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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 1/26/03 5:05pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 1/22 - Date Edited: 1/29/03 4:40pm (1 edits total) Edited By: janiasolo
	Ah yes, tig. That cracked me up! Hey, guess what, y'all? A post! Yup. There was some lovely beta-ing by TJ, and it's a cliff-hanger...EG Wedding? What wedding? Adrienne suddenly realized she was "in" her mother's body. She was living her mother's wedding day. But then where was she? She knew she was born before the wedding. She was the cause of this wedding. She pondered on what to do next when she felt immense pain. White-hot searing, agonizing, excruciating pain. It started at the center of her being and spread slowly through her limbs and burst through her fingertips and toes. She opened her mouth to scream, to grab someone's attention so they could rescue her from this hell. She opened her mouth, but nothing emerged. She closed it in defeat, then found herself gasping for air. If someone hadn't heard her by now, they would. She began to choke and thoughts flew through her head. Okay Adrienne, relax. Take a deep breath. You can't. Why not? You can't breathe, remember? Oh, yeah. Adrienne's vision grew dark around the edges and she knew death would be next. As quickly as the pain began, it ceased and Adrienne's vision cleared. She found herself staring at her young mother from across the room. She looked down at herself and tried to see whose body she had inhabited now, but saw nothing. She was invisible, a mere phantom. Could they hear her? Mother? She called, but the troubled brunette woman didn't even blink. Neana seemed to be deep in thought, in memories. Happy memories, judging from the smile creeping across her face. An infant's cry shattered the memories and brought Neana back to the present. She stood up, but before she could take a step, her door chimed. Legessa cam bustling thought the room. "You get the door, darling. I'll take care of Adrienne." As curious as she was to see her infant self, the person at the door intrigued Adrienne more. She followed her mother through he spacious, unlit living room and to the front door. It slid open to reveal... Obi-Wan?
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 1/30/03 2:14pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 1/26
	Okay, where is everyone? Am I being too impatient? It's just I'm so excited about this post that I want everyone and their brother to be able to read it. I think it's excellent. Oh, and one question I know will be plaguing your minds: Is it really Obi-Wan? Shall I tell you? No. EG
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 1/30/03 8:15pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 1/26
	it was a lovely post and yet i did not want to be the first to reply because I beta-read it... was hoping others posted first -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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InTheSockOfTheNight Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 1/31/03 1:25pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 1/26
	JS- I just found your little story and am very happy that I did. I very much enjoyed your posties and look forward to more. off to the warm dryer to await posties -----signature----- Member of SAG (The Sock Actors Guild) I auditioned for the role of Ewan's Left Sock in "The Phantom Menace!"
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/3/03 3:32pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 1/26
	Welcome to the insanity of my story, InTheSockOfTheNight. I am very happy that there is a new reader! There will be a post this week, I promise.
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/5/03 11:27am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 1/26
	Okay ladies and gents, I sent a post to my new/temporary beta-reader TJ and it should be back soon and I'll post on Friday. If anyone wants to know, the last two quotes on my signature are lines from a one-act I saw at the competition last weekend. It was hilarious! Oh, and guess what? We are doing projects on French speaking countries and guess what my country is? Tunisia! Or should I say Tatooine? It's so great. We are going to show clips of Tatooine to show the climate and landscape of Tunisia. It's great! janiasolo
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NyghtFyre Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 2/5/03 11:56am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 1/26
	jainasolo- Love the story! I look forward to more! BTW- where did you see these one-acts at? -----signature----- "The brave may not live forever, but the cautious do not live at all." "Giving up doesn't always mean you're weak, it just means that you are strong enough to let go." "Don't tell me the sky's my limit; I've seen footprints on the moon."
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/5/03 12:50pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5 - Date Edited: 2/6/03 9:12am (1 edits total) Edited By: janiasolo
	NyghtFyre: I saw the one-acts in a town called Essixville (I'm not sure of the spelling on that) in a school called Garber. TJ did an excellent job beta-reading so I think I am going to post it right now. Oh, and everyone go read her story called Shadow Thickening. It's really excellent! Obi-Wan? No, it wasn't him, but his father. His father? Although he looked very much like Obi-wan, there was something different about him. It was something Adrienne just couldn't place. His hair was slightly longer than Obi-Wan's, and a bit darker. He did not sport the beginnings of a beard as his son did, but a smooth shaved jaw. Something still nagged Adrienne. She looked into his eyes. His eyes--that was it. That was the difference. His eyes were a bit greener than Obi-Wan's, but they did not bear the majesty of a newly appointed Jedi Knight. Instead they bore the heavy burden of a man with a dilemma. They reminded her of the eyes of so many married men who had sought out her services: guilt ridden, but passion-hungry. They resembled those of a troubled lover... No. Oh, no. It was impossible He couldn't possibly... Could he? Could he have been Neana's lover? The furtive glance Neana threw towards the nursery revealed it all. Obi-Wan's father was my mother's lover. There you go! And yes, Obi-Wan's father is supposed to look like Christian from Moulin Rouge. It was really the only way I could think of it getting into my story.
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/9/03 12:33pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5
	While taking a break from homework, I decided to drop in and up my story. Where is everyone? Up
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 2/9/03 5:24pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5
	again i was waiting for someone else to review before i did... but you already knew what i thought lol -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/9/03 6:00pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5
	It's good for you to respond, even if you've already read it, my faithful beta-reader. I am going to be patient. I promise. So resond. And soon, okay? Lol, just kidding. Up.
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 2/9/03 7:05pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5
	mleh... more soon... and that's an order! -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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C3SoloP0 Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 2/10/03 1:51pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5
	hello hello!!! I have officially joined this band...I love this story....Anything involving Obi but this is really good....I hope its still going....i recognize some of the people at this party anyway!!! Uppers! -----signature----- Proud member of The Fortress "NEVER THE END!"
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EwokPrincess97 Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 2/10/03 5:47pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5
	The prodigal reader returns! Sorry to lose it, Farmer Jo. Also, hello to TJ, I'm very sorry it took me soooo long to reply, and I felt bad when I read your "hello!" to me. So, greetings everyone! Oh, and Farmer Jo, UP! -----signature----- "Oooh, I get it. Don't be hasty." - Pippin
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 2/11/03 2:05pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/5 - Date Edited: 2/11/03 2:09pm (1 edits total) Edited By: janiasolo
	Jenni: For the last time, don't call me Junior! Oh no wait, that's a different movie altogether. But it's got Harrison Ford in it, so that's okay. But, I don't mind everyone knowing that you call me Farmer Jo (no one ask, it's a long story). C3SoloPO: Welcome! I am always so excited when there are new readers. I think that I am going to send a post over to TJ soon, maybe even post on Valentine's Day? I don't have school Friday, so it could happen. Thank you all for your support! janiasolo aka Farmer Jo Edit: Hey look! 150! Yay! I don't think my other story got this far. "It's all so immense, makes a man feel puny and insignificant staring at all those stalagmites and stalagtites." Hehe. That was for Jeni the Dark Jedi (the girl who calls me Farmer Jo)
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