as Burn in the nine hells of da*nation 'cept that's not censored. I avoided it since I don't know if the boards think that's unacceptable term. It's the more eloquent version of "go to hell"...

Aw well the updates are coming &

UP!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Date Posted: 9/27/04 12:55pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 8/5/04
Ugh, sorry everyone...

Hurrican Ivan, about a week & a half ago launched tonardos near my house-luckily not coming too close for comfort-and nailed powerlines. My computer got fried (bad for stories & bad for major papers!!! cry ) & I've finally got it up and running again.

I'll try to get the updates I rescued up tonight, if not it'll be up tomorrow.

So sorry!!!

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Date Posted: 9/27/04 7:53pm Subject: RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 8/5/04
Got it up tonight!!!! grin

And here we go........

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Chapter 36

Hundredth Level Platforms nearing the area around the Senatorial Commerce Building, Coruscant

Sprinting across the platforms on the hundredth level, Arritin immediately searches for the Force signatures of his daughter and his godson. He frowns, knowing that something is trying to block him from the children.

The Sith.

Cursing under his breath, Arritin moves faster-literally flying from platforms to roofs to platforms. His cloak flaring behind him, Arritin searches for the children who are in grave trouble. He frantically moves faster to where their presences radiate from, before starting to calm himself. And he quickly heads towards the children.

Sensing the evil, Arritin hurls himself to a platform diagonally upwards from where he was. The wind throws his hair back and forth, swirling in front of his face, as he runs. His eyes and thoughts focused on the immediate danger as well as the future that is spinning within his mind.

Ever changing…always in motion. How can one sees acutely into the future?

Pain…sorrow…and light. Hope remains…just waiting to be…freed! Fighting for life…the darkness will deny it! Those consumes by the darkness…come ever closer! Must hurry, before it’s too late…cannot leave any of the artifacts, datapads, scrolls, or anything important for the Sith to find. The temple evacuate it as soon as possible. Must leave…the darkness comes for it. Send it spinning to the ground…make it fold artistically into the first surface of the city world. The city world…about to lose another planetary shield. Twelve remain of this protected world. The main defense almost gone! The others coming…have to hold on or all hold dear will die.

Hurry…the ones you hold dear are about to meet their end if the future does not end. Run, run…save those you can and save the future. Protect the chosen…protect yourself…

Hurry…


Swallowing hard, Arritin dives over towards another platform and feels his child and his godson below him…

Evacuating Lander bay, Jedi Temple, Coruscant

As the four Jedi in the back dive out and land deftly on the ground, Anakin brings the speeder to halt and looks at his former Master. Obi-Wan gives him a mock-glare before a wan smile appears across his face. Anakin grins back as both of them jump out of the speeder and run after their companions.

Moving through the frantic crowd, the group of Jedi rush towards the Temple and send a mental message to both the council and the rest of the first generation. All except Arritin and Padme have gathered at the Jedi Temple-awaiting orders and evacuation measures…and the preparation for the battle of the Force ahead.

As they run into the temple, Ali yells to Anakin,
“Where is Padme, exactly?”
“She’s close by,” Anakin replies before a far away look came to his eyes. “She’s coming…she’ll be here soon-along with a bunch of children, mine included.”

The others nod, all of them allowing themselves-for a single moment-to think of family and friends. Ali looks towards the senate building-towards the area Arritin, Karina, and Theo are. Thimos and Sariana follow suit before Thimos says,
“Arritin will take care of them. Plus I think our kids will keep the Sith busy-they’re rather resourceful.”
“You say that strangely,” Sylin says looking at Thimos, confusion written all over his face. At this, Sariana and Ali grin widely and Obi-Wan motions them onwards. Heading quickly into the building, they go rushing past the evacuating masses of children, soldiers, and Jedi.

“The second generation will hit their powers as children-just for second of course. Their bodies will not be able to handle any extra power; it’ll just be awakened at this time,” Ali explains.
“Our children are of the second-the defenders of the chosen. They’ll survive, I know they will,” Sariana adds as they all run to meet the council and the others gathered to fight the last battles for Coruscant and the continuation of the Battle of the Force.

“Hurry,” Obi-Wan says with Anakin adding,
“How will the first generation be able to unify if we’re all over the place?”
“Arritin will get the two kids out there and everyone else is coming here,” Sylin says, as they slide into a turbolift.

“We’re coming together, don’t worry. We’ll be ready for the Sith coming for our temple,” Thimos says, his eyes darkening.

Fiftieth Level Platforms One Hundred Meters outwards from Senatorial Commerce Building, Coruscant

Dodging to either side of the charging Sith, the two little Jedi children dodging the whirling crimson black lightsaber of the Sith. He dives at them again but the two Jedi children catch his blows with their own lightsabers with easy before disengaging and darting away.

The Sith growls his annoyance at the two children’s actions, especially since their efforts have kept them continuously among the living.

Karina and Theo gasp for breath as they once again stand back to back. They may be able to block his attacks and prevent him from chopping them up into tiny, itty bitty pieces and blasting them into the oblivion, but there is no way they can hope to defeat him.

Taking deep breaths, the two children know they must use their size against the towering darksider. The evil man comes at them again, but Karina and Theo hold their ground and raise their lightsabers. In unison the two Jedi children move their lightsabers as one blocking the furious blows of the Sith. Back and forth, to the sides, above the children’s heads, and at their feet, the lightsabers blur in action.

Suddenly, the Sith force pushes the children back and they slam into the ground, dropping their lightsabers. Theo and Karina immediately call their lightsabers back to the hands, but the Sith is upon them before they can even regain their feet.

Just as his lightsaber descends on the children’s unprotected heads, a gold colored lightsaber stops the crimson blade an inch from Karina’s black braided hair and the top of Theo’s head.

Glaring at the Sith is a very calm and determined Jedi master. Arritin throws the Sith’s blade back, and moves into a combat stance. His dark blue/silver eyes are narrowed in concentration and his power swirls around him-a calming presences to the children and bright warning of death to the Sith.

Breathing hard, the children grab their lightsabers and dive behind Arritin. Karina and theo share and glnce before backing away to get out of the way.

Arritin smiles calmly at the Sith who growls and launches himself at Arritin. The Jedi master simply twists out of the way, allowing the Sith to overbalance himself. The Sith whips his lightsaber back but Arritin catches the blade and sends the Sith reeling backwards. The blades then cross and hiss together as the two force-users press their lightsabers against each other. The Sith snarls,
“I’m going to kill you then those precious little brats over there.”

Arritin smiles viciously and says,
“Not likely.”

The Jedi then throws the Sith back and presses his attack. The Sith backpedals as he barely blocks Arritin’s steady, flowing strikes from dismembering him. Arritin feints a left before slashing the Sith across the back and throwing the blade to the Sith’s left and slashing the darksider’s right side. The Sith counterattacks but Arritin gracefully dodges the strike at his legs before whipping his blade back and through the chest of the Sith.

The darksider’s eyes widen in shock before he drops his lightsaber. Arritin immediately deactivates his and grabs both Karina and Theo around the waist and leaps farther away. The Sith explodes like all of his kinsmen, and the two children bury the faces into Arritin’s chest.

He holds them close as he watches the Sith consumed by his own dark powers. The Jedi then turns away, carrying the Jedi children towards the temple.

(End chapter 36)



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*sigh*

Upwards...

 

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