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Beyond - Legends Burning Bright * UDC7 * Week 20 posted 14/Jun (complete)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction- Before, Saga, and Beyond' started by Hazel, Jan 29, 2013.

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  1. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  2. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Blisses! [face_dancing]
    Beautiful & accurate portrayals of Mara. =D= [:D] !!
     
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  3. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Ooh very nice! I'm excited you're doing the drabble challenge!! I especially loved "Baby" and "Teenager".
     
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  4. Briannakin

    Briannakin Former Manager star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Beautiful! I can't wait to read more of these Mara-centric drabbles.
     
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  5. mayo_durron_666

    mayo_durron_666 Jedi Grand Master star 2

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    I found the Baby, Child & Teenager bits really intriguing. :)
    Just imagining Mara so little, innocent & vulnerable was sweet & sad at same time..
    Nice job! ;)
     
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  6. taramidala

    taramidala Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Caught this over on FF.N earlier. Lovely, Hazel! :)
     
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  7. EmeraldJediFire

    EmeraldJediFire Jedi Master star 4

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    This was beautiful...I did like the baby part...but I am partial to her vision of her with the elderly man with blue eyes (I'm a sucker for Luke what can I say)
     
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  8. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Thanks Jade!! [:D]


    Yeah, i decided to give this a try and poke my muse. Thanks!


    I can't wait to find out about the next set of prompts.


    Mara's early life is a sad one. Fortunately she met Luke and [face_love]


    Thank you! [:D]


    Yeah, Mara drabbles are not complete without Luke.
     
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  9. lukemaraben

    lukemaraben Jedi Knight star 1

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    Little Mara is so cute. Great job.
     
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  10. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    She is, isn't she! Thanks!
     
  11. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    Lovely how you show us a young Mara
     
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  12. DaenaBenjen42

    DaenaBenjen42 Jedi Grand Master star 5

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    Loved 'em, Hazel. :) Especially Adult with the sleazy cantina.
     
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  13. Hazel

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    :) Thanks earlybird! I hope to show you Mara at every stage if i get the proper prompts.


    Thanks Daena! [:D] I'm glad you liked it.
     
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    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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  15. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Oh, Hazel, I only hoped you weren't referring to that icky disease. :p I loved these. [:D]
     
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  16. JediMara77

    JediMara77 Force Ghost star 4

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    Ha! Now that's a fic I'd like to see. :p

    Lovely drabbles, Hazel. :) You capture Mara's essence very well. Can't wait to read more!
     
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  17. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    Hahaha!!! Me to. Know anyone who would write it for us?
    Thanks! [:D]
     
  18. lukemaraben

    lukemaraben Jedi Knight star 1

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    I'm glad it wasn't the Vong sickness her being pregnant is much better. Loved it!!
     
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  19. earlybird-obi-wan

    earlybird-obi-wan Chosen One star 6

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    I loved how you had them flowing into one very sweet story so true to Mara's character
     
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  20. ginchy

    ginchy Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Hazel, I thought you were going to make me bring out my Brave Hat!! That was very mean.... but I like it!! [face_devil]

    And I can just picture Mara frowning and Luke beaming at the news. [face_rofl]
     
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  21. Hazel

    Hazel Jedi Master star 4

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    lukemaraben - of course it wasn't. That stupid illness is just the product of someone's imagination. :p

    earlybird-obi-wan - Thanks ! [:D]

    ginchy - I'm sorry honey! [:D] But you have to admit, those prompts were begging for it.
     
  22. KELIA

    KELIA Manager Emeritus star 6 VIP - Former Mod/RSA

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    Loved both sets!

    I especially like Frustrated. I can totally see how difficult it would be for Mara to be used to being pregnant.

    Great responses

    =D==D==D==D=
     
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  23. Lady_Misty

    Lady_Misty Jedi Grand Master star 4

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    Those Ori deserve what they get. And then the SG teams can take care of both. ;)

    I like how they all were directly connected.


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  25. WarmNyota_SweetAyesha

    WarmNyota_SweetAyesha Chosen One star 8

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    Squee! Squee! For each and every word! [face_dancing] Yum! [face_love] ^:)^
     
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