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Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated: 3/3/05.....FINALLY!
BobaKoon
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Sep '01
Date Posted:
11/6/02 2:33pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 10/27!
I might not come every day (the JC game I'm in is getting pretty hectic). I'll stop by when I can. For now, UP!UP!UP!
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"Have you ever killed a man? Ever see a man die in combat?
I've killed men, and I've heard them dying,
and I've watched them dying.
And there is nothing glorious about it. Nothing poetic."
~Hector in "Troy"
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janiasolo
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Jul '02
Date Posted:
11/7/02 12:20pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 10/27!
TJ
you crack me up! I don't mind the ewok attacks, as long as they don't mess up my board. Luv ya lots! UP!
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Tinuviel_Jyana
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Mar '02
Date Posted:
11/7/02 1:58pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 10/27!
sometimes wokki tends to get a little messy
*wokki spills popcorn on the board*
arg... that wasn't a cue you silly thing *chases after the ewok*
sorry must discipline the ewok for he has been bad today...
uh... someone should clean that mess up...
*goes back to chasing the ewok*
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http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2
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janiasolo
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Jul '02
Date Posted:
11/8/02 12:18pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/8!
*Sighs* Dern Ewok. That's okay...popcorn is easy to clean up. I'm too busy thinking about how soon I am to getting the AOTC dvd. I know you all have been waiting with baited breath for a post, so here it is. I am very grateful for all of you being so patient (Ewoks excluded). It's short, but it's all I have written. After this weekend, I am going to have more time to write, I hope.
They had taken no more than three steps when a man in his early twenties stopped them.
"Excuse me, Master Windu, but have you seen Anakin?"
Adrienne gasped as he glanced at her once before turning his attention back to Mace. She swallowed once, not hearing Mace's response. She'd barely been back at the temple for fifteen minutes and she'd run into the man she'd been trying to destroy.
Mace turned his attention back to her, having answered Obi-Wan's question. "Are you alright?"
“I, um...I just need some air, do you mind if I go outside for a minute?” She stammered. Mace nodded and pointed to a door a few feet away. She left swiftly, not looking back. This was a mistake. Did I not realize he would be there? I am in love with this man and he doesn’t even know my name! You need to stop that. You are here to change your life, not to go searching after one-night stands.
She found herself on a balcony overlooking the impressive Coruscant skyline. She gazed at it, her thoughts calming. The door behind her opened and closed and the sound of leather boots on duracrete echoed through the air. Expecting Mace, she turned, speaking.
“I’m sorry to have left like that. I guess this is all so much for me...” She trailed off when she saw not Mace, but Obi-Wan standing just outside the door, his eyes full of anger and regret. He spoke in a low voice.
“You may think I don't remember last night, but I do. I know who you are and what you- what we did. I'd appreciate it if it stayed between us. What I don’t know is why you are here and where those pictures are.” Her blood boiled at the disgust that was etched in his features.
“Don’t worry, your secret is safe with me. The pictures have been destroyed and I don’t discuss my clients with anyone. It's none of your business why I'm here, but if you must know, I'm returning to the order.” The disgust remained in Obi-Wan’s eyes, but fear crept behind.
“What? You were a Jedi?” She nodded, knowing full well he wouldn’t remember her. He wouldn’t remember that he was the reason for her leaving. He wouldn’t remember that she loved him from afar. He wouldn’t remember any of it.
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Jade_Max
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Jun '02
Date Posted:
11/8/02 12:22pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/8!
*hops* Yay!! you updated
looking good jaina! I can't wait until you have more time to write, I wanna know what happens next
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Tinuviel_Jyana
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11/8/02 1:14pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/8!
oooo tension.... oooo obi...
great post... can't wait for more when you write it
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bobilll
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Date Posted:
11/8/02 2:51pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/8!
Ugh, this isn't good! Potential lovers arguing with each other! I feel sorry for Adrienne, though, no one seems to really care enough to figure out her secrets.
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janiasolo
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Jul '02
Date Posted:
11/10/02 8:24am
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/8!
Welcome back Bobill! I am glad y'all love it. I just sent some more to Jade_Max to beta-read and it will be up soon. Today is the last performance, and as sad as it is, I am kind of glad too because I have barely seen my family in weeks and I haven't had a lot of sleep and I have been neglecting this thread and it's been hectic. It will all calm down...until the one-act comes around. *EG*
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janiasolo
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Date Posted:
11/15/02 12:36pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/15!
People, people! I am very distressed by the lack of responses. I realize that like me, y'all have your own lives, but I was planning on posting today and now that no one has been here....oh forget it. I haven't been on the net in a while, because of school and then yesterday all I did was watch Episode II (I got it Tuesday) and it rocks! I love it to death and I am going to watch it once I'm done here, and then I'm going to see the new Harry Potter movie. I'm a big fan and I can't wati! I know that you guys are just itching for a new post so, I'm going to give it to you. You might need to go over the last post just to refresh your memories. Enjoy!
“Yes I was, and I made a terrible mistake. One that forced me to leave the order. I now understand that this, the Jedi Temple, is where I belong.” He saw the tears glittering in her eyes and for a brief instant he softened.
Obi-Wan, you fool. Can’t you see that this woman has suffered enough? Why are you being so cold-hearted? She took advantage of you that’s why. She saw a drunken man with full pockets and decided to help herself. Well, she wouldn’t have if you hadn’t gone and tried to wash away your problems with alcohol. She
did
get rid of those pictures and she isn’t going to tell anyone. Still...
Receiving no answer, she looked to see him deep in thought, and Adrienne returned to gazing at the steel giants that surrounded her. Being around him made her tense and the long silence wasn’t helping. Reluctantly, she focused her mind on the past, back to when she had been in the order...
She enjoyed the feel of cool metal beneath her feet as she ran down a corridor. Her blonde hair in a thick braid flew behind her, and she didn’t even break a sweat.
If I’m late for lightsaber practice again, Master Yoda will kill me. Literally.
Skidding to a stop before the correct doors, Adrienne took a deep breath and shoved open the great double doors to enter the sparring chamber. A large circular room, walls lined with storage cabinets containing lightsaber repair kits, first aid kits (for the cases when a healer is not present) and other important equipment dwarfed her, making her feel insignificant. Not liking that feeling, she slowly treaded into the room to see not the small Master as she had expected, but two men sparring. Not wanting to disturb them, she stood in the doorway, watching quietly.
The older man was strong and efficient, but the younger one was quicker, leaner, more agile, and a bit over-doing it. He twirled it around more than necessary and she could feel him taunting his master with his powers.
“Sorry, I am for being late.” A gravelly voice came from beside her. She looked over to see Master Yoda floating on his circular repulsor chair watching the fight with amusement written on his face. Bowing to him, she spoke.
“I’m afraid we are both late. I was studying a star chart I hadn’t seen before and simply lost track of time.” Chuckling, Yoda began to walk to the other end of the chamber.
“Noticed I have your fascination with the stars.” He paused and turned towards her. “Careful you must be, as to not get too fascinated. More important things there are, in the Temple here.” Adrienne half-listened, still watching the two men fight. Seeing her gaze, Yoda spoke, giving up the lecture.
“Know them, you do?” Adrienne shook her head, entranced by the gracefulness of the fight. Yoda began to move forward, and Adrienne followed a step behind as all padawans did.
“I don’t get to know as many of the Jedi as I should. I just like being alone most of the time.” The older one stepped back and the young man made a blow that in other circumstances would have been fatal. They looked at each other for a moment, then bowed in unison and shut their lightsabers down. The young one glanced at Adrienne as he left, which caused her to feel weak in the knees for a moment before regaining her composure. Adrienne drew her sword, hoping in vain that Yoda had not seen her reaction.
He had.
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bobilll
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Aug '02
Date Posted:
11/15/02 12:40pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/15!
That was Obi-wan, wasn't it?!?!?!?!?!!!!!
Adrienne was in love with Obi-wan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, maybe I'm jumping into conclusions... but...
Obi-wan, why don't you recognize her? Why? WHY??????
Oh, and I'm sorry I didn't reply... I blame Darth Homework!!!!!
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Lucid_Lady
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11/15/02 12:56pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/15!
Two posts!!! How did I miss two posts????
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BobaKoon
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11/16/02 6:21am
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/15!
That was great, jania. Who wouldn't go weak in the knees looking at Obi-wan
? Can't wait to read the next update.
UP!
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"Have you ever killed a man? Ever see a man die in combat?
I've killed men, and I've heard them dying,
and I've watched them dying.
And there is nothing glorious about it. Nothing poetic."
~Hector in "Troy"
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Tinuviel_Jyana
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11/16/02 7:50am
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/15!
great post... more?
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http://boards.theforce.net/Before_the_Saga/b10475/18888720/?2
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janiasolo
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11/16/02 4:20pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/15!
I don't know when a new post will be, but I know it could be soon. I just got back from seeing Harry Potter and The Chamber of Secrets. It is the best movie (besides Star Wars) ever! I love it!
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Jade_Max
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11/16/02 4:23pm
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RE: Lady of the Knights (Obi-Wan Romance) Updated 11/15!
*claps* Love this... I adore the way you're writing your OC and Obi involvement
Yay! I especially like the last line... I wonder what Yoda will say. Dun dun dun, the plot thickens
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