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The Sith have returned (and all out action Fan Fic)
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Rayson
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Apr '02
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Date Posted:
8/22/02 9:48am
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The Sith have returned (and all out action Fan Fic)
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~War, Hatred, Lies, Deceit, all these contribute to the known race of the Sith. Why does this contribute, for Sith, are Evil. Pain, Suffering, hurt, loss, these are all emotions, that is all a Sith feels.~
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Darth Obtok stood at the balcony of his appartment, pieces of all the furniture lay everywhere, the glass from the windows was on the floor of the room and the balcony, and it crunched under his feet when he walked. He went inside, "why is all the furniture still here!!!! ARRRRRRGGHH!!!!!!" he ignited his blade and cut it down. "There! Mother wanted me to be a Jedi, but being a Sith is so much more fun, especially when you have no mother around to live for. But...."He choked, "but..why DID I HAVE HAVE TO KILL HER?!!!!!!!!????" He screamed as he fell to the ground and curled up in a ball..."
|Yelosf looked up, Obtok, don't cry, don't be a little boy, your not a boy, your a sith! Now snap out of it before i come and lash you!|
| Go ahead you twisted freak, but do it after! You wouldn't want to disturbe me so much that i would have to kill you!|
|He'd do it,| Yelosf thought to himself, but only to try and calm the pain, |Obtok, stop trying to calm the pain, let it turn into your anger, and use it to vanquise the Jedi on your next mission.!|
|Next mission?| Obtok thought, |I'm going on a mission Master?|
|Yes, you are, so snap out of it.|
|Where Am I going??|
|To coruscant to kill any stray Jeedai.|
Very well.| Obtok stood up, and went to get ready to go....
Tell me what you think.
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Aunecah_Skywalker
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Date Posted:
8/22/02 10:00am
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It's an interesting start. I am a little confused, but I suppose that will pass as the story proceeds.
The only thing is that Darth Obtok's thoughts didn't exactly match with a Sith's - in my view, at least.
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Rayson
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Date Posted:
8/22/02 10:29am
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Thats because hes a little messed up.
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Aunecah_Skywalker
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Date Posted:
8/22/02 10:35am
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Ah, I see.
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Rayson
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Date Posted:
8/22/02 6:19pm
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No more fan support 
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Rayson
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Date Posted:
8/23/02 8:26am
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Still no more Fans? i should drop it i suppose.
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Aunecah_Skywalker
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Date Posted:
8/23/02 7:30pm
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I'm here. It takes a while for readers to start reading stories of new authors, Rayson . And your first post was a little short, too. Keep writing, and you'll get some fans sometime.
And also, you might want to choose to get a beta reader - they're really useful, and that way you're bound to get at least one reader.
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Amidala22
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Date Posted:
8/23/02 7:45pm
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Hey please continue-just don't kill Luke, Leia or Han!!!^_^ & read my fanfiction!!
Is it a deal?! Pls. I want more of your story, plus don't worry the only reason I have fan support is because my friends rock!!
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Uncle_Lowen
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Date Posted:
8/25/02 11:49am
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I love the Sith. Keep going with this story, would love to see more.
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Amidala22
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Date Posted:
8/28/02 5:03pm
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UP!!!!
Rayson!!! Where are you?!
Please come back!! 
PLEASE???
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