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Kast_Morben  1676 posts
Registered: Aug '01
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 1:34am Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Right, finally I've submitted this weeks, the tale of Griz Frix, embittered rebel pilot.

Here's my version for the Jon Knoll character if anyone is interested. I lost the short version in my hard drive crash unfortunately.


Noh L Bravo posted:
It is testament to the continued popularity and the extreme success of Noh L Bravo that he should have been in attendance at the premiere of ‘Squid Lake’ at the Galaxies Opera House on Coruscant. The man who was once described as ‘the sultan of sheev’ (Chrono magazine) would only see it as fitting that he would be invited to an occasion of such musical and artistic performance. As perhaps the galaxies most famous musician he is regularly sighted at societies hippest and most influential social gatherings.

Bravo grew up amidst a privileged background on Naboo. The success and wealth of his family allowed him to attend the finest educational institutions that the galaxy had to offer. From the University of Naboo he quickly moved on to the University of Alderaan, where his precocious talent, along with a wicked temperament were first displayed. Expelled for ‘unconventional behaviour’ (the university offers nothing more, promising the strictest confidentiality for its students), he transferred to the University of Raltiir and then onto the Majestic Academy of Clak’Dor VII. It was in this crucible of musical ability that he refined his technique with his favourite instrument, the Shiv trumpet.

His talent bred success, as he combined a fledgling business career in the corporate sector with his lead role in his first band the ‘Starburst surfers’. It was at this point that he changed his name to the flashy Bravo, adding the superfluous L in between. Further investigation has clouded the subject, revealing a number of possibilities as to his birth moniker.

His triumph with the surfers only made him hungrier for further success. Feeling creatively restricted by the band, they split, allowing Bravo to expand his musical freedom. This freedom brought him both unrivalled popularity and critical acclaim. Over the next twenty years he pushed the boundaries of aural accomplishment, creating his own legend at the same time.

He stuck primarily to the Shiv trumpet, dallying briefly with the Quetarra and the Lumino-tab following his break up with the surfers. Critics would argue that his finest work was his ‘Celeratio’, but Bravo never sought out critical praise, citing that the work was not his favourite. His fans would no doubt point to his contributions to the spheres of electrosynth, thunderbelt and psychozoo as his greatest accomplishment. However you cannot look further than his reg-runk album, ‘Raindrops of Drongar’, as the example of his galactic influence and fame. The album sold well into the trillions, and is burnt onto the neural cords of the many sentients who grew up during its release. Although Bravo’s music was only part of the mystique - flamboyant outfits, his luxury Sorosuub 1900 yacht, bevy of gorgeous females and outrageous behaviour at festivals only helped stoke the fervour surrounding his personality.

As always though, Bravo was not immune to the perils of life in the space lane. His short-lived rocky marriage to Venda Bwin, the former senator of Sybaria, nearly ended his career along with hers. Allegations of a spiralling bota habit (said to have inspired the creation of the Drongar album) followed him during his early career, although have been less prevalent in recent years. And of course there is his confused and infamous role during the Nar Shadda embargo. Rescued by the Jedi Master Even Piell, Bravo still struggles to explain, and often refuses to answer, why he was on Nar Shadda, rather than receiving his Melodius award on Bimmisaari.

However, these accusations have refused to dampen his star and he remains a celebrated galactic figure. Today Bravo chooses to use this celebrity to his own advantage, highlighting the issues that matter most to him. His homes on Moltok and Ithor have made his a passionate conservationist, leading to his unforgettable duet with Magda Glorious at Vine Relief. Bravo is also a vocal advocate against the Clone Wars, a thorn in the side of many senators, including Supreme Chancellor Palpatine. It was this opposition that prompted the renowned ‘Seven Days - Seven Stars’ tour. Bravo remains the only Republic musician to have ever played on the notoriously xenophobic Baran Doon, and to millions on the wastes of Dylgarra.

At the height of his popularity, Buzz Download voted Bravo as “the most influential musician of the last eighty cycles”. As his own biographer put it “Bravo is set to become the most influential of the next eighty cycles too.”


 

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jawajames  10013 posts
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Registered: Apr '02
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 12:04pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
wow.. you must have shortened that a lot to make it fit.

i always tend to manage to write something that is 2200 characters, and have a tough time removing a word here, shortening a phrase there, to make it fit.

at any rate, here's my story for Mr. She's-gonna-blow...




Rya Solben’s life and death were both found in the cockpit of a starfighter. Named for Rya Kirsch, a Bravo Squadron hero of his homeworld Naboo, young Solben had one goal: to fly starfighters for the Royal Naboo Security Force. At sixteen, Rya enlisted in the Security Force and began flight school. After the destruction of Alderaan, the security-conscious Moff Panaka reorganized Naboo’s defenses to include a stronger Imperial presence. Rya saw the changes immediately: flight time in the sleek N-1 fighters was replaced with training in TIE simulators; and several of his classmates were expelled for opining against Imperial treatment of the Gungans.

After flight school, Rya’s first assignment was to fly TIE fighter cover for a bombing mission against a Rebel cell on Rori. The site was obliterated without any opposition. In the mission debriefing, Rya was sickened to discover that no one cared about the “collateral damage” – over 200 civilians killed by bombs intended for only a dozen Rebels. Disgusted by how the Imperial mindset had corrupted the Naboo, he resigned from the Security Force in a letter to Queen Kylantha. His superiors sought to arrest him as a traitor. Hiding in Moenia, Rya met Ebenn Q3 Baobab, a retired writer. Using Ebenn’s Rebel contacts, Rya obtained R5-Z9 and stole an antiquated N-1 starfighter from the local museum. Rya’s piloting skill saved his life as he dodged Imperial fire before blasting to hyperspace.

Z9 led him to the Rebel base in the Roche asteroids, and the Rebel Alliance welcomed Rya. Realizing the age of streamlined fighters was past, Rya eagerly traded in his N-1 for training in rugged X-wings and the new B-wing. Rya helped defend Project Shantipole and went on to fly X-wings until his fateful mission at Endor. With Z9 assisting him, he succeeded in crippling a Star Destroyer, but got hit in the crossfire. With his final words “She’s gonna blow!”, Rya died in the place where he felt most alive: in a fighter cockpit.

 

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DarthRotten  956 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 12:13pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
I love this feature and I've submitted a few too but HOW DO WE FIND WHICH ONES WERE CHOSEN? I've yet to actually find a completed one in the databank, even the ones with names like Magaloof. Where are they now?

 

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jawajames  10013 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 12:24pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
my guess is that once they have about nine of these completed, they will publish them all in a databank feature update. so, patience!

 

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Kudzu  6437 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 1:16pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Nice SWG references, jawajames.

 

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President_Sharky  1191 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 2:07pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
I wonder if they'll post more one-liner Endor pilots, like "I'm HIT!!!!" (Y-Wing) or the audience favourite "There's too many of them!" grin

 

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jawajames  10013 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 2:42pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
i'd hope for a little more variety than just focusing on pilots in one battle. there's so many cloud city residents that need stories... and random coruscanti and naboo...

 

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Super_Battle_Droid  3489 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 7:33pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
What's todays?

 

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Darth-Lando  7969 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 7:54pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion - Date Edited: 8/12/05 7:55pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Darth-Lando
1st Databank Update is up!

http://www.starwars.com/databank/updates/news20050812.html

 

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TalonCard  7489 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 7:59pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
The2ndQuest's entry was selected for the UT-AT--very cool, and definitely the best choice.

I love your entry for the Endor pilot, jawajames. That would make a cool comic, actually. Or better yet, a game: Imperial Starfighter.

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Super_Battle_Droid  3489 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 8:34pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
So what's the new one?

 

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Kudzu  6437 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 8:37pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
TalonCard, was that your stuff for the Janu guy?

 

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TalonCard  7489 posts
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Date Posted: 8/12/05 9:27pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Quite a bit of it, yeah. grin The first part is almost verbatim. A lot of it was re-phrased, and material from other Hyperspace members was added. The whole is greater than the sum of its parts, however. happy

On a continuity note, they kept my reference to Cody Sunn-Childe, but cut Ferus Olin! I guess he doesn't have many fans over at starwars.com either... wink

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The2ndQuest  40066 posts
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Date Posted: 8/13/05 11:18am Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Score! dancing

Though I was more proud of my spaceman and swilla entries, i'm not gonna complain, this is pretty sweet! ::)

Congrats Talon!

 

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Durnar  963 posts
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Date Posted: 8/13/05 11:23am Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Congrats guys.
Though Quest you do know that now youve sorted all of the details out on that tank that the tec-minded people will now pick apart everything you put wink

 

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