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Lt_Jaina_Solo
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9/15/02 2:03pm
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Metamorphises (Jaina/Jag fic written by Neobi_Kenobi, JediWarriorYoda, and me)
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ok, folks. Neobi, Sara, and I were writing this in pm, and we decided to post it. look for posts from any of us. here's the first one!
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Jaina’s heart ripped open as she watched Jag’s clawcraft fall into the atmosphere and into the water depth below.
“Jaina?” Kyp’s uneasy voice broke through the static of the com.
“Twin Suns Two, stay on that skip. Let's get this done so we can get back to base,” Jaina’s voice didn’t betray her feelings and as her walls went up she could feel Kyp’s sorrow.
Jaina flew a bit mechanically, but managed to nail three skips before the battle was over. Force, Jag. You promised you'd never leave me! her mind cried out as they left the engagement zone.
She settled her X-wing on the landing pad, and was the last one to leave. Colonel Celchu and Kyp were waiting for her.
"The General wishes to have a word with you, Goddess," Tycho told her.
"Very well. Is Master Kyp Durron's presence required as well?" Jaina replied tiredly.
"General Antilles would appreciate it. If you'll come this way," Tycho told the two. Then, he turned and they followed him down the hall to the Wedge's office.
Her mind was racing as she walked stiffly behind Tycho. He's gone, she thought softly. He's actually gone. Her motions slowed and she could feel the tears that were welling up in her eyes. She blinked them back.
I have to be strong, she told herself. I'm a goddess, remember. She watched through hollow eyes as Tycho keyed open Wedge's door. Slowly bringing her gaze upwards she locked eyes with the General.
He carried the same hollow expression that she knew was plastered on her face. He knew, she thought. The way his eyes gave her a feeling of pity made her understand that he had known for a while. The tears started to form again. She willed them away.
"Sit down," he said gesturing for the two of them to seat. He raked a hand through his graying hair and sighed heavily. "What happened up there, there's more to it."
Jaina looked up at him with a surprised expression on her face.
"I don't understand sir," Kyp said from beside Jaina.
Wedge looked at the Jedi Master, "Well, we knew they be coming. So we devised a plan, but we didn't expect him to go down."
"What are you talking about, Wedge?" she said, at the edge of her seat.
"Jag was supposed to fly into the heat of the battle and take them all out with this missile that Danni Quee had invented, but he wasn't supposed to crash." He closed his eyes, "He's not dead though."
Her eyes brightened, "What!?"
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great beginning, Lt, JWY and Neobi!! looking forward to more! 
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not bad. considering its done by authors I absolutely love!!!!!! glad you guys posted it!
keep it up!
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Great job you guys. Keep it up
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Aw, thanks Master_Jaina. That is very sweet of you.
Jags_gurl: Thank you.
Sara
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jags_gurl :Thanks for being the first to reply
Master_Jaina1011 :Thanks!! Your too kind.
tendra_217 :Thanks!
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 glad you think I'm kind  some of my friend dont well my readers dont either because I love leaving them with cliffies . . . hehe. ACK! I hate DRL! keep it up guys!
~MJ
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Thanks Tendra.
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jags_gurl- thanks. and we're working on it. this was a bit of a spur of a moment thing, so we're figuring out where we want to take the fic right now... oh, and congrats on being first one to reply
Master_Jaina1011- thanks. i don't know if i can speak for the others, but that's definately a comment that makes me blush with happiness.
tendra_217- thanks, and we'll definately try...
Master_Jaina1011- Again! don't worry, i know what you mean. my readers especially over at Forever Lost probably will hate me for a while. i hate DRL too, and my friends think that i'm crazy because of some of the things i've done with my writing.
off to write my Odyssey paper  hate that book
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Let's hope Jag isn't dead. I'm reading too many stories where Jag dies. Why can't I have a Jag?
~Inyri
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This is a great start 
Love NYC
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InyriForge- my fic among them right? i don't know. can i have one to?
NYCitygurl- thanks!
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ooooh...
MYSTERY!
INTRIGUE!
ANGST!
JAG SHIRTLESS!!
Well, Ok, not yet, but I was hoping if I slipped it in there, maybe you guys would get the hint...
Great start everyone!
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Of course your's is one of the fics I'm reading! What sort of question is that? That's what inspired me to read this one.
As for finding Jags, I'll keep my eyes open on the boards. There have to be some hot single men with incredible piloting skills around here somewhere.
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lol you two. hey, we can all hope for a shirtless Jag and hot guys on the boards.
Love NYC
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LadyMairead- i hope that N and Sara don't get too mad at me, for this, but if things go like i think they're going to go, Jag might just end up shirtles.....
InyriForge- hey! i was just checking! just pulling your leg! glad to hear that! so, found any cute ones yet?
NYCitygurl- yes, we all can
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