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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 3/24/03 12:16pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/14
	I know that a few of you are growing impatient, but all I have to say is I'm sorry for the delay and up!
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 3/24/03 9:54pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 2/14
	I partly blame myself... I have the post, I'm supposed to beta read it... but whenever i sucker away time for myself i haven't gotten to work on it... i promise i'll have my part done sometime tomorrow after classes... -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 3/26/03 12:28pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	Okay everyone, after five horrible weeks of waiting, here it is, a new post! Yay! Clap! Cheer! Now, in this post, Adrienne is going to be very secretive, so don't freak out. All will be revealed with time. Hopefully less time than it took to get this post up. Thanks to my amazing and wonderful beta-reader, Tinuviel_Jyana. You are the best! Adrienne blinked against unshed tears. "They leave this dull world in tight corsets and brightly colored clothing and enter the seedier work with their heads held high full of a sense of pride they don't have. “All these women are the greatest actresses of all time. They perform so well that even some of them believe the lies. Those are the women who will never escape." Tears glittered in the faraway lights. To finish her thought through her tears, she whispered as soft as a slight breeze, "This is life." "That was life." He said softly, yet firmly. "You've returned to the Jedi." He paused. "To me." She inhaled sharply, her knees weakening for a moment. How could he say that? How could he break her heart so recklessly? She looked over at him, her eyes wet with fresh tears. He was staring back at her, eyes full of warmth and compassion. She tried to speak, but her tongue and throat were drier than the Jundland Wastes. She swallowed, slowly working moisture back into her mouth. "I didn't think you remembered us." She said softly. His brows crinkled in confusion. "Why would I forget the times we had?" The tears fell like invisible streams cascading down her cheeks. "I…I can't--" She rushed back into her room. "I've said too much already." "What do you mean? Stop!" She paused in the middle of the vast room, the glowing embers of the fiery casting eerie shadows on her face, contorting it, twisting it into someone he didn't recognize. "You must leave." She said, trying to hold back all emotion. "I don't understand. What are you saying?" She tuned to face him, wet cheeks flushed with emotion brimming at the surface. "I can't say anymore. Too much and you'll go searching." She walked up to him, and stared right into his eyes. "Promise me, promise me you won't go searching." Tears still glittered in her eyes, though they refused to fall. "Go searching for what? Tell me." "I can't. I can't tell you anything. It could ruin everything you've done." He stood, unmoved by her emotion. "Tell me why."
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EwokPrincess97 Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 3/26/03 5:23pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	YAY!! Great postie, Farmer Jo! Keep 'em coming! Are you working tech for the show? -Jen-i the Jedi -----signature----- "Oooh, I get it. Don't be hasty." - Pippin
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C3SoloP0 Registered: Dec '02	Date Posted: 3/26/03 7:34pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	YAY!!!!!!!!! POst!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Short but enough to spark new interest!! So he actually said "You returned to me" Interesting our little Obi-Wan... Can't wait to see what happens... -----signature----- Proud member of The Fortress "NEVER THE END!"
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 3/27/03 1:12pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	Thank you EwokPrincess97 (Jen-i) and C3SoloPO for the feedback! Yes Jen-i I am going to do tech for the play, and yes, Obi-Wan does remember her...sort of. You'll just have to wait. Seeing how it is Spring Break (finally!) I'll have time to work on my stories (yes that's plural, and no they're not all Star Wars-related). Up! janiasolo
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 3/28/03 7:08am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	Up please!
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 4/3/03 1:38pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	Hello? Is anyone there? Have I scared you all off? Or are you all in Florida soaking up the rays while I'm stuck in cold, dreary Michigan?
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 4/4/03 8:27am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	I am out there... somewheres... waiting for someone to throw another post at my head to beta-read well maybe not waiting, but it's better than the other person's beta-reading i could do (shudders at tense inconsistancies and terrible grammar) okay that's all -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 4/15/03 11:06am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	I am sorry for making you wait for me to throw, but I know it won't be before Friday. It's a hectic week, and I am grounded, but I don't know exactly what from. I have a TV, VCR, DVD player, CD player, computer and phone in my room! Basically, they're gonna have to lock me in the bathroom to get me away from that stuff. Who knows, I'm just riding the wave. Up! janiasolo
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 4/26/03 4:47pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	I am so sorry I haven't posted or kept this up for the last few weeks, but I've been swamped with school work and the spring musical. But, opening night is next week so that commotion will be done and over with next Sunday. Then there's prom to worry about...guess I had go call the guy I want to go to prom with, huh? UP! janiasolo
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 5/22/03 8:44am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	Okay guys, I know it's been a long while since I've been here, but I blame the musical. Now that things are winding down and I am SO close to being out of school (12 days!) I will be able to spend all my time on my stories. In fact, I have the story right here, and I would post, but I have to have TJ beta-read it, but I can't send it from the school because the computers here won't let me go to my inbox. Stupid things. Anyways, thank you to all who come regularly to see if I've posted, and don't worry, a new post will be here soon! janiasolo
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Tinuviel_Jyana Registered: Mar '02	Date Posted: 5/22/03 10:56am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/26...finally!
	Up! i'll be here waiting -----signature----- She, Nemesis (possible AU, Obi/OC, pre TPM) - http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2 - Hiatus
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janiasolo Registered: Jul '02	Date Posted: 5/25/03 7:56am Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 5/25/03...geez, took me long enough!
	Fanfare Da-da-da-dahhhhh! Finally, after two (count 'em, TWO) months of anxious waiting and impatient remarks, I have written and had beta-read a new post. And I am posting it for you. I do want to apologize, for making everyone wait, though. I hope you all like it, and please gimme some feedback! (oh, and I just put the last paragraph or so at the beginning so you could get your bearings) She turned to face him, wet cheeks flushed with emotion brimming at the surface. "I can't say anymore. Too much and you'll go searching." She walked up to him, and stared right into his eyes. "Promise me, promise me you won't go searching." Tears still glittered in her eyes, though they refused to fall. "Go searching for what? Tell me." "I can't. I can't tell you anything. It could ruin everything you've done." He stood, unmoved by her emotion. "Tell me why." She closed her eyes, trying to not imagine the anger letting him know would cause. "Because it would change the way you've seen me. It would produce a hatred I don't want to see or let you experience." She placed her hands on his chest and he covered them with his own. "Now you must promise me. If you care for me in any way, please promise." He placed a gentile kiss on her forehead, masking the anger and confusion he felt inside. "I promise." She smiled and sighed with a relief she too, was masking. He had forgotten she was one of the great actresses of the underworld. She was the greatest of them all. She felt no relief, but fear. Fear of the memories that threatened to follow once he left. "You must leave." She repeated, more urgently than before. He released her from his comforting embrace and left. The moment the door shut behind him, Adrienne collapsed to the floor, her body racked with sobs. "Why? Why did you have remember? Why can't I forget too?" She wailed. Slowly, her tears ceased and she fell into a fitful sleep, full of painfully familiar dreams. They sat at a small booth in a dark corner, out of the sight and minds of the other customers. "Are you sure you want to join us?" The young man with the soft accent asked. "Yes. They betrayed me. He betrayed me. I want revenge." Adrienne said bitterly. "Alright. Your first mission is to capture him and take him to the abandoned warehouse specified in this information." He slid a disk across the dirty tabletop. Adrienne took it, itching to read it and regretting her decision to leave her datascreen at home. "The rest of your instructions are there as well. Don't be late and be sure you have the right Jedi." He waved her away and she left as inconspicuously as she came. Adrienne stepped into sharp contrast of the brightly lit docking bay, crowded with impatient beings. She walked among them, a surreal feeling about her. She slipped through the crowds, unnoticed by all she passed. She made her way to the lavishly furnished apartment that she had recently rented. As she sat in her bedroom, the full realization of what she was about to do hit her like a blaster stun. How has it come to this? She wondered as a sickening feeling grew large in her stomach. I am about to make the one I love suffer. No, loved. He chose a life not with her, but with the Jedi. He never loved her. Adrienne's eyes opened as if the weight of her sorrows lay solely upon them. The last dark thoughts of her 'flashback' echoed within her emotionally pain-ridden, sleep-deprived body. Was that true? Did he ever love her? There you go! Happy Memorial Day!
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EwokPrincess97 Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 5/26/03 5:38pm Subject: RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 5/25/03...geez, it took me long enough!
	YAY! After a long absence, I too have returned. The Draco/Ginny fics on fanfiction.net are quite good though! But no Farmer Jo there. Anyhow, great post! Keep 'em coming and so will I! 9 days left... -----signature----- "Oooh, I get it. Don't be hasty." - Pippin
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