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JediStarMoonstruck
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8/20/04 12:08am
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RE: Danger Among The Shadows NJO AU Game Plan UPDATED!!! 8/14
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*is in utter shock* 
Falcon: Nope, it's not. 
RebelMom: Yes, it gets worse. I have not gone through the worse case yet!
Lethar: You know, I normally update this thing every two months!  I write before my classes. This fic as long chapters!
But I'll try to post a new post soon! 
Jedi_Guard: What makes you think Jacen is going to stay?
No more replies? How come?
Alikhar: Thank you! *faints from new reader*
*gumbles about the next week* 
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Brisk
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Date Posted:
9/2/04 12:32pm
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Great story!
Just a thought here, I found your story on Fanfiction.Net, and it might be a good idea to link to your profile on the boards from your ff.net bio, just so us semi-lazy readers can easily read your fics without having to search for for your profile here.
Anyway, a new plot twist! Poor Anakin though. . .
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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JediStarMoonstruck
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9/2/04 3:18pm
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Thanks and that's a good idea. I didn't think of it (clealy). I don't think that much. 
Welcome to the thread! 
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JediStarMoonstruck
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9/9/04 11:33am
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All right, here's the thing. It seems that Qwi no longer has time to beta my fic anymore ( ). So I need a new beta.
I would go to the Writer's Resource Boards, but something bad happened to me there and I'm scared to go back.
If anyone knows someone who can beta this, let me know! The faster I get a beta, the faster this thing get updated!
Thanks!
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Handmaiden_Rabe
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9/18/04 1:19pm
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UP you go. I'm on chapter four right now, and I'm hooked. Glad you gave me that link, Moon.
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Handmaiden_Rabe
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9/20/04 5:45am
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UP again.
Cattie
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Handmaiden_Rabe
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9/21/04 7:20pm
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And again.
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JediStarMoonstruck
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9/25/04 6:16am
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I won't be on for awhile, guys. I don't know when I'll be back. I also don't know if I'll be able to write. I'll have to wait for awhile to see.
Thanks for your thoughts,
JSM
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10/6/04 11:04am
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*shameless up*
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Phantom_of_the_JC
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10/31/04 10:58am
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Sorry for the wait, people. Many things have happened. My life turned up-side down and I got saddled with a lot of homework (Up side is that I’m graduating next fall). Anyway, I hope that this doesn’t happen again.
Bare in mind people, I haven’t read the NJO so Jaina’s whole goddess thing goes over my head, which makes Ladora’s POV in this post more believable (as it goes over her head as well). Jaina argues with her aunt and she doesn’t even know it. How ironic.
Chapter Twenty
“Together Alone”
Ladora woke up to a slight buzzing in her head and thoughts of what she was going to do to Anakin when she got a hold of him. What could have possessed him to go rescue his brother? Was it not clear that it was a trap? Sometimes, being a Skywalker is not always a good thing. Blasted emotions get in the way. She slowly lifted herself off the sand into a sitting position. She was in front of the canyon they had flown by earlier so she was not far from the Vong’s location. “When I get my hands on that boy…”
“What boy?”
Ladora froze. She jumped up and turned around. Her older sister, Leia, was leaning on a sand dune, looking over it, likely on the lookout for Vong. A long, black haired boy Ladora believed was Jaina’s boyfriend, Zekk, was near Leia with his lightsaber out. Jaina was staring at her curiously. “Well, what boy?” she asked again.
“No one,” answered Ladora, roughly. Jaina looked put out, but did not question her more and walked over to her mother. Ladora looked down at her armor and saw the communications equipment was shot. That explained why Jaina had heard her. Biting back a bunch of curses her mother would kill her if she knew, Ladora walked over to join the others. “So what happened?”
“We escaped the blast,” answered Leia. “We’re not sure about the others.” She sounded worried.
“We saw you on the ground,” added Zekk. “We grabbed you and hid behind here. The Vong haven’t come after us.” He looked confused at that last part.
That’s odd. Why change tactics? It did not correspond with her study with them in the past. “That’s out of character.”
“Tell me about it,” muttered Jaina, angrily. “It’s thrown me off.”
Ladora ran a scan on her helmet. Thankfully, it escaped undamaged. She adjusted the zoom and scanned the area, looking for the Vong. She found them, along with the box (back to the way they found it) and some bodies. She grimaced. “There’s some left behind.”
Leia turned to her, her eyes large and fearful. Zekk sallow and Jaina asked, her voice trembling, “Who?”
Ladora adjusted the zoom more. “Sootir and Jagged Fel. Oh, and Kyp Durron,” she added upon setting her helmet on him. Not a major loss, she thought.
Leia closed her eyes. She felt fear from her sister. “Can you tell if they’re alive?” she asked.
“Not with this. It’s not capable.” All four of them reached out with the Force. Ladora realized with some annoyance that all three were just unconscious.
There’s something else going on here,” commented Leia, “if they haven’t come after us or killed them.” She stood up and placed her lightsaber back on her belt.
Jaina muttered something. “Why are they doing this?” she asked. She seemed to be getting angrier.
“Maybe it’s a trap for you?” questioned Zekk, glancing over at Jaina.
Ladora looked over that the dark haired boy. She did not know that Jaina had been masquerading as a goddess for a time so mention of the Vong going after just Jaina surprised her greatly. “Why would they be setting a trap for her?”
“Because I’m the Trickster Goddess,” answered Jaina without looking at the Shadow Jedi.
Ladora froze. When the concept of what she had just been told finally hit her, she whirled around. “WHAT!” The other three turned to stare at her. “You’re what?” asked Ladora again.
Her niece stared at her as if she had asked if Hoth was cold. “I’m the Trickster Goddess,” repeated Jaina, a bit more slowly this time.
Why in blazes did you do that?” raged Ladora.
Jaina was still wearing a bemused expression, which infuriated Ladora more. “Because it confuses the Vong. It’s a psychological attack.”
“Could you use an attack that does not have all the signs of a power grab?”
Jaina looked like she had been slapped, then a fire lit in her eyes. “Excuse me? What did you say?”
Ladora folded her arms. “You’re goddess junk is a grab for power.”
“It is not!” raged her niece.
“You think making yourself look all-powerful is a charitable bid?”
“You’re missing the point!”
“You’re right! I failed to see the point in a power grab!”
“Enough! Both of you!” commanded Leia, in a very authoritive voice. She stood in front of the two girls as they glared. “We all have different ways of fighting the Vong and we need to be tolerant of those ways or else will fail. Now I don’t want to see either of you fighting again, understood?”
Ladora didn’t say anything; just turned away, fuming. She could not believe Jaina would be stupid enough to assume a title of power. What was she gaining from it? Nothing. You can’t gain anything from power.
“I think I see someone!” exclaimed Zekk.
Ladora turned and zoomed her helmet in the direction Zekk was looking toward. She saw Ken and Caiya leading two separate groups to a lone rock near the edge of the canyon. “Well, what are we waiting for?” she said roughly. “Let’s go.” She started forward, leading the way, as she, and it appeared Jaina did, too, to put a good distance between them.
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For the record, Ladora is upset with the goddess thing because of her experiences with Naboo believing her to be Chaos. They think she’s going to become another Palpatine or worse and destroy everything.
Anyway, hope you’re happy. My POW readers missed a post because of you people!
Next up:
Chapter 21
“Interrogation”
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RebelMom
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10/31/04 1:12pm
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But I read both stories, so I guess I didn't really lose.
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JediFalcon
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10/31/04 3:05pm
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awesome update can't wait for more
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flowerbee
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Date Posted:
10/31/04 11:34pm
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Very nice. I still hold to my impression of Ladora.
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Brisk
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Date Posted:
11/26/04 12:26pm
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Great chapter!
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12/23/04 8:47pm
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Happy Holidays!
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