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Moff_D
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 9/27/04!!!
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Talk about saving the kids in the nick of time 
Take that, stupid Sith! 
It looks like this story has gotten lost in the shuffle, but it seems like you are nearing the end on this one. Is that a correct thought or way off?
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Amidala22
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 9/27/04!!!
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Ah, I certainly hope it hasn't been lost!!! This is my first most, important story!!! 
The others were creations of my random imagination or as for Shots in the Dark, I story I told while me and Tahiri (yes we live in the same area) went shopping for SW costime materials in late April.
As you can tell from the time shifts and the first trailer, this story will be very long. My other stories are about to hit the halfway point.
Moffy Thanks for the reply and I hope the next post will catch everyone else's attention.
Amidala22/Jedi_of_Twilight
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Amidala22
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 9/27/04!!!
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up!
And I guess no one else decided to come by. *sigh*
Oh well and I must say the boards look awesome! Yay for Halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Amidala22
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 9/27/04!!!
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UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!
Well it looks like I didn't really need to worry about this story. T_T
Yea, yea i guess i deserve it for not giving such a great post last time. Well the upcoming post will be different.
~Ami
EDIT: problems....
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Amidala22
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Ah, here part one of the next bit anyway...
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Chapter 37
Main level, Jedi Temple, Coruscant
Quickly entering the grand entrance in the middle of the Jedi Temple, most of the first generation meets their allies in the upcoming battle. Those that remain of the Jedi Council-Adi Gallia, Mace Windu, and Yoda included-speak calmly to the others. They speak of the Sith holdings throughout the planet and how the last twelve shields are starting to fall-one by one.
Upon hearing the defense shields continuing destruction, Obi-Wan frowns and says,
“If the shields fail, we will lose Coruscant to Imperials and the Sith.”
“There’s no way we can stop them if they get through?” Sylin asks calmly, though his eyes wide with horror. Mace Windu looks at the young Jedi and says,
“When the shields fail, there will be hundreds of thousands of imperials and clones supporting at least a hundred Sith-that which we can sense-or more. Such a battle was not unsuspected, and the Republic Military is at red alert and ready for instant combat. Yet the main fleet is blocked from reaching Coruscant and the full Imperial Fleet is above us. The small Coruscantian fleet that fight above cannot last much longer and when the last shield fails we will be both outnumbered and outmaneuvered. The military’s only objective is to get as many ships, weapons, and people off Coruscant before the Imperial invasion force can be completely deployed. The remaining defense systems of Coruscant will allow for the escape, but Coruscant will fall to our enemies.”
Obi-Wan says,
“Is there any way to slow them down or cause a backlash from the shields to decrease their numbers?”
Adi Gallia answers, her eyes cold,
“Such a tactic could prevent or damage any escape of our people.”
Obi-Wan moves away and shares a glance with the others. They should not disregard any solution that comes their way.
Whatever problem comes their way could be solved if they minimize the risks. With the benefits outweighing the risks-why would fighting not be the answer?
Anakin glares at her. With his face expressionless and his blue eyes like daggers, the Jedi’s Chosen One says,
“We must fight until the very end! No matter where this path leads to-we must continue on. If we are to lose the planet we will make them suffer for every ground they take! They will not take Coruscant easily, though I agree that we must continue in evacuation efforts.”
Obi-Wan gives his former apprentice a smile and a quick nod in agreement. The enemy has to work for their prize, but the Republic and the Jedi must get off they planet if they are defeated by the Imperials and Sith.
Ali looks away-towards the evacuation-and purses her lips, as Sariana hides a grimace. They both know that the instant the last shield fails the people of Coruscant will begin to die-and there’s not going to be much to do except escape. If the main fleet were to arrive in time, they could hold onto the planet, but such hopes are simply wishful thinking at the point in time.
But you mustn’t give up. The future is not written yet-it has not yet come to past.
The darkness is coming, but even a tiny little light can have an incredible effect-even one more fighting can help turn the tide between a win and a defeat. The Jedi and the republic are banning together and there will be one last stand.
No matter what anyone tries to avoid this fact-with simple statement of escape and whatnot-there will be one last stand before the end. Of what the future holds is yet to be seen.
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<End Part One of Chapter 37>
Please R&R
T_T
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 9/27/04!!!
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Great as always.
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 9/27/04!!!
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So they need to escape the planet? That's going to be quite a task.
Don't forget to update your subject line
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 2/12/05!!!
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Hey, I remember this story!
Let's see...yup, things are as hopeless as I remember. But this is Star Wars, I'm sur Obi, Mace et al will figure something out.
Let's hope the next installment happens a little sooner
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Amidala22
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One would hope they have something up their sleeves, hm?
I'm alive and working on an update.
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I absolutely hate moving, but I've found my story notes once again. I'm working on the update & plan to have it by Monday at the latest.
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RE: Angel's Plight (Au...Padme, Anakin, Obi-Wan, OC...now Han, Leia & Luke) UPDATED 2/12/05!!!
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Just as I promised..................
Chapter 37 <Part Two>
Outer level, just below largest evacuation platform, of the Jedi Temple
Moving into the Jedi temple, Padme leads her little group of children towards the safety of the Jedi, Republic soldiers, and the ships. They move into the main, enormous and still undamaged hall of the Jedi temple. Though there are steady streams of people going in or out, the beautiful wood paneled and lush carpet of the hall is still breathtaking.
Padme, though, is only focused on getting these children to safety and meeting up with the first generation-every one of them will be needed for this upcoming battle.
A young Jedi padawan comes running up to Padme and says,
“Let me take them, but the masters are coming to talk to you first. Here they come.”
Turning around, Padme and the children see Master Mace Windu, Adi Gallia, Yoda, Obi-Wan Kenobi, Anakin, Sariana, Thimos, Ali, and Sylin coming quickly towards them. Through her bond with Anakin and her semi-force sensitivity, Padme can feel that the situation is worse than it was only hours ago.
//This does not bode well for us. //
“It’s not that bad, Padme,” Anakin reassures her, as he reaches out to take their daughter while she picks up their son. “We must hurry, the clones have been given orders to kill any Jedi they encounter!” Obi-Wan cries. Arritin rushes up with his second child, Kari-Ann. Ali comes up with her eleven and four year-old sons, Jerian and Seth, and puts hand on her daughter shoulder. Sariana and Thimos and their four children come up too. Their children are Elyani, Thei, Missy, and Sorian.
The two seven year-olds, Thei and Kari-Ann, move direct in front of Anakin, Padme, and Obi-Wan.
“You are the first generation with Obi-Wan being the key. Anakin is a male human, so the second generation defenders must be part elvish-humans. The stronger of the two is Guardian of the Chosen is female, the Protector of the Chosen male,” Kari-Ann whispers.
“We must, as being the defenders, bring the second generation to safety,” Thei adds. Arritin looks at everyone in turn and says,
“Of the Kolistians, only the four Companions in Trial will use our Jedi names when speaking among our group. Please use our birth names when addressing us in public. I’m Aarien Nept. My sons are Darien and Sento, and my only daughter is Karina.”
Ali nods, holding Seth/Sento, and turns to Sariana and Thimos. Thimos says,
“I’m Helu Isoderen. Our eldest child and eldest daughter is Ainaya as known as Elyani. Our second child, eldest son, is Theodore also know as Thei. Our third is Jayma, our second daughter, also known as Missy, and our last-and youngest son-is Elfan also known as Sorian.”
The Jedi nod and Sylin says,
“I am Orynir. I believe it is time to go, don’t you guys agree?”
One other thing that I need to confess,” Padme says calmly. Everyone looks at her. “If you didn’t noticed a few years ago when we visited the elves in another dimension, I talked to Elrond. I have elvish blood…”
“We know,” everyone says in unison. Padme blinks as she realizes they all must have seen her slightly pointed ears. Arritin grins and says,
“All of Elvish-Human blood can sense each other. You’ve never tried to.”
The others grin, and Anakin then says seriously,
“This battle is about to begin. Everyone go to the checkpoints and the children must go to the transports immediately.
“After this battle, we will meet at the Eclipse. I then will take Leia to Alderaan. She’ll be safe, I promise you,” Obi-Wan tells Anakin and Padme, before he gestures that they should go now.
“And I will take Luke to Naboo. He will be called Luctian- the Nubian version of Luke,” Padme says holding her crying son. Anakin puts Leia down and gives her to her mother, giving her a kiss on the forehead. He repeats the gesture on Luke, and Anakin calms his sad children. He meets Padme eyes before speaking. Taking a deep breath, Anakin says,
“After this battle-whether we win or lose-I will fight in the Outer rim against the Sith and keep in touch. It is the only way to protect our children. I must defeat Palpatine.”
Padme grabs Leia’s hand, but Darien picks her up and says,
“I will hold her, we must hurry. We have to meet the transports and hope we can make a break for it before the invasion begins.”
The group splits in two and the Jedi look back once at their children, before turning and running towards the upper most levels. There they will be able to see and sense the ships better, therefore affect the battle.
(End Chapter 37-Part Two)
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The games begin next time.............
Ah, besides the fact that my posts are eccentric, there's always hints of what is to come.
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Poor twins. They are going to be separated. 
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UPPERS!
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RebelMom Thanks for the review & don't worry. They'll be seeing each other alot-living on different planet, but who says you can't visit? Hmmm...or something of that nature-to tell the truth I haven't decided.
The next post is upcoming & it won't be the huge the gap as before. 
Oh I need advice b/c I think I haven't made many things as clear as I'd like so I'm thinking of editting & separating the timelines. As in PT setion, OT, and EU.
Any suggestions?
~*Amilight
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Yes! Protect the children! Somebody should
They split up? Hmmm...that never leads to good things. Or maybe it will.
The only way to know for sure will be to get more posts.
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