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Jedi_of_Twilight
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9/15/03 7:28am
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RE: Shots in the Dark (pre-NJO...Luke, Anakin Solo, OC) Updated 9/2/03
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Tahi!!!! Hi & thanks! 
Yes, the kitchen scene was a random thought that wouldn't leave me alone. 
I was trying to get a post up but my internet serive provider is a pain in the... *cough*...so my next post is a delayed. I'll try to get it up today or tomorrow-most likely midnight or later.
Thanks everyone!
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Jedi_of_Twilight
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RE: Shots in the Dark (pre-NJO...Luke, Anakin Solo, OC) Updated 9/2/03
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Alright...sorry for the extra, extra delay...
As you see I tried...
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Chapter 24
Darkness…darkness…
Why is the world veiled in a vast blackness deeper than the pits of the underworld of Coruscant? There’s something in these pitch-black shadows…sounds. Scratchy…terrible hissing and shrieking sounds. Monsters crawling, walking, and gliding across the ground…their only aim is to destroy.
Laughter, cold and evil laughter, echoes all around and shadows encircle two figures holding onto each other. The dim light shows dark shadows with red eyes circling the pair, who stare in shock at the silhouettes.
Leia’s brown hair and Luke’s blond hair gleam in the light giving off almost a halo effect. The entire realm they are “in” is a physical representation of power in the Force. Halos glow around them cause they’re Jedi and the twin children of the Jedi's Chosen one in Jedi prophecy. Unfortunately, this connection o the Jedi’s Chosen one is also one of the reasons these shadows demons are surrounding them.
<How do we escape this? > Leia asks, holding onto Luke. Luke shakes his head, holding on to his sister just as tightly, and says,
<I don’t know. I don’t even know what these things are… >
<Great…wait what is that? >
<What is what? > Luke says, looking over to see what Leia is looking at…
“By the Force….”
With a startled cry, Anakin, Corran, and Jaina leap up from where they had been reaching out to Leia and Luke. The others ask what happened and only Anakin can speak. He whispers hoarsely,
“We…we only saw a glimpse of something evil. It was very dark in there-where they were-and the evil was coming closer and closer. We almost went to see it but…”
Everyone looks at him, waiting. Anakin swallows before meeting everyone square in the eyes,
“But…we could not go further. Mom and Uncle Luke are protecting us. If we try again, we’ll need more than the three of us…whatever is was, is, or will be…it’s very bad…”
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Short, sorry...
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RebelMom
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The hazards of being children of the Chosen One.
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Tahi
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9/18/03 1:47am
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Good old Anakin - let's hope his puzzle-solving ability will come to the fore. Ominous things in this post, Twi. 
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9/18/03 2:40pm
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I agree I hope that Anakin problem solving helps. UPPPPPP
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Moff_D
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I be wonderin' how this evil ye be tellin' us about can handle a cold length of steel to the belly? Not too well methinks. 
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UP!!
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Jedi_of_Twilight
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9/22/03 7:14am
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Thanks everyone!!!!
RebelMom Yes, but you can't say it isn't interesting...
Tahi Anakin is definietly gifted-he'll do his best no matter what!!! Ominous? Heh...heh...heh...you have no idea... 
Shadesaw Thanks! I'm sure Anakin'll do something
Moffy Evil Sith vs. steel swords? Ick...run, Moffy, run very fast from the evil coming for you and your blasted cold length of steel to the belly!!!!!
Kasia Thanks so much!!!!
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Moff_D
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9/24/03 5:56pm
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Hey, that was pirate speak.
Weren't you here for Pirate TFN?
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Jedi_of_Twilight
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*blinks at Moffy*
Depends...when was it exactly? I've been off and on since last August with this name & off and on with Ami...
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Uhh, 'bout a week ago.
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Whoops...
Internet provider really, really bad, so sorry...OKAY more is coming since I just took one of my midterms already!!!
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!
~Amilight
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Internet is down-every 1-3 minutes the connection dies.
I'll try to get it up Thursday...
I'm sorry 
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Okay internet is kinda back online so here's a post for everyone. Sorry for the delay!!!!
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Chapter 25
Fifth Level, Main Palace, Kolise, Kolistian Sector
Skidding around a corner, Theo knows he is almost to the main courtyard and safety. The only obstacle is right behind him-persistent Sith. Eyes narrowed in stubborn determination, the Jedi king runs as hard as he can towards his goal. He will not allow himself to fall into enemy hands. Not now, not ever.
Unfortunately, the Sith are just as determined to catch him.
<Run, Papi>
A voice echoes through the Force, though the words were spoken aloud. Nickian, his eldest and his oldest son of his four children, is safe and wants to help him. Theo smiles fondly and the love he feels grants him strength. How can he leave everyone behind especially if he’s used against them?
First things first, though. Time to run and run hard.
Running as fast as he can, Theo whips around the last corner and can see the balcony before him. He’s almost there! He’s almost there!
Suddenly, the Sith behind him throw themselves at him in an effort to at least slow him down. Crying out in pain, Theo feels his legs collapse underneath him. He immediately throws himself into a horizontal spin, twirling away. The Sith that had been able to grab Theo’s legs is launched into a wall, and the young Jedi lands on one hand and foot two inches from landing on his back. In perfect balance, Theo pushes off from his left hand and foot, while grabbing his lightsaber with his right.
Flipping himself backwards, Theo does three flip before landing on the balcony railing on his right leg. To his surprise a Sith is already throwing himself at him, and Theo moves his lightsaber to his left hand, pulls the hard rolls from his mouth, and throws the piece of food at the Sith.
The roll bounces off the Sith’s head and the darksider falls to the ground unconscious. Blinking, Theo stares for a moment before swinging his legs over the side of the balcony and onto the small ledge right below.
“Well, I’m glad I decide to NOT eat the glanin rolls. I see why we always have them broken and eat the insides.”
“JUMP, THEO!!!!”
“Huh?”
First Floor, Main Palace Indoor Courtyard, Main Palace, Kolise, Kolistian Sector
Running out towards the water fountains, pool lake, and lush gardens of the courtyard, the group of Jedi stare at the balcony on the fifth floor. Eyes wide, they prepare to catch Theo and fight the Sith. The time is coming closer and they must prepare quickly.
“Here they come!!!” Nickian, Rylin, Lakuin, and Kaleline yell in unison. The Jedi Masters and Knights all move forward, their eyes glowing with power.
Suddenly, Theo appears on the balcony, but right behind him a Sith is looming. The cry out but they see Theo pull something out of his mouth and throws it. The Sith right next to him falls back out of view and his presence in the Force dims a bit. Whatever it was, it knocked the Sith near him out cold.
A chill runs through all the Jedi, and in unison everyone screams,
“JUMP, THEO!!!!”
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