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Author Topic: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Z/J) ~ COMPLETED! Sequel Link up 01/20!
Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
41735_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:00pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
hm...maybe a tiny post would be ok...in a little bit...and as for not killing me: they might. after all, everything i've written, i've sent to you so just because they kill me, doesn't mean this story won't be finished... shock cry so they might! especially LM...

~TJF

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:03pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
Nah, they love you too much to kill you... Besides, this is your show, sure I could pick it up if absoloutely necessary, but *grin* you're the genius behind this plot!

*rubs hands together* I can't wait for the next cliffie *grin*

 

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LadyMairead  2717 posts
Registered: May '02
14535_Yuuzhan Vong High Priestess
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:05pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
Ritz Crackers are notoriously violent. We can be soothed only with a new post.

 
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NYCitygurl  28433 posts
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 Registered: Jul '02
51036_WH9: Narnia
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:13pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
lol. I agree, a new post is in order.

Love NYC

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
41735_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:13pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
uh...huh...<shrugs> oh, why not? JM, could you perhaps stand between LM and myself? i doubt she'll kill you but as for me... tongue wink mischief

cya in 5!
~TJF

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:15pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
*sets herself up as a human shield for Trickster* sure... afterall, can't have the writer as a casulty grin

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
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Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:21pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25
ok, here it is:

~*~*~*~
Jaina woke slowly, her body feeling sluggish and unresponsive. She opened her eyes as a surge of adrenaline shot through her body. Nightsisters! The darkness surrounding her was impenetrable to her eyes. She stretched out with the Force, trying to find someone near by. Jacen. She’d know his force signature anywhere. Her arms ached as she reached out to the side, feeling for him.

A soft moan directed her hand and she rolled over, checking him through the Force for injuries. She fought off the sudden wave of pain he was feeling as consciousness came rushing back. She bit her lip and moved closer to him. “What do you think they’ll do to us, Jasa?” she asked softly.

Jacen’s whole body twitched as an after-effect of the Dark electricity and he shook his head. “I-I don’t know, J-Jaya.” He was stuttering, the nerves in his system still not responding to his brain’s commands. He felt as if he’d been thrown into an ion storm without a ship.

The two were quiet for a few moments before Jaina whispered, “She said Brakiss wants us alive. What do you suppose she meant by that?”

“I—I don’t know.”

Jaina’s bottom lip trembled as she felt her brother’s life force weaken and she snuggled deeper into Jacen’s side. He gratefully held her close, forcing his arms to fold about her.

“Jaya?”

“Mm-hm?”

“Promise m-me something?”

Jaina drew back enough to see her brother’s face, his features barely visible even up close. “As best I can.”

“Be strong, Jaya. Live for me?”

Jaina sat up straight in denial. “Why should I live for you, huh Jacen? You’re going to live. You have to. If you don’t, it—” she felt the tears begin to stream down her face and she took a shuddering breath. “What’s the number one rule of being a Jedi Knight, Jacen? Never die. If you—die,” her voice quavered but she pushed on, “it’ll totally screw up the escape plan.”

Jacen offered a small grin. “Oops. G—guess you’ll have to use that brilliant mind of yours to find another way out.”

She shook her head. “Escape from the Imperial palace, with stormtroopers, Dark Jedi, Brakiss, the Nightsisters and the Darkest Knight without detection, without backup—”

“B—but you’ll have back up,” Jacen argued, shocking Jaina into silence. “You’ll have Zekk.”

Jaina’s eyes shuttered closed. “Zekk’s dead, Jacen.”

“You didn’t always believe that.” When his sister didn’t say anything he continued. “You used to believe you could turn him back. What if you were right? What if it’s your…I don’t know…destiny to save him?”

“What if it’s my destiny to die and rot here for my stupidity?”

Jacen looked surprised. “Your love isn’t stupid, Jaina. Love never is. You should have admitted to him that you love him but you’re getting your second chance.”

Jaina snorted. “Oh, you’re the one to talk, aren’t you? At least I have the whole too young/Sith vs. Jedi excuse. You and Tenel Ka have been stuck together like glue for the past five years and neither of you will get over your own stubbornness and just admit to each other that you are way past the friendship stage. In fact you never were friends. You know, Jacen, sometimes you’re a real idiot.”

Jacen was quiet for several minutes. “Jaya?”

“Yeah?”

“Could you tell her?”

“Could I tell her that you’re an idiot? Sure, don’t know why she wouldn’t already know but—”

Jacen sighed in exasperation and looked up at the ceiling, palms upward. “What did I do to deserve this?” he moaned.

Jaina smirked. “I don’t know, what did you do to deserve me? You’ve always been such a juvenile delinquent—”

“Oh shut up, you.” The playful banter that had been such a big part of their friendship was a comfort for both of them even as they were well aware of the fact that death was drawing close, eager to bring home one of the Force’s darlings.

Once again Jaina leaned against her brother. “I’ll tell her you love her, Jasa. I promise.”

The next time Jacen spoke his voice was tinged with irony. “You know, I should have known this would happen.”

“That what would happen?”

“This. The Force kept trying to get me to tell Tenel Ka that I love her. Guess it’s a good thing I carry this around, huh?”

Jaina looked to see what Jacen held in his slightly trembling left hand: a small holodisc. He looked at her, a question in his eyes. “I’ll give it to her,” she said, hoping it wouldn’t be the first time she had to break a promise to him. She took the disc and sighed. “We never could do anything without the other, not even the whole falling-in-love thing,” Jaina said, a smirk in her voice.

Jacen raised a teasing eyebrow. “Jaina! You never told me you loved Tenel—”

Jaina rolled her eyes. “Of course I don’t lamu head,” she replied, pausing to tug Jacen’s dark, shaggy curls. “But I’m in love with Zekk—a Sith Lord—and that’s just about as bad as loving Tenel Ka.”

Jacen’s laughter rang out in the small prison cell. “Almost, but not quite,” he agreed.

~*~*~*~

i know, i said tiny but i just couldn't find a spot to break it off at...

<cowers behind JM> don't kill me LM!
~TJF

 

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LadyMairead  2717 posts
Registered: May '02
14535_Yuuzhan Vong High Priestess
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:21pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) my first fic so please R&R! update 10/25 - Date Edited: 10/25/02 4:23pm (1 edits total) Edited By: LadyMairead
*scoffs* You're no match for me, mortal. You're like the Saltine to my Ritz Cracker. I'll crush you.

EDIT: ooh! New post! It just snuck up on me...

 
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
Registered: Oct '02
41735_Fan Fiction
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:26pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! update#2 10/25
oh no...i knew it...LM's going to crush me... shock ...HELP!
~TJF

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
Registered: Jun '02
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:31pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! update#2 10/25
Bah, she won't crush you. *hides TJF from LM* if she did, she'd never get the next post *grin*

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:35pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! update#2 10/25
<cowers shamelessly behind JM and whispers...> i remind you once more that you have the next part as well!!!!!!!

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
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Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:37pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! update#2 10/25
Shhh, she doesn't need to know that! If they think you have everything, then they can't harm you. I'm just the token writer, I get to offer suggestions, so yeah... umm... I don't have the next part... *whistles innocently trying to be convincing*

 

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Trickster_Jaina_Fel  5203 posts
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Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:42pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! update#2 10/25
<whispers> it's been too long...i'm getting really scared now...she should be ranting now!
~TJF

 

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Jade_Max  5782 posts
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Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:52pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! update#2 10/25
Nah, she'll rant when you do something really really bad... then we head for the hills lol!

 

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LadyMairead  2717 posts
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14535_Yuuzhan Vong High Priestess
Date Posted: 10/25/02 4:53pm Subject: RE: Return of the Jedi (YJK AU, Jaina/Zekk) please R&R! update#2 10/25
*bursts into thread*

I can't believe you're doing that to Jacen!! cry Not only am I going to crush you, I'm then going to grind you to miniscule pieces under the heel of my trés chic black Italian leather boot!!

*advances on TJF with her green lightsaber, which matches the rest of her outfit perfectly, bien sur*


Grrr....



(shh... don't tell, but it was really an excellent post. very vivid, and i absolutely love their dialogue. jacen needs to stick around so they can have more wink )



*swings her lightsaber in a complicated yet graceful circular parry*


You should have know better than to think you could damage my Jacen and get away with it... angry

 
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