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Date Posted: 5/23 3:33pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea - Date Edited: 5/23 3:34pm (2 edits total) Edited By: DVCPRO-HDeditor
WHAT'S HAPPENING: 05/23/2008!

Darth_Ishtar has finished writing Part Three! applause

On to the next . . . . grin

 

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LLL 
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Date Posted: 5/23 4:26pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
There's a few comments and questions at the end of the thread for people who've read all three parts.

Everyone take a look. These are things we need as many eyes on as possible.

I'll be gone Saturday, Sunday, and Monday.

Back Tuesday!

 

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LLL 
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Date Posted: 5/24 11:41am Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
WHAT'S HAPPENING! 5/24/08

Now there are even more questions popping up on the thread in Resource. The answers to these will have a big impact on what we decide to do next, and we need you, the film crew people, to weigh in.

If you have time this weekend, take a gander and give us your opinions.

 

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LLL 
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Date Posted: 5/26 4:51pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
WHAT'S HAPPENING! 5/26/08

RX_Sith works fast.

He's already got more than half of Part Four up

here.

He's also asking for some feedback, so y'all go take a look!

 

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Vidina 
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Date Posted: 5/27 1:19am Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
Some suggestions from our creative mind;






Now, I already went for design 3, with some major modifications, but I thought I'd let everyone see the first three drafts, to get a general idea of how Eivind's style is, and if there's something else than our major b0t we could use. I also took into consideration the modelling/animation skills it would take to realise this, which is PART of why I exluded concept 2 as the main char. That, and the fact that it looks like a gorilla :P

These sketches are some weeks old now, but was only recently scanned, and I assume the latter iterations will be both quicker, and more detailed, since Eivind now has a design to go from, in stead of just doodling away.

Let us know what you think so far, at least happy

 

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Date Posted: 5/27 6:40am Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
Vidina posted:


It's weird - but that's almost exactly how I pictured him.

 

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drewjmore 
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Date Posted: 5/27 9:13am Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea - Date Edited: 5/27 9:13am (1 edits total) Edited By: drewjmore
Eivind has a very capable hand, if those sketches are any indication.

I concur with option three, with modifications that should include making the b0t (that's coming dangerously close to a de-facto official name... idea like Bee-Zero-Tee-Nine, aka "Bot") more of a cobbled-up hodge-podge of scavenged components. One credibility question our story raises is, "how come such a poor family can't sell the droid for the money they need?" We can address that somewhat by getting away from the shiny, expensive-looking, personal-servant style and having it be obsolete and apparently without intrisic value; e.g. left and right legs of different styles (which might give the it a unique, assymetrical walking/gait pattern), and the (suggested very early-on by I-don't-recall-whom) 'extra-hose' in the torso region. Plus wear & tear, corrosion, fluid stains & such.

 

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Vidina 
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Date Posted: 5/27 9:25am Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
I gave the artist some concepts to work out from, without actually having read the script on beforehand. I gave him the story outline, and some origin ideas for b0t. One isea was that b0t was made by an underground faction on Naboo, during the republic era, so he would have very "naboo" attributes and features, some underground modifications, and be very capable. However, as it would be over 30 years of age, some of it has rusted etc, giving it a very rough shell after all. I could also tell him to include some spare parts on it, so it'll be even more unique, but once the design is settled, but will be modelled, rigged, shaded, and good to go happy

 

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Master_Comyn 
Registered: Nov '00
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Date Posted: 5/27 3:32pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
Wow, you guys are really doing this, aren't you? I seen this idea more times than I care to remember, but nothing ever became of it. Without having to read through all the many pages, could I get an overall update? What kind of story are you doing?

 

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LLL 
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Date Posted: 5/27 4:12pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea - Date Edited: 5/27 4:35pm (2 edits total) Edited By: LLL
Well...

I thought the original idea was to make the bot female, and that the family built it in wealthier times.

ALTHOUGH, having said that, there's no reason why a bot that looks like #2 couldn't be female, and it would certainly make it an interesting and original character. IF the folks have been poor for a while, then they would be in reduced circumstances when the droid needed repair, which would tally with it ending up looking like this.

What does everyone think of this?

*goes over to alert everyone on the Resource thread, because this is information the writers will certainly need to know*

Edit:

For anyone wanting to know the basics of the story, there is a writer's thread here that should explain it.

 

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Date Posted: 5/27 8:10pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
The story is about a droid who attempts to blackmail an Imperial officer into giving his owner resources necessary for medical care.

Sound boring? Believe me, it isn't. wink

 

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LLL 
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Date Posted: 5/28 6:00am Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
Actually, to me "bot" always conjures up images of certain flesh-eating maggots.

(I'm a veterinarian.) wink

 

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Date Posted: 5/28 8:03pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea - Date Edited: 5/28 8:07pm (2 edits total) Edited By: LLL
WHAT'S HAPPENING! 5/28/08

Although the authors of Parts Three and Four tell me that what's posted here is not their final drafts, we do at least have preliminary drafts up for both Parts Three and Four.

This means that we are...

***ALMOST FREAKIN' DONE!!!!***

dancing dancing dancing

However, we are running into some issues both with the ending and with Part Four that we could use some extra eyes on. Plus, in order to try to tackle these things in a timely and orderly fashion, I have posted a sort of method-of-attack schedule for getting this done and turned in.

If you have time this weekend to take a look, input would be appreciated.

Thanks.

 

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Date Posted: 5/30 11:28pm Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
WHAT'S HAPPENING! 5/31/08

PART FOUR IS DONE!!!!

Here!

 

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Joel_K 
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Date Posted: 5/31 1:16am Subject: RE: Jedi vs Sith prequel movie idea
DVCPRO-HDeditor posted:
The story is about a droid who attempts to blackmail an Imperial officer into giving his owner resources necessary for medical care.

Sound boring? Believe me, it isn't. wink


i'm just trying to figure out how it went from Jedi vs Sith, to this.

please, enlighten me.

 

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