Havac posted:This is, full-stop, the worst-written comic I have ever seen. It makes no sense at all. The format's not helping it, but it's not the format's fault. It could be far less disjointed than it is. But it's not. It's like someone took a full comic, cut out each page, then took a third of the pages at random and put them up. It's a complete, thoroughgoing failure on the part of the writer to put any kind of context, any kind of narrative cohesion, any kind of logic, any kind of intelligibility or accessibility, in the story.
Rogue_Follower posted: In addition, the art doesn't help. Though well-colored, it's rather sketchy and the poses often look awkward.
Trip posted:Page 14: A bounty hunter mandalorian dude is watching the wookiee, and his boss, who's a Republic officer, calls, and he's like, "forget about it, the war just ended." Mr Bounty Hunter doesn't want to quit now, though, because the Wookiee's not just wanted by the Republic, but his boss is like, "okay but the wook works for the Sith, dude, and there's a cease fire and everything," and wait, didn't the wook just KO some Sith soldiers?