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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 9/12/00 12:49pm Subject: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	Hey there, people of the JC! Hereby we present to you, our first co-operation in FanFicing (except ofcourse for Talon Squad ). I hope you enjoy it... Yours Truly, Darth McClain and Darth Muis LET THE PAST BE... - Part 1 “Miss, could we have a glass of Venlonian wine and glass of water for me, please?” Iban Noonah asked the beautiful Human waitress in his serene Ithorian stereo-voice. The women smiled. “Sure…” She said and turned around to walk to the barman. Iban Noonah and his partner Marn Deson had ended at Marn’s homeplanet Venlo after a smuggling job. Now they were sitting in a bar, seeking shelter from the eternal rain. Marn seemed in his element. He sat, leaned against the soft cushions, looking through the smoky cantina with his big brown eyes. His black hair looked like it hadn’t been combed for days and his green jumpsuit was spotted with oil. Iban, on the other hand, looked like the very model of an Ithorian. Neatly folded robes, a belt in the middle with some handy object hanging from it. Including a blaster. Iban wasn’t to happy with the blaster, Ithorians were peaceful, but as Marn kept reassuring him; this wasn’t a peaceful time. The waitress returned holding two glasses. One with water and one with the reddish, alcoholic fluid. Bending over, she put the glasses on the table, allowing Marn to take a good look at her cleavage. “Nice…” Was his only remark. The waitress snarled and turned her face to Iban. “That will be two… no wait” A smile blossomed on her face. “One credit.” Iban nodded and reached for his belt. He pulled out a credit and handed it to the waitress. She, too nodded, and walked away. Iban picked up the wine and put it in front of a surprised, gazing Marn. “That was obviously a flirt…Why did she snarl?” Marn said. Iban just laughed. “Women…” “I’m probably too much man for her…” He said, trying to regain some pride. “Just drink your drink.” “Oh…” Marn shook his head. “Thanks for the drink.” “You’re welcome.” Marn took a sip on his drink and looked around the cantina. “You know, I won a fight with a Trandoshan over there.” He said, pointing to a corner booth occupied by two Ugnaughts. When they noticed somebody was pointing to them they waved. Marns expression changed immediately and he shifted his attention back to the wine, obviously a bit ashamed. Iban laughed out loud and patted his friend on the back. “Sure you have.” “No really! Just ask the bartender.” “It’s okay, I believe you!” Feedback please... -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth McClain Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 9/12/00 12:50pm Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	Part 2 Far away, the bounty hunter Aurora Seram raised her blaster and pointed it at a small Rodian. “Alright…Rodian…turn around…nice and slow,” Aurora ordered her current prey. She and the Rodian were on Nar Shaada, in the Shadowy Spider, a popular cantina run by Chalcum, a Corellian, in the Corellian District on the Smuggler’s Moon. The Rodian complied. “I will lead you to my ship,” Seram said refering to ‘Hunter of Prey’, her YT-2400. The Rodian cursed her in his native language. “Do you want me to fry you?” Aurora asked hypothetically. The Rodian didn’t respond. She drove her blaster into her prey’s spine and led him to her near by ship. //Good…the bounty is definitely mine,// she though with excitement. She had been trained by the best of the game; her father had been though by Yelgah Drin, Travis Santon, and Aurra Sing, all excellent bounty hunters from before the Clone Wars, she had basic instructions from Boba Fett, 4-LOM and his Gand partner, Zuccass, Bossk, and many others. Aurora definitley was not an amature…and every smuggler knew it. She was a fiesty little warrior…she only stood at 150 centimeters. “Excellent work, Aurora,” boomed a slightly heavy-set Corellian named Scar. His real name was unknown to everyone…save Scar him self. Scar had ties to Kessel…he was friendly with Mouth Droole, the Rybet administrator of the space mines and prisions. “That you, Mister Scar,” Seram said in return. “I have a new bounty for you,” Scar said after a few seconds. “Good. Who is it?” Aurora asked. “An Ithorian named Iban Noonah. He…” Scar was cut off by Aurora. “Escaped Kessel…I know. I’m on it,” Aurora said. -----signature----- Once a Talon, always a Talon http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com
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Darth McClain Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 9/12/00 5:49pm Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	UP!!!!! -----signature----- Once a Talon, always a Talon http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com
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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 9/13/00 3:05am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	All the way to the top! -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 9/13/00 12:40pm Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	LET THE PAST BE... - Part 3 Marn closed the cantina-doors after Iban had passed through them. It was still raining, but Marn didn’t even notice it. He had grown used to it. Iban on the other hand still wasn’t very please by the eternal clattering. Marn turned to face Iban “You get to the ship, I’ll go and see Jonas.” “Okay, have fun.” Iban smiled and pulled his cloak over his head. He disappeared into the night, in the direction of the space-port. Jonas’ shop was in the same street the cantina was, and it only took Marn two minutes to get there. The streets were bustling with life, as usual. Although it was night, many people were on foot to gamble and drink. The sign above Jonas’ his store burned a bright green. ‘Jonas’ shop-of-wonders’ and beneath it, smaller ‘Object from all over the galaxy.’ Marn opened the glass door and stepped into the store. As always it smelled strange in there… Along the walls, strange stuff sat on shelves. Jonas, a small and fury Drall, was helping some customer so Marn just browsed through the store. In a corner he found a pile of comics. On top was a comic he remembered. ‘Podaca the Jedi Knight.’ A comic about a Correlian Jedi who fought for all justice in the universe, or something like that. What Jonas had here was the very first issue. Podaca was pictured on front, holding his lightsaber up high. Marn had had this comic as a kid, but he lost it. “Can I help you sir?” Marn turned around to see Jonas stand behind him, his hands pressed together. “Jonas! Long time no seen…” “Marn, would you like to browse some more, or come to business?” Marn smiled. “Business please.” “Great, follow me.” Jonas walked to his counter. He pulled a holo-projector from beneath it and pressed a button on it. The hologram of a spacestation appeared. “This is the ‘Empire’s Nova’, a spacestation near the Pantooine system. I got a customer there who wants us to pick up a load of Ryll. His name…” Jonas pressed the button again and the picture of a Rodian appeared. “is Baado. An old friend of mine. Go see him and he’ll give you instructions. He’ll pay us 10.000 credits if we deliver it to…” Again Jonas pressed the button, this time red gas-planet appeared. “Karaca. A shuttle will be in orbit there, you dock with it and leave the Ryll. You’ll get paid, and we’ll all be happy. Got it?” “Yes… no problem.” “Good, any questions?” “Well, just one.” Marn smiled. “Can you hold the ‘Podaca the Jedi Knight’ issue 1 for me?” Jonas laughed out loud. “Sure, I’ll take it out of your pay.” -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth McClain Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 9/13/00 2:22pm Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	Their next meeting, Aurora noted, was shortly there after. “Ah…Senal…good to see you again,” Scar said. “The same is said of you,” Aurora said. “Why did you call me back?” “More information,” the Corellian replied. “Iban and his accomplice Marn Deson are supposedly on Venlo, a jungle planet. It is also Marn’s homeplanet…or so my intelligance says.” “Ah…thank you Scar,” Aurora said. Now it was personel. A few years ago, Marn had ruined an important bounty that Aurora was persuing. She definitely did not waste any love on him. This gave her all the more reason to accept this bounty. “Sure, Senal. You have proved yourself useful in the past. I hope you continue to be so,” Scar replied. “How much is the bounty?” Aurora asked. “Enough, bounty hunter,” Scar promised. “Definatley enough.” “Good,” Aurora Senal, bounty hunter, said as she left the Hidden Wall Cantina. //Interesting…how did Marn Deson get involved with this Iban Noonah?// Aurora wondered. That could wait. Every thing except the bounty on Iban Noonah’s head could wait. A few hours later, Aurora sat in the cockpit of her YT-2400 ‘Bird of Prey’. It was almost as famous as Boba Fett’s ‘Slave 1’, she had heard some bounties she had ‘collected’ say. The Rodian’s capture had helped her get another upgrade on the Corellian ship. The quad-lasers were now five times as powerful as they origionally would have been. She also had proton torpedo launchers replacing the concussion missile launchers. She had moved the concussion missiles to the cockpit and gotten rid of the small manually controlled laser cannon in the front. Her ship was a war ship…and she knew it. -----signature----- Once a Talon, always a Talon http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com
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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 9/14/00 1:40am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	UP!!! -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth McClain Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 9/15/00 12:42pm Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	UP! -----signature----- Once a Talon, always a Talon http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com
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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 9/17/00 3:26am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	Will post more soon... I promise... -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 9/17/00 4:27am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	<<Here we go...>> “P-5?” Iban yelled down the hallways of the StarScream when he entered it. He took off his hood and looked around the ship. Everything seemed quite. Then he heard the sound of metal clicking against metal. Around a bent in the hallway a bronze droid appeared. The droid wasn’t to tall and had a head that was kinda out of proportion. “Master Noonah… back already?” The droid said in a very electronic voice. “Yes, Marn is still seeing Jonas” Iban took his right-arm out the dito sleeve, followed by the left. “Shall I commence with the start-up sequence, master?” “No, wait until master Marn is here.” Iban put his cape in a box and closed the hatch to it. “Don’t worry, he’ll be here shortly.” “Yes master.” P-5 nodded and walked back to his recharger-station. Iban opened the door to his bunk. In contrast to Marn’s, Iban’s looked incredibly clean. The bed was nicely made, a holo-projector was strapped to a small cabinet and his clothes were tucked away in the closet. The Ithorian walked over to the holo-projector and switched it on. An image of Toras, Iban’s late brother, appeared. The Ithorian stood there, on his homeplanet, leaning against his T-16 SkyHopper. A broad smile on both his mouths and his right hand lifted in a wave. Iban sighed… It was already so much years ago that he lost him, back on Kessel, but the hurting still hadn’t stopped. Then the image changed into the image of Iban’s homeworld, Ithor. The emerald green planet blocked out half of the sun. Beams shone from behind it. Another sigh… He hadn’t been to Ithor in two years and he kind of missed it. Another image flickered to live, Iban’s entire family including himself. Quickly Iban switched the projector off. He should have never turned it on! It only made him sad. Then he let himself fall backwards, onto the bed and crawled under the sheets. He fell asleep quickly. -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth McClain Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 9/17/00 8:35am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	I'll post some soon. -----signature----- Once a Talon, always a Talon http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com
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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 9/18/00 11:45am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	<<UP!>> -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth Muis Registered: Mar '00	Date Posted: 10/28/00 7:08am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	UP! -----signature----- Talon Intelligence Squadron http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com 'Wilson' or 'The Diary of an Astromech Droid' http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29659538 "Once a Talon, always a Talon."
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Darth McClain Registered: Feb '00	Date Posted: 10/28/00 7:32am Subject: RE: 'Let the past be...' -- A story by Darth McClain and Darth Muis
	Thanks. -----signature----- Once a Talon, always a Talon http://www.TalonIntelligenceSquadron.com
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