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Tam_Elgrin  4205 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 12:33am Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
I think Valin's account of the changes made to his "Little Marauder" show that they are picking up, and altering, the little details. And I bet they have red lights on for anyone who tries to slip something like "Melee's personal Super Star Destroyer was 5km long" or "the Ewok discovered conclusive records that Anakin Skywalker in fact was a byproduct of Sith experimentation". I doubt even something contentious like a(n explicit) Star Tours reference would make it past.

 

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QuentinGeorge  4759 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 12:44am Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
I doubt even something contentious like a(n explicit) Star Tours reference would make it past.

Is that a dare, my good friend?

 

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Date Posted: 10/21/05 11:32am Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion - Date Edited: 10/21/05 11:33am (1 edits total) Edited By: The2ndQuest
They definitely have continuity checks and changes- for example, my UT-AT entry was altered to match some of the info the GAR article had included about that vehicle (and even overrode the name that article was going to use for it), such as the bridge-laying and bomblet abilities.

 

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Date Posted: 10/21/05 2:26pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
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ROTS novel clearly established prefixes for the Republic's ships

What exactly does this mean? I haven't really been following this whole prefix issue.

 

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QuentinGeorge  4759 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 2:48pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
What exactly does this mean? I haven't really been following this whole prefix issue.

IIRC, In the novel, the ships are named "R.S.S. so and so."

 

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Date Posted: 10/21/05 4:51pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion - Date Edited: 10/21/05 5:00pm (3 edits total) Edited By: CooperTFN
Ah. Yeah, that's kinda cheesy.

Anyway, continuing my tradition of posting my entries before the deadline and forcing TalonCard to change his ( praying ), here's what I came up with for Oicunn.


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Lanscus Oicunn always had problems with authority. Born and raised on Jabiim, Oicunn was relegated to a mere support status during the Jabiim crisis. Dreams of grandeur crushed, only his love of the Republic kept him in line during weeks of grueling service to the loyalists.

The battle did not go well, and the lone surviving Jedi, Anakin Skywalker, was forced to flee the planet with his forces. Oicunn blamed Skywalker personally – the Republic he loved would never desert its men. Determined to continue fighting, he eventually found his way off-planet back to the Republic, where he re-enlisted.

Among the crew of the assault ship Absolution, matters only got worse. That his unit would be under the command of a Jedi Knight was a fact he had learned to live with, but when that Knight turned out to be Winnik Skyhopper – another native of Tatooine - it was like a slap in the face. Nevertheless, Oicunn dutifully toiled his way through campaigns from New Holstice to Skye. Jedi or not, Skyhopper enjoyed the spotlight the Clone Wars had given him, and Oicunn could do nothing but watch as he reaped all the glory.

Eventually, everything changed. Skyhopper’s unit was clearing a Separatist redoubt on Kubindi when word came that General Grievous had been found and the war’s end was at last approaching. What caught Oicunn’s attention, however, was a small news item accompanying the announcement – Anakin Skywalker had been given a seat on the Jedi Council. Oicunn could take no more. He ran straight to the General’s quarters and shot the Jedi Knight in his sleep.

He was thrown in the brig, but his luck would soon change: the Jedi had been proclaimed traitors to the Republic! His peculiar situation eventually reached Palpatine’s ear, and Oicunn found himself a free man. He was quickly promoted to Lieutenant, and transferred to the bridge crew of the Star Destroyer Emancipator, flagship of none other than Lord Darth Vader. At last, a commanding officer he could respect.


I mean, look at those eyes. The guy's a nut.

Edit 1: This one's not much for the obscure references, but I did work in a semi-fix for the battle of Skye, mentioned in an old Marvel comic and supposed to have involved three Jedi - Anakin, Obi-Wan and Darth Vader. But you know how people get those Tatooine names mixed up. Speaking of which, I named him Skyhopper on the unspoken assumption that his fame leads to the eventual naming of the ship after him. Lastly, I came up with Emancipator for the Star Destroyer as a reference to Vader's roots, the idea being that he's trying to convince himself that the Sith are "liberating" the galaxy.

Edit 2: Kudzu - I knew the Outer Rim Sieges were going on, so I just grabbed a NJO map and picked the first OR planet I saw that wasn't otherwise occupied.

 

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Kudzu  6437 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 4:56pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Did it have to be Kubindi? sad

 

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Commander5052  3504 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 4:57pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
What's worng with Kubindi?

 

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Date Posted: 10/21/05 5:00pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Yuk, yuk. grin Good entry. I wish I had more time to polish mine--I got the events I wanted in, but I think I lost the tragic element of the story. Here's hoping that Destroyer gets a name, prefix or no. (I.S.S. anyone? wink )

Sejma Oicunn was born on the remote world of D'rinba IV in the Moddell sector. As a child, he longed to become a heroic navel officer, and when he entered his teens he joined the D'rinba volunteer starfighter defense squad, which consisted of twelve pilots and two aging Headhunters. He repeatedly applied for a position in the Judicial Department, but was passed over for less experienced, but better connected candidates.

This changed when Oicunn came to the attention of Ars Dangor, an aide to Chancellor Palpatine. Dangor brought the young man to Coruscant, where he met briefly with Palpatine. The Chancellor offered to sponsor him in the Republic Academy, in exchange for gathering information about the "political opinions" of the current class of cadets. Oicunn happily accepted.

The academy brought Oicunn out of obscurity, and the Chancellor's support forever made Oicunn a supporter of Palpatine and his political agenda. One of his first postings was the corvette Scarlet Thranta. When the crew defected to form the "Freedom's Sons" organization, Oicunn stayed on as Palpatine's contact.

In spite of such loyalty, Palpatine was barely aware of Oicunn, who dealt mostly with aides such as Dangor. When the Clone Wars ended, they rewarded Oicunn's loyalty with the rank of Lt. in the new Imperial Navy and a posting on the Emperor's flagship, the Venator-class Star Destroyer Penumbra.

This spurred Oicunn on to new heights, and over the next two decades he moved up the ranks. Three years after Yavin, Admiral Oicunn was overseeing the construction of the Emperor's new flagship, the Eclipse. During this time, his homeworld was destroyed in order to preserve the secracy of the Death Star II's construction site. Oicunn was well aware of the decision, but his loyalty to Palpatine overrode his grief at the loss of world and family.

After the Battle of Endor, Oicunn perished when the Emperor's Force storms destroyed the Eclipse at Da Soocha.

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Kudzu  6437 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 5:01pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion - Date Edited: 10/21/05 5:03pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Kudzu
“Kubindi,” Alpha said. There were no murmurs of surprise; in fact, Alpha’s identification of the system was entirely unnecessary, as everybody in the room knew what system was now slowly revolving next to their instructor’s helmeted head. “Recently the target of a Republic assault led by General Bant Eerin against a Separatist base there. One of my brothers, Captain Alpha-51, was among her personal squad.

“Now, here’s how the battle went.” Alpha touched the holographic image of the planet Kubindi and the display zoomed in on it. “Kubindi has three moons. In a situation similar to the attack on Thule before my reawakening, one of the moons housed a shield generator that protected the planet. However, rather than staging a full-out assault of the shield generator as was done at Thule, a four-man squad of clone commandoes infiltrated the shield generator to destroy it from the inside out.”

He touched the moon orbiting nearest to Kubindi and again the image zoomed in. The shield generator building visible on the moon’s surface shone red, and Alpha touched it and the hologram switched to show the blueprint schematics for the generator building. “I ask you now, troopers, what should the clone commandoes, entering here -” he pointed at the back entrance door into the building “- have done right away?”

A trainee raised his hand. Alpha pointed at him, and he saluted. “Clone Marshal Commander Thire at your command, sir,” he said, and Alpha returned the salute. “Sir, the commandoes should have immediately attempted to disable all security holocams and other defensive measures before proceeding, and then with extreme caution, keeping their weapon arsenals close at hand and ready to fire at a moment’s notice.”

“Very good, Commander,” Alpha said, and Raster got the distinct impression that behind his visor, a grim smile was on his face. That suspicion was more or less compounded when Alpha continued, “Of course, had the commandoes done that, we could not have had this,” and with a tiny wave of his hand, a new holographic image appeared: one of a squad of clone commandoes firing recklessly to take down B-1 series battle droids that were rushing towards them down a metallic corridor. Raster dropped his forehead into his hand, disbelieving of the sheer idiocy of the commando team.

“As you can see,” Alpha pressed on, “the commandoes did not in fact disable the security holocams and other defensive systems, nor did they proceed with caution. It is believed that one of the troopers succumbed to blasterfire from the battle droids stationed in the shield generator before the rest of the squad fell victim to a laser trap that they failed to disable when they forced entry into a room containing a security console and a computer terminal. This stupidity,” he said, placing contemptuous emphasis on every word, “will not be tolerated by me in my trainees. We will reenact situations such as this one, and certainly including this one, and anyone who shows the level of sheer sloppiness and idiocy displayed here will no longer train in my class. In fact, they will spend the rest of their days scrubbing floors and doing dishes here in Tipoca City. Now, would you rather be clone commanders, or clone janitors?”

There was no answer. There didn’t need to be one. Alpha spoke again. “Good. Now -”

“Sir?” It was Thire again. Alpha turned his head over to look directly at him. Thire quickly snapped off a salute, which Alpha returned without comment. Thire went on. “Sir, what did General Eerin’s forces do to eliminate the shield generator after the commandoes’ failure?”

Alpha nodded slowly. “An excellent question, and one that I was going to address myself in a matter of mere seconds. Either way, I will address it. General Eerin, with great reluctance (or so I have heard), ordered her fleet to enact a Base Delta Zero bombardment of the shielding moon. The generator was slagged, along with the rocky crust of much of the rest of the moon. General Eerin landed her forces on Kubindi, and immediately targeted the nearest Separatist outpost…”


From "What Is Real", circa 2 years ABG.

And I would hate to have canon override my fanfiction, which is why I don't write about majorly important events. wink

 

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Commander5052  3504 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 5:09pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
Ah, thanks.

 

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QuentinGeorge  4759 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 5:12pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
I've lost my entry but I had Oicunn a native of Zaloriis, and of partial Mandalorian descent.

He served in the Stark Conflict, then in the Clone Wars on an Acclamator named "Tyvokka", before being transferred to the Venator we see in ROTS.

I'm a bit fuzzy on the later parts, but I think I made him part of Miltin Takel's forces after Endor, and then eventually serving under the Emperor reborn.

 

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Date Posted: 10/21/05 5:12pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion - Date Edited: 10/21/05 5:13pm (1 edits total) Edited By: CooperTFN
Kudzu - lots can happen in a year.

Tell you what: when Dark Horse hires me to write a 3-issue Lanscus Oicunn miniseries, I'll try to work in a retcon. tongue

Card - you spelled "naval" wrong. Or did he long to be a heroic bellybutton officer? tongue Otherwise, not bad. I was actually this close to putting Lanscus at Praesitlyn myself, given his feelings about Anakin.

You know what I love? No matter what time period a story is taking place in, any and all Headhunters appearing in said story are inevitably described as "aging". grin

 

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Date Posted: 10/21/05 6:07pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion - Date Edited: 10/21/05 6:13pm (3 edits total) Edited By: The2ndQuest
I got my entry finished under the wire grin

Of course, while it wasn't my original intent, I had some inspiration and now Daniek_K will proceed to hunt me down and destroy me wink beatup

(the only justification I'll give is that- whether there are 3 million clones or 300 million, those droids numbers gotta get whittled down at least a little bit eventually wink )

Lt. Niet Oicunn

Teghirios, though a respected Core world in many industries, is most often considered a vacation planet, due to it's many popular recreational facilities and resorts. It gave birth to many local gaming champions, including Niet Oicunn.

Emerging as a top dejarik player, he gained notoriety with three consecutive championships. Eventually Niet sought to contribute more to his homeworld, retiring and joining the Teghirian Defense Force, applying his strategic skills to great success.

After a few years of service the Clone Wars erupted and the TDF was nationalized by the Republic to supplement their Clone Army. Niet was assigned the rank of Lieutenant aboard the Star Destroyer Redoubt.

The Redoubt did not see much combat in larger fleet battles, but was instead used to support Commando strikes at the Confederate infrastructure. Oicunn was typically in charge of coordination between the ship and those Commando units.

Niet helped plan Operation Second Ilthmar, which targeted a shortcoming of the Separatists- their inability to deploy the full extent of their battle droid production runs. Demolition units were deployed to drop defenses on Lethe, Eos, Foundry and Foerost- worlds with multiple warehouses storing the surplus battle droids. The Redoubt would finish the job with surgical strikes from orbit during their extraction.

Each mission cost the Confederacy billions of droids and provided important intel leads that exposed the presence of a hidden Geonosian foundry on Zaadja, later destroyed by General Kenobi's forces.

Niet served his final mission aboard the Redoubt during the Battle of Boz Pity. Transfered to the Resonance at Moff Tarkin's request- who, Niet discovered, was tracking a secret enemy construction project based on information fragments recovered on Zaadja.

Niet saw the hunt conclude shortly after the declaration of the New Order as they proudly ferried the new Emperor and Darth Vader to the Horuz system and the skeletal frame of a massive station.


Fit almost everything i wanted into this one, though I had to cut back a bit on his gaming retirement details, Denn Wessex's role in the operation as well as the role the Redoubt played in the Zaadja battle. I had also wanted to have Oicunn die during the Battle of Turkana, but there was no room, alas.

 

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CooperTFN  4578 posts
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Date Posted: 10/21/05 6:23pm Subject: RE: Official "What's the story?" Hyperspace Databank Feature Discussion
I'm confused. Tarkin thought the Death Star was a secret enemy construction project?

 

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