| Author |
Topic:
Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated April 17 05
|
MariaDiecowski
Registered:
Dec '02
|
Date Posted:
9/1/03 5:26pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated August 13* Sorry about the long wait
|
Dear writer,
If it is alright with you I can help you with this story? My name is Maria Diecowski and I love this story. My story Sister's Future is down because of my little time with it and I'm lost in the story.
Email me at mdiecowski@yahoo.com
Maria Diecowski
Sister of Anakin Skywalker and Daughter of Papatine. Boooo
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
JediFalcon
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
10/11/03 7:53pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated August 13* Sorry about the long wait
|
wow three new readers welcome 
I'm glad your enjoying this version so far
MariaDiecowski, I would love to have some help.
but theres some loose ends in Hopes and Dreams that need to be tied in. the link is in my bio, why don't you read the last couple of posts then get back back to me.
I'll pm you my e-mail address.
-----signature-----
Rogue Three in FFC Rogue Wing, Ward rm #306 Council Member of the Lightside Master to Stridarious Crimson makes my heart go  Master of BYS AHBY The Impeccably Patient Drugged-Out Lunatic of the Skies I wonder whats my purpose in life
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
MariaDiecowski
Registered:
Dec '02
|
Date Posted:
10/25/03 10:49am
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated August 13* Sorry about the long wait
|
Sorry I haven't been feeling well and with my last year of high school and my new job, I just can't keep up with the stories
But...
I have a copy of the book The Courtship of Princess Leia and You are doing wonderful on this story
I'll check back later in a few weeks
Maria Diecowski
Real Sister of Anakin Skywalker
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
JediFalcon
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
11/14/03 9:35pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated August 13* Sorry about the long wait
|
ok this is a teaser from the next post I'm working on.
I hope to have something up with in the week
------------------
Chewie made no comment handing Han the first tent for Leia. He laid the tent down and started threading the poles in. Half an hour later they were all in their respective tents. Han rolled over not even wanting to think about-facing Anakin after this. He wondered if he would end up in carbonyte again or would he warn him away from Leia? The second thought scared him slipping off to sleep in a nightmare.
[i] He looked up into Anakins nightmare mask knowing he had put on the suit just for this. “Put him in.” Vader said signaling for his guards to place him in the carbonyte chamber.
Chewie started thrashing around knocking stormtroopers left and right. Leia ran forward to give Han a hard kiss then was suddenly forced away from her. “I love you.” Leia shouted out, knowing it might be the last time.
”I know.” He found himself responding.
“You whoo, Captain Solo.” Threepio said from off in the distance. Han sat up in bed and noted he was sweating. [/i]
-----signature-----
Rogue Three in FFC Rogue Wing, Ward rm #306 Council Member of the Lightside Master to Stridarious Crimson makes my heart go Master of BYS AHBY The Impeccably Patient Drugged-Out Lunatic of the Skies I wonder whats my purpose in life
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
JediStarMoonstruck
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
11/15/03 7:21am
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated August 13* Sorry about the long wait
|
Looks like Han and Anakin have issues that need to be worked out. 
Can't wait to see it!!!!!!
-----signature-----
"Without Anakin Solo, the SW Universe is lost and confused” - Padme  FADA Minister of Insanity, Lunacy  and Fanaticism   Anakin Solo Day - October 30, 2006.  LONG LIVE ANAKIN SOLO!! - Aaron Allston
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
JediFalcon
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
12/28/03 5:38pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
- Date Edited:
12/28/03 5:44pm (1 edits total)
Edited By:
JediFalcon
|
Han smiled as he listened to Threepio telling Leia more love poetry, she was close to shutting down the droid when she threatened to leave him behind, Threepio stopped talking. Han grinned at Leia who glared in return. “I know you put him up to it, so just stop smiling.”
Han frowned looking up ahead noting a storm. “Looks like its going to start down pouring so we should seek shelter.” Han said noting the flashes of lightning.
Leia nodded in agreement looking off at the hill. “I think we should climb some so we’re not stuck in rising water.”
”Alright sounds good.” Han said walking up the hill with Chewbacca following him. “Chewie hand me the tent.”
Chewie made no comment handing Han the first tent for Leia. He laid the tent down and started threading the poles in. Half an hour later they were all in their respective tents. Han rolled over not even wanting to think about-facing Anakin after this. He wondered if he would end up in carbonyte again or would he warn him away from Leia? The second thought scared him slipping off in a nightmare.
He looked up into Anakins nightmare mask knowing he had put on the suit just for this. “Put him in.” Vader said signaling for his guards to place him in the carbonyte chamber.
Chewie started thrashing around knocking stormtroopers left and right. Leia ran forward to give Han a hard kiss then was suddenly forced away from her. “I love you.” Leia shouted out, knowing it might be the last time.
”I know.” He found himself responding.
“You who, Captain Solo.” Threepio said from off in the distance. Han sat up in bed and noted he was sweating. “What it is golden rod?”
“You might want to come out here.” Threepio responded excitedly. Han noted it was still dark out as he crawled out of his tent and noted an ATST walker was standing in front of the tents. A light shone on him forcing him to hold his arm over his eyes. “Hold it right there.” A voice commanded. He noted if he moved he would be shot.
Leia was standing beside him looking terrified while Chewbacca was above the walker trying to get a clear shot.
Wonderful, Han thought sarcastically. He slowly raised his hands as Leia did the same. Chewie dropped on top of the walker grabbing hold of the handle, and tried ripping the top off, the walker moved knocking Chewie off the walker, he rolled over with a moan. Han resisted the urge to run over, while the other walker moved forward scooping up the hurt wookiee. “Carry him. You three start walking.”
Leia glared at Han before walking ahead of them. Han shook his head as they headed off in the opposite direction. He noted the troopers where shining lights off into the forest around them and the expressions looked terrified. He wondered if the big foot prints he seen back at the crash landing site had to do with the fear.
-----------------------------
Anakin woke up to an insisting honking, he looked over at Luke who was adjusting Artoo onto the back of a large male, Anakin climbed onto a large female watching Isolder climbing onto a another female. “Ok looks like we’re ready to go, everyone hold on.”
The herd ran out of the cave, Isolder noted it was dark out, it felt uncomfortable at first but once the animal raised its tail, he felt better balanced. He listened to the honking going on wondering if it was just noise. Then he noted the herd moved to the left, he listened again and realized it was talking, the outer ones were relaying instructions to the heard, one honk meant turn right, two honks meant go left contented grunts meant they were contented with there present course and they kept going straight. The heard continued to move off into the night, their red eyes shining in the moonlight.
Anakin glanced back to see Isolder in a concentration frown, he could feel him figuring out that the animals were talking to each other. Maybe there’s hope for him after all. Anakin focused on hanging on, he hadn’t done this type of riding since his padawan days. He could feel the strain taking hold, he hoped he wasn’t too sore by the time they reached the other end of the dessert. Wait until Leia decides to have kids, with who ever she decides to wed. That’ll make him feel that much older. When I find Han, I think I will toy with him a little before I let him know I won’t beat him up too much.
As they neared the end of their ride, the heard stopped at a brook, Anakin and Luke slid down their mounts, Luke force lifted Artoo off the back of the male. Isolder glared at Luke, “Why can’t you make them take us farther?”
A flash of annoyance crossed Luke’s features, “we did not make them take us this far they did it of their own free will. I did not make you come to this planet to learn the ways of the force; you chose to come.”
Anakin nodded in agreement, “we are servants to the force and in turn we don’t force others to do our will they chose to help us, even traveling in the dessert is hard on a Jedi. We have water our legs will suffice the rest of the way.” Anakin was silent letting it sink in before continuing. “Did you come here to learn the ways of the force or did you really come here to free Leia?”
“I came here to free Leia.” Isolder replied with certainty. Somehow he didn’t believe his own words.
“Fine then lets go.” Anakin said after a few minutes of silence. He limped slightly noting his leg was a tad sore. Luke glanced over in concern, “I’m ok just a little sore.” At this time he wished for his younger padawan days.
-----signature-----
Rogue Three in FFC Rogue Wing, Ward rm #306 Council Member of the Lightside Master to Stridarious Crimson makes my heart go Master of BYS AHBY The Impeccably Patient Drugged-Out Lunatic of the Skies I wonder whats my purpose in life
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
JediStarMoonstruck
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
12/28/03 11:50pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
When I find Han, I think I will toy with him a little before I let him know I won’t beat him up too much.
Works for me, Ani! Make it good! 
-----signature-----
"Without Anakin Solo, the SW Universe is lost and confused” - Padme FADA Minister of Insanity, Lunacy and Fanaticism Anakin Solo Day - October 30, 2006. LONG LIVE ANAKIN SOLO!! - Aaron Allston
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
GreatOne
Registered:
May '03
|
Date Posted:
12/29/03 5:23am
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
|
No matter what story I read, I always HATE Isolder! Poor Han! Having nightmares because of that jerk!
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
Sara_Kenobi
Registered:
Sep '00
|
Date Posted:
12/29/03 8:32am
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
You updated!
Thanks for letting me know, JdiFalcon. I really enjoyed this story.
-----signature-----
A young Jedi named Darth Vader, who was once a pupil
of mine before he turned to evil, helped hunt down and destroy the Jedi Knights.
Obi-Wan, ANH.
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
JediFalcon
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
12/29/03 8:52am
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
JSM you know me I know how to toy with my characters by now hehehehe
GO not kidding I hated Isolder just be lucky he doesn't end up with Leia
Sara you're welcome and just call me JF or Falcon for short
-----signature-----
Rogue Three in FFC Rogue Wing, Ward rm #306 Council Member of the Lightside Master to Stridarious Crimson makes my heart go Master of BYS AHBY The Impeccably Patient Drugged-Out Lunatic of the Skies I wonder whats my purpose in life
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
Tych_sel
Registered:
Nov '01
|
Date Posted:
12/29/03 9:33am
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
Nice addition, Falcon. I like the way you split up Luke's original dialogue. And giving Anakinsome difficulties should make things interesting, especially when they come upon Teneniel.
Force be with you,
Tych_sel
-----signature-----
"I had a dream I was a Jedi." - A. Skywalker "I am a Jedi, like my father before me." - L. Skywalker A Last Jump: http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=28296734&brd=10476 Destiny's Heir: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/27819347/p
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
starwarsfan68
Registered:
May '03
|
Date Posted:
12/29/03 5:35pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
|
Can't wait for more. I really hate Isolder.
-----signature-----
There is only one true movie romance, the one between Han and Leia
http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=13094011&replies=6 September 2003 teaser
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
Arwen-Jade_Kenobi
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
12/30/03 3:09pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
Finally a post!! Great show, Falcon! Want to kill Isolder but, I think he's up for enough under your hand than he is inder mine lol
More soon!
-----signature-----
Retired Council Master of the Lightside It's all about the blues, baby  "Love can ignite the stars." - ROTS novel I'm a Trekkie: Deal with it, or suffer the wrath of Khan This user is certifiably insane 
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
JediFalcon
Registered:
Feb '02
|
Date Posted:
2/22/04 7:00pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Dec 28* Sorry about the long wait
|
Han watched as the troopers shone lights off into the forests, he could see the fear on their faces clear through the cockpit windows. He heard a rustle come up from ahead of them; he could also hear something following to the side of them. Chewie was moaning softly as he got jostled from the rough walking of the Imperial Walker. Han felt bad that his old friend got hurt. A big shadow ran past the walkers to the other side of him. He wondered if it could be some sort of monster or possibly someone or something he should fear.
Han looked over at Leia who in turn glared at Han for bringing her to this planet in the first place. Wait until Anakin catches up with him, he knew how Leia’s father worked. Anakin was someone to fear most definitely.
Leia looked up at the walkers and noted they had stopped, Han and Threepio came to a halt with them. “Over there.” One of the troopers yelled, shots rung from the ASAT shooting at a shadow that was no longer there, one of the shadows ambushed the one walker tearing it apart from limb to limb.
Han felt fear as he saw the face of the monster, a rancor. Han cursed inwardly. Home planet he thought, this one was bigger then the rancor in Jabba’s palace on Tatoonie. He noted that Chewie was laying on the ground moaning louder in pain. He watched as the other walker was torn from limb to limb.
Leia walked up to Chewie and knelt by his side trying to calm down the wookie by using the force over his broken ribs. “Its ok Chewie, lie still.” Leia softly spoke using the healing technique her father showed her. Chewies moans slowly died feeling a cooling balm come from Leia.
A rancor stopped by Leia and she heard a woman singing words then spoke. “Where are you from off worlders?”
”We’re from a planet called Coruscant.” Leia answered.
”I understand that you have a ship that can be repaired?” The woman questioned.
Han nodded and started to point but was stopped. “Do not point the direction of your ship, there are evil spell casters that will be interested in this ship and they must not get their hands on it.” Han stopped and waited. “We shall take you back to the Singing Mountain Clan, there you will be helped by Mother Augwynne.”
Leia nodded as one of the rancors picked up Chewie. “Follow us.”
-------------------------------
That morning Luke Anakin and Isolder slowly made there way to the singing mountain clan, Anakin knew about the place when Beritha talked to Palpitine about the light witch spell casters. Artoo was having trouble keeping pace with them due to the river bank mud branches and vines. He wasn’t about to leave the droid behind, that little droid was well worth the money Padme put into him a long time ago. “Couldn’t we leave this droid behind?” Isolder whined.
“No, that little droid is worth more then you could possibly imagine.” Anakin replied with a deep frown.
Isolder stopped complaining when Luke and Anakin continued up on the path to where ever Anakin was taking them.
Anakin looked off to the side and noted a path leading off into another direction, an inkling of excitement began to fill him and he couldn’t quite place it. He looked over at Luke and noted he was itching to do some exploring that way. “Luke you thinking what I’m thinking?”
”I am father, I think we should go down that path.” Luke replied with a broad grin.
”We can’t waist time, we have to get to Leia.” Isolder said with a glare which suddenly died away.
“This will only take a few minutes.” Anakin said reassuringly.
Luke and Anakin started off in the direction of the path, Artoo followed them down the path, they came across a ship sitting in the middle of a pond. Anakin’s eyes widened in shock, “The Chathemar.” Anakin muttered for Lukes ears only.
”What?” Luke asked all confused.
”Four hundred years ago, this used to be the Jedi Academy before it crashed on this planet.” Anakin explained.
Lukes eyes widened in shock. “I was looking for a planet, a ship never even crossed my mind.” Luke said shaking his head. He walked around the pond looking for something to cross over with. He found a raft and stepped out onto it, noting his father had decided to stay where he was standing. He watched Luke nodding for his son to go out.
Luke started poling his way out to the wreck and noted that someone had used blasters and big boulders on it. He looked into the window and noted dusty meals that were untouched, toys strewn about along with lightsabers parts lying on the floor. No records he thought with disappointment.
He started heading back to land noting that Isolder was no where to be found, his father on the other hand was standing absolutely still watching someone off in bushes, he heard a rustle and found himself being knocked over by a female presence. He cursed inwardly as she began to sing. He felt a pull in the force and realized what she about to do. “No wait….” Luke began, too late he thought with discourage. Stones and dirt began to whip around him pelting him from the side. He stretched out with the force and deflected the stones off to the side. The female stopped standing up in shock. “How can you cast the spells, your only male.” She questioned in shock.
”I’m a jedi.” Luke replied, “the force is my alley. I will not hurt you.” He added noting she looked a little scared.
She began to sing again this time, Luke really felt the pull in the force. Some big stones hit him in the side and she straddled him sitting on top of Luke. The female smiled at him yelling out, “I am Teneniel Djo a daughter of Allya and you are my slave.”
-------------------------------------
-----signature-----
Rogue Three in FFC Rogue Wing, Ward rm #306 Council Member of the Lightside Master to Stridarious Crimson makes my heart go Master of BYS AHBY The Impeccably Patient Drugged-Out Lunatic of the Skies I wonder whats my purpose in life
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
Sara_Kenobi
Registered:
Sep '00
|
Date Posted:
2/22/04 7:47pm
Subject:
RE: Isolder's Proposal sequel to Tough Times*updated Feb.22 04
|
Luke's in quite the pickle. 
Wonderful, update, JF!
-----signature-----
A young Jedi named Darth Vader, who was once a pupil
of mine before he turned to evil, helped hunt down and destroy the Jedi Knights.
Obi-Wan, ANH.
|
Locked Topic |
Active Topic Notification |
Private Message |
Post History
|
