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Author Topic: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Z/J) ~ COMPLETED! Sequel Link up 01/20!
Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
41735_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 10/23/02 7:49pm Subject: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Z/J) ~ COMPLETED! Sequel Link up 01/20! - Date Edited: 6/11/04 3:42pm (91 edits total) Edited By: Trickster_Jaina_Fel
Return of the Jedi:
By Trickster_Jaina_Fel


Disclaimer: Kevin J. Anderson, Rebecca Moesta and George Lucas own everyone except a few OC's (Sanar, Devnos, and some other quickly recnogizable people). Not me. I’m just borrowing them for a little while and I don’t get paid for this. We all clear on that? Great.
Rating: PG-13
Note: praise wonderful, constructive criticism is even better, especially cuz this is my first fic. Please, please, please tell me what I need to work on and what you like!
If you're interested and want more of this I'll put up more. If not, and if it sucks, tell me and I'll take it down.


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The Sith have returned to the Galaxy.

Led by the dictates of the Emperor long thought to be dead, they have been sweeping the galaxy in a new Jedi purge. Among the fallen are the Jedi Master Luke Skywalker, his nephew Anakin Solo, Corran Horn, Mara Jade Skywalker the former Emperor’s Hand, Jedi Knight Streen and Jedi Knight Tionne.

With their masters dead or dying, pursued by agents of the Dark lord, the students of Luke Skywalker’s Jedi academy have had to learn to fend for themselves. Jaina and Jacen Solo, the eldest members of the academy, lead the children in a now mundane routine. Their only goal is to prepare for the war that will surely come to them.

Led by the “Darkest Knight”, Lord Onyx, the Sith sweep across the galaxy, hunting down and destroying the Jedi who dare oppose them, their final goal the Jedi Temple on Yavin 4…

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~TJF

 

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rogue11lovesjag  3110 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/23/02 7:53pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R!
It looks interesting, TJF...your proposal was really good...if your posts are as good as the intro, you've already got one heck of a story!

~Rogue

 

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Kyp_side_of_TheForce  3752 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 7:58pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R!
looks good, hehe!
I like all older Jedi dead... I liked some of them, it's just better this way happy

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 7:58pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R!
i already have a poster? WOW! you're my first poster Rogue...i love you forever! the next part...aw, what the heck. i'll put it up in 2 seconds.

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 8:01pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R!
Kyp_side_of_TheForce: i have a second reviewer! thank you! here's the next part:

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"They're here."

Jacen Solo sighed at his sister's flat words. This was what they'd been preparing for the past five years. Why should it surprise him it'd finally come to pass? "I know."

She raised an eyebrow at him. " 'I know'? Is that all you're going to say? Get on the comm. and find Tenel Ka. Tell her... tell her to get over here and to bring Lowie."

"Right."

She growled in exasperation when he didn’t move. "Well, what are you waiting for? Do it!"

He looked at her for a long moment. "Sure, Jaya." He nodded slowly before grabbing his comlink and did as his twin told him. He thumbed it on, "Tenel Ka?"

"Yes, friend Jacen?"

Jacen closed his eyes a moment, letting the sound of her voice wash over him. As soon as we evacuate this place I'm going to have to tell her how I feel, he thought. He looked up to see Jaina gathering the Jedi students, what was left of them, into a huddle.

He sighed again. His sister had changed so much since the Empire began to take over. At 19, she was bowed with the responsibilities of keeping the youngest of the students in control. It wasn’t her strong point, but somebody had to lead after he’d taken over the administrative duties.

With effort, he turned his mind back to his task. "The Nightsisters are here."

The warrior woman's tone was grave. "This is a fact."

"Jaina says to come here quickly. Oh, and bring Lowie."

"Of course."

He knew she would end the connection then and the Force gave him a nudge. "Tenel Ka?" he said, feeling light headed.

"Yes, friend Jacen?"

"Um…" I love you "never mind."

"Of course. I will meet you and friend Jaina in five minutes."

"Right." He heard her comlink click out and he banged his hand on the nearby table. "Coward," he muttered.

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~TJF

 

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rogue11lovesjag  3110 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/23/02 8:05pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R!
Of course I posted...I wouldn't leave one of my favorite readers out in the cold!

~Rogue

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 8:06pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R!
I wouldn't leave one of my favorite readers out in the cold!
<blushes>
thanks again!

 

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rogue11lovesjag  3110 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 8:09pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
That was good! I liked the Jacen/Tenel Ka conversation... are we going to get mush from them...hinthint...

~Rogue

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 8:13pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23) - Date Edited: 10/23/02 8:34pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Trickster_Jaina_Fel
well, the story mostly centers around jaina and zekk...oh, you're going to kill me for a certain thing coming up...but there will be a post on tk/jacen mush! and there'll be a little talk of tk/jacen mush...but otherwise, this fic is purely jaina/zekk. sorry. sad

 

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Kyp_side_of_TheForce  3752 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 8:30pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
I LOVE IT!!!!!
MORE?????!!!!!!!!
I especially love Jacen going 'coward'

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 9:00pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
I LOVE IT!!!!!
MORE?????!!!!!!!!
I especially love Jacen going 'coward'

thank you! thank you! <giggles madly and jumps around> sorry...a little hyper...oh stop looking at me like that. as if you didn't (or won't, sorry, i don't think i've seen any of your fics but then i haven't been here very long...) jump around madly and go hyper when you posted your first fic...
more? probably tomorrow morning or tomorrow afternoon...as for the 'coward' bit... devil you're going to see a bit of that humor in the next couple posts...after that i'm afraid it'll be a bit dark. after all, zekk's a sith.

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/23/02 9:04pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
hm...anyone know how darth sidescroll crashed this thread? i can't find anything but maybe this computer screen's just really small...

 

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Jade_Max  5777 posts
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Date Posted: 10/24/02 12:09am Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
*claps* I'm so proud of you Trickster! *claps some more* Yay, you found the courage to post!!

And don't believe her, most of this work is hers, and that's the honest truth! She's incredible grin *winks at Trickster* but thanks for the credit hon!

 

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Deneveon  3714 posts
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Date Posted: 10/24/02 2:47am Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
IT'S YJK!!!!!! COOL!!!! grin

hehe, i love YJK fics. this looks really good!! I love Jacen going 'coward.' Post soon?

 
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Jedi_Johnson  7533 posts
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Date Posted: 10/24/02 5:50am Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
Great start TJF. I'm looking forward to the next post. happy

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/24/02 6:55am Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! (post#2, 10/23)
ok, here's the next little bit:

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Aarylia Tisane, the student that Jaina already considered her apprentice, though it would not be official for a few more years, looked up at Jaina. "What's wrong?"

Jaina flashed a quick Solo grin at the small red-head and squeezed the eight-year-old's shoulder. "We're evacuating."

Aarylia's face grew somber as she concentrated, her aqua eyes widening in surprise. "Evil...so much Darkness. They are coming, Master."

Jaina glanced around before kneeling. "Yeah. They are, Aarie. I need you to do something for me, alright? I need you to be strong."

Aarylia's chin shot up in defiance. "They will not capture us. Never."

"Well, we shall do our very best to make it so." Jaina gave the girl a last reassuring grin, and then stood when she felt Lowie and Tenel Ka's enter the room. The ginger furred Wookiee walked straight towards her, a question on his lips. Tenel Ka took her time, her athletic, willowy body encased in her lizard hide armor, as was her custom.

"Take the students and evacuate," Jaina ordered her friends crisply, not wasting a second on pleasantries as she turned to face them. "Jacen and I will cover you."

Tenel Ka shook her head once and pursed her lips, her eyes promising retribution. "I shall stay also, friend Jaina. The Nightsisters are traitors of Dathomir and thus my affair."

"No, Tenel Ka. Jacen and I work best as a pair. It would be awkward with you there."

"Jeesh, Jaya," Jacen remarked as he came up to the group of Jedi Knights. "You're as blunt as a ronto."

"We're in the middle of a war, Jacen. This not the time to be subtle."

Her other half shrugged. He still didn’t like it, but she did have a point. "Okay then."

Tenel Ka and Jaina glared at each other and Jacen winced at the sight of fiery brandy eyes meeting cool gray. Ever since the Darkest Knight killed Teneniel Djo, Tenel Ka's mother, Tenel Ka had been bitter and had taken much of that bitterness out on Jaina. More and more it seemed Jacen and Lowie were caught in the middle of the equally stubborn and determined young women. Why me? he wondered, rolling his eyes at their posturing.

Suddenly, a black wave of Darkness washed over the Jedi, forcing Jaina and Tenel Ka to snap out of their clash of wills. Tenel Ka gritted her teeth. "Lowbacca and I will take the students to Hapes. May the Force be with you." She gave the Solo twins one last look and began to walk off.

Jacen watched her go, a sinking feeling settling in the pit of his stomach. For some strange reason, he was certain he was never going to see her again.

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oh, and by the way, do you guys want lots of little posts say...every day or 1 and a half days...or a few big posts every couple days?
~TJF grin

 

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